2013届高三英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题二 图画式3）.ppt

1、第二部分2013届高考英语书面表达专题练评专题二图画式作文练评(三)江苏省石庄高级中学2013届书面表达指导与练习下面这幅图片描绘的是一幅反映十一黄金周交通堵塞及交通压力问题的场景。请根据你对这幅图片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述图中所表达的相关信息；2.分析此现象的原因；3.提出你的建议(至少两条)。注意：1.可参用下面文章开头所给提示，你必要地发挥想象。2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。提示词：涌入：flock to;pure into高速免费政策：toll-free road policy On the eight-day national hol

2、iday many drivers became victims of traffic jam on main highways.As is shown in the picture,第一部分 描述图画 图中所表达的相关信息是：此图片反映的是十一黄金周交通堵塞的问题。图片中，大量的小汽车堵在高速公路上，引起了严重的交通堵塞。人们等得有点不耐烦，为了消磨时间，他们有的在锻炼身体，有的在看书，甚至有的在逗狗玩等等。在具体描述图片所表达的相关信息时要增加相关的细节。如：结合“十一黄金周”，我们就要联想到，人们利用这一段时间要做的主要两件事：一是回家乡探亲访友；二是到外地旅游。On the eight

3、-day national holiday many drivers became victims of traffic jam on main highways.As is shown in the picture,millions of drivers and passengers flocked to the highways to go home or to tourist spots,which caused great traffic jam.Impatient and bored,some people caught in jam were seen playing sports

4、 and even playing with dogs or reading to kill time.On the eight-day national holiday many drivers became victims of traffic jam on main highways.As is shown in the picture,so many people went home to pay a visit to their families and friends and to travel in other places in their cars.As a result,a

5、 large number of cars stuck in the expressways.How horrible the traffic was!Many people caught in jam were so impatient that some of them were seen playing sports,reading or even playing with dogs to kill time.On the eight-day national holiday many drivers became victims of traffic jam on main highw

6、ays.As is shown in the picture,a lot of cars carrying people to go home to pay a visit to their families and friends and to travel in other places poured into the highway,which caused great traffic jam.Many people caught in jam felt so impatient that some of them played sports,read or even played wi

7、th dogs to kill time.第二部分 分析原因 分析原因我们可以从以下几方面来进行：1.随着经济的发展，私家车的增加；2.人们节假日（尤其是“十一黄金周”高速公路免费政策的实施）出行方式的选择：选择自驾而不是乘坐公共交通工具；3.现有交通设施满足不了需要；4.具体进行表达 As the economy is developing,the number of private cars has been increasing than expected.More people prefer to drive their cars to travel instead of using

8、public transport,which will save money thanks to the toll-free road policy.The traffic system is not efficient enough for so many cars.With the development of the economy,the number of private cars is increasing larger and larger.With the toll-free road policy carried out,which will cost car drivers

9、 less money,more and more people prefer to drive their cars to travel instead of using public transport.Public transportation such as buses and subways and other transportation means can not adapt to the travel of people need.As the economy is developing,more and more average people afford to buy ca

10、rs.As a result,the number of private cars has been increasing than expected.As the toll-free road policy is carried out,which will cost car divers less money,many people would choose to travel in their cars rather than use public transport.The traffic system cannot cater to the travel of people need

11、.连句成篇 There are many reasons for the heavy traffic.First,as the economy is developing,the number of cars has been increasing than expected.Then,more people prefer to drive their cars to travel instead of using public transport,which will save money thanks to the toll-free road policy.Also,the traffi

12、c system is not efficient enough for so many cars.第三部分 提出建议 围绕上述分析的原因提出自己的建议 The government should improve the traffic system.It is necessary to provide updated traffic information for drivers on the road.Drivers can prefer the roads which are not crowded.Avoiding the rush time is also a good way.If

13、 the government abandoned the tolls altogether,travel times would be more flexible for drivers.Effective measures should be taken to improve the traffic system to deal with the traffic jam.It is necessary to raise private car purchase taxes so as to restrict private car ownership rate.People should

14、encourage to make greater use of public transportation to travel instead of driving their cars.The government should take effective measures to deal with the traffic jam.It is suggested that the government should cancel toll-free road policy or polish it.Before the eight-day national holiday approac

15、hes,the government should apply various media to teach private car drivers how to avoid the rush time.连句成篇 How could we deal with the heavy traffic?In my opinion,the government should improve the traffic system.It is necessary to provide updated traffic information for drivers on the road.In additio

16、n,drivers can prefer the roads which are not crowded.Avoiding the rush time is also a good way.Besides,if the government abandoned the tolls altogether,travel times would be more flexible for drivers.参考答案On the eight-day national holiday many drivers became victims of traffic jam on main highways.As

17、 is shown in the picture,millions of drivers and passengers flocked to the highways to go home or to tourist spots,which caused great traffic jam.Many people caught in jam were seen playing sports and even playing with dogs or reading to kill time.There are many reasons for the heavy traffic.First,a

18、s the economy is developing,the number of cars has been increasing than expected.Then,more people prefer to drive their cars to travel instead of using public transport,which will save money thanks to the toll-free road policy.Also,the traffic system is not efficient enough for so many cars.How coul

19、d we deal with the heavy traffic?In my opinion,the government should improve the traffic system.It is necessary to provide updated traffic information for drivers on the road.In addition,drivers can prefer the roads which are not crowded.Avoiding the rush time is also a good way.Besides,if the gover

20、nment abandoned the tolls altogether,travel times would be more flexible for drivers.同步练习 下面这幅图片描绘的是描述的是一幅交通堵塞的场景。请根据你对这幅图片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述图中所表达的相关信息；2.分析此现象的原因以及由此产生的后果；3.提出你的建议(至少两条)。注意：1.可参用下面文章开头所给提示，你必要地发挥想象；2.词数：150左右。参考答案As is shown in the picture,the traffic jam is so heavy that

21、it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead,the street is filled with too many private cars and official cars.The phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars and official cars increasing,traffic ja

22、ms are certain to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and have negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand,when traffic jam happens,drivers and passengers have to waste a lot of precious time on the road.On the other hand,waste gas manu

23、factured by cars has polluted the environment and caused carbon emission,which has against the concept of living a low carbon life.In my opinion,the government should take effective measures to deal with the traffic jam.Firstly,it is necessary to raise private car purchase taxes so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly,public transportation should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation.See you later!Post card:226531 E-mail:（谢谢您的下载）特别拜托：请您下载后自用，不要上传至其他网站！请您尊重作者的劳动成果！