（新教材）2020春人教版英语必修第三册课件：UNIT 5 THE VALUE OF MONEY SECTION Ⅶ　READING FOR WRITING——剧本写作 .ppt

1、1Section Reading for Writing剧本写作本单元的写作任务是戏剧剧本创作。戏剧剧本属于记叙文。在写作形式上以对话为主，应主要包括戏剧人物、人物的语言、舞台说明性文字等。2.Pre-writing()Learning to write after the modelTHE MILLION POUND BANK NOTEAct 2，Scene 1Narrator：Henry is walking along the street holding the bank note in his hand.His coat is worn in several places.He se

2、es a sign for a tailors shop.Henry：(entering the shop)Id like to have a suit coat.1st Clerk：(in a rude manner)See him there.(pointing to another clerk)2nd Clerk：Ready-made suits？Downstairs.3Henry：(after going down some stairs)Can you show me a suit，please?3rd Clerk：Yes，I can，sir.This way，please.Ah，h

3、ere we are，the very thing you need.1st Clerk：(pulling the 3rd clerk aside and whispering)Mr Reid says youd better serve him quick and get him out quick!3rd Clerk：I know what Im doing.Ive got eyes，havent I?Henry：Its a little too bright，isnt it?3rd Clerk：(looking at him with a frown)Its all we have in

4、 your size.Henry：Well，I suppose it ought to do for now.Ill take it.43rd Clerk：Good.Shall I put it in a box?Henry：No.Ill wear it.Oh，Id rather not pay you now.Id like to pay in a month.Yousee，I dont have any small change.3rd Clerk：(trying not to show hes angry)I suppose a gentleman like you only carri

5、es very large bills.Henry：Now，you shouldnt judge people by their clothes.I just dont want to cause you trouble with a large note.3rd Clerk：Its no trouble at all.5Henry：In that case，theres no problem.(He gives the clerk the bank note.The clerkdrops Henrys coat.Then he folds the bill and slowly unfold

6、s it again，as iflooking at something he cant believe is there.)Owner：Well，what seems to be the trouble?Henry：Im just waiting for my change.Owner：Give him his change，Todd.Get going.(after getting the bank note fromTodd)Would it.could it be the one I saw in the papers last week？I remember thinking tha

7、t never would I hold such a note as this.(to Henry)Oh，take off this coat，sir.(to Todd)Go get the others，Todd！(to Henry again)Allow me，sir！This way，sir.(in another part of the shop，where there is a wide range of options for Henry to choosefrom)6Henry：This is nice，but I really dont need it.Owner：Never

8、 mind.(with a broad smile)Oh，its perfect！It was made for some king but hell just have to wait.Youll need many suits for many occasions.Yes，indeed you will.Henry：Wait a minute.I only came here to get a suit coat to wear today.I dare not buy all these things.You would have to wait a long time to get p

9、aid.Owner：A long time，sir？Why，you dont have to worry about that!73rd Clerk：Yes，we can wait forever!Henry：Well，all right.Ill take the suit coat for now and get the others later.Owner：Fine，fine.Your address，sir?Henry：I dont have one.Er.Im moving.Owner：Of course you are！Thats very normal！A busy man，Im

10、sure.,8篇章结构Before showing the bank note：the clerks look down upon Henry and treat him in a rude manner.After showing the bank note：the clerks and owner respect Henry a lot and even try hard to please him.910()Preparation for writingwords and phrases_一张大额支票 _以一种方式_向某人展示_ vt.服务_ vt.认为a large bank note

11、in a.mannershow sb sthservesuppose11_宁愿_ vt.支付_ 小额零钱_ 通过判断_担心would ratherpaysmall changejudge.by.worry about12.While-writing根据下面提示，写一篇戏剧，介绍亨利带着100万英镑的钞票去理发的过程。亨利正走在大街上，看见了一家理发店，决定去理他的长头发；理发匠用粗鲁的态度接待了他；亨利坐在椅子上等待；理发匠告诉他是否能够担负得起高昂的费用；理发结束后，亨利出示了百万英镑的钞票；理发匠十分吃惊，告诉他随时光临。13Step 1List the outline of the pa

12、ssage.Part 1：_Part 2：_Part 3：_NarrationThe rude manner in which the barber treated HenryThe change of hairdressers attitude towards Henry14Step 2List the words，phrases and sentences.1.Words and phrases_正在做就在这时_的标志_无论何时你喜欢_做是某人的荣幸be doing.when.a sign for.whenever you likeIt is ones honour to do.15_理发

13、_以一种粗鲁的态度_确实；实在_支付得起_零钱；零头have ones hair cutin a rude mannerindeedaffordchange162.Sentences亨利正在大街上行走，这时他看到一个理发的标志。(when)_您能看到我头发太长了。(as)_无论什么时候，只要您想来就来，即使您仅有很少的头发要理！(even if)_为您服务是我的荣幸！(it作形式主语)_Henry is walking down the street when he sees a sign for a place that cuts hair.As you can see，my hair is

14、 much too long.Please come here whenever you like，even if you only have too little hair cut!It will be my honour to serve you!17Step 3Draft the passage by using the following words.when，indeed，even if(Henry is walking down the street when he sees a sign for a place that cuts hair.Hedecides to have i

15、t cut.)HHenryBBarberH：Good afternoon，Id like to have my hair cut，if I may.(The barber looks at Henrys hair and continues cutting another mans hair.)Er，Id really like a haircut.As you can see，its much too long.B：(in a rude manner)Yes，I can see that.Indeed，I can.18H：Fine，well，Ill have a seat then.(He

16、sits in one of the barbers chairs.The barber turns to look at Henry.)B：Its quite expensive here，you know!Are you sure you can afford it?H：Yes.I think so.(After his hair is cut，the barber tells Henry how much he must pay.Henry shows thebarber the bank note.)B：Why Mr.(looks shocked)H：Adams.Henry Adams

17、.Im sorry.I dont have any change.B：Please dont worry!(wearing a big smile)Nothing to worry about!Nothing at all！Please come here whenever you like，even if you only have too little hair cut!It will be my honour to serve you!19.Postwritingpolishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner an

18、d pay attention to the following points.1.Does the writer explain why he/she changed/wanted to change?2.Does the writer tell how the changes have improved or will improve his/her life?3.Is the text wellorganised?4.Does the writer use words and expressions to show similarities and differences?5.Are t

19、here any grammar or spelling errors?6.Does the writer use correct punctuation？20常用词汇in addition to，besides，both.and.，not only.but also.，now that，thus，yet，but，however，otherwise，on the contrary，unlike，instead，although，different from，in spite of，actually，as a matter of fact，while，at first，obviously21亮点

20、表达1.The story happened in Guang Dong in the early years of the 20th century.这个故事发生于20世纪初叶的广东。2.It is very kind of you，sir，but we are not allowed to accept tips.先生，您真是太好了，但我们不能收小费。3.Im afraid itll cost a large amount of money.恐怕这得花费一大笔钱。4.Well，I wonder if you could permit me to have one day off.嗯，不知你

21、能否允许我请一天假。225.If you pay your bill now,I can help the other customers.如果你现在能付账的话，我就可以去照顾别的顾客。6.When Henry opens the envelope and holds a million pound bank note in his hands，he is surprised but the owner and waiter are shocked.当亨利把信封拆开时，他拿出一张百万英镑的钞票，感到吃惊，店主和服务员也惊呆了。237.Were so very glad that you eve

22、n entered our little eating place.Indeed，sir，I hope youll come here whenever you like.我们非常高兴你能走进我们这家小饭店，先生，真的，我希望您随时光临。8.You must come whenever you want and have whatever you like.Just having you sit here is a great honour!您什么时候想来就来，想吃什么就吃什么，您就是在这儿坐一下也是我们莫大的荣幸！24写作技巧写好英语戏剧，应该注意以下几点：1.确定剧情、故事梗概及主题；2.确定剧中人物及其形象和性格特征(喜、怒、哀、乐、害羞、友好、慷慨、吝啬、恐惧、惊讶以及勇敢等)；3.确定故事发生的时间、地点、场景及其变化；4.构思戏剧的矛盾冲突，事件的起因、发展、高潮和结局等。