2021届高考英语一轮复习 专题训练 专题二 短文改错能力检测（含解析）新人教版.doc

1、专题二短文改错(一)(2020届河南省高三阶段性考试三)Today, an incident impressed me deep.Mom asked me to buy a bag of flour in a shop running by an elderly couple.On the way, it occurred to them that I had no cash with me.Then I thought I could pay on it with my phone, so I was afraid that they couldnt receive money by pho

2、ne.After all, they were nearly 70 year old.They might be so much old that they werent familiar with online service.To my surprise, when I asked an elderly wife if I could pay by phone, she points to the sign on the wall.She said proudly，“Of course, you can scan it！” I felt happy see our advanced soc

3、iety!(二)(2020届广西柳州市高三上学期英语摸底考试)Ten years ago, my hometown is a small and poor city with few factories.And the citizens had few choice on transportation.However, nowadays my hometown has taken on brandnew look with rapid development of culture and economy.The citizens living conditions have been grea

4、tly improve and their lifestyles are different from in the past.Shop online has become popular.When they comes to transportation, private cars have become a common way of traveling beside public transportation.The best change is which all the people are living a hopeful life with confident.(三)(2020届

5、贵州省安顺市高三上学期第一次联考)Today, I saw the funny incident happening outside a grocery shop.Two little kids were playing together happy.One was very fat with a large stomach, which was eating junk food.The other kid reached out or felt his stomach, joking, “See how big your stomach it is, but you are still ea

6、ting much！” I amused and looked at the other kid.I couldnt help laugh out as he was much fatter with an even large stomach!In your opinion, it is no good having too much junk food, which might be to blame on the fatness of children.(四)(2020届江西省高三第一次大联考)There are many different ways to learning Engli

7、sh well.The following is my ways to study English.To start with, we have to make a important decision to study English well and never give up.Second, we must do all the homework that the teachers tell you on time.Thirdly, we should read some English books and buy some exercise books to study.Whats m

8、ore, we can ask for our classmates and teachers where we come across some problems.Dont be afraid of make mistakes.If you can stick these ways every day, we will make great progress than others.(五)(2019年安徽省合肥市巢湖市高考英语模拟试卷)A famous film opened across the country last month, which was the biggest hit o

9、f the summer.Last Sunday, my family went to see a film.We booked tickets on advance.We were arrived at the cinema fifteen minutes early.We found it was crowd and people were talking about the film excited.I couldnt wait see my favorite star Jack, who plays a clever soldier in the film.Its a fun film

10、 combined lots of action and some humor with “feelings” for friend and families.They were all moved by the words at the end of the film.I will keep it in mind what my great country is always behind me.(六)(2019届山西省长治市高三上学期第六次考试)Five years ago, my father, who was in his forty, lost his job.At first, h

11、e was in low spirits and often gets drunk.One day, he read a story about Ren Zhengfei, which was greatly inspired him.He turned to a friend, with which help he set up a factory.In his factory waste materials were made full use to produce environmentally friendly packing bags.With these bags well rec

12、eiving, his factory went smooth.Now, he has extra money because he often helps those in need.So far, he has donated as many as $10，000.How a great father I have!(七)(2020届广西毕业班9月大联考)Our city sets up a project about environmental protection three years ago.Many people have been taken part in it since

13、it was run.It is obvious what peoples awareness of environmental protection are increasing.Some people think factory owners have much responsibility for preserve the environment.Environmentalists have made many statement to support their own opinions so far.Some factory owners focus on enlarging pro

14、duction in order to make a largely amount of money.Their actions have resulted from much pollution.I think they should be punishing by law.I want to be environmental expert to make a contribution to protecting our beautiful homeland.(八)(2019届广东省六校高三第四次联考)Last summer, I was invited to a Chinese summe

15、r camp.I had a great time there because I made many friends with other countries.The camp covered a variety of programs, ranged from learning daily Chinese to Chinese history and traditional culture.In a party, we take turns to make a selfintroduction in the English.However, I was so shy to speak be

16、fore other people.I stood there for five minute without saying anything, which made me feel very embarrassing.When I finally opened my mouth, someone couldnt help laughing at my poorly English.I couldnt feel anything except my face was burning.It was then that we decided to practise spoken English.(

17、九)(2020届广东省实验中学高三上学期第一次段考)People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones.So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of.This change in communication have good effects on our works and life.Comparing with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the I

18、nternet are fast and much more convenient.If you missed your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say “hello” to him.And she will be happy to hear your voice.If you want to place order with a foreign company, you can email the message.Itll be minutes after you get their reply.(十)(2019届山东省实验

19、中学高三4月上旬质量检测)Last Saturday，I went on journey by train.There were such many passengers that not everyone could get a seat.Many people had to stand，which was really tired.I had a reserved seat so I could sit comfortable.In front of my seat is a woman with two little kids.With the kid squeezing into th

20、eir single seat，she had to stand up all the way.So I moved a bit but shared my seat with her.The woman felt very grateful to my selflessness.Seeing her beautiful smile，I also smiled.Share increased happiness!(十一)(2020届江西省德兴市第六中学高三模拟考试)Nowadays in China, either in the morning nor after dinner, people

21、, especial elderly women, gather in squares to dance to popular music.More but more young people are also participating the square dance now.There are many reasons for their popularity.First of all, China has made great progress in the social and economic development in the past decades, and people

22、had more time and energy to enjoy their lives.Besides, do the square dance is a good way for people to get fit.However, dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places, where makes many people annoying.Maybe square dancers need to make some change.(十二)(2019届山东省菏泽市第一中学高三最后一模)Three years ago

23、I failed an important exam in my life and become a student in an ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently and considerate.Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided make the best of it.I worked ha

24、rd and got along good with my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulty, they are always available.Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, and which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.My experience tell me that it is not what you are given but how you make use fo

25、r it that determines who you are.(十三)(2019届河北衡水中学高三上学期期中考试)I will share one experience with you.With the College Entrance Examination draw near, I was filled with great anxiety.However, I couldnt be absorbed in study, resulting from my failing in the examination.I got very discouraging.Just then, my

26、 teacher, Miss Zhang, approach me and said, “In life we all have moments when we cant achieve what we want it.It is natural.Dont allow those moment to weaken you, and turn them into motivation to inspire you.” Her words were a reminder which provided myself with constant encouragement to smile at li

27、fe.Consequently, I gained what I deserved.So it is an optimistic attitude which matters most of all.It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.专题二短文改错(一)第一处：deepdeeply。impressed me deeply意为“深深地打动了我”。做副词来讲，deep常用来表示具体的深度，而deeply常用于抽象意义上的深度，此处意为“深深地

28、”。第二处：runningrun。过去分词短语run by an elderly couple做后置定语，并且与a shop形成被动关系。第三处：themme。根据下文中的关键词“I”和语境可知，此处指“我”突然想到，故将them改为me。第四处：onfor。pay for sth.意为“支付某物的费用”。第五处：sobut。此句的意思是“我认为我可以用手机支付，但是(but)我担心他们不会用手机收钱”。第六处：yearyears。根据句中的数词“70”可知，此处应该用复数名词years。第七处：去掉much。so.that.引导结果状语从句，意为“如此以至于”。第八处：anthe。定冠词th

29、e在此处特指文中的elderly wife。第九处：pointspointed。因为全文用一般过去时叙述过去发生的事情，故此处也应用一般过去时。第十处：see前加to。不定式短语“to see our advanced society”在句中做状语，to不能省略。常用结构be/feel happy to do sth.意为“高兴做某事”。(二)第一处：iswas。根据时间状语“ten years ago”，可知谓语动词用一般过去时，is改为was。第二处：choicechoices。few修饰可数名词复数，故将choice改为choices。第三处：on后加a。take on a new lo

30、ok为固定短语，意为“呈现一片新面貌”，故在on后加a。第四处：improveimproved。谓语动词是现在完成时的被动语态，故将improve改为improved。第五处：去掉their。their与前面出现过的the citizens重复，故去掉their。第六处：ShopShopping。此处动名词做主语，故将Shop改为Shopping。第七处：theyit。when it comes to.为固定句式，意为“谈到时”，故将they改为it。第八处：besidebesides。besides意为“除了之外，还”；beside意为“在旁边”，故将beside改为besides。第九处：

31、whichthat。这是一个表语从句，引导词在从句中不做成分，应用that引导，故将which改为that。第十处：confidentconfidence。介词后接名词做宾语，故将confident改为confidence。(三)第一处：thea。此处是修饰文中第一次出现的incident，是泛指，故将the改为不定冠词a。第二处：happyhappily。此处要用副词形式修饰动词play。第三处：whichwho。此处是指人，应用who来引导。第四处：orand。此处是两个连续动作，应用and连接。第五处：去掉is前的it。此处句子的主语是stomach，it多余。第六处：amused前加w

32、as。此处是被动关系，应有系动词be。时态为一般过去时。第七处：laughlaughing。cant help doing是固定搭配，意为“情不自禁做某事”。第八处：largelarger。前面的fatter和even是提示词，表明此处有比较意味，应用比较级。第九处：yourmy。此处是作者自己在发表意见，故用my。第十处：onfor。be to blame for sth.意为“应该为某事负责任”。(四)第一处：learninglearn。动词不定式做定语修饰ways。第二处：isare。此句为倒装句。主语是my ways，为复数概念，故谓语部分使用复数形式。第三处：aan。由于紧跟其后的单

33、词important是以元音音素开头，故用an。第四处：SecondSecondly。此处考查表示递进关系的连接词，通常使用副词形式。第五处：youus。根据句意：我们必须按时完成老师告诉我们的全部作业。可知“告诉”的宾语与主语应一致，故改为us。第六处：去掉for。根据句意“当我们遇到困难，可以向同学和老师求助。”ask sb.for help或ask for help都可以表示“向求助”。故去掉for。第七处：wherewhen。表示“当我们遇到困难”，应用when。第八处：makemaking。介词之后使用动名词形式做宾语。第九处：stick 后加to。stick to为固定搭配，意为“

34、坚持”。第十处：greatgreater。根据“than others”可知要用比较级，故great要用比较级形式。(五)第一处：athe。前面已经提到“A famous film”，故用定冠词the，表特指。第二处：onin。in advance提前，为固定搭配。第三处：去掉were。arrive为不及物动词，无被动。第四处：crowdcrowded。此处为形容词做表语，故用crowded。第五处：excitedexcitedly。副词修饰动词were talking，故用副词。第六处：wait后加to。cant wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事，为固定搭配。第七处：combin

35、edcombining。combining做后置定语修饰a fun film。第八处：friendfriends。friend为可数名词，所以用复数，泛指一类。第九处：TheyWe。指“我们一家人”，所以用we做主语。第十处：whatthat。it做形式宾语，that从句做真正宾语放在后面，that不做成分，无含义。(六)第一处：fortyforties。in ones forties意为“在某人四十几岁的时候”，为固定短语。故把forty改为forties。第二处：getsgot。文章描述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时。故把gets改为got。第三处：去掉was。根据句意可知任正非的故事

36、激励了父亲，句子是主动含义。故去掉was。第四处：whichwhose。根据help和先行词a friend判断可知两个词之间是所属关系，故把which改为whose。第五处：use后加of。make use of意为“利用”，在被动句中of不能省略。故在use后面加of。第六处：receivingreceived。在with复合结构中，bags和receive之间是被动关系，指“这些包受到欢迎”。故把receiving改为received。第七处：smoothsmoothly。根据句意可知go在句中是“进展”的意思，应用副词修饰。故把smooth改为smoothly。第八处：becauses

37、o/and。根据句意判断后句是前句的结果或者陈述两种情况。故把because改为so或者and。第九处：manymuch。money不可数，前面不能用many修饰。故要改为much。第十处：HowWhat。what引导的感叹句句型是What(a/an)adj.n.主语谓语；而how引导的感叹句形式是：Howadj.(adv.)主语谓语。故把How改成What。(七)第一处：setsset。根据本句的时间状语“three years ago”可知，此处应用一般过去时。第二处：去掉taken前的been或者takentaking。根据主句主语和句意可知，此处应用现在完成时的主动语态或现在完成进行时

38、。第三处：whatthat。It做形式主语，that引导主语从句，并且在从句中不充当成分。第四处：areis。根据从句中的主语“awareness”和整句时态可知，此处应用is。第五处：preservepreserving。介词for后面应用动名词，故此处改为preserving。第六处：statementstatements。statement是可数名词，前面的many暗示后面的名词应用复数形式。第七处：largelylarge。此处large修饰名词amount。a large amount of修饰不可数名词，意为“大量”。第八处：fromin。根据句意可知，此处应用in。result

39、from意为“由造成”；result in意为“导致”。第九处：punishingpunished。根据句意可知，此处情态动词should后面应用被动语态，故改为punished。第十处：environmental前加an。environmental是以元音音素开头，且expert是可数名词单数，故此处应该加an。(八)第一处：withfrom。表示“来自其他国家”应用介词from。第二处：rangedranging。本句已经存在谓语动词且句中没有连词，故range只能做非谓语与逻辑主语camp构成主谓关系，故用现在分词。第三处：taketook。故事发生在last summer，故应用一般过

40、去时。第四处：去掉the。短语in English(用英语)中间不需要冠词，故去掉the。第五处：sotoo。句型too.to.意为“太以至于不能”。第六处：minuteminutes。minute为可数名词，由five修饰应用复数形式。第七处：embarrassingembarrassed。本句修饰的主语是人，故应用ed结尾的形容词。第八处：poorlypoor。English为名词，应用形容词修饰。第九处：except后加that。except that后跟从句，故except后加that。 第十处：weI。根据上下文可知主语为I，故将we改为I。(九)第一处：SoBut。前后两个单句之间

41、是转折关系而非因果关系，应用连词but。第二处：去掉of。instead意为“替代，顶替”，是副词，instead of意为“(用)代替”，是介词短语，此处应用instead。第三处：havehas。主语change是单数形式，谓语动词也应用单数形式has。第四处：workswork。work表示“工作”时是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故将works改为work。第五处：ComparingCompared。主语mobile phones and the Internet与compare应用被动语态，此处是过去分词短语Compared with letters and public phones做

42、状语。第六处：fastfaster。 由and和much more convenient可知，fast应用比较级。故将fast改为faster。第七处：missedmiss。本文讲述的是一般事实，应用一般现在时态。第八处：himher。此处是her指代grandmother。第九处：place后加an。此处表示泛指，order是可数名词，因其读音以元音音素开头，故用不定冠词an。 第十处：afterbefore。句型“Itbe一段时间beforeclause”中，主句中的谓语动词为肯定形式时，意为“过一段时间才”，故将after改为before。(十)第一处：在journey前加a。go on

43、 a journey意为“去旅行”，为固定短语。第二处：suchso。many前用so，与that构成“so.that.”，表示“如此以至于”。第三处：tiredtiring。根据句意可知，此处表示“站着”这个动作是“累人的”，所以用tiring。第四处：comfortablecomfortably。修饰动词sit应用副词形式。第五处：iswas。文章讲述过去的事情，应用一般过去时。第六处：kidkids。前文提到“two”，下文是their，故此处kid用复数形式。第七处：去掉up。根据句意可知，那位妈妈是一直站立着，而stand up只是表示瞬间的动作“站起来”，不能和all the wa

44、y连用。第八处：butand。根据句意可知两个动词是并列关系而非转折关系，应用and。第九处：tofor。be grateful to sb.for sth.意为“因而感激某人”。第十处：ShareSharing。Share在句中做主语应用动名词形式，意为“分享”。(十一)第一处：noror。either.or.意为“不是就是，要么要么”。第二处：especialespecially。“特别是”老年妇女，这里需要用副词。第三处：butand。more and more意为“越来越多()”，为固定搭配。第四处：在participating后加in。participate in 参加，加入。第五处

45、：theirits。用its指代广场舞。第六处：hadhave。联系上下文时态，可知这里要用一般现在时。第七处：dodoing。动词不能直接做主语，要用动名词做主语。第八处：wherewhich。此处是一个非限制性定语从句，关系代词指代上面的句子“dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places”，并在定语从句中做主语，应用which引导。第九处：annoyingannoyed。annoying使(人)恼怒的，annoyed(人)恼怒。此处指让很多人“感到恼怒”，应用annoyed。第十处：changechanges。made s

46、ome changes做出一些改变。(十二)第一处：becomebecame。根据“Three years ago”可知，句子用一般过去时。第二处：DisappointingDisappointed。ed结尾的形容词指人，表示“感到”；ing结尾的形容词指物，表示“令人”。根据后面主语是I，所以是感到失望。第三处：patientlypatient。find宾语形容词(宾语补足语)，此处是形容词做宾语补足语。第四处：decided后加to。decide to do sth.决定做某事。第五处：goodwell。修饰动词要用副词，故把good改为well。第六处：arewere。讲述过去的事情应用

47、一般过去时态。第七处：studentstudents。one of可数名词复数，表示“中的一个”。第八处：去掉and。这里是整个句子做先行词，后面用which引导非限制性定语从句，而不是并列句，故把and去掉。第九处：telltells。表示自己得到的感悟用一般现在时态，主语是My experience(经验)，为不可数名词，谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式，故把tell改为tells。第十处：forof。make use of利用，为固定短语。(十三)第一处：drawdrawing。本句是介词with的复合结构，其中the College Entrance Examination与动词draw构

48、成主动关系，故用现在分词形式。第二处：HoweverTherefore。上下文之间是因果关系，所以使用therefore表示因果关系。第三处：fromin。result in导致；result from因为，由于。根据句意可知应使用result in。第四处：discouragingdiscouraged。discouraged感到泄气，通常修饰人；discouraging令人失望的，常修饰事物。本句使用discouraged修饰人。第五处：approachapproached。由上下文可知用一般过去时态。第六处：去掉it。what引导宾语从句，其中what做want的宾语，it多余应该去掉。第七处：momentmoments。根据前面的those可知要用名词的复数。第八处：andbut。上下文之间为转折关系，故用but表示转折。第九处：myselfme。me做动词provided的宾语。第十处：whichthat。强调句“It is被强调部分that其他部分”。