2021届通用版高考英语二轮复习题型精练学案：新高考书面表达之读后续写（4） WORD版含解析.doc

1、厦门一中2020-2021学年高三上学期12月阶段性考试67. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming.In late summer, th

2、e pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）. Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away.When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, “Try walking across.”The ice looked solid. No water showed through

3、it, but I hesitated. “Go ahead.” Harry urged. “Try it. Youre lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. Itll be fun.” I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond.In the middle of the pond, the ice

4、gave way with a sudden crack（裂缝）! I stretched out（伸展）my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full

5、of mud and maybe rotting creatures. I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it

6、 dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. “I cant get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的

7、关键词语。Paragraph1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. _Paragraph2:The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. _【答案】He turned and ran from the pond. Staring at his familiar figure out of sight, I wondered: “Is he running for help, or is he running away and leaving me slidi

8、ng to the bottom? ” After what seemed to be centuries of waiting, I was on the edge of collapse. Suddenly, Harry came back with a branch, which was large, black, and v-shaped. He pushed the branch toward me. I grabbed it immediately and was eventually dragged out of the icy water by Harry. What a na

9、rrow escape! We stumbled home, with my clothes dripping water.The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. She helped me take off my coat, and gave me a quick bath, then passed me a cup of milk to warm me up. I tearfully complained to her about all that had happened and H

10、arry was blamed for getting me sibling into such a trouble. His head drooping, Harry murdered an apology to me. I was comforted and relieved, but in fact, the pond was still attractive to young Harry and me, especially when winter came again.【解析】【分析】这是一篇记叙文。文章叙述了作者小时候与哥哥去附近农场后面的池塘滑冰，冰面裂开，作者不小心掉进冰窟窿的

11、故事。【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，有一年冬天，作者由于小时候与哥哥哈利到农场后面的一个池塘玩耍，池塘表面结了冰，哥哥认为冰面足够坚固，能够撑得住作者的体重，所以鼓励作者从冰面上走过去。作者很想取悦哥哥，同时也非常想感受滑冰的快乐，于是就尝试着划过去。突然，冰裂开了，作者掉进了冰窟窿，双肩以下都泡在冰冷的水里！续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他转身从池塘里跑开了因此，下文应该续写哥哥跑走了以后，作者独自挣扎求生的心理过程。要详细叙述哥哥返回后，带着一个树杈把作者从冰窟窿里面拉出来的情景。第二段的开头是：当我哭着冲进厨房的门时，妈妈冲了过来因此，下文应该续写作者回到家后，

12、妈妈首先匆忙帮作者脱掉冰冷的外套，给他洗个热水澡以及喝一杯热牛奶；然后，作者缓过来以后，委屈的向妈妈叙述事情发生的经过，妈妈责备哥哥没有照顾好作者；文章最后，作者认为，尽管经此劫难，当冬天到来，那个池塘对哥哥和他依然是极大的诱惑。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：run away，leave sb. doing，take off等高级词汇；非限制性定语从句Har

13、ry came back with a branch, which was large, black, and v-shaped，after引导的时间状语从句，with my clothes dripping water复合结构等高级句式。河北省石家庄市2021届高中毕业班教学质量检测（一）47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。I prided myself on being a good neighbor. My husband, Charles, and I knew everyone who lived along our rural road

14、. Walking that road now, I thought about how we all relied on each other. We picked up mail for people on vacation, lent out tools, and watched each others children. Each house I passed held a friendly association.Except Kellys. It hadnt always been this way. At one time, Kelly and I had a good rela

15、tionship. Our children were close in age and often played together. Our husbands were playmates. I never went by her house without waving or stopping to chat if I saw her outside.Not anymore. If Kelly was out in her yard when I walked or drove by, I acted as if I didnt see her. As if there were a bi

16、g wall between us. At first it felt satisfying to let Kelly know what I thought of her. Today the sight of her house just made me sad.How did things go wrong? It had all started with a cat. A stray (流浪猫) who turned up in my driveway. That wasnt unusual. I already had two stray cats I had adopted as

17、well as a dog. But this cat was violent. He drove my own cats away from their food bowls and hissed at me when I tried to drive him off.Imagine my surprise a few days later when Kelly announced she was taking in the cat. “I think hes sweet,” she said.I didnt even know that Kelly liked cats. Shed nev

18、er had one before as far as I knew. Living with Kelly didnt make the cat any friendlier. He constantly showed up on our porch, stealing our cats food and picking fights. “That cats out of control,” I said to Kelly angrily over the phone one day. “Ive had enough of it.”“Hes always perfectly sweet wit

19、h us!” Kelly said, getting defensive. “I had no idea you disliked him so much.”注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。That was the first brick in the wall between us._One day, when I was walking on that road again, I saw Kelly smiling at me._【答案】That was the first brick in the wall between us. On a

20、sunny day, I was bathed in the beautiful sunshine when suddenly the cat jumped on my laps. It seemed to come out of nowhere so my hair almost stood on end. Bouncing up from my chair, I dropped the cat hard on the ground and ran after it. While this was going on, Kelly was just standing on her balcon

21、y glaring at me. “That was how you treat my cat?” she shouted. A brick turned into a wall from then on.One day, when I was walking on that road again，I saw Kelly smiling at me. I smiled back, saying: “I was sorry for the cat the other day!” She admitted the cat was not friendly sometimes and her hus

22、band had sent it the “Stray Cats Shelter”. “Our relationship is not that easy to break, isnt it?” She looked at me in the eye. We burst into laughter immediately and gone was the wall.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，作者和邻居们都相处融洽，但是凯利除外。之前有一段时间，作者和凯利的关系很好，但后来因为一只流浪猫，两人的关系开始交恶。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：那是我们之间

23、墙上的第一块砖。本段应该写在一个阳光明媚的日子里，我沐浴在美丽的阳光下，突然一只猫跳到我的膝盖上。不知从哪里冒出来的，我的头发都竖起来了。我从椅子上跳起来，把猫重重地摔在地上，然后追了过去。当这一切发生的时候，凯利正站在阳台上瞪着我。“你就是这样对待我的猫的？”她喊道。从那时起，一块砖变成了一堵墙。第二段开头是：有一天，当我再次走在那条路上时，我看见凯利对我微笑。本段应该写我笑着回答说：“那天我为猫感到难过！她承认这只猫有时候不太友好，她的丈夫把它送到了“流浪猫收容所”。“我们的关系不那么容易破裂，不是吗？”她看着我的眼睛。我们立刻大笑起来，墙不见了。续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右

24、；续写的内容要与原文保持一致。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了短语和高级句子。如：stand on end，bounce up，run after，from then on，burst into laughter等短语；时间状语从句While this was going on, Kelly was just standing on her balcony glaring at me.非谓语结构Bouncing up from my chair, I dropped the cat hard on the ground and ran after it.等高级句式。汕头市金山中学2021届高三

25、年级上学期联考47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could rec

26、ognize her, even from a distance.In Emily Whites hometown, there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium（礼堂）. It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the towns people. Many people tried out

27、 each year for it but so many were turned away. It could only include the most excellent people in the field.Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens her music teacher to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a look at Amys body and sa

28、id, Child, you just dont fit. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too.Without singing a single note, Emily was sent back through the door of the choral（合唱）room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then re

29、tired.This year, there came a new music teacher, Butler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.Emily didnt want to be rejected again, so she hesitated a little about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Butler called, Emily, youre next. Although kind of nervous.

30、Emily did as Mr. Butler told her to do. Mr. Butler sat by the piano to accompany Emily. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.Emily couldnt sleep that night. She was suffering from the feeli

31、ngs that she didnt fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain because of stress.Para1:The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room._Para 2:Finally, the day of performance came._【答案】Paragraph 1The next day, Emily nervou

32、sly glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. She was not rejected this time. Her name was posted at the top of the list. She, Emily White, was chosen to be the leading singer! She would sing alone in the performance. Emily couldnt believe her eyes. There must be some mistake. But Mr. Butt

33、ler said to her with determined eyes, Emily, I choose you because you should perform the part your voice is unusual. Believe in yourself. Greatly encouraged, Emily practiced really hard.Paragraph 2Finally, the day of performance came. Standing in front of the line, Emily felt her throat tight and he

34、r palms sweating. When the curtain opened up, the eyes of the whole audience fell upon Emily. Emily White! Someone whispered. Then, along with the first note of music, Emily began to sing her heart out. Her voice was like a nightingale ringing in the auditorium. Applause! Emily felt so happy and com

35、fortable. She was shining on the stage. Emily White, with so many birth problems in her body, was an angel.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，Emily17年前出生时身体就有很多问题，她的一些器官、骨骼和肌肉变形了，好在Eimly有一副美丽的歌喉，但她在去年想要参加音乐选拔，却被音乐老师无情拒绝。今年来了一位新的音乐老师听说了她的事情，给与了她一次展示自己的机会，Emily很感激，但到等待选拔结果的时候她很紧张。续写部分分为两段。【详解】根据提示，第一段开头：The

36、 next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. Emily匆忙赶到合唱室，焦虑地看着合唱室门上的名单。所以可以接着写：她这一次没有被拒绝，她的名字位于榜首，被选中成为了主唱，她可以在表演中独唱了。但是Emily不敢相信，觉得肯定是搞错了，但Butler老师带着坚定的眼神说：“我选择你是因为你要演唱这一部分，你的声音太不寻常了，相信自己。”受到了极大的鼓舞，Emily的训练真的非常努力。第二段的开头是：终于，表演的那天来了。所以可以接着写：站在队伍前面，Emily感到喉咙发紧，手心冒汗。

37、大幕打开时，所有观众的目光都落在Emily身上。“Emily White!”有人小声说。接着，随着音乐的第一个音符，Emily开始放声歌唱。她的声音像夜莺在礼堂里鸣响。掌声! Emily感到很高兴和舒适。她在舞台上光芒四射。Emily White，尽管她的身体里有那么多的生育问题，但她是一个天使。续写要求字数为150字，按要求完成续写内容。【点睛】两段续写的内容合乎事件的发展，描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子，如：glanced at；rejected；determined eyes；nightingale ringing in the auditorium等高级词汇；运用被动表达：Sh

38、e was not rejected this time.；Her name was posted at the top of the list.；She, Emily White, was chosen to be the leading singer!等；分词作状语：Greatly encouraged和Standing in front of the line；由when引导时间状语从句：When the curtain opened up, the eyes of the whole audience fell upon Emily.等高级表达。“决胜高考”2021届新高考八省第一次模

39、拟测试47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was a lazy Sunday morning, the type of day that getting out of bed requires an effort. When Marilyn and I entered the kitchen, Lori was already at the table doing her homework. Seeing us coming, she, suddenly, stood and faced me, “Why are there more pic

40、tures of Lisa than there are of me?” she asked. Lisa is our older daughter.I stared back, not understanding the question. Lori turned and left the room. Caught off-guard by the question, I looked at Marilyn. “Are there more pictures of Lisa than of Lori?” Marilyn shrugged and raised her eyebrows in

41、a motion of puzzlement. “Are you aware that there are more pictures of Lisa than Lori?” I added.Marilyn said, “Ive never counted them. I dont know.”Marilyns answer was the same as my thoughts, “I hadnt realized that there was any significant difference. Now why would Lori ask such a question?” I ask

42、ed.Marilyn just shook her head and stared back at me. After a few minutes of thought she said, “When Lisa was born, you were taking photographs. You hardly went anywhere without a camera. When Lori was born, you were involved in colored slides (幻灯片). There must be hundreds of slides of Lori somewher

43、e in the house that Lori has never seen or doesnt remember.”After digesting Marilyns remarks, I agreed. “After Lori leaves, well look for those slides. Who knows, we may find more slides of Lori than pictures of Lisa,” I joked.Later that afternoon, when we were alone, we went into the basement where

44、 we had stored the boxes that we had brought from our previous home. It wasnt long before we discovered the trays of slides, and for the rest of the afternoon we looked at each tray, pointing out those slides that highlighted Lori.“What are you going to do?” Marilyn asked.“Its her birthday in a few

45、weeks,” I said, “Well select about one hundred slides with Lori and convert them into pictures, put them into an album and give to her as a gift. I dont know if the album will answer her question, but at least shell know that we care enough to find her an answer.”注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右：2. 开头已给出。Paragraph

46、 1:Over the next few days, we secretly went through all of our slides._Paragraph 2:On November 24, before leaving for work, I opened her door and slipped the album inside._【答案】One possible versionOver the next few days, we secretly went through all of our slides. We kept on selecting and rejecting p

47、ictures until we were satisfied. Those pictures brought back memories of the early years of our marriage and we hoped they showed how we felt about our daughter. Marilyn had them converted into photographs. Then, we placed them into an album with a birthday card explaining why her mother and I had p

48、ut the album together. When the album was finally finished, we hid the book until her birthday.On November 24, before leaving for work, I opened her door and slipped the album inside. Then I left the house and drove to work. I was about to enter the office when the telephone rang. I picked up the re

49、ceiver, and on the other end of the receiver, a tiny voice spoke, I love you, Daddy, she said and disconnected. The receiver remained against my ear for a few more minutes before I placed it on the telephone. Our message had been delivered and acknowledged.【解析】【分析】这是一篇读后续写。文章主要讲述，一天作者的女儿Lori问他为什么Lis

50、a的照片比自己多。作者一开始不明白是怎么回事，后来在Marilyn的提示下才明白，原来Lisa小时候拍了很多照片放在家里，而Lori的是幻灯片，也有很多。作者下午去储藏室找有Lori的幻灯片，准备把它们转化成照片，在生日时给她惊喜。【详解】续写分为两个部分第一部分的开头是：接下来的几天，我们秘密地看完了所有的幻灯片。所以可以接着写：他们选取一些照片作为生日礼物，在选照片的过程中想起了一些美好的回忆。他们把选好的照片装进相册，准备给Lori惊喜。第二部分的开头是：11月24日，在前往工作前，我打开Lori的门，悄悄把相册放了进去。所以可以接着写：在作者到达工作地后，接到了Lori打来的电话。她对

51、作者说了一些暖心的话，让他感动的话。作者也很高兴自己的心意被女儿接受了。续写内容要符合逻辑，注意时态、人称、主谓一致。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Then, we placed them into an album with a birthday card explaining why her mother and I had put the album together.中why引导宾语从句；I was about to enter the office when the telephon

52、e rang.中使用了固定句型was about to dowhen“正要做某事（突然）”长郡中学2021届高三开学摸底考试47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。William Preston was sorry to see his mother Krystal Preston struggle. Finding herself newly single with three children and three dogs inside her home, Krystal Preston said she was at a

53、 low point in her life. The family had just made a fresh start, but with no car or means of transportation, Krystal was struggling to make ends meet. The last couple of weeks have been filled with so many tears, anger, confusion, and heartache, Krystal wrote.William was only 13, but as the oldest bo

54、y, he already considered himself the man of the family. He was a hard worker who often helped out around the neighborhood to earn extra cash for his family, doing everything including odd jobs. After watching a YouTube video of someone gifting their mother a car, William immediately began setting hi

55、s plan in motion.William went on Facebooks marketplace and soon located an inexpensive car. The boy looked around his house and his eyes landed on the only valuable object he owned: his Xbox (微软游戏机). If he combined the value of the Xbox with his own ability to trade work for cash, perhaps it was pos

56、sible for him to help his mother out. He quickly typed an email to the seller.It was really cheap so I asked her if I could trade it or earn it. And at first she said no, but after she thought about it, then she said yes, William recalled. William negotiated (谈判) a trade with the woman, providing ho

57、use and yard work along with his Xbox in exchange for the car. When the deal was done, the seller even came to his house with him. Krystal said that the day her son walked into the kitchen and told her hed bought her a car, and that she didnt believe him at first. After she met the seller, however,

58、she began to see that he was absolutely telling the truth.Paragraph 1:Krystal was so moved by her sons actions._Paragraph 2:Krystal says that her sons actions have been life-changing in many ways._【答案】Paragraph 1:Krystal was so moved by her sons actions. She was so proud of what a good young man hed

59、 become that she shared a photograph of William and the car along with the story of how hed stepped up to help her out. Im proud of what my kid did, but as mom, Im supposed to be able to take care of my kids. Im supposed to do this, not the other way around, Krystal said. What 13-year-old buys their

60、 mom a car? I dont know any. I cant even express it; there are no words that can express my gratitude and how proud I am.Paragraph 2:Krystal says that her sons actions have been life-changing in many ways. He is the boy who understands whats really important in life. He gave up his favorite Xbox for

61、 his mother. When he is free, he often helps look after the three dogs in his house, and this shows he is a kind person. He said, No matter how tough things get, my family will go through soon.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。【详解】文章主要讲述William Preston的母亲Krystal Preston正处于人生低谷，独自抚养三个孩子和三条狗，家里没有交通工具，Krystal只能勉强维持生

62、计。13岁的William是家中长子，他努力挣钱帮母亲养家，受一段视频影响，他把自己的微软游戏机的价值和用工作换现金的能力结合起来，为母亲买了一辆车。读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来，续写时注意词数应为150左右。这篇短文续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：Krystal被她儿子的行为所感动。所以接下来要详细写儿子是怎样做的，她看到这些后的感受。第二段开头是：Krystal说

63、她儿子的行为在很多方面改变了她的生活。接下来应该写儿子的日常行为，对家的贡献，全家生活和母亲心态的改变。【点睛】作者所续写内容符合文章的发展进程，情节合理，字数符合要求。作者在文中使用了复合句，固定句型，使得文章句式灵活多变，也展现了作者较高的英语句式驾驭功底。如She was so proud of what a good young man hed become that she shared a photograph of William and the car along with the story of how hed stepped up to help her out.运用了s

64、othat句型和宾语从句；there are no words that can express my gratitude and how proud I am.和He is the boy who understands whats really important in life.运用了定语从句；this shows he is a kind person.运用了宾语从句。此外，作者在文中较多使用高级词汇，如be supposed to, express gratitude, No matter how, go through等，使得文章表达更准确生动。江苏省苏州四市五区20202021学

65、年第一学期高三期初调研试卷47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Just after New Years, before school vacation ended. I went out for a walk. It was a walk Id been meaning to take ever since we moved to the house.I took my camera-the first time Id taken my camera out since we came to the country-and went, dressed

66、 in my down jacket and wearing heavy boots. I walked toward the seemingly abandoned house that I could see across the fields from the upstairs window.A truck was parked at the end of the road, beside a tiny, weather-beaten house. There was smoke coming out of the chimney, and curtains in the two lit

67、tle windows on either side of the door. A dog was in the yard, who barked when he saw me coming. And beside the truck-no, actually in the truck, or at least with his head inside it, was a man.“Hi, I called. It would have been silly to turn around and start walking home without saying anything, even

68、though Ive promised my parents all my life that I would never talk to strange men.He lifted out his head, a gray head, smiled-a nice smile-and said, Miss Chalmers. Im glad youve come to visit.“Meg, I said. I was puzzled. How did he know who I was?For Margaret? he asked, coming over and shaking my ha

69、nd. “Forgive me. My hands are very dirty. My battery dies in this cold weather.How did you know my name was Chalmers?He wiped his hands on a towel that was hanging from the door handle of the truck. My dear, I apologize. I have not even introduced myself. My name is Will Banks. And its much too cold

70、 to stand out here. Your feet must be frozen, even in those boots. Come inside, and Ill make us each a cup of tea. And Ill tell you how I know your name.”I stood unmoved. He saw me hesitate, and smiled. Meg, he said, “Im seventy years old. Completely harmless, even to a beautiful young girl like you

71、. Come on in and keep me company for a bit, and get warm. I laughed, because he knew what I was thinking, and very few people ever know what Im thinking. Then I went in his house.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。He took my jacket and hung it up with his, and poured tea into two thick pottery mug

72、s._Its nice to have a new friend, like Will._【答案】One possible version:He took my jacket and hung it up with his, and poured tea into two thick pottery mugs. After we sat at the table, Will told me the whole story. The house my family was living in was actually built by his grandfather. He was born,

73、raised and married in that house. Alter his Margaret died, he moved to this small house. When he heard my parents were looking for a place, he offered the house to them. He thought it was a perfect place for a writer like my father-the peace there stimulated imagination. He said again that he was gl

74、ad Id come to visit.Its nice to have a new friend, like Will. I suggested taking pictures of him. My dear, he said, straightening his shoulders and buttoning the top button of his shirt. I would be honored. The soft light was coming in through the kitchen window onto his face. He sat right there, sm

75、iling and talking. I just shot quickly. Years later, those pictures still brought back the warm memories of that day.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者搬家后第一次出去散步，在一个小木屋遇见了70多岁的Will Banks，Will Banks在打招呼时喊出了作者的名字，但是作者却不认识他，Will Banks邀请作者进屋喝杯茶，顺便讲述他为什么知道作者的名字。【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他拿着我的夹克衫和他的挂在一起，向两个厚陶杯里倒

76、茶，所以应该写进屋后的情况，即Will Banks向作者讲述是如何得知作者的名字的；第二段开头是：有一个像Will这样的朋友还不错，本段应该作者听了Will讲述的故事后，把Will当成在这个陌生国家的朋友，提议给他拍些照片，多年后，这些照片仍能让作者想起那些温暖的回忆。续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：look for，suggest doing sth.，bring back等高级词汇；After we sat at the table, Will told me the whole story.中After引导的时间状语从句，He said again that he was glad Id come to visit.中that引导的宾语从句等高级句式。