24 毕业感悟-2022年中考英语书面表达最新热点话题写作押题.docx

1、2022年初中英语最新热点话题写作押题-毕业感悟【1】1（2021浙江模拟预测）充实的初中生活即将落幕，这其中有笑有泪。你校英语报发起了主题征文活动。请你选择其中一个方面，结合自己的经历，记录你三年中最幸福或最难过的时刻并分享你的感悟。注意：（1）请补全标题，参考提示词，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数：90110。短文首句已给出，仅供参考，不计入总词数。The _ MomentLooking back at the past three years, I can still remember the _ moment._【2】2（2017吉林长春中考真题）校园生活，

2、青春绽放，初中三年，总有一些校园活动给你启发，令你回味。学校英语网站就“在活动中成长”这一主题向应届毕业生征稿。请写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，叙述你的一次活动经历，并谈谈你在其中的感悟或收获。（文中不得出现真实的人名和校名）_【3】3（2021广东东莞市东华初级中学九年级期末）都说不安的时间尤为漫长。面对频频而来的考验与挑战。当下的你正怀着怎样的心情？过去的一年是刻骨铭心的一年，蓦然回首、疾风和迅雨帮助我们重新审视生活。请根据过去一年自身的经历和感悟、致信已经到来的2022年，寄语未来、倾诉心声。内容包括：1. 你所面临的最大逆境是什么？2. 你如何克服或战胜这一逆境？3. 你心中的感悟和对

3、新年的期待。作文要求：(1)不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。In the past unprecedented year of 2020, many people have had a new understanding of life. For me_【4】4（2021吉林省第二实验学校九年级阶段练习）虽然毕业班的最后一次大型活动红歌会已经结束，但是每当想起我们一起站在舞台上胸膛起伏、放声歌唱的场景，大家的心情仍然久久不能平静。请结合生活实际，谈谈初中阶段最让你难忘的一次校园活动，以及在这次

4、活动中你的收获或感悟。要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名，无需题目。2. 不少于 80 词。_【5】5（2021浙江温州一模）回顾初中三年，有许多人和事令人难忘。校英语报Have Your Say栏目正面向九年级毕业生征文，请你根据以下表格内容分享你难忘的初中生活。Special memories of my junior high schoolThe most meaningful experiencetake part in an environmental project .The most embarrassing momentwear wrong clothes at a pa

5、rty .The most educational classlearn. from an English class about The Shirt of a Happy Man注意：1.短文必须包括表格里的所有内容，并适当拓展；2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数：110左右；4.短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。Looking back on the past three years, I have many special memories of my junior high school.First, I remember _参考答案：1One possible version:

6、The happiest momentLooking back at the past three years, I can still remember the happiest moment.It was the final exam for which I had prepared a lot that I took in Grade 8 impressed me a lot. In order to get good grades, I studied as hard as possible. Luckily, my hard work paid back. I got No.1 in

7、 the whole grade, becauseI had been praised by my teachers and classmates, even my parents. That must be the happiest moment in my junior school life.Actually, I learnt a lot from the experience. The harder you work, the greater progress you will make. From now on, do your best.【解析】1.题目解读。本文是一篇话题作文写

8、作，主要写初中三年中最幸福或最难过的时刻，可以采用三段式结构。第一段引出话题（大部分内容已给出）；第二段写最幸福或最难过的时刻；第三段写你的感悟。2.写作指导。本文人称采用第一人称，时态主要使用一般过去时。内容上，主要写最幸福或最难过的时刻以及你的感悟。注意写作的时候，选择一方面即可，在开头第一段点明，并补全标题。结构上，注意段与段之间的衔接，保证文章的逻辑性。2例文Im lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively an

9、d interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. The make me happy every day.In the past three years, I wash hard-working and made great progress. I did well in the exams. I was good at communicating and I liked to make friends with others. However, there

10、was a thing that I cant forget. Last year, I failed in an English speech. I was sad and upset during that term. My English teacher knew that and gave me warmth and comfort. Her help cheered me up again and I also realized my problems. From then on, I worked harder and harder. Now I have been an exce

11、llent graduate.Everything you meet in your life is an experience, whether it succeeds or not. It can make us grow. Thank youmy teachers and classmates. The best wishes to you!【解析】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕初中三年的学校生活写一篇短文。写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段总结概括；第二段描述过去发生的一件令自己难以忘怀的事情；最后一段表达自己的感情。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，

12、做到无语法和标点错误。3例文In the past unprecedented year of 2020, many people have had a new understanding of life. For me, after I became the student of Grade Nine, the biggest difficulty that I have is the vocabulary. My vocabulary is rather small. As a result, I can neither read fast nor understand well, and

13、 its really not easy for me to keep new words in mind.To overcome the difficulty, I have worked out a plan. Namely, read one or two pages of English every day. I can read English newspapers, stories and magazines. They are all good learning materials.From the experience, I realized that nothing is i

14、mpossible if you put your heart into it. For the new year, I believe that so long as I keep on reading, Ill be able to enlarge my vocabulary.【解析】1. 题干解读：该题属于材料作文，要求根据提示问题，介绍自己过去一年自身的经历和感悟，以及对新年的期待。2. 写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍自己面临的最大逆境是什么；第二段介绍自己是如何克服或战胜这一逆境；第三段描述心中的感悟和对新年的期待。要保证语言连贯，无

15、语法和拼写错误。4例文：Time passed by so quickly, and many memories faded as the days went on, but one thing that impressed me most was that I attended the English speech contest.It was during my eighth grade. My English teacher, Mrs. Li, told me to attend the contest. I was not confident then. My teacher enco

16、uraged me and said, “As long as you prepare for it carefully, I believe you can get good grades.” Listening teachers words, I decided to try my best to prepare for this contest. I learned the speech by heart, and then practiced it over and over at home. The result was satisfying, and what made me ha

17、ppy was that my efforts paid off.【解析】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们叙述初中阶段让你难忘的一次活动。这是一篇开放式作文，题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们可以从自己的实际生活出发，选取自己曾经做过的一件印象深刻的事，然后用正确的英语表达出来。2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇作文应用一般过去时态、第一人称为主进行叙述。写作时应注意：叙述事情的发生、发展过程应详细，选取有代表性的事例；注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，使用正确的词汇、短语和句型表达，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句和其他复杂句式，提升文章档次；最后注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。5例

18、文Looking back on the past three years, I have many special memories of my junior high school.First, I remember taking part in an environmental project. It is the most meaningful experience because I think our actions have made a difference. Besides, I also remember wearing wrong clothes at a costume

19、 party. I was the only person wearing a costume so I was really embarrassed. And as for the most educational class, I learnt what the spirit of happiness was from an English class about The Shirt of a Happy Man. Lastly, Mr. Li is the best teacher in my heart. He was always patient with me in the mat

20、h class. He helped me to work out the answers myself no matter how difficult they were.I cant believe how fast the time went by!【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，分享你难忘的初中生活。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态以一般过去时为主。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍自己在初中生活中最有意义的经历，最尴尬的时刻，最有教育意义的一节课以及最好的老师；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。