Unit 2 Travelling around-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年高一英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019必修第一册）.docx

1、必修第一册 Unit 1单元写作指导与演练Write about Travel Plan单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务是以电子邮件的方式向朋友告知旅行计划，属于应用文写作。旅行计划类的信件内容主要包括以下方面：1旅行的目的、原因及目的地；2具体计划：时间，交通方式等。3. 对旅行的期望。常用表达I am planning to do.We are looking forward to.It is famous for its.Well fly to .Following that, well head to.单元话题真题展示高考链接Travel Plan2017年浙江卷高考应用文等写作

2、可以涉及到旅行的方式很多，如，旅行建议，旅行邀请，旅行总结，旅行报道等。Write a travel plan.假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.参加者;2.时间、地点;3.活动:登山、野餐等。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。旅行有很多种，可以根据距离分为长距离出游和短距离出游；可以根据目的分为文化游，研学游，郊游等。写作时，要根据不同的要求写清楚具体的信息，如，目的，时间，地点，旅行方式，注意事项，总结或感想等。一般分为三段：第一段：写信目的；第二段：具体信息介绍；第三段：邀请或祝愿。段落内容句子设计第一段

3、告知写信的目的Im delighted to know that . I believe it is .My parents and I are planning to .第二段旅行等具体信息We decide to fly to During our stay in Zhangye, we will.is also a place we cant afford to miss. The last destination of us is.第三段期望和祝愿等We are looking forward to begin our visit. 【小试牛刀1】Dear Richard,Im del

4、ighted to know that youre planning to travel to Xian over the October holiday next month. I believe it is a good idea and am sure you will definitely benefit a lot from this decision. There are lots of places of interest in Xian,through which you can learn about Chinese history and culture. Among th

5、em, the Terracotta Army is certainly the most worthwhile place to visit. The Shaanxi History Museum is also the one you cant afford to miss. Besides these, Xian is also famous for its food, where you can taste many delicious local snacks, such as Mutton and Bread Pieces in Soup. Wish you have a good

6、 journey. If you have any questions, dont hesitate to ask me. Yours, Xiaoli 【小试牛刀2】Dear Richard,Im delighted to know that youre planning to travel to Xian over the October holiday next month. I believe it is a good idea and am sure you will definitely benefit a lot from this decision.This summer voc

7、ation, my parents and I are planning to have a visit to Gansu, which is the most beautiful place in Northwest China. We decide to fly to Lanzhou, the capital city of Gansu, and then take the high-speed rail to Zhangye, along which we can have an eye feast of the beautiful landscape. We have known th

8、at the green grasslands there are very attractive. During our stay in Zhangye, we will go to visit Danxia in Zhangye, which is sure a place we cant afford to miss. Following that, we will go to Dunhuang to see the Mogao Caves. The last destination of us is Crescent Spring and Mingsha Mountain, where

9、 we will stay one day and of course take a lot of photos. We are looking forward to begin our visit. I will send you our pictures there. Wish you have a good journey in Xian. Yours, Li Hua 陈述写信目的具体旅行信息祝愿和问候Im delighted to know that youre planning to travel to .Im writing to inform you that.I cant wa

10、it to tell you the news that.Knowing that you will have a visit to.Im glad to receive your letter saying that your are coming to Zhejiang for a visit.Im planning to travel to .Im writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency.Having learned that you plan to explore the city where I live, Im m

11、ore than glad to write to you to extend. It is known as.We are taking the train，leaving.the day before.We are arriving at 9：30 am.It is a beautiful place where you can experience.The trip starts from . Well first fly to Kunming, which is . Then well head for . Then well take High-speed rail to ., an

12、d we can enjoy the beautiful views on the way. Our last destination is ., from where we will fly back to . The whole trip will last a week.It is such a wonderful place which can bring you.This is an amazing place where you can experience . Wish you have a good journey. I am sure you will have wonder

13、ful time there. Im eager to hear from you.I sincerely invite you to join us.Looking forward to your coming.Looking forward to your arrival.Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to our city.I believe that this trip will enrich your knowledge about China and have a deep insight into Chinese culture假设你是李

14、华，下周你们将组织由外国学生参加的旅游活动“Discovering China”，你刚到北京的美国朋友Tom来信询问活动的有关安排。请你根据以下要点，给他写一封回信：1日程安排：2发出邀请。注意：1词数80左右；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,_Yours， Li Hua.审题写作要求是介绍一次旅行的目的和行程安排。写作时应注意下面几点：1文体：本文是说明性应用文，注意要信息准确，表达清楚。2时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。3人称：人称应该以第一人称和第二人称为主。谋篇第一段：开门见山，引入主题。第二段：具体介绍目的地、交通方式、时间及路

15、线。第三段：诚挚邀请并表达祝愿。遣词造句【核心词汇】1一个受欢迎的旅游景点a popular tourist destination2去杭州head/leave for Hangzhou3在路上on the way4欣赏美景admire/enjoy beautiful views5丰富你的知识enrich your knowledge【连词成句】1我写信告诉你一些具体信息。希望你能够参加。Im writing to share some details with you. I hope you can participate in it.2. 我们要飞往昆明。它是一个因为美丽而备受欢迎的旅游景

16、点。(tourist destination)Well fly to Kunming. It is a popular tourist destination for its beauty.3然后我们要去Hangzhou。它是一个美丽的地方, 有著名的西湖。(head for)Then well head for Hangzhou. It is a beautiful place with the most attraction West Lake.【句式升级】1将1句合并成一个句子。Im writing to share some details with you, hoping you c

17、an participate in it.2. 用定语从句改写句2。Well fly to Kunming，which is a popular tourist destination for its beauty.3将句3合并成一个句子。Then well head for Hangzhou, a beautiful place with the most famous attraction West Lake.组句成篇根据命题要求，用适当的过渡词语和必要的扩展信息，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。Dear Tom，How are you doing？Im glad to tell you t

18、hat exploring trip called “Discovering China”will be organized by our school next week. Im writing to share some details with you, hoping you can participate in it.The trip starts from next Monday. Well first fly to Kunming, which is a popular tourist destination for its beauty. Then well head for H

19、angzhou, a beautiful place with the most famous attraction West Lake. Then well take High-speed rail to Shanghai, and we can enjoy the beautiful views on the way. Our last destination is Suzhou, from where we will fly back to Beijing. The whole trip will last a week. I believe that this trip will en

20、rich your knowledge about China and have a deep insight into Chinese culture.I sincerely invite you to join us.Best wishes!Yours，Li HuaWriting 1. 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Robert 发邮件说他下个月想来中国旅游,希望你向他推荐一个旅游城市。请你给他回复邮件。内容包括:1.表示欢迎2.推荐城市并说明理由;3.表达期待。注意:1.词数 80 左右:2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【佳作欣赏】Dear RobertIm delighted to

21、 know that youre planning to travel to China next month. And now Im writing to recommend a great city -Xian to you.As the capital of many dynasties, there are lots of places of interest in Xian, through which you can learn a lot about Chinese history and culture. In addition, Xian is famous for its

22、food, where you can taste many delicious local snacks. As a local, Id love to be your tour guide, making your journey more convenient and meaningful.Looking forward to your coming.Writing 2. 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Bob来信告知他即将来浙江旅游，希望你给他推荐一个城市或景点。请你用英语给他写一封信，内容主要包括：欢迎他来浙江；推荐一个旅游城市或景点；你推荐的理由。注意1. 词数80左右。2. 可以适当增

23、加细节， 使行文流畅。_【佳作欣赏1】Dear Bob,Knowing that you will come to travel in Zhejiang, Im eager to write to you so as to extend a warm welcome to you and introduce one of the most beautiful cities, Hangzhou. Hangzhou，which contains a number of fantastic legends , appeals to thousands of people crowding in ev

24、ery year. As everyone knows, the west Lake located in Hangzhou is very popular. Weather permitting or not, you can get relaxation and entertainment. Only after visiting there on your own will you realize its true beauty. Looking forward to your arrival.Yours Li Hua【佳作欣赏2】Dear Bob,Im glad to receive

25、your letter saying that your are coming to Zhejiang for a visit. Hangzhou, which is a historical city with plenty of places of interests, is highly recommended. The remainder of G20 conference adds to more beauty to this charming city, which is well worth your visit. Whats more, theres a variety of

26、seafood waiting for you to try. Once you have a try, I believe you will fall in love with it. Moreover, people there are really friendly and hospitable, who will surely treat you with cordiality(kindness and passion).Hoping you have a good time there.Yours Li Hua【佳作欣赏3】Dear Bob,Knowing that you will

27、 come to Zhejiang for a vacation recently, Im eager to introduce to you the beautiful city Ningbo. It does not come as a surprise that as a coastal city, Ningbo still is a historical place full of romance. Not only does it have charming scenery, it also provides variety of delicious food. Crab paste

28、 and mud snails are the most attractive food here. Besides, what may impress you most may be the fact that the Clock which has gone through 500 years can still beat to announce time correctly. I sincerely hope youll have a wonderful time in Ningbo.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours Li HuaWrit

29、ing 3. 假定你是李华，打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询，内容如下：1. 请其推荐合适的旅游路线；2. 请其告知相关的旅游费用；注意；1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,_Yours,Li Hua【佳作欣赏】Dear Sir/Madam,Im planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, Im writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency.I in

30、tend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes? In addition, Id like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.A rep

31、ly at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.Yours,Li HuaWriting 4. 假定你是李华， 你的美国朋友John近期打算来你所在的城市旅游，请给他写一封建议信，并祝他旅途愉快。内容要点：1.先参观一些感兴趣在地方。2.多搜集一些关于这个地方的信息。3.多与当地人谈话，以了解城市在历史和文化。注意1. 词数80左右。2.可以适当增加细节， 使行文流畅。_Dear John,Having learned that you plan to explore the city where I live, Im more tha

32、n glad to write to you to extend a warm welcome and put forward some suggestions, which may help you during your trip. You might as well visit the places which appeal to you most as many as possible. In addition, only after gathering enough information about Ningbo will you have a wonderful trip the

33、re. Whats more, Chatting with the local people is also a practical way to know more about the history and culture of the destination. Only after exploring this city on your own will you know the true beauty of it.Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to our city.Yours,Li Hua【链接高考经典诵读】（2017浙江卷）假定你是李华,计

34、划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1. 参加者;2. 时间、地点;3.活动:登山、野餐等。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【佳作欣赏1】Dear Chris,How is everything going these days? I am writing to invite you to join my class in an outing organized by me this Saturday, June 10th. We will start at 6 oclock early in the morning from

35、the school gate, and then take a bus to Yinling Mountain, where we will climb the mountain in the morning and then have a picnic at noon. If you could come, there is no need for you to take food but youd better wear sports shoes and suitable clothes. We will be really glad if you can come. Looking f

36、orward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua【佳作欣赏2】Dear Chris,I hope this email finds you well. I am excited to share some wonderful news we are planning a day trip and I would be thrilled if you could join us!The outing is set for this coming Saturday. We will gather at my place at 9:00 AM, and from there,

37、we will head to the nearby scenic hills for a day of hiking and exploration. The location promises breathtaking views and a refreshing escape from the city hustle. Our plan includes a pleasant picnic as well, with each of us contributing a dish. Its a great chance to enjoy some delicious food amidst

38、 the beauty of nature. Some of our close friends will be joining in, and I am sure youll enjoy their company. This outing will not only be an opportunity to unwind but also a chance to strengthen our bonds.Please let me know at your earliest convenience if you can make it. Your presence would certainly add a special touch to the day. Looking forward to your positive response!Warm regards,Yours,Li Hua