Unit 4 单元写作指导.docx

1、Unit 1 Lights, camera, action!(译林版2020必修第二册)单元写作指导&典题例析&跟踪训练(推荐信)I. 单元写作指导1. 文体特点推荐信是常用的一种书信文体, 它可以向某人或某个组织推荐某物或某人。一般来说, 作者推荐的物或者人都具有鲜明突出的特征和优秀品质。推荐信的用语要简洁, 具有说服力且内容要真实可信。2. 话题词汇(1)推荐对象science books科学书籍literary books文学书籍classic works经典作品science fiction科幻小说(2)推荐理由arouse our curiosity激发我们的好奇心broaden o

2、ur horizons开阔我们的视野promote traditional culture弘扬传统文化enjoy the beauty of the language欣赏语言之美have a better understanding of更好理解(3)提出希望take ones recommendation into account考虑某人的推荐adopt/follow/take ones advice/suggestions采纳某人的建议3. 话题句式(1)段首句Im writing to recommend to you a novel A Tale of Two Cities writt

3、en by Charles Dickens. 我写信向你推荐查尔斯狄更斯的小说双城记。I feel greatly honored to recommend to you a book on the history of China. 我很荣幸向您推荐一本关于中国历史的书。Learning that our school library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions. 得知我们学校图书馆要买书, 我想给出一些建议。(2)主体段落句It is universally acknowledged that this i

4、s one of the best novels about contemporary rural life. 人们公认, 这是一部反映当代农村生活的最好的小说之一。The book is of great help for us to learn about the history of Tang Dynasty. 这本书对我们了解唐朝历史很有帮助。(3)段尾句In a word, I would appreciate it if you could consider my recommendation. 总之, 如果你能考虑我的推荐, 我将不胜感激。Based on the above f

5、acts, I strongly recommend the book to you. 基于以上事实, 我向你强烈推荐这本书。II. 典题例析假如你是晨光中学的李津, 你的英国外教Alex打算在寒假里发起“英语经典诵读(English Classics for Recitation)”活动, 现就诵读书目征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Alex写一封电子邮件: 1. 你打算推荐的一本书; 2. 推荐的原因; 3. 希望从活动中有何收获。注意: 1. 词数不少于80; 2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。_一审核体裁,话题推荐信 推荐一本书时态,人称一般现在时,第一,人称文章结构首段:引入

6、话题,中段: 说明原因尾段:得出结论核心要点1. 推荐原因2. 希望与收获二造句完成句子1. 我听说你打算开展一项名为“英语经典诵读”的活动。I heard that you intend to _ English Classics for Recitation. 2. 能有机会发表我的意见, 我感到非常荣幸。_ have the chance to make my voice heard. 3. 我想推荐的书是简爱。The book _ is Jane Eyre. 4. 作为19世纪出版的经典小说之一, 简爱的语言和简的性格都很美。_, its beauty not only lies in

7、 the language, but also exists in the characteristics of Jane. 5. 我坚信, 主人公简勤奋、善良和追求独立自由的品质一定会深深地打动读者。I firmly believe that the heroine Janes diligence, kindness and pursuit of independence and freedom _. 6. (一句多译) 我希望这次活动对我们的成长非常有益。(1)I hope the activity will _. (benefit)(2)I hope the activity will

8、_. (beneficial)7. (一句多译)我们不仅可以学到很多知识, 而且可以拓宽我们的视野。(1)We will _. (not only. . . but also)(2) _.(倒装句)8. (句式升级)用分词作状语合并句1和句2。_.【答案】1. launch an activity called 2. I feel much honored to 3. Id like to recommend 4. As one of the classic novels published in the 19th century 5. will surely touch the reader

9、s deeply 6. (1)be of great benefit to our growth (2) be greatly beneficial to our growth 7.(1)not only learn much knowledge but also broaden our horizons (2)Not only will we learn much knowledge but also we will broaden our horizons 8. Hearing that you intend to launch an activity called English Cla

10、ssics for Recitation, I feel much honored to have the chance to make my voice heard.【 参考范文】Dear Alex, Im Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. Hearing that you intend to launch an activity called English Classics for Recitation, I feel much honored to have the chance to make my voice heard. Th

11、e book Id like to recommend is Jane Eyre. As one of the classic novels published in the 19th century, its beauty not only lies in the language, but also exists in the characteristics of Jane. I firmly believe that the heroine Janes diligence, kindness and pursuit of independence and freedom will sur

12、ely touch the readers deeply. I hope the activity will be of great benefit to our growth. We will not only learn much knowledge but also broaden our horizons. Thank you for your time. Yours sincerely, Li JinIII. 跟踪训练应用文写作A(2023下四川遂宁高一统考期末)假如你是李华，最近你收到了你的英国朋友Jim的邮件，他想请你为他推荐一本中文书。请给他回邮件，内容包括: 1. 这本书的书

13、名、作者；2. 简要介绍这本书的内容；3. 你推荐的理由。注意: 1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im incredibly happy to have received your email asking me to recommend a Chinese book for you. Id like to recommend The Three-Body Problem by Liu Cixin, a fantastic science fiction novel that explores big

14、 questions about humanity and the universe. It tells the story of a group of scientists who encounter a mysterious alien force attempting to take control of Earth.I highly recommend this book mainly due to its thrilling plot that will keep you on the edge of your seat. I am confident that you will b

15、e addicted to it.Yours,Lihua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Jim回邮件，给他推荐一本中文书。【详解】1.词汇积累非常地: incredibly extremely高兴的: happy delighted遇到: encounter run into因为: due to owing to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句: Im incredibly happy to have received your email asking me to recommend a Chinese book for you.拓展句: Im incredibly happ

16、y to have received your email, in which you asked me to recommend a Chinese book for you.【点睛】高分句型1It tells the story of a group of scientists who encounter a mysterious alien force attempting to take control of Earth. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)高分句型2I highly recommend this book mainly due to its thrilling pl

17、ot that will keep you on the edge of your seat. (运用了that引导的限制性定语从句)B假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Penny最近对中国文学作品产生了浓厚的兴趣，并且在朋友的推荐下先后阅读了红楼梦和平凡的世界。他写信给你，希望你能再给他推荐一本别的中国文学作品。写信的内容包括: 1. 该文学作品的基本信息，如: 作者、主要情节；2. 你推荐该文学作品的理由。注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Penny,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Penny,Im delighted to le

18、arn youre interested in Chinese literary works. There is one Id like to recommend to you Journey to the West, one of the four Chinese greatest classics, written by Wu Chengen.Based on Xuan Zangs journey to India, the novel is very popular with Chinese people. The story focuses on Monkey King called

19、Sun Wukong, who helps his master Xuan Zang overcome various difficulties on the journey. You may find it challenging to read the original classic, so I advise you read the simplified versions. Some versions come with many pictures, which makes it easy for readers like you to understand.Hopefully you

20、 will fall in love with this great work.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如考生是李华，考生的英国笔友Penny最近对中国文学作品产生了浓厚的兴趣，并且在朋友的推荐下先后阅读了红楼梦和平凡的世界。他写信给考生，希望考生能再给他推荐一本别的中国文学作品。【详解】1. 词汇积累高兴的: delighted pleased建议: recommend suggest各种各样: various varieties of喜欢: fall in love with be fond of2. 句式拓展合并简单句原句: Based on Xuan

21、Zangs journey to India, the novel is very popular with Chinese people.拓展句: It is because the novel is based on Xuan Zangs journey to India that it is very popular with Chinese people.【点睛】高分句型1The story focuses on Monkey King called Sun Wukong, who helps his master Xuan Zang overcome various difficul

22、ties on the journey.(运用了过去分词作定语，who引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2Some versions come with many pictures, which makes it easy for readers like you to understand.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，不定式作宾语，it作形式宾语)C假定你是中学生李华，在你校学习的美国交换生Jack给你写了一封邮件，表达了他想参加学校社团活动的意愿，请你向他推荐一个他可以参加的社团。现请你给他回邮件，内容要点包括: 1.推荐社团名称；2.推荐理由；3.表达祝愿。注意: 1.词数1

23、00左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Jack,Im Li Hua. Hearing that you plan to join a club in our school, Im writing to recommend to you the choral club. Given your keen interest in singing, it is absolutely the most suitable club for you where students enthusiastic about singing will gather together to

24、perform classic Chinese songs. Besides, by immersing yourself in it, you will not only establish friendship with more Chinese students, but also you will have a better command of Chinese and a deeper insight into Chinese culture. Wish you a rosy experience in the club you like! Yours, Li Hua【导语】本篇书面

25、表达属于应用文写作中的推荐信。要求考生向美国交换生Jack写一封回信，向其推荐一个他可以参加的社团，并说明推荐理由和表达祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累考虑到: given considering肯定地: absolutely definitely此外: besides in addition美好的: rosy wonderful2. 句式转换简单句变倒装句原句: Besides, by immersing yourself in it, you will not only establish friendship with more Chinese students, but also you w

26、ill have a better command of Chinese and a deeper insight into Chinese culture.拓展句: Besides, by immersing yourself in it, not only will you establish friendship with more Chinese students, but also you will have a better command of Chinese and a deeper insight into Chinese culture.【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing

27、 that you plan to join a club in our school, Im writing to recommend to you the choral club. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Given your keen interest in singing, it is absolutely the most suitable club for you where students enthusiastic about singing will gather together to perform classic Chinese s

28、ongs. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)D假定你是李华，你校的联谊学校美国乔治中学要招聘一名学生为外联部志愿者，主要负责与其联系和接待等工作。条件是英语水平高，能熟练操作计算机，热心为两校服务。请你据此写一封自荐信。注意: 1. 词数: 80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇: 外联部 foreign liaison department_【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I have learned that your school is in need of a volunteer working for foreign liaison depart

29、ment. I would like you to consider me for the position.I have a great passion for English. In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper in my school. Besides, I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me work well. Whats more, I am always ready

30、to help others and offer good service.I think I am competent for the job. I would appreciate it if I could have the opportunity to get the job.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你校的联谊学校美国乔治中学要招聘一名学生为外联部志愿者，主要负责与其联系和接待等工作。条件是英语水平高，能熟练操作计算机，热心为两校服务。请你据此写一封自荐信。【详解】1.

31、词汇积累了解: learn know热情: passion enthusiasm机会: opportunity chance此外: Besides=In addition2.句式拓展合并简单句原句: I have a great passion for English. In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper in my school.拓展句: Because I have a great passion for English, I have been an editor for the Engli

32、sh Paper in my school in the past two years.【点睛】高分句型1Besides, I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me work well. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型2I have learned that your school is in need of a volunteer working for foreign liaison department. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)E你是李华。你的外

33、国笔友Pete在北京国际学校读书，刚参加完期中考试，现在有一个星期的假期，计划去旅游放松下。但他对去哪里度假有点迷茫，写了邮件向你咨询。请你给Pete回邮件，要点如下: 1. 推荐旅游地: 有着“天府之国”雅称的四川。2. 特点: (1)风光宜人，文化丰富。(2)省会成都: 正宗川菜，慢生活，适合放松。(3)观赏国宝大熊猫。要求: 约100词。参考词汇: 天府之国: Heavenly Land,国宝: national treasureDear Pete,I am glad to hear that you have finished your mid-term exams and now h

34、ave time for a trip._Any questions, please feel free to let me know.Enjoy your holiday!Your friend,Li Hua【答案】Dear Pete,I am glad to hear that you have finished your mid-term exams and now have time for a trip. Since you are wondering where to spend your holiday, Id like to recommend that you travel

35、in Sichuan Province.Known as Heavenly Land, Sichuan is an amazing destination to visit. First of all, there are many tourist sites, including Jiuzhaigou, Emei Mountain etc. Not only can you see great natural beauty but you will experience rich culture there. Besides, its capital city, Chengdu, is fa

36、mous for original Sichuan cuisine and its slow pace of life, which suit you best for relaxation after the busy study. Another real attraction is that you can see the cute giant pandas, our national treasure there!Im sure you will find this trip wonderful and worth your time. Any questions, please fe

37、el free to let me know.Enjoy your holiday!Your friend,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的外国笔友Pete在北京国际学校读书，刚参加完期中考试，现在有一个星期的假期，计划去旅游放松下这一情况，给他回一份邮件并给出一些推荐。【详解】1.词汇积累首先: First of allabove all此外: besides whats more富有的: rich affluent随意，不要犹豫: feel free dont hesitate2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句: Any questions, please feel

38、 free to let me know.拓展句: If you have any questions, please dont hesitate to let me know.【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, its capital city, Chengdu, is famous for original Sichuan cuisine and its slow pace of life, which suit you best for relaxation after the busy study.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】Since you are

39、wondering where to spend your holiday, Id like to recommend that you travel in Sichuan Province.(运用了Since引导的原因状语从句。)【高分句型3】Not only can you see great natural beauty but you will experience rich culture there.(运用了Not onlybut also的固定句型，其中Not only后用了部分倒装。)读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ACarte

40、r Druse was born in Virginia. He loved his parents, his home and the south. But he loved his country, too. And in 1861, when the US was divided by a terrible war, Carter Druse, a southerner, decided to join the army of the north.He told his father about his decision one morning at breakfast. The old

41、 man looked at his only son for a moment, too shocked to speak. Then he said, “Please dont tell your mother about your decision. She is sick, and we both know she has only a few weeks to live. ”Carters father paused, again looking deep into his sons eyes. “Carter, ” he said, “No matter what happens,

42、 be sure that you always do what you think is your duty. ”Both Carter Druse and his father left the table that morning with broken hearts. And Carter soon left his home and everyone he deeply loved behind.One sunny afternoon, a few months later, Carter Druse was sent to guard a road which was only a

43、 few miles from an enemys base. It began in a forest, down in the valley, and climbed up the side of a huge rock. Anyone standing on the top of this high rock would be able to see down into the valley.Hidden in the valleys forest were thousands of Carters fellow soldiers. They had marched for thirty

44、-six hours. Now they were resting.Their plan was to attack by surprise their enemy on the other side of the valley. But if their enemy learned about the army hiding in the forest, the soldiers would find themselves in a trap with no escape. That was why Carter Druse had been sent to guard the road a

45、nd it was his duty to be sure that no enemy soldier spied on the valley, where the army of the north was hiding.注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly, he saw a man on horseback standing on the huge rock. _At that instant, the horseman turned his head and looked in Carters direction. _【答案】

46、One possible version:Suddenly, he saw a man on horseback standing on the huge rock. The rider and his horse stood so still that it seemed that they were made of stone. Carter could not see the mans face, because the rider was looking down into the valley. Carter was alarmed. He raised his gun and ai

47、med for the horsemans heart.At that instant, the horseman turned his head and looked in Carters direction. Carters face became very white. His entire body began shaking. It was his father, who seemed to look at Carters face and into his eyes. Brave and strong as he was, Carter almost fainted from th

48、e shock of what he had seen. But in his head rang the last words his father ever spoke to him, “No matter what happens, be sure that you always do what you think is your duty.” Carter Druse took aim at the mans heart and fired.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，本文是安布鲁斯毕尔斯小说空中骑士的节选。卡特德鲁斯出生于弗吉尼亚州，他爱他的家乡，美国内战爆发，南北分裂，来自南方的

49、卡特德鲁斯决定加入北方兵团。就这样，德鲁斯离家上了战场。卡特德鲁斯被派去警戒的那条路离父亲的家只有几英里。卡特德鲁斯的责任确保没有敌人的士兵监视北方军队藏身的山谷，以及后来遇到父亲的情节。【详解】1.段落续写: 由第一段首句内容“突然，他看见一个骑马的人站在那块巨大的岩石上。”可知，第一段可描写卡特看到一名骑手，准备向他射击。由第二段首句内容“就在这时，骑士转过头来，看着卡特的方向。”可知，第二段可描写骑手是卡特的父亲，卡特的心理变化以及卡特最后做出的决定。2.续写线索: 看到骑手准备射击发现父亲心理活动做出决定3.词汇激活行为类.站着不动: stand still/stay still/st

50、ay put.向下看: look down/oversee.转身: turn ones head/turn round情绪类.震惊: ones face become white/shocked【点睛】高分句型1The rider and his horse stood so still that it seemed that they were made of stone.(sothat引导状语从句)高分句型2It was his father, who seemed to look at Carters face and into his eyes.(who引导非限制性定语从句)高分句型3

51、No matter what happens, be sure that you always do what you think is your duty.(no matter what引导让步状语从句，that引导宾语从句，what引导宾语从句)B(2023上陕西榆林高一校考期中)There was a girl named Emily. Although her singing was pleasant to hear, lacking of courage, she never sings in front of strangers.One summer, the neighborho

52、od would hold a singing competition. Her best friend, Lucy, came to invite her to participate in the competition, but Emily said, “Im afraid to take part in it.” Her mother said, “Its okay; just do it bravely.” Emily followed her moms ad vice and decided to have a try. The day came. Emily and Lucy w

53、ent to the competition site. But she was too timid(胆小的) to walk onto the stage. She had been waiting until others finished singing. She shakily forced herself to stand on the stage. She started to sing, but her voice was so low. Whats worse, she was so nervous that she forgot the lyrics(歌词) after si

54、nging a few words. Being laughed at by others, embarrassed and shy, she ran away from the stage.Some boys ran after her and said, “Emily, coward(胆小鬼)! Emily, coward!” Emily didnt argue with them. What she wanted was to go back home as quickly as she could. Finally, she rushed into the house, hugged

55、her mom and cried sadly.“Well, my poor girl, dont cry. Tell me what happened to you,” asked her mom. Emily told her mother what she had experienced.Listening to her, her mom cupped her face and said, “It doesnt matter, girl. As long as you practice singing more in front of strangers, you will become

56、 braver little by little. So, my girl, dont be beaten by a failure. You can go out to practice singing every day. No matter who is listening to you, go on singing and never stop. I believe there will be a harvest for you.”注意: 1. 续写的短文词数应为100 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Emily listened to her mother caref

57、ully and followed her moms suggestion. _Going on singing, she walked into the park. _【答案】Emily listened to her mother carefully and followed her moms suggestion. The next day, she began to practice singing outside. Gradually, her courage became greater and greater, and the sound of her singing was a

58、lso louder and louder. Months later, she could sing as she was walking. A naughty boy who had laughed at her before cried to her, “Emily, coward! Emily, coward!” Emily felt depressed. However, she chose to ignore his behavior.Going on singing, she walked into the park. Many people were singing and d

59、ancing there. Hearing her beautiful voice, some stopped to listen to her singing and clapped for her. A grandma smiled to her and said, “Oh, little girl, your voice is really beautiful!” Encouraged by the words, Emily felt pleased and could sing confidently in front of strangers. In the second year

60、singing competition, Emily walked onto the stage bravely, and her loud and beautiful voice of singing moved all the people, including those who had laughed at her. Her mother was delighted to see the timid girl became a brave one.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了艾米丽唱歌很好听，由于胆怯，艾米丽不敢参加。虽然参加了比赛，但以失败告终。在妈妈的鼓励下坚持练习，最终找

61、回自信，重回舞台。【详解】1.段落续写: 由第一段首句内容“艾米丽认真听妈妈的话，听从了她的建议。”可知，第一段可描写艾米丽开始练歌，慢慢地她变得自信了，有足够的信心无视他人的嘲笑。由第二段首句内容“继续唱着歌，她走进了公园。”可知，第二段可描写艾米丽得到许多人的表扬，更加自信，报名参加比赛，变成了一个勇敢的女孩。2.续写线索: 听从建议练习唱歌变得自信在许多人面前唱歌被表扬参加比赛歌声感动了所有人变成了勇敢的人3.词汇激活行为类嘲笑: laugh at/make fun of忽视: ignore/neglect鼓掌: walk/step情绪类自信地: confidently/with confidence高兴的: pleased/glad/delighted沮丧的: depressed/frustrated【点睛】高分句型1Months later, she could sing as she was walking(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)高分句型2Encouraged by the words, Emily felt pleased and could sing confidently in front of strangers.(过去分词Encouraged充当原因状语)