专题05 应用文写作（5）-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考.docx

1、研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part1 应用文写作文（五）1.（2018北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：(1) 表示欢迎；(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。注意：(1). 词数不少于50；(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your l

2、ast letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chine

3、se Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese langu

4、age environment.I sincerely hope your dream will come true and its my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大

5、学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。亮点说明：文章中巧妙使用非谓语Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 使句子结构紧凑。使用定语从句Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich cultur

6、e. 使句子表达更完美；巧妙使用连接词while引出来中国前的准备，使句子结构对称。2（2018浙江卷第二次高考）假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：（1） 口语能力：（2） 相关经验；（3） 应聘目的。注意：（1） 词数80左右；（2） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.I have a good co

7、mmand of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. Whats more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.Im particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English cap

8、abilities and interpersonal communication skills.Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：Im writing to apply for，a good command of English，communicate with，get

9、 along with等。第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。3.（2018浙江卷第一次高考）假定你是李华，得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回国，想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信，内容包括：1.时间2.一同过节的家人3.活动注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Mr. Hall, Im writing to invite you to come to my home to cele

10、brate the Spring Festival on January 19. Its traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. Well make dumplings together and have a big dinner. Well also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents. If yo

11、ure able to come, Ill go and pick you up at your place.Best wishesLi Hua【导语】本文是一篇书信类作文。要求给外教Mr. Hall写封信，邀请他到你家过春节。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 介绍同学们的听说训练情况；2. 希望提供更有效的学习方法;3. 询问对方的意向。第二步:列提纲 celebrate the Spring Festival， have a big dinner，make du

12、mplings，able to come，pick up 第三步：连词成句1. Im writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January19.2. Well make dumplings together and have a big dinner. 3. Well also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala onTV.4. If youre able to come, Ill go and pick you

13、up at your place.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）表因果关系：so连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】高分句型1Im writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 1

14、9. 本句是典型的书信开头句，表达写信的目的。高分句型2Its traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there.本句是so连接的并列句。高分句型3If youre able to come, Ill go and pick you up at your place.if在本句引导条件状语从句。4.（2018全国新课标II卷）你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：(1)短片内容：学校的发展；(2

15、)放映时间、地点；(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Boys and girls,I have good news for you. The English film Growing Together made by our teachers and some senior students will be displayed this weekend. It shows us the whole history of schools development, which is I think the attraction t

16、o us. If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustnt miss this excellent opportunity! Besides, all your suggestions and comments about this film will be welcome.It will be displayed in the School Film Hall, from 9:00 am to 10:00 am, June 9th, Saturday.Th

17、ats all. Thank you.The Students UnionJune 8, 2018【详解】英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。5.（2018全国新课标I卷）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：（1）到达时间；（2）合适的礼物；（3）餐桌礼仪。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Terry,How are

18、you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if

19、 I were you, I would bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.Hopefully, these sugg

20、estions will be helpful for you.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【详解】本文是一篇书信类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：一、内容要点要齐全1到达时间；2合适的礼物；3餐桌礼仪。二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来时；三、人称：二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。点睛：本文虽然看起来比较容易，但学生真正动起笔来，还是比较困惑的。原因为：1.看起来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉，但内容很多，一时间不知道该写什么；2.100单词左右，写出到达时间；合

21、适的礼物；餐桌礼仪三个内容，信息量大，选择有困难；应对方法：近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高，中国文化，中国故事，中国礼仪等等，但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里，这就是低落点。写这样的作文，一定要注意不能写过于具体的内容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的写，不要面面俱到，中国餐桌礼仪内容太多，100单词无法写。找重点，以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。6.（2018全国新课标III卷）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：1. 学校的体育场馆；2. 主要的运动项目；3. 你喜欢的项目。注意：1. 词数100左右：2.

22、 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Peter, I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landma

23、rk in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my

24、 life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.Yours, Li Hua【详解】本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中

25、得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。7（2018天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生 发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言：（1）鼓励他来中国留学；（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。 注意：（1）词数不少于 100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 _【答案】Hi Chris，I am happy to learn that you are considering com

26、ing to China for college education. I encourage you to come to China for further education for the following reasons. First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. In addition to this, you can appre

27、ciate the fascinating scenery of China in your holidays, which will leave an unforgettable impression on you. Should you need any more help, please dont hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to seeing you in China as soon as possible. YoursWangJin【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写给 Chris 留言。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重

28、要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为 Chris 的外国学生 发的帖子，得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给 Chris 留言：（1）鼓励他来中国留学；（2）说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；（3）表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第二，人称为第一人称和第二人称。第三，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，鼓励他来中国留学。第二段，说明来华留学的好处（如：加深对中国的了解，对个人发展的益处等）；表示愿意进一步提供帮助。第

29、三段，表达期望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: benefit, unforgettable impression, encourage sb to do sth, appreciate the fascinating scenery of China, hesitate to do sth .第四步：确定较为高级的句子:which引导的非限制性定语从句First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lo

30、t in your future career. that引导的宾语从句I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: First, In addition to, Finally.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式: which引导的非限制性定语从句First，not only can you learn Chinese language but also you can know more about Chinese culture, which will benefit you a lot in your future career. that引导的宾语从句I am happy to learn that you are considering coming to China for college education.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。