专题09 概要写作-备战2022高考英语全国名校最新模拟试题分类汇编.docx

1、备战2022高考英语全国名校最新模拟试题分类汇编第一期专题09 概要写作1（2022上海模拟预测）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.My neighbors children love playing hide-and-seek as all children do, but no one imagin

2、e that a game they played last week would be reported in the local newspaper.One afternoon, they were playing in the vacant lot down the corner. Young Paul, who is only five years old, found the perfect place to hide. His sister, Natalie, had shut her eyes and was counting to ten when Paul noticed t

3、he storage mail box at the corner and saw that the metal door was standing open. The mailman had just taken out several sacks of mail and had carried them to his truck which was standing at the curb a few feet away. Paul climbed into the storage box and pulled the door closed so hard that it locked.

4、 Soon realizing what he had done, he became frightened and started crying. Meanwhile, Natalie was looking for him everywhere but could not find him. It was lucky that she happened to pause at the corner for a minute and heard her brothers cries.She immediately ran to tell the mailman who hurried bac

5、k from his truck to unlock the metal door. Paul was now free, but he had had such a bad scare that he could not stop crying. The mailman, however, soon found a way of making him laugh again. He told him that the next time he wanted to hide in a mail box, he should remember to put a stamp on himself!

6、2（2021上海复旦附中模拟预测）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point (s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Life On Venus?Cats Make for Ideal Human CompanionsCats have a reputation for being colder and less cuddly (令人想拥抱的) t

7、han their counterpartsdogs. In reality, they form close bonds with their owners and provide a sense of companionship, particularly for women. In fact, the findings of one Austrian study show that owning a cat is the emotional equivalent of being in a romantic relationship. Some people feel silly tal

8、king to their pets, since, of course, they cant respond. But interacting with your feline (猫科的) companions has proven health benefits. Not only does talking to your cat improve your bond, but its also said to be beneficial to your mental health by helping to improve your mood, lower your stress leve

9、ls, and reduce our feelings of loneliness. Cats are experts at sleeping, so its perhaps no surprise that they can help improve your sleep, too. A Mayo Clinic study found that people who slept with their pets in the same room were almost twice as likely to get a good nights rest, with only 20 percent

10、 saying that they found their pets presence destructive. Cats may not be able to help with the housekeeping, but they can assist in keeping your house free of mice. It turns out theres some truth behind the cartoon cat-and-mouse chase. When mice smell certain proteins in cat saliva (唾液), they become

11、 tearful and therefore avoid the area. Its important for children to learn to care for and look after a living thing, just as their parents take care of them. Cats can help children develop social skills as they learn to approach the feline carefully and gently. Looking after a cat also encourages a

12、 sense of responsibility. In addition to filling your heart with love, cats can contribute to keeping your heart healthy. Numerous studies have shown that owning a cat can help reduce your blood pressure and heart rate, as well as lowering your triglyceride (甘油三酸酯) and cholesterol levels, thereby re

13、ducing your risk of having a heart attack or stroke. _3（2021上海中学一模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Breaking up is hard to do but mens hearts hurt mostWhen it comes to

14、break-ups, men suffer more emotional pain than women, a study has found. The first-of-its-kind analysis used online relationships to map the most common problems experienced by couples who told their stories outside the therapists office.A team of researchers at Lancaster University helped to produc

15、e the report. Charlotte Entwistle, the lead author, said: “Most of what we know comes from studies of people in couples therapy: a specific set of people. We wanted to understand not only what relationship problems are most commonly experienced by the public, but who experiences by the public, but w

16、ho experiences which problems more.”To bridge the gap the team analysed the characteristics of more than 184,000 people who had posted their problems to an anonymous online forum, and they created a “map” of the most common issues.Communication was the most frequent, cited by nearly one in five peop

17、le, while one in eight reported that trust was a struggle. The outcomes came as no surprise but the team was taken aback at the obvious gender differences. The theme that kept cropping up was the “heartache” felt, and the team recorded specific words such as “regret”, “break up”, “cry”, and “heart-b

18、roken”.Contrary to expectation, men talked about heartbreak significantly more than women. The findings suggest that the stereotype of men being less emotionally invested in relationships may be inaccurate.The researchers also found that men were more likely to seek online professional help. Dr Ryan

19、 Boyd, the lead researcher, said: “When you remove the traditional social stigmas against men for seeking help and sharing their emotions, they seem just as invested in working through rough patches in their relationships as women.”The researchers hope that an accurate picture of relationship proble

20、ms could help couples avoid common setbacks. Boyd said: “This gives us serious hope that we can use help-seeking behavior to better understand all types of social and psychological issues.”The study was published in the Journal of Social and Personal Relationships._4（2021上海杨浦一模）Directions: Read the

21、following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Filling up on InformationPeople now have access to more information than ever before thanks to the Internet. While there are clearly benefits to it, there

22、are also unintended consequences. One in particular is information overload, commonly referred to as “infobesity.” As the name suggests, it involves consuming an unhealthy amount of information.Infobesity comes in a number of different forms and affects people in a variety of ways. Business people,

23、for example, may struggle to make decisions when faced with a huge amount of information. For younger people, infobesity is often linked to their use of social media. Young people may be bombed with messages from various social media apps. Furthermore, they may feel the urge to constantly check thei

24、r phones so as not to miss out on anything. Even online shoppers are affected. With so much information and so many choices available, even the simplest purchase can cause a great deal of stress and anxiety.Infobesity also has a negative effect on how long our attention lasts. According to a study b

25、y Microsoft, the average Canadian now spends less than 10 seconds digesting a piece of media before they move on to something new. This data raises concerns that our ability to pay attention to things will continue to decline as this information overload increases.So, what can be done to prevent the

26、 effects of this condition? While there is no easy answer, one obvious step is to limit our sources of information. Try to only focus on things that really matter to you and on just one thing at a time. Taking a break from your cellphone can also help reduce your stress. And who knows? Since technol

27、ogy got us into this mess in the first place, perhaps it will also present solutions in the future._5（2021上海松江一模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Soft SkillsSoft or Not

28、?Rapidly advancing technology and its impact on education have been a subject of much debate. How can schools equip students with the skills to succeed in a changing job market? Since technology is driving many social changes, there is an opinion that governments should keep focusing on STEM subject

29、s. These are often referred to as “hard skills”, which are prioritized in primary schools and right through to university level. However, research from Harvard University on the global job market has shown that STEM-related careers grew strongly between 1989 and 2000 but have slowed ever since. In c

30、ontrast, jobs in the creative industries, which are probably most associated with the need for soft skills, are growing rapidly. A study by Deloitte Access Economics predicts that “soft skill-intensive occupations will account for two-thirds of all jobs by 2030”. With the rapid evolution of technolo

31、gy, a focus on hard skills leaves people delicate when facing change, as these skills often have a limited shelf life. According to a survey, more than one in four adults reported a mismatch between their skills and those needed for their job role. Fortunately, soft skills can solve the problem, ena

32、bling people to adapt to change more easily in their chosen field. Additionally, interpersonal interactions in the modern workplace require some level of soft skills. At a company they might be negotiating to win a new contract or networking for a new job. People use soft skills every day at work an

33、d developing them will help things in the job go smoothly. Many universities have begun to emphasize soft skills such as critical thinking alongside hard skills. But the issue goes much deeper. Soft skills need to be handled across the entire education system so that by the time students reach unive

34、rsity level, they are already armed with the qualities needed to further develop these skills. _6（2021上海嘉定模拟预测）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point (s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. How Career Planning Ca

35、n Help You Get AheadAre you feeling trapped in a boring and unfulfilling job? Or maybe youre looking for a job but youre not clear on which career direction you should pursue? No matter what stage of your career you find yourself in, career planning can help you establish a focused vision and achiev

36、e your full potential in your career.Career planning is the process of setting goals for career advancement and creating a roadmap of concrete action steps to achieve those goals. Although career planning requires time and effort, it has many benefits. First, by establishing a long-term goal to work

37、 toward, youll find clarity in your career path and renewed motivation for your daily boring activities. A career plan can also provide you with an escape route from an unpromising job. Career planning will also help you recognize and take advantage of opportunities to advance your career. The goals

38、 you set during career planning will influence all of your later strategic decisions. Since you know what you hope to achieve in your career, youll be able to evaluate job openings and other opportunities to determine if they fit your plan for reaching your objectives. Finally, career planning is an

39、 effective tool for success in advancing your career. Benefits of career advancement include earning a higher salary, achieving increased job satisfaction, improving your skills and expertise, and gaining access to exciting new opportunities. Career advancement might look like moving upward to a lea

40、dership role, transferring to a new occupation, receiving specialty training, or taking on increased responsibility. In order to advance in your career and achieve your goals, you need to not only create a career plan but also develop the skills needed to qualify for your ideal position.7（2021上海一模）D

41、irections: Read the following three passages. Summarize the main idea and the main point（s） of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.71. MindfulnessMindfulness typically refers to a state of in-the-moment awareness in which one avoids judging the thoughts and em

42、otions of himself and others. It is often practiced in meditation（冥想） and some forms of therapy.Numerous findings from psychological research suggest practicing mindfulness can lead to many benefits, including stress reduction and increased psychological well-being. For example, in a study of cancer

43、 patients, cultivating mindfulness through meditation or other mindfulness-based training enabled people to be more selective about their emotional experiences, enabling them to reduce their stress and anxiety while increasing positive emotions. Similarly, studies show that mindfulness can also enha

44、nce information processing speed while reducing effort and negative thoughts and the meditators significantly outperformed the non-meditators on all measures of attention, suggestion that mindfulness improves ones ability to focus.It is apparent that mindfulness has many noteworthy benefits, which i

45、nclude everything, from psychological to physical improvements. However, research has also shown that in some cases mindfulness can also lead to negative outcomes. For example, one study found that following mindfulness meditation, participants were more likely to form take memories, demonstrating a

46、 potential unintended downside to mindfulness. In addition, another study suggested mindfulness researchers needed to be careful that they didnt learn participants by bringing about unpleasant mental, physical, or spiritual reactions through mindfulness. For example, mindfulness meditation may resul

47、t in severe anxiety for those diagnosed with Post-traumatic Stress Disorder （PTSD） （创伤后应激障碍）. Those with PTSD tend to avoid thoughts and feelings related to their trauma. However, mindfulness meditation encourages emotional openness, which could lead individuals with PTSD to experience the stressors

48、 that they previously avoided, potentially leading to re-traumatization.It cant be denied that mindfulness is an important tool in the managerial toolbox, but it is not a cure-all, and it must be applied thoughtfully to be effective.8（2021上海青浦一模）Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the

49、main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible. Rock Climbing conservationists new concernNow, with its first appearance at this years Tokyo Olympics, the once minority sport is set to reach new heights. Yet the popularity of rock climb

50、ing and its sister sport, bouldering (where climbers scramble up large rocks without the use of ropes or safety belts), is raising questions about the damaging environmental effects of climbing chalk a common and essential climbing tool.Made from magnesium carbonate (碳酸镁), climbing chalk is the same

51、 substance that gymnasts and weightlifters use to improve their grasp on bars and weights. In fact, it was first introduced to rock climbing in the 1950s by John Gill. Since then, amateur and professional climbers alike have come to depend on the chalks properties of removing water and increasing fr

52、iction (摩擦力) and have been leaving long stripes of the stuff on rock faces around the world.The resulting “chalk graffiti” has become so bad in the United States that parks are beginning to restrict its use. Utahs Arches National Park allows only colored chalk that mostly matches rocks, while Colora

53、dos Garden of the Gods National Natural Landmark banned all chalk and chalk substitutes. Beyond the visual pollution, new research suggests chalk may be harming the plants that grow on rocks. The latest study on the effects of climbing chalk, released October 2020, found that it negatively impacted

54、both the growing and survival of four species of ferns and mosses (蕨类和苔藓) inhabiting rocks in laboratory settings. That matters because some climbing spots, such as erratic boulders (the studys focus), host unique ecosystems. These unpredictable boulders rocks scattered across the globe by large mas

55、ses of slowly flowing ice at the end of the Ice Age are islands of vegetation, different from the land they sit on. Its not even clear whether chalk improves climbing performance at all. Some papers found no additional grip benefits, while others found the opposite. Some climbers may find it helpful

56、, says Daniel Hepenstrick, a co-author of the 2020 study and a doctoral candidate at ETH Zrich._参考答案：1The children were playing hide-and-seek in a vacant lot one afternoon. Finding that the storage mailbox had been left open, Paul hid and locked himself in it accidentally. His sister, Natalie, heard

57、 his cries and realized where he was hiding, so she immediately told the mailman to unlock the metal door. After letting him out, the mailman made him stop crying by telling him to put a stamp on himself the next time he wanted to hide in a mailbox.【解析】【导语】本文是记叙文。文章主要讲述一群孩子在玩捉迷藏的游戏。保罗发现了一个没有关上的邮箱，于是

58、，他藏了进去并把自己锁进里面了。他是如此的害怕以至于哭的很厉害。他的姐姐娜塔莉在听到他的哭声后马上叫来了邮递员并打开了邮箱门。【详解】1.要点摘录My neighbors children love playing hide-and-seek as all children do, but no one imagine that a game they played last week would be reported in the local newspaper.One afternoon, they were playing in the vacant lot down the corn

59、er.Paul noticed the storage mail box at the corner and saw that the metal door was standing open.Paul climbed into the storage box and pulled the door closed so hard that it locked. Soon realizing what he had done, he became frightened and started crying.It was lucky that she happened to pause at th

60、e corner for a minute and heard her brothers cries.She immediately ran to tell the mailman who hurried back from his truck to unlock the metal door.The mailman, however, soon found a way of making him laugh again. He told him that the next time he wanted to hide in a mail box, he should remember to

61、put a stamp on himself!2.缜密构思将第1和2两个要点，3和4两个要点，5和6两个要点分别进行整合，将第7个要点进行重组。3.遣词造句The children were playing hide-and-seek in a vacant lot one afternoon. Finding that the storage mailbox had been left open, Paul hid and locked himself in it accidentally.His sister, Natalie, heard his cries and realized w

62、here he was hiding, so she immediately told the mailman to unlock the metal door. After letting him out, the mailman made him stop crying by telling him to put a stamp on himself the next time he wanted to hide in a mailbox.【点睛】【高分句型1】My neighbors children love playing hide-and-seek as all children

63、do, but no one imagine that a game they played last week would be reported in the local newspaper.运用一个宾语从句描述了这个故事的背景。其中that引导的宾语从句表达高级。【高分句型2】Paul climbed into the storage box and pulled the door closed so hard that it locked. 运用一个结果状语从句描述了这个故事的起因。其中sothat引导的结果状语从句表达高级。【高分句型3】She immediately ran to

64、tell the mailman who hurried back from his truck to unlock the metal door. 运用一个定语从句描述了姐姐去救弟弟的过程。其中who引导的定语从句表达高级。【高分句型4】He told him that the next time he wanted to hide in a mail box, he should remember to put a stamp on himself! 运用一个复杂的主从复合句描述了这个故事的结果。其中that引导的宾语从句和the next time引导的时间状语从句表达高级。2One p

65、ossible version:Cats can form close relationships with humans, particularly with women. Interacting with cats can help letter your mood, reduce stress, avoid loneliness and improve your sleep. Cats can also help keep your house free of mice and help children develop a sense of responsibility. Lots o

66、f studies have shown that owning a cat can also keep your heart healthy.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍的是养猫的各种好处。【详解】1 要点摘录 In reality, they form close bonds with their owners and provide a sense of companionship, particularly for women.But interacting with your feline (猫科的) companions has proven health benef

67、its. Not only does talking to your cat improve your bond, but its also said to be beneficial to your mental health by helping to improve your mood, lower your stress levels, and reduce our feelings of loneliness.Cats are experts at sleeping, so its perhaps no surprise that they can help improve your

68、 sleep, too. Cats may not be able to help with the housekeeping, but they can assist in keeping your house free of mice.Looking after a cat also encourages a sense of responsibility.Numerous studies have shown that owning a cat can help reduce your blood pressure and heart rate, as well as lowering

69、your triglyceride (甘油三酸酯) and cholesterol levels, thereby reducing your risk of having a heart attack or stroke.2.缜密构思 将第2、3、4、5四个要点进行整合，将第1、6两个要点进行重组。 3.遣词造句 Cats can form close relationships with humans, particularly with women. Having cats as pets has many benefits, which include helping letter y

70、our mood, reducing stress, avoiding loneliness, improving your sleep, keeping your house free of mice and helping children develop a sense of responsibility. Lots of studies have shown that owning a cat can also keep your heart healthy.【点睛】高分句型1Interacting with cats can help letter your mood, reduce

71、 stress, avoid loneliness and improve your sleep.运用一个动名词作主语对原文第二段和第三段进行了概括。高分句型2Lots of studies have shown that owning a cat can also keep your heart healthy用that引导宾语从句对最后一段进行了概括，表达非常高级。 3One possible version:A research group studying relationship problems found that men emotionally suffer more in b

72、reak-ups through analysis of an online forum. While analyzing, the researchers surprisingly discovered that emotions, such as heartbreak, appear more often in mens descriptions. Besides, men tend to ask for help more. This research gives hope to understanding and solving common problems for couples.

73、【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文。研究小组通过分析一个在线论坛发现，男人在分手时情绪上更痛苦。在分析过程中，研究人员惊奇地发现，心碎等情绪在男性的描述中出现的频率更高。此外，男性更倾向于寻求帮助。本研究为理解和解决夫妻共同面临的问题提供了希望。【详解】要点摘录When it comes to break-ups, men suffer more emotional pain than women, a study has found.Men talked about heartbreak significantly more than women.The researchers also fo

74、und that men were more likely to seek online professional helpThis gives us serious hope that we can use help-seeking behavior to better understand all types of social and psychological issues2.缜密构思将第2、3两个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合。3.遣词造句A research group studying relationship problems found that men emoti

75、onally suffer more in break-ups through analysis of an online forum. Emotions, such as heartbreak, appear more often in mens descriptionsThe researchers also found that men were more likely to seek online professional help【点睛】高分句型1 A research group studying relationship problems found that men emoti

76、onally suffer more in break-ups through analysis of an online forum. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）高分句型2This research gives hope to understanding and solving common problems for couples.（运用了非谓语动词作宾语）4One unintended consequence of Internet use is infobesity, which means absorbing harmful amounts of information. In

77、fobesity negatively affects different groups of people in different ways, making businessmen hesitant to make decisions and younger people constantly check their phones. Besides, it likely decreases our attention span. Fortunately, steps can be taken to prevent infobesity like restricting informatio

78、n sources and taking breaks.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，使用互联网的一个意想不到的后果是信息肥胖，这意味着吸收了大量有害的信息。信息肥胖以不同的方式对不同人群产生负面影响，使商人在做决定时犹豫不决，年轻人经常查看手机。此外，它可能会降低我们的注意力持续时间。幸运的是，我们可以采取措施来防止信息肥胖，比如限制信息来源和休息。【详解】1 要点摘录 One in particular is information overload, commonly referred to as “infobesity.” As the name suggests, i

79、t involves consuming an unhealthy amount of information.Infobesity comes in a number of different forms and affects people in a variety of ways. Business people, for example, may struggle to make decisions when faced with a huge amount of information. Furthermore, they may feel the urge to constantl

80、y check their phones so as not to miss out on anything.This data raises concerns that our ability to pay attention to things will continue to decline as this information overload increases.So, what can be done to prevent the effects of this condition? While there is no easy answer, one obvious step

81、is to limit our sources of information. Try to only focus on things that really matter to you and on just one thing at a time. Taking a break from your cellphone can also help reduce your stress.2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。 3.遣词造句One unintended consequence of Internet use is infobesity, which

82、means absorbing harmful amounts of information. Infobesity negatively affects different groups of people in different ways, making businessmen hesitant to make decisions and younger people constantly check their phones. Besides, it likely decreases our attention span. Fortunately, steps can be taken

83、 to prevent infobesity like restricting information sources and taking breaks.【点睛】高分句型1 One unintended consequence of Internet use is infobesity, which means absorbing harmful amounts of information.运用了which引导非限制性定语从句对原文第一段进行了概括。高分句型2 Infobesity negatively affects different groups of people in diffe

84、rent ways, making businessmen hesitant to make decisions and younger people constantly check their phones.运用了现在分词作状语对第二段进行了概括，表达非常高级。5One possible version:Educational institutions tended to attach greater importance to hard skills, but jobs requiring soft skills are in greater demand these years. Th

85、ey can equip students with adaptability and promote effective interactions in the future job. It is advisable that soft skills should be emphasized all through the entire education system.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了，教育机构过去倾向于更重视硬技能，但需要软技能的工作近年来需求更大。它们可以使学生具备适应能力，并促进在未来的工作中有效的互动，所以在整个教育系统中都应该强调软技能是可取的。【详解

86、】1 要点摘录These are often referred to as “hard skills”, which are prioritized in primary schools and right through to university level.In contrast, jobs in the creative industries, which are probably most associated with the need for soft skills, are growing rapidly. Fortunately, soft skills can solve

87、the problem, enabling people to adapt to change more easily in their chosen field. Additionally, interpersonal interactions in the modern workplace require some level of soft skills.Soft skills need to be handled across the entire education system so that by the time students reach university level,

88、 they are already armed with the qualities needed to further develop these skills.2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行整合，将第3个要点单独概括，将第4个要点单独概括。3.遣词造句Educational institutions tended to attach greater importance to hard skills, but jobs requiring soft skills are in greater demand these years.They can equip students with

89、 adaptability and promote effective interactions in the future job. It is advisable that soft skills should be emphasized all through the school years.【点睛】高分句型1 Educational institutions tended to attach greater importance to hard skills, but jobs requiring soft skills are in greater demand these yea

90、rs.运用but连接两个简单句对第一段和第二段进行整合，高度概括，其中非谓语动词现在分词短语requiring soft skills作后置定语，表达高级。高分句型2It is advisable that soft skills should be emphasized all through the entire education system.运用了that引导的主语从句和it作形式主语，表达高级。6Career planning is beneficial to your career development. Firstly, with clear goals, you will

91、become more motivated and find a favorable job. Secondly, the goals can help you seize opportunities to find more suitable jobs. Finally, your promotion can be got by career planning. So making career planning and improving professional skills can help you own an ideal job.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，职业生

92、涯规划有利于你的事业发展。首先，有了明确的目标，你会变得更有动力，并找到一份好的工作。其次，目标可以帮助你抓住机会，找到更合适的工作。最后，你可以通过职业规划来获得晋升。因此，制定职业规划和提高专业技能可以帮助你拥有理想的工作。【详解】1 要点摘录No matter what stage of your career you find yourself in, career planning can help you establish a focused vision and achieve your full potential in your career.Career planning

93、 is the process of setting goals for career advancement and creating a roadmap of concrete action steps to achieve those goals. First, by establishing a long-term goal to work toward, youll find clarity in your career path and renewed motivation for your daily boring activities. A career plan can al

94、so provide you with an escape route from an unpromising job. Career planning will also help you recognize and take advantage of opportunities to advance your career.Finally, career planning is an effective tool for success in advancing your career. Benefits of career advancement include earning a hi

95、gher salary, achieving increased job satisfaction, improving your skills and expertise, and gaining access to exciting new opportunities.In order to advance in your career and achieve your goals, you need to not only create a career plan but also develop the skills needed to qualify for your ideal p

96、osition.2.缜密构思将第1、4、7几个要点进行重组，将第2、3和5、6几个要点进行整合。3.遣词造句Career planning is beneficial to your career development.Firstly, with clear goals, you will become more motivated and find a favorable job. Secondly, the goals can help you seize opportunities to find more suitable jobs. Finally, your promotion

97、can be got by career planning. So making career planning and improving professional skills can help you own an ideal job.【点睛】高分句型1Secondly, the goals can help you seize opportunities to find more suitable jobs.运用了不定式作定语。高分句型2So making career planning and improving professional skills can help you ow

98、n an ideal job. 运用了动名词短语作主语。7Mindfulness means being in the present mind state without assessing oneself or others. Many findings suggest practicing mindfulness has many benefits, including stress reduction and increased attention. Despite these benefits, mindfulness can come at a cost because it ma

99、y form false memories and hurt participants by magnifying negative memories. Therefore it should be used carefully. （55 词）【解析】【分析】这是一篇说明文。文章介绍了可以避免对自己和他人的想法和情绪进行评判的正念这一意识状态。正念可以减轻人们的压力、提高心理健康、减少消极思想，然而正念的练习也可能导致创伤后应激障碍患者更为严重的焦虑。【详解】1. 要点摘录Mindfulness typically refers to a state of in-the-moment awar

100、eness in which one avoids judging the thoughts and emotions of himself and others.Numerous findings from psychological research suggest practicing mindfulness can lead to many benefits, including stress reduction and increased psychological well-being. However, research has also shown that in some c

101、ases mindfulness can also lead to negative outcomes. it must be applied thoughtfully to be effective.2. 缜密构思第1个要点总起介绍相关概念，第2、3个要点是并列关系，分别陈述了积极影响和消极影响，第4个要点对全文进行总结归纳。3. 遣词造句Mindfulness means being in the present mind state without assessing oneself or others.Many findings suggest practicing mindfulne

102、ss has many benefitsDespite these benefits, mindfulness can come at a cost because it may form false memories and hurt participants by magnifying negative memories.Therefore it should be used carefully.【点睛】高分句型1 mindfulness can come at a cost because it may form false memories and hurt participants

103、by magnifying negative memories. （because引导原因状语从句）高分句型2 Many findings suggest practicing mindfulness has many benefits（省略连接词that的宾语从句以及动名词作主语）8One possible version:The popularity of rock climbing has caused some environmental problems because of its essential climbing toolclimbing chalk. Besides the

104、 visual pollution by “chalk graffiti”, the ecosystem unique to rock-dwelling species has been damaged, so many nature reserves set some restrictions on chalk. However, climbers hold different attitudes towards the effect of climbing chalk on their performance. (57 words)【解析】【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，攀岩的流行造

105、成了一些环境问题，重要的攀岩工具攀岩粉笔，除了造成视觉的污染外，岩石物种特有的生态系统也受到了破坏，因此许多自然保护区对它进行了一些限制，至于这种粉笔是否对登山有益还不清楚，然而，一些登山者认为它是有用的。【详解】1 要点摘录The popularity of rock climbing and its sister sport is raising questions about the damaging environmental effects of climbing chalk. Climbing chalk have been leaving long stripes of the

106、stuff on rock faces around the world.Some parks are beginning to restrict its use.Beyond the visual pollution, new research suggests chalk may be harming the plants that grow on rocks.Its not even clear whether chalk improves climbing performance at all.2.缜密构思将第1、5两个要点进行重组，将第2、3、4三个要点进行整合。3.遣词造句The

107、popularity of rock climbing has caused some environmental problems because of its essential climbing toolclimbing chalk.Besides the visual pollution by “chalk graffiti”, the ecosystem unique to rock-dwelling species has been damaged, so many nature reserves set some restrictions on chalk.Climbers ho

108、ld different attitudes towards the effect of climbing chalk on their performance.【点睛】高分句型1 Besides the visual pollution by “chalk graffiti”, the ecosystem unique to rock-dwelling species has been damaged, so many nature reserves set some restrictions on chalk.（运用了besides构成的介词短语作状语，so连接并列句）高分句型2 However, climbers hold different attitudes towards the effect of climbing chalk on their performance. （运用了动名词作宾语）