专题10 读后续写-2022-2023学年高二英语上学期期末专项复习（译林版2020）.docx

1、专题10 读后续写-2022-2023学年高二英语上学期期末专项复习（译林版2020）读后续写的具体要求:一、重要信息定位：人物有几个，分别是谁 事情是什么，有没有重要转折发生事情的地点在哪二、故事发展顺序：一般按照时间顺序 One weekend in July, As night was beginning to fall, Jane rose at the break of the day, But and it was getting dark again.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.三、行为动作与主人公心理变化：angry, frightene

2、d,regretful, confused, joyful, hopeful, hopeful, anxious等等四、短文中优秀的句式表达：With no path to follow, Jane, she turned around, hoping to Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that Jane rose, hungry and thirsty.If only she had not left her mobile phone Never in her life had she tasted anything better.五、

3、语言的丰富性1. 词汇、句式、语法的多样性句式结构：简单句，复合句以及强调句、倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况。语法结构：主被动语态、非谓语动词、独立主格结构、with的复合结构、虚拟语气的使用情况。词汇选择：常见初级词汇、高级词汇，以及不同词性的使用情况。修辞手法：比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞格的使用情况。2.情感表达的多样性通过主人公的话语，行为，想法，外貌及周围环境来表达主人中情感及其变化。3.动词使用的丰富性 4.通过恰当的身体部位动作描写让叙述更加生动：eyes: stare/glare at, look her in the eye/ with her eyes shining/ eyes f

4、illed with tears/eyes sparkle with excitement/gratitudehands: pat him on the shoulder/head, grasp/ hold ones hands/ point to sb/sth, wave his handshead:nod/shake his head violently六、语篇的连贯性1. 内容连贯：故事大意一致，写作意图一致2. 语句连贯-衔接词的准确使用but/however, nevertheless, whereas, although, though, unfortunately, instea

5、d, on the contrary, besides, moreover, furthermore, whats more, whats worse worse still, so, thus, therefore, henceconsequently, accordingly, as a result3. 语言连贯 语言风格一致4. 结构连贯 前后呼应【例题精讲】【2021-2022学年江苏省徐州市高二上学期期末英语试题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Once there was a young boy named Peter who used

6、to live in country side with his father and mother. Though lacking money, his parents wanted him to study well in high school, so he wouldnt have to struggle on fields as a farmer. However, Peter hated going to school and started skipping classes.Upon learning this，his parents felt frustrated and sa

7、d. Not only because Peter wasted his entire year but also because he lied to his parents. They went to ask him for an explanation and Peter rudely replied that he didnt want to study.His father lost his patience and scolded him, “What do you want to do if not study? Do you want to walk around on the

8、 roads and beg for food?” Without hearing anymore, Peter rushed out of the house.He enjoyed being outside without any restriction but soon he spent all his money he had with him. He had no shelter, no money to buy food and no work to do. Nobody had enough trust to give work to a poor school boy. He

9、got sick due to hunger and cold. People who passed by threw coins at him assuming he was a beggar. At that time he remembered how lovingly his parents took care of him and started to miss them a lot.One day，a boy named Mintu noticed him. He gave Peter food and medicine and even found him a job at a

10、store. Soon, both became good friends. Peter told Mintu where he came from. He said he felt guilty about what he had done and didnt know how to face his parents again.Hearing Peters story, Mintu advised him to go back home, but Peter hesitated.注意：1.续写词数应为100左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.Mintu visited Peter

11、s parents and told them what had happened to Peter._【答案】 Mintu visited Peters parents and told them what had happened to Peter. When Mintu came back, Mintu told Peter that his parents died when he was very young. Then Mintu said, “Peter, you don t have to lose our parents to realize how important th

12、ey are. Arent you lucky to have loving parents who work hard and want to send you to school? If I were in your place, I would never break their hearts by leaving them.”The next morning, Mintu told Peter that someone was waiting for him outside. Peter went out and saw his parents. Peter rushed to the

13、m and hugged them. He apologized to his parents, but his parents didnt have any complaint against him. Peter and his parents heartily thanked Mintu for his help and happily left for their home together.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小男孩彼得和父母住在乡下，虽然缺钱，但父母仍然希望他高中好好学习。但彼得不爱学习，与父亲大吵之后离家出走。最终身无分文，流落街头，就在这时一位名叫明图男孩帮助了

14、他并劝他回家的故事。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“明图拜访了彼得的父母，告诉他们彼得的遭遇。”可知，第一段可描写明图想方设法让彼得回家。2.续写线索：离家出走身无分文得到帮助明图帮忙再次团聚3. 高分句型:高分句型1. When Mintu came back, Mintu told Peter that his parents died when he was very young.（这句话运用了宾语从句）高分句型2. If I were in your place, I would never break their hearts by leaving them.（这句话运用了虚拟语气）

15、【2021-2022学年第一学期江苏省海安市高二英语期末试题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Lisa woke up on Saturday morning very excited.Today she was turning 10.She thought her mother would make her a special breakfast.Last year on her birthday,Lisa woke up to the smell of pancakes and sausage cooking.The kitchen table w

16、as full of fresh fruit and juice,and her family had even bought lots of fresh flowers to put on the table.But when she went downstairs this morning,her father,mother and brother were eating cereal （麦片） at the table,just like any other day.No one even said Happy birthday.When the phone rang and her m

17、other announced that Lisas aunt wanted to speak with her,she knew that it must be to wish her the best on her 10th birthday.But to Lisas surprise,her aunt simply wanted to remind her to pick up her mail the next week while her aunt was out of town.Lisa was quite confused.She thought that her family

18、would say something about her special day,but she didnt want to seem upset.She tried to be cheerful.After all,she was looking forward to meeting her friends in the park soon.Surely they were going to be excited about her birthday.When Lisa arrived at the park,her friend Jane was the first to greet h

19、er. Nice day,isnt it,Lisa？ she asked.Lisa,ready for her friend to wish her a happy birthday,responded excitedly, Yes,it is!Its a great day.You know why？Because its Saturday and the weather is great! Jane replied.Lisa nodded,but looked down in disappointment.Soon the rest of her friends arrived,and t

20、hey all had a good time playing soccer and spending time together.But Lisa couldnt help but think that it was strange that none of them had mentioned her birthday.As she walked home in the late afternoon sun,Lisa tried her best not to cry.How could everyone forget her birthday？She was close to tears

21、 by the time she reached her home.When she walked in,she was quite surprised.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。There was a box with her name on it in the living room._No one was home,but there was a letter on the table._【答案】Paragraph 1There was a box with her name on it in the living room.Thinking that it

22、 might be her birthday present,she went up and opened the box with delight.In the box lay a photo album filled with photos recording the important moments together with her family and friends as she grew up.Lisa sank in the precious memories：the first family who had made it!At that time,Lisa came to

23、 wonder where they were and began to search every room.（高分句型一）（盒子里的东西）Paragraph 2：No one was home,but there was a letter on the table.Her heart beating wildly,she reached out for that letter which was written by her family and friends,saying how great a family member and a friend she was.（高分句型二）With

24、 tears welling up in her eyes,she found in surprise that she was already surrounded by her loved ones. Happy birthday! they said cheerfully and sent their best wishes to Lisa.All of them had a wonderful evening together,adding another chapter to Lisas album.（信中的内容）【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了星期六是丽莎10岁的生日，丽莎早晨

25、醒来，满怀希望，期待着家人和朋友的祝福。然而，让她失望的是，就像其它任何的一天一样，家人和朋友谁也没有提到她的生日的故事。高分句型一：At that time,Lisa came to wonder where they were and began to search every room.翻译：那时，丽莎不知道他们在哪里，开始搜寻每一个房间。分析：本句话包含一个由连接词where引导的宾语从句作wonder的宾语。高分句型二：Her heart beating wildly,she reached out for that ltter which was witten by her fam

26、ily and friends,saying how great a family member and a friend she was.翻译：她的心狂跳着，她伸手去拿那封信，那是她的家人和朋友写的，信中说她是一个多么伟大的家庭成员和朋友。分析：本句话包含一个由关系代词which弓|导非限制性定语从句。【2021-2022学年第一学期江苏省镇江市高二上学期期末考试英语试题】Joseph was my best friend. He was the only son of Adam Tan, a well-known former player. So many people expected

27、 Joseph to be as sporting as his father. But it was not true.He suffered from asthma (哮喘) and preferred to stay indoors to read books. But everything changed on the first death anniversary of his father. He was laughed at by his classmates. They had called him loser, remarking that he was a disgrace

28、 (耻辱) to his father. He lost his control and fought with them. Of course, he lost. From that day on, Joseph devoted himself to building up his body. He exercised and turned his attention and efforts to sports. He said to himself that he would not let his father down.Joseph joined the sports team in

29、my school and became its leader. We were all excited when we learned that the school had planned a hiking a Kalimantan, Indonesia. It was also meant to be in memory of Josephs father, who was its former adviser (顾问).The hiking really tested the strength and skills of the team. Though we had the help

30、 of our two teacher advisers, we were determined to succeed in the hiking which was to cross a mountain, river and forest. The last stage was the forest and we were within sight of our target. We had only four more kilometers to cover. If we succeeded within the required time, we would be the first

31、school team to have done that in record.However, Joseph experienced his asthma. We noticed at first that he was falling behind us. When we asked him whether he had any problem, he gave us the thumbs up sign. Just before the last kilometer his team-mate, Shafiq, noticed his hard breathing. His face w

32、as pale and Shafig signaled (示意) us to stop walking. We gathered around Joseph anxiously and forced him to stop and rest.注意：1. 续写词数应150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:Then we noticed something bad. _Paragraph 2:Joseph begged us to carry on because he wanted to prove himself to his father. _【答案】

33、Then we noticed something bad. His hands were shaking. This was serious trouble indeed. When we asked him about his medicine, Joseph said that he had lost his pills somewhere during the hiking. Behind us was 20 kilometers of wilderness which we had covered. We had left our teachers two kilometers be

34、hind us. We had to stop here and try our best to contact the nearest hospital.Joseph begged us to carry on because he wanted to prove himself to his father. Hearingwhat he said, we made up our mind to carry him to finish this last stage. Carrying Joseph was a very heavy load but we did not mind the

35、physical part of the burden. What worried us was not finishing the hiking in record time but that Joseph would die before he received medical help. We did not know how we made it and walked through the jungle into the finishing line. Our teachers who timed us told we had taken half an hour. Joseph w

36、as then sent to hospital. In my heart, his father should be proud of him.【2021-2022学年第一学期江苏省镇江市高二上学期期末考试英语试题】Bye，Mom.Bye，Dad.Dont worry.Well take care of everything!Carly waved from the frontdoor of the shop as her parents drove off.They were headed for a well-deserved vacation from their candy stor

37、e, and Carly had promised them shed be able to run it by herself.Her parents didnt quite agree.Howeverthey accepted by having Carlys aunt Maggie help.Maggie didnt have any experience running a store,but Carly did,and at least her aunt would be good company.Her parents jokingly called her auntstrange

38、 oruniquelycreativebut it didnt matter. Carly always had fun when her aunt was around.Then Maggie blew into the store.All right,Carly my love,lets get this party started, she smiled.What dowe do first?The main job is to serve customers,but we also make some of the candy ourselves.Dad and Mom did mos

39、t already,but we have to finish up a few things.Ill show you.Carly took her aunt to where the family made some of their candy.such as fresh fudge(奶油软糖)and cotton candy.They had lots of delicious flavors for customers to choose from. Aunt Maggie took a piece of chocolate mint fudge.Its deliciousright

40、? asked Carly.She knew the fudge was perfect.Its good,but. unoriginal replied her aunt.We can do better.Before Carly could question what Maggie meant,the woman had gone to investigate the kitchen.Bingo!called Maggie, coming back to Carly with her hands full of items.We need to add some of these to j

41、azz up that basic fudge taste.Brussels sprouts(抱子甘蓝)?Carly was surprised.She couldnt be serious! But she was.The woman was busy cutting and then adding small pieces of the green vegetable into the fudge.Carlys eyes grew wide as her aunt mixed them together.Carly shook her head worriedly.She couldnt

42、imagine what her parents were going to think upon their return. Her aunt continued to create strange candy combinations : lemonade with pickle juice,and barbeque-flavored candy.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Carly looked up as the bell over the front door rang,announcing some customers._The store was q

43、uiet except for the soft sound of Maggie writing the new specials on the chalkboard sign._【答案】Carly looked up as the bell over the front door rang, announcing some customers. Two boys approached the counter.Ill have some fresh fudge, please, said the first boy.Oh, how dull, laughed Maggie.I insist y

44、ou try something new! She offered them two pieces of the Brussels sprout fudge.New-flavor fudge on the house!Enjoy!Maggie waved them off. Confused,but too polite to argue,the boys left.There go our customers. They will tell everyone how weird our candy is. Nobody will want to shop here!Carly mumbled

45、.She didnt know what to do.The store was quiet except for the soft sound ofMaggie writing the new specials on the chalkboard sign. Carly sat behind the counter and rested her chin in her hand, as if waiting for something. Her parents to come back?They were going to be mad!The sound of the bell rouse

46、d her from her thoughts. The bovs were back,but this time there was a crowd of kids with them. A line was forming out the door!The silence was replaced with excited chatter. The kids were laughingpointing at the new candy flavors, and pulling a handful of coins from their pockets.【习题补充】第二节 读后续写（满分25

47、分）阅读下列文章，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One day, when I was a freshman in high school, I saw a kid from my class walking home from school. His name was Kyle. It looked like he was carrying all of his books. I thought to myself, “Why would anyone bring home all his books on a Friday? He must really be a nerd

48、 (书呆子).”As I was walking, I saw a bunch of kids running towards him. They ran at him, knocking all his books out of his arms and tripping him so he landed in the dirt. His glasses went flying, and I sawthemland in the glass about ten feet from him. He looked up and I saw this terrible sadness in his

49、 eyes. So, I jogged over to him and as he crawled around looking for his glasses, I saw a tear in his eye. As I handed him his glasses, he said, “Thanks!” There was a big smile on his face. It was one of those smiles that showed real gratitude. We talked all the way home, and I carried his books. He

50、 turned out to be a pretty cool kid. The more I got to know Kyle, the more I liked him.Over the next four years, Kyle and I became best friends. When we were seniors, he had the highest marks in the class and was chosen to give a speech at the graduation ceremony. I teased him all the time about bei

51、ng a nerd. He had to prepare a lot, and I was so glad it wasnt me having to get up there and speak.Graduation day, I saw Kyle, I said, “Hey, big guy, youll be great!” He looked at me with one of those looks, the really grateful one, and said “Thanks.”, smiling.As he started his speech, he cleared hi

52、s throat, and began. “Graduation is a time to thank those who helped you make it through those tough years. Your parents, your teachers, your siblings, maybe a coach.but mostly your friends. I am here to tell all of you that being a friend to someone is the best gift you can give him or her. I am go

53、ing to tell you a story.”注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met._Paragraph 2：I smiled back in tears._第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

54、Gradually, the staircase that led to the garret, and even the passage-way to the staircase, were avoided by every one in the house, from every one fearing to speak of it, and the legend was gradually falling into desuetude. It had suddenly occurred to Cassy to make use of the superstitious excitabil

55、ity, which was so great in Legree, for the purpose of her liberation, and that of her fellow-sufferer.The sleeping-room of Cassy was directly under the garret. One day, without consulting Legree, she suddenly took it upon her, with some considerable ostentation, to change all the furniture and appur

56、tenances of the room to one at some considerable distance. The under-servants, who were called on to effect this movement, were running and bustling about with great zeal and confusion, when Legree returned from a ride.Hallo! you Cass! said Legree, whats in the wind now?Nothing; only I choose to hav

57、e another room, said Cassy, doggedly.And what for, pray? said Legree.I choose to, said Cassy.The devil you do! and what for?Id like to get some sleep, now and then.Sleep! well, what hinders your sleeping?I could tell, I suppose, if you want to hear, said Cassy, dryly.Speak out, you minx! said Legree

58、.O! nothing. I suppose it wouldnt disturb _you!_ Only groans, and people scuffing, and rolling round on the garre, floor, half the night, from twelve to morning!People up garret! said Legree, uneasily, but forcing a laugh; who are they, Cassy?Cassy raised her sharp, black eyes, and looked in the fac

59、e of Legree, with an expression that went through his bones, as she said, To be sure, Simon, who are they? Id like to have you tell me. You dont know, I suppose!With an oath, Legree struck at her with his riding-whip; but she glided to one side, and passed through the door, and looking back, said, I

60、f youll sleep in that room, youll know all about it. Perhaps youd better try it! and then immediately she shut and locked the door.Legree blustered and swore, and threatened to break down the door; but apparently thought better of it, and walked uneasily into the sitting-room. Cassy perceived that h

61、er shaft had struck home; and, from that hour, with the most exquisite address, she never ceased to continue the train of influences she had begun.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150个左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已经为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:In a knot-hole of the garret, she had insert

62、ed the neck of an old bottle. _Paragraph 2:No one is so thoroughly superstitious as the godless man. _【答案】Paragraph 1:In such a manner that when there was the least wind, most doleful and lugubrious wailing sounds proceeded from it, which, in a high wind, increased to a perfect shriek, such as to cr

63、edulous and superstitious ears might easily seem to be that of horror and despair.These sounds were, from time to time, heard by the servants, and revived in full force the memory of the old ghost legend. A superstitious creeping horror seemed to fill the house; and though no one dared to breathe it

64、 to Legree, he found himself encompassed by it, as by an atmosphere.Paragraph 2:The Christian is composed by the belief of a wise, all-ruling Father, whose presence fills the void unknown with light and order; but to the man who has dethroned God, the spirit-land is, indeed, in the words of the Hebr

65、ew poet, a land of darkness and the shadow of death, without any order, where the light is as darkness. Life and death to him are haunted grounds, filled with goblin forms of vague and shadowy dread.第二节 读后续写(满分25分)47. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。When I was eleven years old，I had a big accident.I g

66、et scared even now when I think about that time.I went skating near my house.There were many people，and I saw them falling on the ice.It was my first time to go ice skating，so I was nervous.I was wondering how to skate.I went with a friend who was very skillful.He spent some time teaching me how to

67、skate，but I didnt learn much.He left me and skated all around.As soon as he left，I fell down.I envied other people because they could skate very well.I was bored because I kept falling so I took off my skates and just walked around on the ice in my shoes.It was cold and my hands were frozen.Suddenly

68、，I stepped on something that was not hard.What was it? It was a weak place in the ice.When I stepped there，I sank under the ice.I thought that I was going to die，but I did my best to grab something to get out from under the ice.I tried to grab the edge of the ice.But it was very difficult for an ele

69、ven year old.It seemed like a very long time，like a year.Then，fortunately，someone helped me.He grabbed my arms and pulled me up.So，I lived and Im still alive today.I thanked him.At that time，my friend came back.I was annoyed at him because he was supposed to take care of me，but he didnt.He was embar

70、rassed.When I took a taxi home，the taxi driver was surprised and asked what had happened.I didnt want to say anything because I was tired and scared.Even now，whenever I think about that time，I feel uncomfortable.I dont want to go skating again even now.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.

71、 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：It was long before I went skating once again，Paragraph 2：However，ever since then I havent found any time to go skating，【答案】It was long before I went skating once again，and that was when I was about to graduate from college.Our monitor advis

72、ed us all to go skating and I decided to follow his advice although I still felt a little scared.Luckily，one of my classmates was very skillful and she patiently explained to me how to start.Step by step，I was able to stand up on the ice by myself and headed out a little，not so steadily and also I f

73、ell down many times.I was grateful to her for I managed to skate that day，though I couldnt be like others，who could skate very well.I had a nice time that day!However，ever since then I havent found any time to go skating，because immediately I focused on applying for the suitable jobs.And then，fortun

74、ately I met my honey and got married.As was expected，one baby came into the world and is now smiling to me every day.As for the skating，maybe I could be on the ice again when my baby grows up and begs me one hundred times!【解析】通过阅读所给文章可知，在作者11岁的时候，作者第一次和朋友去滑冰，结果发生了意外，掉到了冰层下面。幸运的是,有人帮助了作者。每当想起那次经历，作者都

75、感到不舒服。作者也不想再去滑冰了。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：过了很久我才再次去滑冰，所以应该写作者再次去滑冰的原因以及作者此次滑冰的感受。要详细描述作者去滑冰的原因、本次滑冰作者的感受以及此次滑冰的收获等。第二段开头是：然而，从那时起，我没有找到任何时间去滑冰。本段应该写作者没有时间滑冰的原因以及作者内心对滑冰的期待等。第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Lungs nearly burst. I struggled to lift my head out of the water. Inch by inch, my tired

76、body reached the end of the pool.The extent of my swimming career was purely recreational, while the competitive swimmers nearby thought nothing of the seemingly simple task of a 500-meter swim test. Pushing myself to finish what I had started, I could only think: why not take the easy way out?Earli

77、er that week, I had turned in my first job application at a local pool. Overqualified, I was hired on the spot. However, the tasks were boring: helping confused visitors and measuring the height of children before they went down the slide(滑梯). I was capable of more.So a swim test was required, estab

78、lishing the mere fact that I was not completely useless in a pool. Midway, the manager administering the test remarked, “This looks really easy for you. Why arent you applying to become a guard?”“The thought didnt cross my mind.”“Well, lifeguarding demands more responsibility, strength and respect.

79、Thus the position pays $2 more per hour. Your swimming skills are strong enough. All you need to do is complete the certification.”Inside I was unsure of myself, but his words inspired meYou never know what you are capable of until you force yourself to do it.Soon I passed the swim test. All left wa

80、s to practice and learn first aid, CPR (心肺复苏), and procedures for different land-based and water-based emergencies.Work started soon. A well-intentioned yet anxious feeling in me soon passed. Days, weeks, and months went by without incident; emergencies were rare. The skills and training I had so ca

81、refully studied and acquired seemed unnecessary.Today appeared to be another uneventful day. However, shortly after the other guards signaled to the children to exit the pool, I noticed one boy was still in the middle while the others had climbed up.注意: 续写词数应为150左右。Paragraph 1:“Something must have g

82、one wrong with him,” I thought to myself.Paragraph 2:Having the boy on the floor, I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck.【答案】Paragraph 1:“Something must have gone wrong with him,” I thought to myself. Sure enough, with a closer look, I found the boy waving his hands desperately. I quic

83、kly dived into the water, swimming towards the boy at full speed. By the time I reached him, he had sunk to the bottom of the pool, which filled my heart with fright and concern. I picked the boy up and headed to the poolside, keeping his head above the water.Paragraph 2:Having the boy on the floor,

84、 I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck. I could tell that he had no heartbeat and wasnt breathing. Every second counted! Without hesitation, I did first aid, performing CPR as trained. Other guards watching anxiously, I carried on, sweating. Suddenly, a stream of water burst out of his mouth and the boy coughed intensely. Seeing the boy regain consciousness, those around broke into cheers. Exhausted, I sighed with relief. I thought had I accepted that easy position, I would have been nothing but a bystander. Im happy I didnt take the easy way out.