专题18 书面表达 2020-2021学年【教育机构专用教材 寒假作业】九年级英语提分方案（人教新目标）【学科网名师堂】.docx

1、专题18 书面表达2020-2021学年【教育机构专用教材+寒假作业】九年级英语提分方案（人教新目标Go For It）序号内容第一部分题型简介第二部分做题技巧第三部分寒假作业：书面表达型考点精准把关练（中考真题直击要点）一、题型简介英语书面表达试题属综合性运用试题，是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是“压轴题”，属中考英语重大题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语成绩总成绩能否考好非常重要。二、书面表达题型做题技巧 书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽

2、量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。 三、

3、寒假作业：书面表达题型考点精准把关练直击中考书面表达四大考点考点1 观点看法类（一）【北京市】根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。提示词语：design，safety rule，careful，protect，picture提示问题：When should you hand in the poster?

4、 What would you like to share with Peter about designing the poster?Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your email _If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Peter写一封邮件，告诉他关于制作关于安全教育的主题海报的相关事宜。由题目中给出的提示问题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先告诉Peter海报上交的时间；然后和他分享一些设计海报的

5、想法。第二个内容应该是短文的主体。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。短文应以一般现在时为主、第一、二人称来叙述。写作时应注意：首先要合理安排短文内容，叙述应有层次、有条理。可以使用一些表示先后顺序的词或短语，如First, Second, Last but not least等等。题目中给出的提示词应该在短文中用上。其次应注意文章的表达，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词

6、汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。【参考范文】Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your email. As it is required，you are supposed to hand in the poster before next Friday.Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you. First and foremost，the

7、 basic safety rules are of great importance，which should be included in your poster. In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school. Last but by no means l

8、east，if I were you，I would add a few suggestions about safety awareness，considering that better safe than sorry. In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.

9、Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给Peter写邮件，告诉他制作主题海报的一些事情。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，符合题目要求。除题目中给出的开头和结尾，短文主要包括两个内容：第一段用一句话告诉Peter上交海报的时间；文章的中心和重点是放在了第二段上，这一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海报的想法。主要从四个方面进行阐述，内容非常详实，并使用了First and foremost, In the second place, Last but by no means least, In addition等短语，分清了这一段的层次，

10、叙述非常有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，并使用了较复杂的句式结构，表现了作者较强的语言运用能力。短文中较好的句型有：Being your close friend，I am extremely willing to share some ideas about designing the poster with you.、In the second place，following the safety rules is so meaningful and crucial that you had better remind your readers of its

11、significance and advise them to be careful both in and out of school、In addition，it is a good idea for you to draw a few pictures on your poster so as to make it more lively and acceptable.等。（二）【福建省】假定你是李华，收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他From: Harry回复。词数 80 左右。Dear Li Hua,Im glad to tell yo

12、u that Ive just won the the first place in a robot- making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun.What do yo think of robots? Do you want to have your own robot? Why? Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,HarryTo: Lihua 2019参考词汇：congratulation 祝贺注意事项：1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；2.

13、意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。Dear Harry,_Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】此类观点表达和原因说明类的作文，在我们三轮的中考复习中进行过系统的训练。学生可根据日常所授的写作模板，对全文内容及结构进行合理安排。（1）结构：开头表示祝贺，使用所给提示词；（2）正文要点：表达兴趣并说明原因，至少两点（如热点科技，对科技创新的兴趣，对生活的改变，对医疗、救援的帮助等）；写作时从单词拼写到句子结构，从时态到语态，都应该注意统一。在打草稿时把需要用到的关键词、高级句式、关键结构甚至注意事项等简单地写在题目旁边，以尽量规避错误。【参考范文】

14、Dear Harry,Congratulations！How glad I am to share your good news!I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future, they will play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see,

15、 my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.Hoping you will make greater progress.Yours,Li Hua考点2说明介绍类（一）【浙江省杭州市】假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右。Subject:From: LindaTo: Li Ping.Im really looking

16、forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? What does he look like? What kind of person is he and whats he interested in?Hope to hear from you soon.Love,LindaSubject:From: Li PingTo: LindaDear

17、 Linda,_Yours,Li Ping【写作思路】这篇作文要求我们对Linda的电子邮件进行回复。写作前，应先阅读Linda的来信，了解信中她想知道的事情，然后有针对性地给她进行介绍。审题可知，Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情况，她提出了三个问题，“他多大了”；“他是什么样子的”；“他是怎样的人以及他的兴趣”，回信中应对Linda的这些提问进行回答，并根据表达的需要，补充一些细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。短文应使用一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先内容应符合题目要求，并且叙述要注意层次和结构；其次应注意英语的表达问题，应符合英文句式的特点以

18、及表达习惯，不能写汉语式的英语。可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、自然。【参考范文】Dear Linda,Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves differen

19、t cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.My brother is also cute. Hes of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.Thanks again for your help!Yours,Li Ping【名师点评】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者以李平的身份给Linda写了回信，介绍了哥哥的一些情

20、况。首先短文内容符合题目要求，按照Linda在来信中的提问，介绍了哥哥的年龄、外貌、兴趣爱好等信息。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时、第三人称单数来叙述，符合题目要求，尤其注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化，这是学生们学习中的一个难点。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中主要使用了简单句、并列句和复合句，还使用了非谓语动词，如动词不定式、现在分词等。文章中较好的句型和短语有：Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.、He is thirteen years old, easy-going

21、and humorous-we get along really well. 、He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.、Hes of medium height with short straight black hair.、 He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.等等。（二）【湖南省郴州市】在英语课上, 老师将组织以“说出你的烦恼”(Speak out your worries)为主题的交流活动。假如你是李华, 请根据以下表

22、格中提供的信息, 用英语写一篇发言稿, 说出你的烦恼和愿望。WorriesWishes too strict, too much homework little time for outdoor activities hard to communicate with . less homework more chances get on well with 要求：1短文须包含表格中的所有信息, 并适当发挥；2词数：80词左右（短文开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。Hello, everyone,I am Li Hua. Id like to speak

23、 out my worries and wishes. _ Thats all. Thank you.【写作思路】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【参考范文】Hello, everyone,I am Li Hua. Id like to speak out my worries and wishes. My teachers are too strict. They have too much homewor

24、k to do every dayAnd I feel stressed too muchI wish I can have less homework. I think my parents are too strict with meThey give us little time for outdoor activities. Its hard for me to communicate with their parentsI wish I can have more chances to play with my friends. I wish I can get on well wi

25、th my parents. Thats all. Thank you.【名师点评】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。考点3 咨询建议类（一）【安徽省】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：1. 经常做户外活动；2. 很少用电子产品；3. 坚持做眼保健操；4. 注意：1.词数80-100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计

26、人总词数。Dear Mike,Im sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. _Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，给自己的英国笔友Mike写信，给他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在是，第一人称来叙述，内容应包括：首先讲述题目中Mike的视力减退问题，并引出文章的主题；然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法，这一部分是文章的主体可以按照题目中所列的内容进行介绍，并对第四条进行补充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意：短文按内容表达的需要，分成三段，每一段一个主题；内容

27、应包括题目中的所有要点，不能遗漏；课根据表达需要，增加细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。其次应注意文章的表达，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，句式应符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使行文连贯，表达流畅。【参考范文】Dear Mike,Im sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. Id like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily

28、life.At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an importan

29、t role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy. I hope youll find my ways helpful.Yours,Li Hua【名师点评】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，对Mike介绍了自己在保护视力方面的一些做法。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。短文结构清晰，共分成三段：第一段将题目中的写作背景进行了介绍，并引出了文章的话题；第二段

30、具体介绍了自己的做法，这一段是文章的中心，所占篇幅最大。作者按照题目的提示进行表述，并对细节进行了拓展；第三段提出了自己的希望。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式结构比较复杂，使用了很多较高级的表达方式，包括动词短语、介词短语、宾语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等。如Id like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my cla

31、ssmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.、In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. 等。（二）【湖南湘西州】湘西自治州正在进行“美丽湘西”建设，我们要积极参与“美丽湘西”建设活动，从小事做起，让我们家乡变得更美。作为学生，请以“Start out small”为题，用

32、英语写一篇倡议书。要点提示：1. 多种植树木和花草，不乱砍伐树木。 2. 购物时重复使用袋子。 3. 不乱扔垃圾，保持河流等干净。 4. 遵守公共秩序，做文明学生。要求：1. 80词以上。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文意思通顺、语气连贯、过渡自然。不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。参考词汇：protect the environment；reuse bags；plant；cut down；throw；wait in line；be wie；oboeysart outsnalStart out smallHello, everyone

33、. We should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our hometown?_【参考范文】Hello，everyoneWe should try our best to make our hometown Xiangxi more beautiful and comfortableWhat can we do for our hometown？（点题）In order to make our hometown more beautifu

34、l，as students，I think we should start from small things【高分句型一】（从小事做起）First of all，we should know the importance of protecting the environmentWe should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees randomlySecond，we had better reuse the bag when shopping【高分句型二】We cant throw rubbish about，and we

35、 should keep the rivers clean and so onIn addition，we must obey public rules and be civilized studentsWhen we got on the bus，we should wait in line（具体做法）【名师点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。【高分句型一】In order to make our hometown more beautiful， as students， I think we sho

36、uld start from small things为了使我们的家乡更美丽，作为学生，我认为我们应该从小事开始。in order to do sth为了做某事；I think+宾语从句。【高分句型二】Second， we had better reuse the bag when shopping第二，我们最好重用当购物袋。had better do sth 最好做某事。考点4 叙事描写类（一）【北京】根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。自律，即自我约束，是自我提升的一种途径，有助于我们成长，促使我们

37、不断前行。某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。提示词语: self-disciplined(自律的)，plan，goal，habit，improve提示问题: What did you do to be self-disciplined?What benefits have you got from doing so?Self-discipline plays an important role in our life _【写作思路】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，用英语写一篇短文给某网站

38、投稿，谈谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么，以及这样做给你带来的好处。根据题目中给出的问题可知，短文应包括以下内容：首先谈一谈为了增强自律意识，你做过什么？然后谈谈这样做给你带来的好处。第一个内容应主要使用一般过去时；第二个内容应主要使用现在完成时。注意谓语动词的正确形式。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应联系自己的实际生活，展开合理的想象，将这些内容补充完整后，用正确的英语表达出来，这是写作中的一个难点。写作时应注意：首先注意内容的完整、充实，学生们可以结合自己的实际生活，写一写自己平时的做法。注意叙述应有层次、有条理。其次应注意英语的表达问题，英语句式的结构与汉语是不同的，因此不能根据汉

39、语思维逐词翻译，应该从句式的整体考虑，先确定主干结构，然后添加修饰成分。为提升作文档次，应注意使用一些高级词汇、短语以及复合句、非谓语动词等复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意上下连贯，表达流畅。【参考范文】Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at schoo

40、l. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going to bed early and going

41、 to bed early. In the society，I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.In a word. I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a

42、lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.【名师点评】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了自己第自律的认识，结合自己的实际谈论了自律的好处。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，短文主要分两段：第一段中作者介绍了自己在家里、在学校以及在社会上是如何遵守规则，进行自我约束的。这一

43、段的内容叙述很有条理，从at school, At home, In the society三个方面进行介绍。第二段中作者主要阐述了自律给自己带来的好处，使用了Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly，从三个方面进行介绍。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范，句式结构文章，且使用了较高级的词汇和复杂句式，提升了作文档次，展现了作者扎实的写作功底。文章中较好的句型有：I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school.、I usually m

44、ade a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal.、First of all，I have had many good habits，which makes my life easier and more regular.、Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future.等。（二）【湖北省宜昌市】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Mike得知你们开展了“做生态小公民，建设美丽家乡”的活动，他来信表示很感兴趣并想了解具体细节

45、，请给Mike写一封回信向他描述你（们）曾经做过的一件事或参与的一次活动。要求：(1) 内容应包括活动或事件的时间、地点、过程和你的感受；(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数80100。开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。Dear Milk, Im glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological eitizen(生态公民), we did a good job. Last _Now the environment around us becom

46、es better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.Yours,Li Hua【写作思路】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。【参考范文】Dear Mike, Im glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good jo

47、b. Last Sunday, I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags t

48、o go shopping. And they also knew to put litter in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together. We were tired but happy that day.Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day.Yours, Li Hua【名师点评】这

49、篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，cut down，go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而Im glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。