专题20 书面表达 2020-2021学年【教育机构专用教材 寒假作业】八年级英语提分方案（外研版）【学科网名师堂】.docx

1、专题20 书面表达2020-2021学年【教育机构专用教材+寒假作业】八年级英语提分方案（外研版）序号内容第一部分考点简介第二部分做题技巧第三部分寒假作业：书面表达题型考点精准把关练一、书面表达题型简介英语书面表达试题属综合性运用试题，是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是“压轴题”，属中考英语重大题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语成绩总成绩能否考好非常重要。二、书面表达题型做题技巧 书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式

2、，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁. 三、寒假作业：书面表达题型考点精准把

3、关练一、话题作文1 请以my dream 为题，写一篇80词左右的文章。提示：1.你的梦想是什么？为什么？ 2.你怎样做来实现自己的梦想？_【答案】范文：My dreamIm a middle school student now. When I grow up, Im going to be a reporter. Because being a reporter is cool. Besides, my favorite subject is Chinese and Im good at it, too. How can I make my dream come true? Firstly

4、, Im going to study Chinese harder by taking writing lessons and practicing writing articles. Secondly, if my articles are great, I will send them to magazines and newspapers. Lastly, I will never give up when I meet difficulties.Where there is a will, there is a way. Im sure my dream will come true

5、 one day.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据汉语提示，包括三个方面：梦想是什么；为什么；怎样实现梦想。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时来介绍作者的现状；用一般将来时来描述自己的梦想和行动；力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。2 我们无法改变过去，却能用勤奋和智慧创造美好的未来。亲爱的同学，你对未来的生活有怎样的期待呢？请以“My life in fifteen years”为题写一篇英文短文，畅想自己未来的生活。1.提示.（1）想象你15年后会从事什么职业；（2）想象你15年后的生活会是什么样子；（3）为了过上想要的

6、生活，你现在该怎么做？2.要求.（1）内容必须包括提示信息，可适当发挥；（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；（3）词数70左右3.参考句型：My future jobI will be a/an. Ill work in. because.My future lifeI will live a .In my free time, I will.How to doI will study harder.My dream will come trueMy life in fifteen years_【答案】例文:My life in fifteen yearsIm going to be an E

7、nglish teacher in fifteen years. Ill work in a middle school, because I like being with teenagers. I will live in the countryside, because it is quiet. The air is clean and the sky is blue there. In my free time, I will go mountain climbing. In order to achieve my goal, I will study harder. I think

8、my dream will come true one day.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述十五年之后自己的工作和生活，以及怎样实现未来的目标。2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般将来时为主，讲述十五年之后自己的工作和生活叙述完整，条理清晰。3 假如你是杰里(Jerry)，你非常喜欢吃三明治，而且也会做三明治。请你写一篇80词左右的文章，介绍一下三明治的制作过程。参考词汇：relish 调味品；佐料_【答案】例文My name is Jerry. My favorite food is the sandwich. I can make a

9、sandwich in a few minutes. Here is a recipe for a great chicken sandwich! First, put some butter on a piece of bread. Next, cut up a tomato and an onion, and put them on the bread. Then put some lettuce and the chicken pieces on the bread. Put two spoons of relish on the chicken. Finally, put anothe

10、r piece of bread on the top.The sandwich is delicious. I think you will like it.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己喜欢吃的是三明治，并介绍三明治的制作过程。2.写作指导：本文的时态采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段介绍自己喜欢吃的是三明治；第二段介绍制作三明治的过程；最后一段评价三明治真的很美味。句子通顺，逻辑性强，无标点和语法错误。4 国家开放二胎政策后，很多家庭都可能有新的成员加入，那我们的生活会怎样呢？你会为家里做些什么？假设你现在是家里唯一的孩子，请以If I Have a New Brot

11、her or Sister为题，阐述你的想法和理由。If You Have a New Brother or SisterHow will you feel?ReasonsWhat do you want to say to your parents?What will you do for your family/younger brother(sister)?注意：1. 开头部分已写好，你只需接着写；2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名；3. 所写内容必须包括表格中的各项内容，并至少写两条理由；4. 词数：80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。_【答案】例文：If I Have a New B

12、rother or SisterI think my life will be different if I have a new brother or sister. Ill be very happy. Because Ill have a younger brother/sister to play with and talk with. I want to say thanks to my parents. I will do something for my family. On weekends, Ill help my mum do some housework, such as

13、 cleaning the room and sweeping the floor. Ill learn to look after myself. Because my parents are too busy to look after both of us. After my younger brother or sister is born, Ill help my mother look after him/her. When I am free, Ill take him/her for a walk and play with him/her. And Ill help him/

14、her with his/her study when he/she is old enough to go to school. In a word, Im getting ready for the coming of my younger brother/sister.【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于说明文。写作时要注意文章的表格要求，叙述假如你有弟弟或妹妹，你的感受，你对父母说的话，将会为弟弟或妹妹做什么，并叙述相应的原因至少2点。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般将来时为主；表达的情感要积极向上；为家人所做的事也要贴合实际；叙述要完整，且保证条理清晰。5 由于疫情

15、(CONVID-19)，今年我们的暑假很短，你是否合理安排并度过了一个有意义的暑假？请你用英文以“My last summer vacation”为题写一篇短文，叙述你的暑假生活。要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School。3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。My last summer vacation_【答案】例文：My last summer vacationDue to the epidemic, I exp

16、erienced a different summer holiday this year. But I have planned my vacation in a reasonable way. I had online classes actively every day. I finished the tasks that the teacher gave us in time. I helped my parents with housework and learned to cook. In my free time, I took exercise actively to buil

17、d up my body. Although the epidemic brought me a lot of trouble, I had a meaningful vacation.【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求你以“My last summer vacation”为题写一篇短文，叙述你的暑假生活，要求介绍暑假所做的事情，书写规范，可适当发挥。2、写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述暑假生活；时态采用一般过去时为主；描述暑假生活时，应详细具体，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。二、书信作文6 假如你是Li Ping，请根据以下写作要点写一封80词左右的email，向你的朋友Tom说明自己不能去参加他的

18、生日宴会。写作要点：1. 感谢邀请；2. 道歉，说明你不能去参加他的生日宴会。3. 简要说明你不能参加的理由：(1) 奶奶卧病在床需要人照顾；(2) 父母出差要到香港下个月才能回来；(3) 自己的英语不是很好，英语考试即将来临，要为英语考试准备，多做听力练习；4. 告诉Tom你感到十分抱歉，请他见谅。祝他生日快乐！写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清楚；4.至少80词。（不含已写出的英文）Dear Tom,Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthda

19、y party._Best Wishes!Yours,Li Ping【答案】One possible versionDear Tom,Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. Id love to go but I cant. I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And my parents are out on business in Hong Kong. They are coming back next month. Also,

20、my English is not so good. I must do more listening practice. I need to study for my coming English exam. Im very sorry that I cant go to your party. Thank you for inviting me. I hope you can have a good time. Happy birthday!Best Wishes!Yours,Li Ping【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作文体是邮件。在写作时应承接邮件开头，按照邮件的格式来

21、写；首先是称呼；然后是正文内容，正文包含三个方面的内容：感谢对方的邀请，拒绝对方的邀请，叙述拒绝的理由；结尾告诉对方自己无法参加的歉意以及对对方的祝福；最后落款，署名。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；按照邮件的格式叙述内容；表达拒绝别人的邀请时，语言表达要委婉，态度要温和；叙述拒绝的理由时，层次分明，条理清楚，内容得当；表达歉意时，诚恳真诚。7 假设你叫 Frank,你英国的笔友 Simon 想了解你的生活，下面是他给你第一次写来的交友电邮，向你询问了各方面的信息和情况，请根据电邮要点，给他写一封回信。回信开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear frank,Im

22、glad to write to you. Im Simon from the UK. Im in Year 8 at a mixed school near London. I like meeting different people, and I want to travel around the world when I grow up.Can you tell me about your looks, personality(性格) and hobbies?I heard you went on a school trip last month. Could you tell me

23、something about the trip?Whats your future plan?I really look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes.Simon注意：1. 文章须包括所有要点,并有简要但适当的发挥；2. 词数 80 词左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数；3. 请注意恰当分段,书写整洁。Dear Simon,I am glad to write back to you to introduce myself and something about my life._【答案】例文Dear Simon,I am gla

24、d to write back to you to introduce myself and something about my life.Im an outgoing boy with a pair of black eyes. I like traveling, too. I also like making friends with different people. I am tall and thin. In my free time, I often play basketball with my friends. Last month, my classmates and I

25、went on a school trip. We visited the science museum. I learned a lot about science in the museum. I am surprised that science plays an important role in our daily lives. I am going to be a great scientist when I grow up. I plan to improve peoples lives with the help of science. I believe science wi

26、ll make peoples lives much easier and more comfortable. I hope my dream will come true one day.Bye for now! Yours,Frank【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于邮件格式的应用文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头，紧接着描写“我”的外貌、性格和兴趣爱好等内容，并介绍“上个月的学校旅行”情况。最后，还有谈谈未来的打算和计划。2.写作指导：短文应该用第一人称来叙述信件内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般过去时描述“上个月的学校旅行”，用一般将来时谈论未来的打算和计划。写作时，还要注意保证要点齐全，

27、不要遗漏，可适当拓展。三、便条8 假如你是来自美国的丹尼(Danny)，你的中国朋友孙丽即将结束为期一年的交换生生活。为此，你打算周六晚上在你家为她举办一场送别聚会。请根据以下写作要点，在你们班级群里留言，邀请你班同学参加本次聚会。 写作要点：1. 对孙丽的评价； 2. 举办此次聚会的原因；3. 希望同学们来参加聚会并表演节目(put on a show)。 写作要求：90词左右；格式已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi everyone,_Danny【答案】参考范文Hi, everyone,You must know our classmate Sun Li. In my eyes, shes so

28、 nice. She studies very hard. And shes always ready to help others. I learned more about Chinese culture from her. Sadly, shes going back to China. To show how much Ill miss her, Ill have a party for her at my home this Saturday evening. Can you come? If you can, please help with these things: think

29、 of some games to play and if you could put on some kinds of shows at the party, that would be great.Danny【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时按留言格式写。在写作时根据汉语提示的要点，在班级群里留言，邀请同学们参加本次聚会。2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称为主来写留言内容；时态采用一般现在时来评价孙丽，采用一般将来时来邀请同学们参加聚会；写留言时力求语言准确，描述聚会的原因、时间、地点和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。四、讲稿9 你们班下周将召开一次班会，主题是Life

30、in the 22nd century，请你根据以下信息写一篇发言稿。写作要点：1. 人口越来越多，寿命增长；2. 工作时间缩短，娱乐和旅游时间将更加充裕；3. 工作的机会减少，机器人取代人的部分工作，有些人面临失业。写作要求: 1. 语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确；2. 不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，想象内容要合情合理。Life in the 22nd century_【答案】参考范文Life in the 22nd centuryLife in the 22nd century will be different from life in the 21st century.The populat

31、ion is growing fast. There will be more and more people in the world and most of them will live longer than before. People will work fewer hours than they do in the 21st century, and they will have more free time for sports, watching TV, traveling and so on. More people will go to other countries fo

32、r holidays. Work in the future will be different, too. Robots will do the dangerous and hard work. Because of this, many people will not have enough work to do. This will be a problem.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇讲稿作文。要求以“Life in the 22nd century”为主题，结合所给材料，描述22世纪的生活是什么样的，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般将

33、来时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍22世纪的生活是什么样的，包括人口、工作和休闲时间；第三段描述22世纪的就业形式和机会。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。10 假如你参加了学校举办的英语口语演讲比赛，你演讲的主题是我的好朋友Olivia。下表中列出了她的一些具体情况，请根据此表写一篇演讲稿。外貌特征圆脸，长发，含笑的眼睛使她看上去很可爱品行比班上其他任何学生都努力；富有幽默感，对人友善(举一例说明)爱好1.喜欢DIY，热衷于制作小蛋糕(说明理由)未来计划长大后想(说明理由)要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥；3.词数80左右，开头和结尾

34、已给出，不计入总词数。I have a good friend named Olivia._She is such an excellent girl. I hope you will make friends with her one day.【答案】例文：I have a good friend named Olivia. She has a round face and long hair. She looks very cute with her smiling eyes. She works harder than any other student in her class. Sh

35、e has a good sense of humour and she is also very kind. She never says a bad word about others and she can always keep secrets for others. She is fond of taking DIY courses in her free time. She likes making small cakes because they are lovely and taste delicious. She can make birthday cakes for her

36、 family. She is crazy about travelling and she has been to lots of places of interest in China. She hopes to travel around the world when she grows up, because she wants to enjoy the beauty of nature and learn more about the world.She is such an excellent girl. I hope you will make friends with her

37、one day.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍朋友奥莉维亚的外貌特征、性格、爱好以及未来的计划。2.写作指导：本文用第三人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主，介绍朋友奥莉维亚的个人信息叙述完整，条理清晰。五、材料作文11 未来总是让人充满幻想。请根据以下提示以The Life in the Future为题写一篇80词左右的短文，想象一下未来的生活会是什么样子。写作要点：1. 具体介绍未来的生活状况：很多事情由电脑和机器人完成，例如：料理家务、购物、看病；2. 孩子们通过网络把课堂搬到家里；人们可以活到200岁等； 3. 为了未来的生活，

38、我们现在应该努力学习，实现理想。写作要求：1. 语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确；2. 不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，想象内容要合情合理。_【答案】例文：The Life in the FutureWhat do you think the life in the future will be like? Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us know a lot all over the world. Robots will help us do most of the housework. They

39、can help us do some cleaning, cooking or washing. We can do some shopping and see a doctor without going out. Students can study at home on computers. People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care. Our life will be better and better. For this, we should study hard. I believ

40、e well be able to do this.【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于说明文。第一段可以阐明文章写作的中心：未来的生活会是什么样子；第二段具体描述未来的生活状况，孩子将如何学习，人们的寿命将延长等；第三段鼓励大家努力实现梦想。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般将来时为主；具体描述未来的生活时，要点需要叙述完整，语言要简洁，并保证条理清晰。12 根据所给提示写一篇短文，描述制作牛肉三明治的过程。Ingredients(原料): 2 pieces of bread; 1 spoon of cheese; 1 green pepper; 1 onion; some

41、mushrooms; 2 pieces of beef; 2 spoons of relish(佐料)_【答案】参考范文Do you know how to make a beef sandwich? Now, let me tell you.First, put a spoon of cheese on a piece of bread. Next, cut up a green pepper and an onion. Add these to the bread. Then, put some mushrooms and 2 pieces of beef on the bread. Pu

42、t two spoons of relish on the beef. Finally, put another piece of bread on the top.Now you can enjoy it. Its very delicious.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时注意根据所给出的提示词，介绍制作牛肉三明治的过程。2.写作指导：本文应该用祈使句来介绍制作过程；时态采用一般现在时；为了更清晰地介绍制作过程，应用表示顺序的词：first、next、then和 finally；力求语言准确、行文连贯，保证条例清晰。13 新的一年马上就要到了，李华制定了新年决心，计划

43、在新的一年中有新的气象。请根据表格中的信息，以第一人称的形式说说李华的新年计划，并谈谈为什么制定这样的计划以及如何实施。写作要求：1. 文章需要包括表格内所有的信息；2. 可适当发挥但不得出现真实的个人信息(人名、地名、学校名等)；3. 词数：80左右(开头已给出， 不计入总词数)。New Years resolutionsWhyHowTake up a new hobbyGet a lot of exerciseImprove English._【答案】参考范文:New Year is coming, so I am going to make some New Years resoluti

44、ons.First, I want to take up a new hobby. I plan to learn to play an instrument because I like music very much. Im going to practice it every day. Next, I want to get a lot of exercise to keep fit. Im going to run every morning. Then, I want to improve my English because I want to get good grades. I

45、m going to read English books and write diaries in English. Finally, I want to be a school magazines reporter because I like talking with people. Im going to write articles. I think I am able to keep them and I hope I am going to improve my life.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。内容是李华制定了新年计划，要求根据表格中的信息，介绍一下他制定这

46、样的计划的目的和实施方案。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时为主； 写作时应承接短文的开头；要注意运用first，next，then，finally等词来介绍计划的内容。最后一段介绍作者能坚持计划并能提高自己。14 寒假即将来临，每个同学都有自己的寒假计划。假设你是第十中学八年级（3）班的班长，近期你对班上同学对如何过寒假进行了调查。请根据下表提供的信息写一篇短文。要求：1.短文包括对调查相关信息的介绍和你自己的寒假计划;2.不少于70词，标题和开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3.文中不可出现真实的人名和学校名。22人参加体育锻炼、上网或看电视8人帮助父

47、母做家务18人看书、学习5人外出旅游你的计划（至少写三个）How to spend the winter vacation?Im the monitor of Class 3, Grade 8, No. 10 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of my classmates on how to spend the winter vacation. _【答案】例文How to spend the winter vacation？Im the monitor of Class 3, Grade 8, No. 10 Middle School

48、. Recently I have made a survey of my classmates on how to spend the winter vacation. Here are the results. Twenty-two of my classmates are going to do some sports, surf the Internet or watch TV. Eight of them will help their parents do some housework. Eighteen students plan to read some books and s

49、tudy to improve themselves. Only five will go traveling.As for me, I have lots of things to do during the winter vacation. I will do my vacation homework first, and I will visit my grandparents in the countryside with my parents. I will also read some books about science and watch some movies. Of course, I will take exercise to keep healthy. I think I will have a great vacation.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格中内容，围绕“How to spend the winter vacation?”这一话题进行写作。需包含表格中同学的计划，并介绍自己的计划。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称来介绍，时态以一般将来时为主。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍同学的计划；第二段介绍自己的计划。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。