专题22 书面表达-备战2024年中考英语真题题源解密（江苏专用）（原卷版）.docx

1、专题22 书面表达 书面表达是中考英语必考题型，也是考生最容易失分的题型，其主要考查学生的语言运用能力、思维能力和书写能力，在中考中占有重要的地位。本专题目的在于帮助学生提高书面表达的解题能力，以帮助同学们高效复习。 1（2023江苏南通统考中考真题）热心公益，积极为社会作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责任意识的表现。请你从以下社会行为中选择一种或另选一种相关活动，用英语写一篇关于今年暑假准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。要求表达清楚“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。注意：1. 词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。参考词汇：responsibility n.

2、责任；义务The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity. _【答案】例文：The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social practice activity. Im going to take part in a voluntary activity

3、 in Old Peoples Home.First, I can talk to the old about something interesting or take a walk with them. Then, I may give them a great performance. Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old. I believe these activities will not only make the old happ

4、y but also help me learn a lot. Isnt it meaningful?【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：时态为“一般将来时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应选择一种社会行为，介绍今年暑假准备做的社会实践活动，要包含要点“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。写作步骤第一步，点明主题，介绍做什么，为何做；第二步，介绍怎么做；第三步，再次点明活动的益处，暗含这么做的原因。亮点词汇take part in 参加such as 例如fold clothes 叠衣服not only . but also . 不仅而且高分句型Finally, I can do whatev

5、er I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old.（whatever引导宾语从句）Isnt it meaningful?（否定疑问句）2（2023江苏镇江统考中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校整理出一块空地，将用于拓宽学生活动和实践的空间。校英语报登载了校方初拟的两种方案，就这块空地建设文化角还是菜园征求意见。请根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。A Culture CornerA Vegetable Gardendisplay art worksshare ideas and feelingshol

6、d activities (fashion shows, )develop a sense of beautywork with classmateslearn farming skillsharvest vegetables (tomatoes, )form the habit of labour (劳动)要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.对你所选择的方案说明理由，并对其提出建议；3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。Dear Sir/Madam,Im happy to hear that there is an

7、empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, its better to _Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Dear Sir/Madam,Im happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, its better to build a vegetable

8、garden. The reasons are as follows.First of all, our country advocates labor education. Second, students can work with their classmates in the garden to strengthen their friendship. Third, working in the garden can help students learn farming skills. Fourth, a garden built on the empty land can harv

9、est a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school. Last but not least, students can form the habit of labor by planting vegetables.This is not only good for the school, but also good for the growth of students.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析

10、题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，根据表格选择一种方案；第二步，就选择的方案结合提示信息介绍下你的想法和建议。亮点词汇first of all首先help sb do sth帮助某人做某事last but not least最后也是最重要的高分句型Fourth, a garden built on empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carro

11、ts and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）3（2023江苏徐州中考真题）假定你是李华。你班交换留学生Simon即将返校，他对“校园科技周”非常感兴趣，他写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信。注意：1.词数90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.邮件需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；3.邮件中不得泄露个人信息；4.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hi Simon, Im very happy to tell you abo

12、ut our School Technology Week._Im sure you will enjoy the Technology Week.Li Hua【答案】例文：Hi Simon,Im very happy to tell you about our School Technology Week. It will be held in the No. 2 building in two weeks. There are many different kinds of activities in the Week. First, you can watch science ficti

13、on films like The Wandering Earth. Second, some students will tell stories about scientists like Deng Jiaxian. Whats more, our school will share the latest news about technology and show creative ideas about robots. You are crazy about robots, right? Great, there are some smart robot shows you can t

14、ake part in here. Then you can see and experience how excellent they are.Im sure you will enjoy the Technology Week.Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，根据开头，介绍科技周开始的时间；第二步，根据Simon的问题提示，介绍科技周的活动；第三步，介绍Simon感兴趣的机器人活动。亮点词汇different kinds of不同种类的t

15、ake part in参加高分句型Then you can see and experience how excellent they are.(感叹句作宾语)4（2023江苏无锡统考中考真题）青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此21世纪英文报开设了Teens Talk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。注意事项：（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校

16、名称。Dear Mr. Friend,Im writing to you about the problem Im facing at the moment. _Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】例文：Dear Mr. Friend,Im writing to you about the problem Im facing at the moment.These days Im not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only car

17、e about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I dont want to take these classes and dont want to be so busy. Im interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I dont know what

18、 to do. And how can I improve the relationship with my parents? Can you give me some advice?Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一封电子邮件；时态：时态为一般现在时；提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。写作步骤第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。第三步，书写结尾。亮点词汇argue with和某人争吵care about关心take paint

19、ing lessons上绘画课高分句型The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作) I dont know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式)5（2023江苏苏州统考中考真题）Happy Home Club本期的主题是“How to make Suzhou more beautiful”，你打算以“Starting from me and now”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1. 触动你的一件事情；2. 这件事给你的启示；3. 你的倡议。注意：1. 词数：100左右。2. 内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）3

20、. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。Starting from me and now_【答案】例文Starting from me and nowLast weekend, I went to the city park with my classmates. When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground. We felt very sad about that. The city is our home, so we should try ou

21、r best to keep the city clean.First of all, we should protect our environment. Dont throw rubbish around or spit anywhere. Wed better plant more trees to make the air clean. Second, we are supposed to be friendly and helpful to others. Third, we ought to obey the traffic rules. Dont ride too fast or

22、 play on the street. Last but not least, remember to save energy. Turn off the lights and taps in time.As long as we try our best and starting from me and now, I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。写作步骤第一步，介绍

23、触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示；第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议；第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。亮点词汇different kinds of 各种各样的be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事remember to do sth. 记得做某事in time 及时高分句型When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground.（when引导时间状语从句）Wed better plant more trees to mak

24、e the air clean. （“sb. had better do sth.”表建议的句型）I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful.（宾语从句）6（2023江苏盐城统考中考真题）在人生的旅程中，亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行，助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛，请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。1. Who/What do you always like being with?2. Why do you like being with him/her/it?(Give two

25、or three reasons)注意事项：1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；2. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。Being with YouYouve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, _【答案】例文Being with YouYouve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, my English teacher, Miss Li. You are very kind and hard-wor

26、king. You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.Two years ago, I was afraid to speak English and was poor at English. But you tried your best to help me solve my problem. Thanks to your help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak English in

27、public and dont feel nervous any more.You teach me not only to learn but also to be a kind and warm-hearted person. I hope Ill be with you forever.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，承接短文开头，引出喜欢同行的是谁或某个物品；第二步，按照提示说明你喜欢与之相伴的原因，至少给出两、三个原因，可列举

28、具体的事例；第三步，表达愿与其一直同行的意愿并书写结语。亮点词汇be ready to help sb乐于帮助某人thanks to多亏，由于notany more不再not onlybut also不仅而且高分句型You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.（sothat引导的结果状语从句）I hope Ill be with you forever.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）写作步骤和技巧：一、认真审题抓要点在写作之前认真审题，确定好文章体裁，抓住要点。常见的文体有

29、记叙文、说明文、议论文和应用文等。1. 记叙文写作要点：(1)时间、地点、人物、事件经过和结局。(2)选用正确的人称。(3)线索一般为时间，即按照事件的发展顺序来写。(4)重点突出，层次分明，详略得当。(5)注意文章的完整性。(6)通常用一般过去时。2. 议论文写作要点：(1)观点鲜明，要有一个明确的中心论点。(2)层次分明，中心论点和分论点要层次分明，过渡要清晰自然。(3)结尾要得出一个符合逻辑的结论，突出中心思想。(4)通常用一般现在时。(5)语言简洁有力，一般不用口语。3. 说明文写作要点：(1)抓住事物的特征，以简明的文字介绍事物的形状、性质、构造、变化、功用和特性等。(2)说明事物要

30、有一定的条理性和逻辑性。(3)说明文常见的顺序有时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等。4. 应用文写作要点：应用文包括书信、通知、请假条、邀请函、感谢信和便条等。(1)写清楚称呼语。(2)具体时间、地点、概括性内容、涉及对象及有关注意事项。(3)语言要自然、平实、简洁。(4)结束语要向对方表示友善或亲切的问候。二、巧用过渡词文章都有一个先后顺序，一个逻辑结构，如何使文章结构清晰，要点明确，中心突出，这时巧妙运用过渡词，可以规范自己的逻辑思路，在有压力的写作之下能够做到临危不乱，有条不紊，层次清晰。（1）文章及段落起始常用的过渡词语to begin with首先 first of all首先， in

31、the first place首先， generally speaking总体上讲 （2）文章及段落结尾常用的过渡词语therefore, thus 因此 in conclusion 总之，最后 in brief, in a nutshell 简言之to sum up 总而言之 in a word 总之（3）常用表示先后次序的过渡词语first 第一 second 第二 next 其次，然后eventually 最后，最终since then 自此以后 afterward 以后，随后 meanwhile 同时 therefore 因而immediately 立刻 finally 最后，最终（4

32、）常用表示因果关系的过渡词语accordingly 于是for this reason 由于这个原因 as a result of 由结果in this way 这样 consequently 结果，因此 due to 由于therefore 因而 because of 因为 thus因为（5）常用表示比较和对比的过渡词语incontrast with 和成对照 similarly 同样 whereas 然而on the contrary 相反 different from与不同 likewise同样equally important 同样重要 on the other hand 另一方面（6

33、）常用表示举例的过渡词语acase in point 恰当的例子 for example 举例 namely( that is ) 即，这就是说 for instance 举例（7）常用表示强调的过渡词语furthermore 此外 moreover 而且 besides 此外in fact 实际上 also 而且，也 indeed 的确again 另外，还 in particular 尤其，特别 naturally 当然，自然，必然（8）逻辑连接词语原因、结果关系：so, as a result of this, consequently, in consequence转折关系：even t

34、hough, though, regardless of并列关系：also, as well as, eitheror递进关系：not onlybut also, in order to do it, accordingly比较关系：when in fact, similarly, compared with对比关系：on the contrary, contrary to, conversely举例关系：as he explains, like, put it simply, for one thingfor another强调关系：particularly, to be true, oth

35、er things being equal条件关系：if so, if possible, provide that归纳总结关系：in brief, in short, the conclusion can be drawn that（9）表“陈述事实/观点”to be honest/to tell you the truth 说实话actually/in fact/as a matter of fact 事实上 I think. 依我看in my opinion 在我看来 as far as I know 据我所知 I m afraid. 我恐怕 I hope. 我希望三、句式多变在写句子的

36、时候，不要只用那些清一色的简单句，要尽可能的变换句式和结构，让文章富于变化，错落有致。可以尝试使用更多的复合句，以及尝试变化语态。这样一定会使文章增加获胜的筹码。四、书写规范工整 书写是态度的体现，书写的规范和工整，直接影响到阅卷者的第一印象，从而决定一篇文章的得分高低，所以必须注意大小写、标点等的运用正确和规范。7（2023江苏宿迁校联考一模）习近平在讲话中引用李大钊的话说， “青年者，国家之魂”，“一个民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春，才能兴旺发达。” 作为青少年的我们，现行之重是当好学生。请以“How to Be a Good Student”为题，谈谈我们应该怎样做，才能不负自己，不负时代赋

37、予我们的责任。注意事项：1. 必须包含表格中的提示，可以自由发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，合理展开想象； 2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。How to Be a Good StudentAs teenagers, we should be good students at present. Then what should we do? _8（2023江苏宿迁统考二模）作为学生，我们不仅要努力学习，还要掌握一定的生活技能。你校组织了题为“Learning life skills”的英语演讲活动。假如你是李华，请根据下面的表格，

38、用英语写一篇演讲稿，描述作为青少年，你们应具备哪些生活技能及如何提高这些技能。Learning Life skills解决问题与人合作，要勇敢地试着处理问题管理时间计划好，把事情做得更快、更好学做家务寻求父母的帮助（补充一点）（如何提升）要求: 1. 词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯； 3. 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。Learning Life skillsLearning life skills is necessary for us. What kind of life skills should we

39、 learn? And how can we improve them? Here are my ideas. _As students, we should not only work hard, but also learn some life skills. They will help us get ready for our future.9（2023江苏盐城校考二模）近几年，我们被很多闪光的人物感动：有为国争光的奥运健儿，有抗击疫情的医护人员，有风雨无阻的快递小哥，有兢兢业业的社区工作人员他们在各自的工作岗位上奉献着光和热。某英文网站正在开展“My ideal job”为主题的征文

40、活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的未来职业设想，你这样选择的理由及如何使之实现。提示问题：What is your ideal job?Why do you want to do such a job? (at least 2 points)How are you going to make it come true? (at least 2 points)注意事项：1. 词数100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总数）；2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。My ideal jobEverybody has his ideal job. _10（2023江苏泰州校考三模）向世界传递中国文化

41、，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华，想参加此次活动，请根据以下信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封100词左右的自荐信，表达你的个人优势以及对参加活动的期待。要点提示：1. Say something about yourself. 2. Why do you want to take part in the activity?3. What do you hope to gain from the activity?注意：1.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.短文中不得泄露个人信息.Dea

42、r Mr. Yang,Im excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese Stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. _Yours,Li Hua11（2023江苏徐州校考二模）换位思考是实现高效沟通的重要方法。为了促进同学、师生间的交往，建立与维护和谐的人际关系，你校英语报开展了以“Put yourself in others shoes”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，讲述一段涉及换位思考的经历与体会。写作要求：1. 语句通

43、顺，语法正确，书写规范；2. 90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。It is important to put oneself in others shoes because it helps people understand each other and develop good relationships. _12（2023江苏宿迁校联考三模）热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德，也是推动人类进步的源动力。然而劳动教育往往被忽视。请你根据一下提示，以Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life为题写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。现状父母很少给予劳动机会忙于学业，无暇劳动懒惰不

44、愿劳动建议在家：学做家务，如在校：在社区：你对劳动的看法（至少一点）要求：1. 包含表格中提示信息，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥；2. 词数90个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名等信息。参考词汇：劳动 laborEnjoy Labor, Enjoy LifeLabor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love. However, _13（2023江苏南通校考三模）成长的道路漫长曲折，沿途也有美丽的风景， 每一次改变都是这场旅途中的回忆。回首这几年的初中时光，你的生活中也一定会有一些变化， 请你以“Great Chan

45、ges in My Growth”为题， 谈谈自己成长过程中的转变、收获及打算。要求: 1. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。2. 词数: 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）。Time goes by, and people surely change. I am not the little kid any more. I am quite different from what I used to be. _14（2023江苏无锡校考二模）礼物，是一种期待，是一种感谢，是一种赞美。每个人都会收到礼物，或大或小，或贵重或是很便宜，

46、也许是一本书，一张卡片，都寄托着送礼物人对你的感情。那么你收到的最佳礼物是什么呢，请说说它背后的故事吧。What is the gift?What is it like?The best gift I have receivedHow did you get the gift?Why do you like the gift so much?What do you think of the gift?注意事项：1. 词数在100个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 短文内容需涵盖提示图中要点，可适当发挥；3. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；4. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。Everyone has ever received a gift. The best gift I have received is_