专题5 九全Unit 5写作主题：中国制造的东西--2021-2022学年九年级英语单元话题写作（人教版）.docx

1、人教版九全册Unit 5 What are the shirts made of ?写作主题：中国制造的东西一、话题分析本单元以“中国制造的东西”为话题，围绕某种产品的材质、产地、用途及特殊性等信息而展开。与之相关的话题作文通常会涉及民间艺术以及文化传承。介绍特色产品。本话题适合记叙说明两种题材相结合。写作此类话题作文时，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，行文中注意准确捕捉写作的“精髓”，表达被描述的事物时，有可能要用到被动语态结构，写作时要立足事实，表达真情实感。二、 写作方法“总分总法”写产品介绍类的作文1. 总起点明产品的名称；2. 详细地描写产品的特征样式、质量、性能；3. 总结评价。

2、三、素材积累产品介绍类常用词汇：chopstick, fork, blouse, gloves, glass, cotton, steel, handbag, material, produce, process, product, local, heat, be made of, by hand, tun into, cover. . .with, everyday, lively, be known for, soft, strong, interesting, smooth, real, small, cute, useful, helpful产品介绍类常用句型：1. My town/c

3、ity/country is famous for. . .2. . . .is becoming more and more popular.3. Its more convenient for. . .4. . . .is made of/from/by/in. . .5. . . .is/are known for. . .6. . . .is/are used for. . .7. . . .is/are special because. .8. China is famous for 9. Its great that China is so good at.10. wish tha

4、t in the futurewill 11. These usually try to show. 12. They are seen as symbols of .四、写作训练一【写作任务】（Section B 3a &3b)最近，某中学生英文杂志“我的家乡”专栏，面向广大读者征文，要求介绍家乡的特色产品。请你写一篇短文向该专栏投稿。 假如你叫李华，来自山东省潍坊市。你的加拿大笔友Marcus得知你市是风筝之乡，他对风筝很感兴趣，于是他给你发来一封电子邮件，想让你给他介绍一些风筝的相关情况。请你根据下面的要点提示给他回复邮件。要点提示：1. 风筝的象征意义； 2. 原材料：竹子、纸或布或塑

5、料(plastic)、细绳(string)；3. 用途：过去用于送信，现在用来娱乐和锻炼。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：应用文(邮件)；邮件的主体部分为说明文 时态：介绍事物时用一般现在时 人称：第三人称2.谋布局、写句子3.巧衔接第一次提到“风筝”时用kites，再次提到时可以用they代替；为了避免重复， in my city在成篇章时可以用here来代替，这都是使用照应手段来使文章衔接的方法。 在陈述风筝的意义时可以使用表示原因的连词because，这是使用逻辑纽带的方式使文章衔接的方法。4. 成篇章Dear Marcus, How are you doing these days? Im

6、 excited to hear from you. Id like to tell you something about kites in my city._ Welcome to my city! I hope you will fly a kite here! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua5. 化“平凡”为“非凡”People used kites to send a message in the old days. Kites were used for sending a message in the old days.五、 写作训练二 假如你叫李华, 来自

7、江西省景德镇市。近日，你的加拿大笔友Marcus发来一封电子邮件，他说要来你市旅游，询问你市以什么而闻名，并让你推荐有什么值得赠送朋友的纪念品。请你根据下面的要点提示给他回复邮件。要点提示：1.以瓷器(china)闻名及其意义；2.原材料：陶土；3.用途：可供人们欣赏、也可用来装(contain)东西；4.最佳推荐：青花瓷(blue and white porcelain)。【思路点拨】1.定基调体裁：应用文(邮件)；邮件的主体部分为说明文时态：介绍事物时用一般现在时人称：第三人称2.列提纲、写句子列提纲写句子引出介绍的产品(1)Mycity,JingdezheninJiangxiProvin

8、ce,_.介绍产品意义(2)Chinaisspecial.ChinaisanexampleofexquisiteChinesecraftsmanship(精美的中国工艺)._(瓷器是中国传统文化的一个象征).原材料(3)_.介绍产品用途(4)_.(5)_.Manythingsaremadeofchinainoureverydaylife,suchascups,bowlsandplates.最佳推荐(6)_(每天有许多不同种类的瓷器被生产)inmycity.Blueandwhiteporcelainisthemostfamousone.Youcanbuysomeforyourfriendsand

9、relatives.邀请及祝愿Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtimehere!巧衔接 第一次提到“瓷器”时用china，再次提到时可以用it代替；为了避免重复，句(6)中的in my city在成篇章时可以用here来代替，这都是使用照应手段来使文章衔接的方法。在衔接瓷器的两个意义和两个用途时可以使用表示并列关系的词and；在陈述瓷器很特别的理由时可以使用表示原因的词because，这是使用逻辑纽带的方式使文章衔接的方法。4.添佳句It is known to people around the world. (它被全世界的人们所熟知。)5.成篇章D

10、ear Marcus,How are you doing these days? Im excited to hear from you. Id like to introduce something special in my city to you._Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua六、 写作训练三假如你是韩梅，远在美国的笔友Linda给你写信了，信中，Linda向你了解中国有什么著名小吃。请根据表格提示给Linda回信。民间小吃糖葫芦(tanghulu)原料山楂(haw)，有些地方的糖葫芦用草莓(strawberry)、葡萄(grape)，甚至小苹果等制成历史渊2源据说，

11、宋代(the song dynasty)一位皇帝的妻子曾因吃了糖葫芦治好了病，因此流传下来象征幸福和团圆。Dear Linda,_Best wishes!Yours,HanMei七、真题演练【2020 浙江省台州市】假如你是李华, 最近收到外国好友Andrew的电子邮件, 请你根据该邮件内符给Andrew 回复。Hi, Li Hua, Im going on holiday to your country next month with my family. Whats the weather like at that time? Im just planning what I need to

12、 take. What clothes do you think I need to pack? Could you tell me something about one kind of traditional Chinese art, such as paper cutting, Chinese clay art. . . ?Thanks for your help. Andrew注意: (1）请回复邮件中所提及的问题, 可适当发挥;(2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息; (3）词数:80100. _人教版九全册Unit 5 What are the shirts made of

13、?写作主题：中国制造的东西写作训练一答案:2.谋布局、写句子(1) is famous / known / well-known for its kites(2) An international kite festival is held in my city in April every year(3) Kites are loved / liked / enjoyed by lots of / many / a lot of people(4) they are often painted with colorful drawings(5) kites are used for fun

14、and exercise【参考范文】Dear Marcus,How are you doing these days? Im excited to hear from you. Id like to tell you something about kites in my city. My city, Weifang in Shandong Province, is famous for its kites. An international kite festival is heldherein April every year. Kites are loved by lots of peo

15、plebecause theyrise into the air with peoples wishes for a better life.Theyare usually made of bamboo, paper or cloth or plastic and string. There are all kinds of kites andtheyare often painted with colorful drawings. And kiteshereoften have special designs. People used kites to send a message in t

16、he old days. Today,theyare used for fun and exercise.Welcome to my city! I hope you will fly a kite here!Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua写作训练二【参考范文】Dear Marcus,How are you doing these days? Im excited to hear from you. Id like to introduce something special in my city to you.My city,JingdezheninJiangxiProvi

17、nce, is famous for its china.Chinais specialbecause itis an example of exquisiteChinese craftsmanshipand itis a symbol of traditional Chinese culture.Itis made from clay.Itis made to be enjoyed by people.And itis used for containing things. Many things are made of china in our everyday life, such as

18、 cups, bowls and plates. Every day many different kinds of china are producedhere. Blue and white porcelain is the most famous one. It is known to people around the world. You can buy some for your friends and relatives.Welcome to my city! I hope you will have a good time here!Best wishes!Yours,Li H

19、ua写作训练三【参考范文】Dear Linda,引出话题：You asked me what （宾从)famous snacks there were in my country.Well, in my country, one of the most famous snacks is tanghulu.详尽介绍：Each different part of China has different tanghulu. It is usually made of haws, which are put together on a stick and covered with ice sugar（

20、非限)But there are more materials for tanghulu today in some places, such as strawberries, grapes, and even little apples（要点一：原料）It is said that tanghulu ever saved the life of an emperor s wife in the Song Dynasty. It was so delicious and healthy that many Chinese people like eating it.(结果状从) It is n

21、ow seen as the bright symbols of happiness and reunion.（要点二：历史渊源）发出邀请：Are you looking forward to eating it? Come to my country,and I ll treat you to tanghulu真题演练【参考范文】Hi, Andrew, Welcome to China. So glad youll come and see me. In July, its quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too.

22、 Youd better bring shorts and T-shirts. A light raincoat would be good. Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts with a history of around 1,500 years. The art of paper cutting turns a simple thing into a beautiful piece of art. It sounds very easy but can be difficult to do. Paper cuttin

23、gs are usually put on windows and walls as symbols of good luck. See you soon. Li Hua【名师点评】1.例文点评：例文采用四段式结构，第一段表示问候，第二段介绍天气情况，第三段介绍中国传统剪纸艺术，第四段表示期待与对方见面；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；时态主要是一般现在时。2.高分亮点：短语：turn into；put on；good luck；welcome to；most of the day；with a history of。句型：In July, its quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. there be句型；Youd better bring shorts and T-shirts. had better do sth.表示提建议。