2013届高三英语复习写作专题讲座：第7讲 高级词汇和较复杂结构的写作与训练（新人教版）.ppt

1、第七讲高级词汇和较复杂结构的写作与训练写法指导针对训练专题讲座写作一、使用高级词汇词汇量能反映一个人知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标准。考生要想取得高分，就要强化使用复杂、高级的词汇。常用方法如下：1多实少虚写作中多用specific words，少使用general words，多用蕴含感情色彩的词语，少用中性词。如good指人时可用以下形容词替换：kind,honest,generous,selfless,brave,warmhearted,sympathetic,honorable,humorous,smart,gentle等；good指事物或事情时可用以下形容词替换：gr

2、eat,fantastic,splendid,marvelous,excellent,wonderful,meaningful,enjoyable,nice等。以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替，但远不如原句出彩。I hope everyone can have a time.He is a teacher.This is really a idea to go climbing Mount Hua this weekend.wonderfulwarmheartednice2短语优先多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。I can no longer the way he spe

3、aks to us.I can no longer the way he speaks to us.He what I said in the class.He what I said in the class.bearput up withdidn tlisten toturned a deaf ear to3弃旧取新写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学过的、较长的词汇。We all have the same chance.We all possess the same chance(opportunity)We have a_lot_of homework to do at the weeken

4、d.We have endless homework to do at the weekend.4避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a lib

5、rary where the old playground used to be.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also set_up a library where the old playground used to be.二、使用较复杂结构1在一篇文章中要适当地改变语法结构来增加文章表达方式的多样性。(1)改变时态和语态The bell is ringing now.There goes the bell!(2)使用名词性从句It disappointed everybody that t

6、he player was badly injured in the first round.The fact that the player was badly injured in the first round disappointed everybody.(3)使用较高级的状语从句I wont believe what you say.No matter what you say,I wont believe.(4)使用定语从句The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.The girl whose com

7、position was well written is spoken highly of.(5)使用虚拟语气You didnt take my advice,so you failed in the exam.If you had taken my advice,you wouldnt have failed in the exam.(6)使用倒装句Some valuable books and my credit cards are in it.In it are some valuable books and my credit cards.(7)使用强调句型He did not kno

8、w what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.2改变句子开头的方式。不要一味地采用“主语谓语宾语”的文法语序。可以适当地把一些成分(如状语)提前，放在句子的开头，这样使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏，增加书面表达的表现力。We met at the school gate and went to the Hongxing Farm together e

9、arly in the morning.Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went to the Hongxing Farm together.The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.Hearing the bad news,the young man couldnt help crying.3通过整合的方式，把几个松散的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来，也可以对所学的英语句式加以简化，使写出来的句子更加准确、得体、简洁、灵活。We had a sh

10、ort rest.Then we began to play happily.We sang and danced.Some told stories.Some played chess.After a short rest,we had great fun singing and dancing,telling jokes and playing chess.用更贴切的词或短语分别来代替画波浪线部分的词或短语1The boy realized the danger and began to run away._答案：was aware of2I have decided to study E

11、nglish better this term._ 答案：made up my mind3I dont know how to enlarge my vocabulary._ 答案：have no idea4Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us._；_答案：spare no efforts;promote5It is cold this winter.A drop of water will freeze in no time._答案：freezing6He is a nice student.He

12、 often makes us laugh and we have much fun with him._答案：humorous7Surprisingly,the little girl knows so many things._答案：To our surprise8She decorated her bedroom well._答案：wonderfully9The house is on the second floor,with two bedrooms,a bathroom and a kitchen._答案：flat10Peter is good to others.He alway

13、s gives away things to those in trouble._答案：generous.使用较复杂结构修改下面三段话，使其简洁、连贯、紧凑1Its a flat of 25 square meters.There is a bedroom in the flat.There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it,too.In the bedroom,there is a bed;there is a sofa,a desk and a chair as well._答案：Its a flat of 25 square meters,with a

14、bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.The bedroom is furnished with a bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair.2There is a new multimedia building on one side of the road.There used to be a playground on the other side.But there is a library now.There are all kinds of books,newspapers and magazines in the library.T

15、here is a new playground in the front of the school.There are a lot of trees in and around the school._答案：On one side of the road there is a new multimedia building.On the other side,where the playground used to be,now stands another new building our library,in which you can find all kinds of books,

16、newspapers and magazines.A new playground is now in the front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.3There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing.They serve passengers heart and soul.They play an important part in the traffic of Beijing.They make some mone

17、y.They work from dawn till night.One day,I left my cellphone in the taxi I took.I got in touch with the driver.He drove to my home and gave it back to me.I was very excited._答案：There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing,serving passengers heart and soul and playing an important part in the

18、traffic of Beijing.In order to make some money to support their families,they work from dawn till night.One day,I got out of the taxi in a hurry with my cellphone left in the taxi I took.On hearing what had happened,the taxi driver drove to my home as fast as possible and gave the cellphone back to me.Seeing my cellphone again,I was too excited to say a word.