2023新教材高考英语二轮专题复习 专题五 应用文写作（先文体 再添彩）第二讲 润色添彩“洋”气十足.docx

1、第二讲润色添彩“洋”气十足策略(一)“包装”让词汇高端起来1求新求变同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现，要使用不同的表达方式。如：2022全国甲卷It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the oceans, which play an important part in global ecosystem.It was set up to raise awareness of protecting the oceans, which play a crucial part in glob

2、al ecosystem.2022全国乙卷Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only make up 18% and 12% respectively.Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively.2021全国乙卷With the wide spread of the Internet，more

3、 and more people become online learners.With the wide spread of the Internet，an increasing number of people become online learners.2求准求精写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式，有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。2021全国乙卷In conclusion，we should find a way to study online better.In conclusion，we should find a way to study online more effic

4、iently.2021全国甲卷I am waiting for your early reply.I am waiting for your early reply eagerly/ with eagerness.3短语优先恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。2022全国乙卷However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students understand English better.

5、However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students gain a deeper understanding of English.2022新高考卷I believe that your arrival will be important to our show.I hold the firm belief that your arrival will be of great significance to our show.2

6、022全国乙卷As is shown by the figures of the chart, thanks to modern technology, many ways are available for students to polish their English.As is shown by the figures of the chart, thanks to modern technology, a wide range of ways are available for students to polish their English.针对训练1升级加黑词汇2022全国乙卷A

7、 recent survey suggests that most students being interviewed tend to learn English by listening to English songs._2022辽宁省联考二To make us know the importance of the environment protection, our school held a spring tree planting activity in the hill near our school last Saturday. _2022全国甲卷Countries shou

8、ld team up with one another to make practical plans regarding ocean protection._2022新高考卷I would appreciate it if you could consider my application._2021新高考卷When feeling sad，I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of good stories._策略(二)“换装”让句子新颖起来换用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩

9、。1特殊句式，风景独好(1)运用强调句：强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成为：强调句型基本结构为“Itis/was被强调部分that/who句子其他部分”；借助于助动词do/does/did对谓语动词进行强调。针对训练2对加黑部分进行强调2022浙江省五校5月联考Under your professional guidance, we have made such rapid progress in English._ we have made such rapid progress in English. 2022邯郸市一模We didnt

10、 go back to school until noon under the guidance of our teachers._ we went back to school under the guidance of our teachers.2022全国甲卷I believe that only with joined efforts can we have a better tomorrow.I _ that only with joined efforts can we have a better tomorrow. (2)运用倒装句，以示强调。在写作中，倒装句应用比较广泛，涉及的

11、句型也比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有：“only状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装；not only.but also.句子用部分倒装；在so/such.that.结构中，当so/such.位于句首时，其后的句子用部分倒装；表方位的副词或者表地点的介词短语置于句首且句子的主语是名词时，句子用全部倒装。针对训练3用倒装句式升级2022全国甲卷Oceans not only provide abundant resources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate development._ re

12、sources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate development.2022湖南师大附中模拟二We can make great progress in our progress only when we practice listening, speaking, reading, and writing English frequently.Only when we practice listening, speaking, reading, and writing English fre

13、quently _2021新高考卷读后续写Their father instructed them so patiently that the twins made the breakfast fast and well._ the twins made the breakfast fast and well.An old temple which dates back to Ming Dynasty stands at the foot of the mountain.At the foot of the mountain _，which dates back to Ming Dynasty

14、.(3)运用省略句，避免不必要的重复。针对训练4句型转换2022山东师范大学附中考前打靶When you prepare for the competition, you need to have much knowledge about Chinese stories._， you need to have much knowledge about Chinese stories.If it is possible，avoid going to crowded public places such as cinemas，shopping malls, Internet bars and so

15、 on._，avoid going to crowded public places such as cinemas，shopping malls, Internet bars and so on.2三大句式，编排巧妙(1)运用定语从句：针对训练5句型转换2022山东省德州市高三二模The activity will take place on March the 23rd, Saturday. The activity aims to promote Chinese culture.The activity, _， will take place on March the 23rd, Sat

16、urday.2022武汉市模拟一Various activities have been held. The purpose of them was to raise our awareness of campus safety.Various activities have been held, _ campus safety.2022青岛市高三一模My class went to Qingyuan community at 9：00 am. In Qingyuan community we were divided into five groups to care for the elde

17、rly and tell them some health knowledge.My class went to Qingyuan community at 9：00 am, _ and tell them some health knowledge.(2)运用名词性从句：针对训练6补全句子20223月福州市质量检测我十二岁生日，我最想要的是一辆新自行车。It was my twelfth birthday, and _. 2022全国甲卷不可否认，我们将共同努力，对海洋环境做出巨大贡献。_the marine environment with joined efforts.2022深圳市高三

18、二模这次经历给我的教训是，只有勇敢地承担失败的全部责任，而不是指责别人，才能取得成功。_ only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.(3)运用状语从句：针对训练7补全句子2022山东省淄博市二模我们首先需要接受自己，因为这有助于我们承认自己的缺点。通过这样做，当我们遇到失败时，我们更有可能吸取教训。We need to accept ourselves firstly _. By doing so, we are more likely to

19、learn the lessons _2022济南市高三模拟虽然这是一个非常简单的任务，但我很自豪，因为它在维持现场秩序方面发挥了重要的作用。_， I was very proud of it _ maintaining the order of the scene.3活用非谓语，让表达言简意赅用非谓语动词整合简单句、并列句或复合句，提升表达档次，使句子凝练高端。针对训练8用非谓语升级句式2022新高考卷I represent the English program of our schools radio station. Im writing to invite you to give a

20、n interview._ our schools radio station, Im writing to invite you to give an interview.2022新高考卷The radio program was founded in 2016. It aimed to provide a good platform for the students to share their school life.The radio program was founded in 2016, _ to share their school life.2021全国乙卷满分作文When w

21、e are faced with all kinds of information on the Internet, we cant tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.(用非谓语动词短语转换)_， we cant tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.4适时感叹，必要强调针对训练9补全句子2

22、020全国卷满分作文_ (我们玩得多么开心啊)! Not only did it give us relaxation，but also it got us closer to nature.2021新高考卷(早餐多么美味啊！)_！策略(三)“改装”让细节丰满起来在英语写作中，适当增加细节内容，能使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。1增加同位语或定语从句针对训练10补全句子2022南京市高考模拟卷一Im Li Hua, _ (来自中国的交换生), and Im looking for a roommate to corent a flat during my stay in the UK.2

23、022潍坊市高三二模 They dont have enough time to attend to the old people in their families, _ (这已经成为社会的一个问题).2列举具体的实例来补充说明such as./like.将来，我认为我们学校可以提供一些活动。2022全国乙卷In the future, I think our school could provide some activities such as reading book clubs or English corners to further inspire students intere

24、st in learning English.for example /instance如今，我们中的一些人在校园里养成了一些坏习惯。Nowadays, some of us have formed some bad habits on campus. For instance, some students leave the lights on in the daytime; some leave much food on the table after eating.3添加与所给信息有关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容针对训练11补全句子2022湖北省新高考协作体2月联考My c

25、lass went to China Science and Technology Museum._(为了更好地理解历史课上的“中国古代发明”), my class went to China Science and Technology Museum.2022全国乙卷As far as I am concerned, students should do more listening and speaking.As far as I am concerned, students should do more listening and speaking _(这样他们就能培养自己的沟通技巧).

26、 2022全国甲卷We will make a difference to the marine environment._(只要我们尽力), we will make a difference to the marine environment. 2022湘潭市一模However, many of us ignore the importance of good living habits.However, many of us ignore the importance of good living habits _ (通过吃垃圾食品和熬夜).I am more than delighte

27、d to share some details with you._ (知道您对我们的“珍爱生命”活动感兴趣), I am more than delighted to share some details with you.4表达感受、评价、愿望、倡议等针对训练12补全句子Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did.Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did _ (因

28、为我学到了耕种的知识).I think such activities are necessary and meaningful.I think such activities are necessary and meaningful，_ (从中我学到，如果可能的话，我们应该帮助有困难的人).2022焦作市第四次模拟I hold the firm belief that it was the most unforgettable lunch in my life.I hold the firm belief that it was the most unforgettable lunch in

29、 my life，_(因为它使我享受劳动的乐趣).策略(四)“化装”让语篇靓丽起来根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，使文章浑然一体。1表示“首先”的词语：first/firstly, first of all, to begin/start with等。First of all, we must make full use of every 45minute lesson.To begin with, smoking should be banned in public areas.2表示“其次”的词语：second/secondly, besides, in addi

30、tion, whats more, furthermore, moreover等。Secondly, we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.Whats more, good books can help us to develop good characters.2022武汉市五月模拟一Besides, our school made it a routine to have regular fire drills where we learned to face fire emergencies ca

31、lmly.3表示“最后”的词语：last/lastly, last but not least, most importantly等。Last but not least, health is also very significant for us students.Most importantly, reading those books opened a window for me to another world and gave me a new point of view.4表示“总之”的词语：in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one

32、word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general等。In a word，success is important，and so is failure，because its the mother of success.针对训练13补全句子_ (首先), as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon.2021全国乙卷满分作文_ (此外), we can tak

33、e the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.第二讲润色添彩， “洋”气十足针对训练1the majority ofraise our awareness ofwork outtake.into consideration/accountdepressed; imaginative针对训练2It was under your professional guidance thatIt was not until noon thatdo believe针对训练3Not only do oceans p

34、rovide abundantcan we make great progress in our progressSo patiently did their father instruct them thatstands an old temple针对训练4When preparing for the competitionIf possible针对训练5which aims to promote Chinese culturethe purpose of which was to raise our awareness ofwhere we were divided into five g

35、roups to care for the elderly针对训练6what I really wanted most was a new bicycleThere is no denying that we will make a difference toThe lesson I have drawn from this experience is that针对训练7because it helps us acknowledge our shortcomings; when we encounter failuresAlthough it was a very simple task; b

36、ecause it played an important role in针对训练8Representing the English program ofaiming to provide a good platform for the studentsFaced with all kinds of information on the Internet针对训练9What a wonderful time we hadHow delicious the breakfast was针对训练10(who is) an exchange student from Chinawhich has bec

37、ome a social problem针对训练11In order to better understand “Ancient Chinese Inventions” in the history classso that they can develop their communication skillsAs long as we try our bestby eating junk food and staying up lateKnowing that you are interested in our Cherish Life activity针对训练12because I got a knowledge of farming experiencefrom which I learn that we should help people who are in trouble if possiblebecause it made me enjoy the pleasure of labor针对训练13First of allBesides