2022版高考英语一轮复习 专题二十二 读后续写模拟训练(含解析).docx
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1、专题二十二读后续写【5年高考】Writing1(2021新高考适应卷)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Duringthispastyear,Ivehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadntbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsigns
2、thatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤顶),andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenheg
3、otasaw(锯子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinish
4、edthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billinthemanshand,buthewouldnttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddyc
5、ouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.注意:续写词数应为150左右。WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifIdhadlunch.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.答案写作提示KeyElements(要素)TimeDuringthispastyearPlaceOnthesideoftheroadCharactersAMexicanfamilyandITopicAMexicanfamilyhelpedmeout续写
6、方向Para.1WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifIdhadlunch.小女孩给我提供食物以及我的感受我与墨西哥一家人分手Para.2Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.在纸包里我发现了什么?我的感受是什么?Onepossibleversion:WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifIdhadlunch.Icastedasmileather,sayinggently, “No.” Onhearingthis,shebroughtmesomesol
7、idfoodaswellasvariousfreshfruitsandsaidexcitedly, “Thefruitsarefromthefarmwheremyparentswork.Ihopeyoulllikethem.” “Absolutely!” ItwasatthatmomentthatIcouldnthelpshowingmyappreciationforthebestlunchIhadeverenjoyed.Minuteslater,thefamilywarmlypassedmeapaperbag.BeforeIcouldthankthem,theydroveawayquickl
8、y.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Surprisingly,insidewasthemoneyIofferedjustnowwithanote,whichread, “Wehaveonlydonesomethingweshoulddo.Thanksforhavingagooddaywithyoutoday.” Thewordsmeltedmyheart.Withtearswellingupinmyeyes,IdecidedtohelpthosepeopleinneedliketheMexicanfamily.Thatwould
9、bethebestrewardforthefamily.Iknowonlyifeveryoneiswillingtohelpotherscantheworldbecomeabetterplacetolivein.Writing2(2020浙江7月)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside “thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”thetownofChurchilli
10、nManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbearslikeallwildanimalsshouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenImfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoung
11、malepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshar
12、d,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthoughhejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),
13、Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldntlastthrough30moreminutesofthebearspunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebearseyes,butdoesnthurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaket
14、owashhiseyes.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Paragraph2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.答案写作提示本文是一篇具有冒险色彩的记叙文。文章主题语境是“人与自然”,主题语境内容是作者冒险拍摄北极熊发生意外的惊险故事。原文讲述了作者和妻子正在营地准备晚饭时,一头北极熊被美味引诱
15、,意欲闯入。他们向营地经理求助。然而,最快的直升机也需要30分钟才能到达。作者按照营地经理给出的自救方案向北极熊喷胡椒粉喷雾剂,暂时驱赶走了北极熊。第一段的段首句是:几分钟后,北极熊返回到我们的营地。根据语境,这次它带有报复心理,因此会更加恼火。所以本段的描述应该是人与北极熊之间的对峙和较量。第二段的段首句是:就在那时,直升机到了。根据文章开始的信息和段首句,结局应当是人和北极熊都平安。所以,本段的描述主要是危机的解除。根据语境,续写一定要注意过程惊险,结局美好。千万不要出现任何有关人或北极熊受到伤害的残忍情节。Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Afewminutes
16、later,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Probablyangeredbythespray,thebearstartedattackingthefenceevenmoreviolently.Notknowingwhattodo,Ijuststoodtherefrozenwithterror.Apparently,Ellikeptamuchmoreclearheadfacingthiscriticalsituation.Shegrabbedabigpieceofgarlicbreadfromtheplateandthrewitacrossthefence,whichim
17、mediatelydrewthebearsattention.Thebearstoppedpoundingthefenceandwalkedtowardsthebread,buthewentbackagaininaminutewhenhefinishedthebread.Paragraph2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Thenoisesofthehelicopterfrightenedthebearaway,leapingclumsilyintothebush.Althoughhedisappearedtemporarily,wedaredno
18、tremainthereanymore.Climbingquicklyintothehelicopter,Islowlyrecollectedmyself!Atourrequest,thehelicoptercircledthesnowyareatofollowthebear,sothatwecouldtakemorephotographsofthebearrunningthroughthebush.Thedaywasreallyanadventure,butIthoughtitwasworthwhile.Thepicturestakenthatdaywereverybeautiful.Ife
19、lttheclose-upsnapswetookwereworththedangerweexperienced.Writing3(2018浙江6月)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.U
20、nclePaul,mydadsfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast
21、.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithm
22、e.Iwasntgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains. “Dontbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudontgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquieta
23、ndthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedouti
24、nfrontofmyhorse.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.答案写作提示根据续写第一段所给的段首句Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.可知,本段应该主要描写突然出现一只小兔子之后的故事。按照常理,突然出现的兔子一般会让马受惊。故本段应该描写马受惊后发生的事。从第二段的段首句Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.可以看出,作者和父亲迷路了。那么本段的故事主要根据迷路之后的情况展开。本段的主要内容应该是从迷路到回家的故事。写作时一定要注意以下两点
25、:第一,从本故事的发展来看,第一段是马受惊后发生的事,而第二段是迷路之后的故事,因此要注意人物心理和情感的描写。第二,注意两段的逻辑关系。要注意第一段的内容,尤其是段尾的内容和第二段段首句之间的衔接要合理,即第一段的最后一定要有迷路的情节设计。Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Thisunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitrunwildly.Itriedmybesttocontrolit,butinvain.Frig
26、htenedasIwas,Itriedtokeepmybalancetopreventmyselffromfallingoff.Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorsestoppedbeforeariver,outofbreath,andsodidI.Atthatmoment,mydadalsocameup.SeeingIwasOK,hewasquiterelieved.Butitwasclearthatwegotlost.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Wedidntknowwherethefarmhous
27、ewas.Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrackslowly.Butitwasreallydifficultforusinsuchadarksituation.Justaswewereatthepointofdesperation,weheardafaintvoicefromthedistance. “ItmustbeUnclePaul,” Isaid.Sowecriedbackwithexcitement.Finally,UnclePaulsafelybroughtusbackhome.Whatanamazingride!Writing4(
28、2017浙江11月)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymotherloving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,a
29、ndmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwedeverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,camp
30、ingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.WebravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwedreturnedhometogetthepurseandtravelerschecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andIllst
31、andoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.” Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?” “What?!Oh,Gosh.Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.” Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butwewerentabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdriving
32、invainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidntwefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections(反对).Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinks
33、everyoneintheworldisasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongthewa
34、y.答案写作提示原文是一篇有关家庭旅游生活的故事。文章内容贴近生活,考生容易发挥想象去续写。续写的内容应该还是按照家庭旅游的主线来进行,当然,涉及“妈妈健忘,但是很善良”的特点也是续写的关注点。Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsthereweresurprisinglybeautifulthewarmsunshine,thefreshair,thecleanwater.Wesaton
35、thegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.However,whenDadwasabouttoputupourtent,hewasdisappointedtofindthatithadbeenleftinthehotel.Well,Dadhadtogobacktofetchittocontinueourcamping.Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momwouldcheeruplikeachild.Sh
36、ewouldgetoffthecarexcitedly,laughinganddancingaround.Togetherweenjoyedthemodernsightsinthebigcities,thehistoricalbuildingsinthesmalltownsandtheamazingsceneryinnature.Whenwecamebacktothehotelafterthetiringbutexcellentvisit,Momwouldhugusandkissusonourfaces.Howsweetshewas!Absent-mindedandforgetfulasshe
37、was,sheneverforgottoexpressherlovetous.Writing5(2017浙江6月)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon
38、.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim. “Man,thatsabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasntadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Macsheartju
39、mped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMacsrelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMacsbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoqu
40、icklyrestartthechase(追赶).Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,hedbeeasilycaughtupandthewolfsteethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidntthin
41、kmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意:1.所续写短
42、文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Paragraph2:Afewminuteslater,theothercyclistsarrived.答案写作提示文章题材和野外生活相关,故事具有冒险性。原文是主人公Mac在和朋友一起外出骑车旅游时不幸遭遇饿狼的故事。就在最危险的时候Paul和Becky驱车走近。这样,精彩的故事进一步展开。本文故事设计具有很大发展空间。根据文章的第一段提示
43、句,本段应该描述Paul 和Becky是如何帮助Mac脱险的,而根据第二段的提示句,本段则应该是Mac 的朋友到来之后发生的事。考生可以根据自己的理解和想象进行合理的续写。一定要注意续写的内容的合理性,不可脱离原文的故事无限发展。Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macrusheddownfromhisbicycleandwavedatthepeopleinsidethecarforhelp.PaulandBeckyinsidethecargotoutimmediatelytohelphimclimb
44、intothecar,inspiteofthedangerthatthefiercewolfwasrunningnear.TheyquicklypushedMacintotheircarandclosedallthedoorsashardaspossible,legstremblingandbreathless.Seeingthis,thewolfstillhowledoutsidethecarforsometimeandthenleftunwillingly.Paragraph2:Afewminuteslater,theothercyclistsarrived.Macsfriendswere
45、shockedtohearthestoryandverygratefultotheyoungcouple.Macinvitedallofthembacktohishomefordinnerandheintroducedhiswifeanddaughterstohistwonewfriendswhosavedhislife.Duringthedinnertheyrecalledtheadventureandtalkedaboutthewaystodealwithsuchdangeroussituations.【3年模拟】每篇建议用时:25分钟A组20192021年模拟基础题组Writing1(2
46、021届辽宁丹东高三10月阶段测试)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mygreat-grandfather,mygrandfatherandmyfatherwerefarmers.MyfatherhadafixedideathatIwouldbecomeafarmertoo.AlthoughIrespectedhimandwasindeedskilledatdoingsomefarmwork,IdidntagreethatIshouldautomaticallyfollowinmyfathersfootsteps.WhenIwasateenager,m
47、yfatherhappenedtotakemetoanairportwhichbelongedtooneofhisfriends.ItwasthefirsttimeIhadseenanaeroplaneinreallife.KnowingthatIhadneverbeenonboard,myfathersfriendTomofferedmeanopportunitytoflywithhiminhissmallaeroplane.Iquicklyacceptedhisoffer!Whenwetookoff,Ifeltnervousbutthrilled.Beingupinthecloudsand
48、lookingattheviewbelowwasunlikeanythingIhadeverfelt.Iwasjustenjoyingit.Iassumedbeingapilotwouldbethemostawesomethinginthewholeworld.FromthatdayathoughtcreptintomymindthatIwantedtobecomeapilot,butIdoubtedwhethermyfatherwouldsupportme.Afterall,itwasatotallydifferentpathfromwhathehadplannedforme.Therefo
49、re,Iputthethoughttothebackofmymind,becauseIknewhewouldstillinsistonholdingontohispreviousidea.Anyway,besideshelpingmyfatheronthefarm,IwouldfrequentlyvisitTomsairport.Gradually,IgotfamiliarwitheverybuttonandswitchontheaircraftandIlearnedalotaboutplanes,suchashowtofilltheplanewithfuel,howtochecktheeng
50、inesandsoon.ButwhatIhadlearnedjustleftmewantingmore,soIdecidedtogotocollegetobecomeaprofessionalpilot.注意:续写词数应为150左右。ThistimeIwouldnothidemydesireanymore.Atthegraduationceremony,withmyfatherpresent,I,as “BestPilot”,hadtodeliveraspeech.答案写作提示1.文章讲述了作者不想成为农民,而梦想成为一名飞行员的事情。2.续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:这次我不再掩饰我的渴望
51、了。所以接下来应该围绕我向父亲表达了想成为飞行员的梦想展开。根据第二段已给信息得知,我说出自己的想法后,父亲应该同意并支持了我。在本段应描写我的心理活动及父亲的做法和状态。第二段开头是:父亲出席了我的毕业典礼,在典礼上,我作为“最佳飞行员”必须发表演讲。本段应围绕我演讲的内容,描述我为实现梦想付出的努力。最后可以描述父子之间感情的升华,如父亲为我实现梦想而骄傲等。Onepossibleversion:ThistimeIwouldnothidemydesireanymore.Determinedtofollowmyheart,IexplainedtomyfatherhowIfelt.Itoldh
52、imthatIwantedtogotocollegetolearntoflyinsteadofbeingafarmer.Aftersayingthis,Iwaitednervouslyforhisreaction.Tomysurprise,heapprovedofmyrequest,andhetoldmehewasmovedbymyperseverance.Withhissupportandmyefforts,Iwasadmittedintomyidealcollege.Atthegraduationceremony,withmyfatherpresent,I,as “BestPilot”,h
53、adtodeliveraspeech.Inmyspeech,Isharedwiththeaudiencemystoryabouthowateenagerrealizedhisdream.Facedwithdifficulties,Itookapaththatledmedosomethingthatneededpassion,trainingandpractice.Ialsoowedmysuccesstomyfatherssupport.Withouthisunderstanding,Icouldnthavepursuedmydream.Attheendofmyspeech,Ispottedmy
54、fatherswateryeyes,andsaid, “Dad,Imadeit!” Hisfacelitupwithpride.Writing2(2021届山东烟台高三上学期期中)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Lungsnearlybursting,Istruggledtoliftmyheadoutofthewater.Inchbyinch,mytiredbodyreachedfortheendofthepool.Theextentofmyswimmingcareerwaspurelyrecreational,whilethecompetitives
55、wimmersnearbythoughtnothingoftheseeminglysimpletaskofa500-meterswimtest.PushingmyselftofinishwhatIhadstarted,Icouldonlythink:whynottaketheeasywayout?Earlierthatweek,Ihadturnedinmyfirstjobapplicationatalocalpool.Overqualified,Iwashiredonthespot.However,thetaskswereboring:helpingconfusedvisitorsandmea
56、suringtheheightofchildrenbeforetheywentdowntheslide,thosesortsofthings.Iwascapableofmore.Soaswimtestwasrequired,establishingthemerefactthatIwasnotcompletelyhelplessinapool.Midwaythroughthetest,themanageradministeringthetestremarked, “Thislooksreallyeasyforyou.Whyarentyouapplyingtobecomeaguard?”“Thet
57、houghthadntcrossedmymind.”“Well,lifeguardingdemandsmoreresponsibility,strengthandrespect.Thusthepositionpays$2moreperhour.Yourswimmingskillsarestrongenough.Allyouneedtodoistocompleteacertificationclass.”InsideIwasunsureofmyself,buthiswordsinspiredmeYouneverknowwhatyouarecapableofuntilyouforceyoursel
58、ftodoit.SoonIpassedtheswimtest.Allleftwastopracticeandlearnfirstaid,CPR(心肺复苏),andproceduresfordifferentlandandwater-basedemergencies.Workstartedsoon.Awell-intentionedyetanxiousfeelinginmesoonpassed.Days,weeks,andmonthswentbywithoutincident;emergencieswererare.TheskillsandtrainingIhadsocarefullystudi
59、edandacquiredseemedunnecessary.Todayappearedtobeanotheruneventfulday.However,shortlyaftertheotherguardssignaledtothechildrentoexitthepool,Inoticedoneboywasstillinthemiddlewhiletheothershadclimbedup.注意:续写词数应为150左右。“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,” Ithoughttomyself.Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeart
60、ohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.答案写作提示1.文章讲述了作者向一家游泳馆递交了第一份工作申请,完成一些诸如帮助困惑的游客,在孩子滑下滑梯之前测量他们的身高等事情。在进行测试时,经理提议让作者去当一名救生员,于是作者采纳了这个建议。经过一系列培训,作者成为了一名救生员,但好像所学的东西也无用武之地。2.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“他一定是出了什么问题,我心想。”可知,第一段可描写作者发现并营救这个溺水男孩的经过。由第二段首句内容“让男孩躺在地板上,我把耳朵凑到他的嘴边,手指放在他的脖子上。”可知,第二段可描写作者如何运用自己学过的救生知识救了这个孩子的。3.续写线
61、索:发现男孩溺水抱起男孩实施急救男孩恢复知觉松了口气。Onepossibleversion:“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,” Ithoughttomyself.Sureenough,withacloserlook,Ifoundtheboywavinghishandsdesperately.Iquicklydivedintothewaterandswamtowardstheboyatfullspeed.BythetimeIreachedhim,hehadsunktothebottomofthepool,hisheadhangingdown,whichfil
62、ledmyheartwithfrightandconcern.Ipickedtheboyupandheadedtothepoolside,keepinghisheadabovethewater.Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.Icouldtellthathehadnoheartbeatandwasntbreathing.Everysecondcounted!Withouthesitation,Ididfirstaid,givinghimmouth-to-mouthbreathinganddoingC
63、PRastrained.Otherguardswatchinganxiously,Icarriedon,sweating.Suddenly,astreamofwaterburstoutofhismouthandtheboycoughedintensely.Seeingtheboyregainconsciousness,thosearoundbrokeintocheers.Exhausted,Isighedwithrelief.IthoughthadIacceptedthateasyposition,Iwouldhavebeennothingbutabystander.ImhappyIdidnt
64、taketheeasywayout.Writing3(2021届广东新高考适应性测试卷一)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Kentwasamanagerofafurnitureagency.Hisestablishmentnearlywentbankrupt(倒闭)becauseofthewrongdecisionhehadmade.Hewassoregretfulanddepressedthatheplannedtodrivetoabaralonetoreleasehisemotions.Itwasnearmidnightinanextremelyc
65、oldwinter,andthetemperaturewasminus9degreescentigrade.Therewerefewpeopleinthestreet.Suddenly,afigureofanoldmadamenteredhislineofsight.Shewasstandingsidewaysnearaplatform,dressedinaplaincoat,draggingasuitcase,andholdingaplasticbagintheotherhand.Theoldladywasseeminglymorethan80.Shewastremblingincuttin
66、gwind.NowshekeptmotioningKentforaride.AlthoughKentwassomewhatangryabouttheoldmadamsdisturbing,hewouldntliketoleaveherinthecoldnight.Henoticedshecoughedviolentlyandthoughtthatshemightbeillandreallyneededhelp.Sohebrakednearher.Themadamsaid,“Wouldyoupleasetakemeforaride?Icanofferdoublefare.” Kentinterr
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