专题17 书面表达-2020-2021学年八年级英语下学期期末专项复习（外研版）.doc

1、专题17 书面表达第一部分 题型解题技巧一、书面表达题型简介英语书面表达试题属综合性运用试题，是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是“压轴题”，属中考英语重大题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语成绩总成绩能否考好非常重要。二、书面表达题型做题技巧 书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写

2、作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁.第二部分 书面表达专项训练一、看图作文1书面表达 （共15分）新学期开始，你就读的国际学校的学生社团又开始招募了。假设你是社团负责人，请根据以下内容和要求写一篇英语短文，为新同学介

3、绍下列社团的情况(包括名称、活动内容及其目的)。注意：1. 词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。否则不予评分。Welcome to school clubsThe new term is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs.These are the most popular clubs in our school, and hope you can join us.二、材料作文2 现如今许多野生动物濒临灭绝，它们的家园遭到

4、破坏。WWF（The World Wild Fund for Nature）将举办一次演讲比赛宣传保护野生动物，假如你是李华，请以“We should protect wild animals!”为题，结合以下提示，写一篇演讲稿参赛。We should protect wild animals!描述野生动物的现状与濒危原因给出保护动物的相关措施或建议。1. 人类的捕杀2. 1. 建立自然保护区2. 注意：（1）内容必须包含表格中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；（2）文本长度：100词左右；（3）文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学校名称。参考词汇：自然保护区nature reserves 研究中心r

5、esearch centres_三、话题作文3 10月4日是世界动物日，你校举办了“Protecting animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请根据下面表格的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语演讲稿。内容要点:现状很多动物濒临灭绝原因人们侵占了它们的土地和森林；没有足够多的干净水意义我们应该保护动物，动物是人类的朋友 打算Hello, everyone. Im Li Hua._四、书信作文4 假如你是李明，你的美国朋友Martin现正受疫情影响，在家上网课。请你写一封邮件告诉他你前段时间上网课的经历和感受，及提高网课学习效果的建议，供他参考。注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

6、：2. 90词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 不得出现真实姓名或学校。提示词：e-lessons网课, Ting Talk钉钉, video meeting视频会议, upload上传, download下载Dear Martin, How is it going? _Love, Li Ming五、日记5 上周六，英语老师带领同学们到儿童医院做志愿活动，并要求大家写一篇日记描述此次志愿活动的过程。假如你是张娟，请你根据下面的提示，完成日记。写作提示：1.为儿童医院的儿童送礼物；2.帮助那里的儿童洗衣服，打扫房间；3.做一些有趣的活动，给那里的儿童带去欢乐。写作要求：1.语句通顺，条

7、理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；2.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。March13thSaturday Sunny_.六、讲稿6 假设你叫张翔，是一名初二学生。你们英语老师让同学们在课堂上准备一个英语演讲，主题是“How to deal with accidents”，请你根据下表内容，写一篇英语演讲稿。意外事故处理办法做饭烫伤手首先把手放在冷水中10分钟；然后用干净的手巾盖上烫伤处；赶紧去看医生遇到火灾用湿手巾捂住口和鼻子，贴近地面，尽快出去；绝不要回到着火的房子里拿东西；拨打119，拨打120，要求:1.包含所有给出的信息，可适当发挥;2. 80词左右开头和结尾已给出.不计入总词数。

8、Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents._七、启事类7小作文：根据要求完成下面内容，并将答案写在答题卡的相应位置“老吾老以及人之老，幼吾幼以及人之幼。”这句经典名言鼓励着我们友爱互助。幸福老人院（Happy Old Peoples Home）需要数名志愿者，要求志愿者有特长，有爱好，有爱心，能和老人友好相处。请为老人院写一则招聘广告，联系电话：8686000。词数3040。Volunteers Wanted_参考答案1书面表达参考范文Welcome to school clubsThe new term

9、 is coming. For all our new students, I would like to introduce some of our clubs.Cool Players is a good choice for sports lovers. Here you can do sports one hour a day to make you healthy and strong, and you can watch sports matches. If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice. R

10、eading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes. Do you want to be a volunteer? If so, you can join Happy Volunteers and take part in shows or help needy people in the city.These are the most popular clubs in our school, and hope you can join us

11、.【解析】试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以所提供内容写一篇作文，即介绍三个社团的情况(包括名称、活动内容及其目的)。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作要点，即：每个俱乐部的主要内容。一是俱乐部名称；二是俱乐部活动内容；三是俱乐部的目的。乐善者俱乐部的活动内容与目的需要我们自己补充。主要内容虽然已经列出，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从三个方面介绍了每一个俱乐部，介绍了俱乐部的名称、活动内容和目的，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要

12、作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如Do you want to be a volunteer? If so, you can join Happy Volunteers and take part in shows or help needy people in the city.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice.等。考点：提纲类作文。2书面表达参考范文We should protect wild animalsManyan

13、imalsareindangerintheworldtoday.The number of the wild animals is smaller and smaller. Tigersandpandasareexamplesofthem.Whenpeoplecutdowntrees,tigershavenoplacetoliveorhuntforfood.Soonpeoplekilltigersfortheirfur.Also,therearefewerandfewerplacesforpandastolivein.Wearenotaloneintheworld.Wecouldnotlive

14、withoutplantsandanimalsaroundus, soitsveryimportanttoprotectthem.Andwemuststoppeoplefromkillinganimals.We should set up nature reserves to protect wild animals. We should have some research centres to study the endangered species and do some effective work to protect them. Ifeachofuscanplantatreeand

15、lovetheanimals,theworldwillbemorebeautiful.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示表格，写出野生动物现在的现状和原因以及要采取的措施和建议，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要与题目中的提示紧密结合，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。3书面表达参考范文Protecting animalsHello, everyone. Im Li Hua.Now many animals are on the verge of extinctio

16、n. Because people have encroached on their land and forests. The water is no longer clean. Many of them dont have enough clean water to drink. Besides, many people kill some wild animals for their fur, skin, teeth and meat.However, we all know that animals are human friends. We must protect animals.

17、 I will be kind to my pet dog and plan to feed the stray cats regularly on weekends.We should plant more trees to build homes for wild animals and prevent them from being killed. Lets protect wild animals together. Thank you!【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“Protecting animals”为题，根据写作提示，谈一谈动物濒临灭绝的原因和保护动物的意义和打算。

18、2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第三、第一人称和一般现在时为主，以一般将来时为辅来叙述；写作时承接开头，要写出动物濒临灭绝的原因及保护动物的意义和打算，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。4书面表达参考范文Dear Martin, How is it going? Because of COVID-19, I had to take e-lessons. The e-lessons for middle school students are very wonderful. It includes all the lessons from the seventh to the nin

19、th. I always read the schedule before I take the eighth lessons every time. The teachers used Ting Talk for video meetings. We all uploaded our homework and downloaded files by Ting Talk. However, it didnt have the air of the classroom and sometimes it was very easy for me to feel bored and tired. I

20、n my view, we shouldnt say no to new forms of online learning just because they are not perfect yet, and it is up to us to make the tools better in the future. You should hand in your homework on time. So if you want to improve yourself, please take the online course seriously.Thats all. I hope you

21、can learn something from it.Love, Li Ming【详解】题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求写一封邮件给美国朋友Martin，告诉他你前段时间上网课的经历和感受, 以及对提高网课学习效果的建议。写作指导：写作时主要用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称用第一人称，例文可采用四段式；第一段是问候；第二段讲前段时间上网课的经历和感受，把要点及提示词融入到文章当中；第三段说明自己对提高学习效果的建议；第四段提出希望。注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡。5书面表达参考范文March 13thSaturday SunnyLast Saturday,our E

22、nglish teacher took our class to Childrens Hospital to visit the sick kids. When we arrived there,we gave those sick kids the gifts that we prepared for them. They were very excited and liked the gifts very much. Then,we helped to wash clothes and clean the rooms. We also did some interesting activi

23、ties with them,such as singing,dancing and telling stories.Im glad to take part in such a volunteer activity. Seeing the look of joy on the sick kids faces,we felt very happy.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记作文。假定你是张娟，根据提示写志愿者活动，记录过程。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据志愿活动的过程，列出写作要点及每个要点中可

24、能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。6书面表达参考范文Hi, everyone. Here are my tips on how to deal with some accidents.If you burn your hands when you cook, first keep your hands in cold water for ten minutes, and then cover the burn with a clean towel and g

25、o to see the doctor quickly. If your building is on fire, you should cover your mouth and nose with a wet towel. Stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible. Never go back into the burning building for anything. Dont try to put out the fire by yourself. Remember to call 119. If any

26、one is hurt in the fire, you should call 120.I hope my tips will be of some help to you.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇讲稿作文。主题是“How to deal with accidents”，根据表格内容，写一篇英语演讲稿。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第二人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。第一段引出主题；第二段分别叙述两种意外事故下的处理办法；第三段收尾。语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。7书面表达参考范文Volunteers

27、WantedHappy Old Peoples Home need several volunteersRequirements：1、Special skills are preferred：for example，singing，dancing，etc2、Need love，can get along well with the old manAnd you mustbe able to bear the hardshipIf you meet these requirements，you can call 8686000【解析】【详解】本文是一则招聘广告。要求为幸福老人院（Happy Old Peoples Home）写一则招聘数名志愿者的广告，要求志愿者有特长，有爱好，有爱心，能和老人友好相处。在写作时要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅。同时注意语义要通顺，符合逻辑关系；上下文之间可以适当使用连接词，注意描述的全面性；不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。10原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！