英语必修Ⅱ北师大版UNIT6金牌课件（共14张）写作.ppt

1、Writing原句1Qi Baishis style of painting often leaves the audience guessingand makes them use their imagination.齐白石的绘画作品常给观赏者留下猜想和发挥想象力解读其内涵的空间。点评leave sb.doing.让某人(持续)做仿写(1)他们离开了，留下我一个人在那继续工作。_(2)你刷牙时不要让水一直哗哗地流着。_They went off and left me alone continuing with my job there.Dont leave the water runnin

2、g when you brush your teeth.原句2But the house on Mango Street is not the way they described itat all.但是芒果街的房子根本不是他们描述的那样。点评定语从句的先行词为 the way，且在从句中作状语，关系词可用 that,in which 或省略。仿写(1)我真不喜欢他妻子对待老人的方式。_(2)我们要尽量理解他的思维方式。_I really dont like the way(that/in which)his wife treats the old.We should try our best

3、 to understand the way he thinks.描述你理想的房子1本单元的写作话题是描述你理想的房子，其写作步骤如下：(1)构思你心目中理想的房子想象一下，你心目中最理想的房子是什么样的，如你的房子坐落在什么地方？周围环境如何？是独院还是公寓？是钢筋混凝土楼房还是木屋？房子的结构是怎么样的？有多少房间？有什么特别之处？(2)列出写作提纲将所搜集的素材分类，确定文章的结构。也可以按照下列提纲写作：Paragraph 1:introductionlocation/what kind/surroundings,etc.Paragraph 2:rooms and the layout

4、how many/what rooms/where they are,etc.Paragraph 3:special features of the house/flatParagraph 4:conclusionwhy you want to live there(3)写作确定写作提纲，然后按照提纲，详细描述你梦想的房子。2写作时应注意下列问题：(1)根据写作的空间或逻辑顺序，恰当地使用过渡语。(2)尽量多使用关于房屋、家具等的词汇。如：房屋的种类：villa(别墅),cottage,flat,detached(独立式的)house,semidetached(半独立式的)house,mans

5、ion(豪宅),woodcabin(木屋).房间的名称：study,bathroom,toilet,games room,living room,kitchen,hall,attic(阁楼),cellar(地下室),dining room,music room,sitting room,gymnasium.家具设施：curtains,chair,washbasin,table,sofa,desk,bookshelves,bed,lamp.(3)写完全文后，要检查全篇布局是否合理，每段内容是否具有明确的中心，是否恰当地使用了转接词，是否有语法错误、单词拼写错误等。【典例】假设你和父母现在居住的房

6、子非常的小，生活虽然艰苦但却很幸福。作为学生的你觉得一定要努力学习，以便将来能买一座理想中的房子。现在发挥你的想象力，用英语描写你理想中的房子。写作内容1你理想中房子的格局；2你可以在房子中做些什么。写作要求1可以适当展开想象；2词数 100 左右。参考范文Im now _(live)in a small house with my parents.Lifefor us is hard _ happy.I must study hard _ I canbuy a big new house some day.I call _ a dream house.livingbutso thatitIt

7、 has three floors with five bedrooms,three bathrooms,twobig dining rooms and two living rooms._(当时候)my friends come to visit me,I will have enough bedrooms forthem.Well have a good time._(除了)that,we will havea swimming pool behind the house and a garden in front of the house.In the morning,my parent

8、s can _(做锻炼)in thegarden.The air must be very fresh.When we feel tired,we can havea swim in the swimming pool.Life will be easy for us.Ill study harder than before so that the dream can _(实现)WhenBesidesdo some exercisecome true【针对训练】请你根据以下的内容提示写一篇英语短文来描述你理想中的房子。写作内容1房子是别墅，很大，坐落在海边，有两个院子，前院有个大花园，后院有游

9、泳池，家人可以经常游泳；2一楼中央是大厅，右边是休息室，左边是书房，二楼有六个卧室，旁边都有洗澡间；3别墅装备现代，有安全系统、可视电话、自动门，特别设计了地下供热系统；4我喜欢假期的时候待在别墅，因为特别安静。写作要求1必须包括以上的内容，也可适当增加细节，但不可逐字翻译；2词数 100 左右。参考范文：My dream house is a modern villa located on the coast.There aretwo yards in the villa.The front yard is a garden with many beautifulflowers and pl

10、ants for the four seasons.In the back yard is a swimmingpool so that my family can swim often.On the first floor,there is a big hall.On the right of the hall is asitting room,where we can relax,entertain,and most importantlyenjoy ourselves.On the left is a study belonging to me.On the secondfloor,th

11、ere are six bedrooms with neighboring bathrooms.My villa is equipped with modern facilities,such as securityalarms controlled by computers,vision phones，and automatic doors.Itis specially designed to have a under floor heating system.I would liketo stay in my villa in the vacations because it is very peaceful.I willfeel calm and refreshed when I come back to my real world.