2021-2022学年高一英语外研版必修1学案：MODULE 4 SECTION Ⅴ　GUIDED WRITING WORD版含解析.doc

1、介绍一个地区一、写作要领介绍一个地区属于说明文的范畴，写此类文章需注意以下几个方面：1内容：一般包括该地区的地理位置、地貌特征、历史文化、风土人情等，也可以描述该地区的发展变化。2结构：写作时可分为三部分：开头部分对该地区进行简单概括；主体部分详细介绍其特点；结尾部分对该地区进行总体评价。3顺序：可以由总体到局部，由远及近，按时间、空间或逻辑顺序来描述。4时态：如果对该地区进行一些客观描写及主观发挥，一般以现在时为主；如果对比过去则用过去时；展望未来则可以用将来时。二、增分佳句1Our hometown is located in the middle of Shandong Province

2、.我们的家乡位于山东省中部。2Our school，which takes up 63，000 square meters，is the largest one in size。我们学校占地63 000平方米，是面积最大的一所学校。3The square is 2，000 meters long/in length and 1，500 meters wide/in width.这个广场长2 000米，宽1 500米。4It has a population of about 200 thousand.它拥有约20万人口。5In the center of the city lies a bea

3、utiful park where you can relax yourself after work.在市中心有一个美丽的公园，在那里你可以在工作后放松自己。6This is a village with a long history，but it has changed a lot in the past decades.这是一个拥有悠久历史的村庄，但最近几十年它已经改变了许多。7The attractive and fascinating views in this country attract lots of tourists all over the world every yea

4、r.这个国家的具有吸引力的、迷人的风景每年都会吸引全世界的很多游客。8The best time to visit Beijing is autumn，when the weather is neither too hot nor too cold.参观北京最好的季节是秋季，那时天既不太热也不太冷。你校英语报征集城市介绍的稿件，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，介绍一下中国的海滨城市青岛。1青岛位于山东省东部；2是我国著名的旅游城市和避暑胜地；3以蓝色的大海和美丽的海滨而闻名；4青岛啤酒闻名世界，海鲜也非常吸引人；5近年来青岛发展日新月异，对我国的对外贸易发展起着重要作用。注意：1.词数100左

5、右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁：本文介绍某一地区，属于说明文；2确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；3确定时态：以一般现在时为主。二、构思第一部分，引入：整体介绍青岛。第二部分，阐述：详细介绍青岛的特色。第三部分，总结：介绍青岛的重要地位。第二步：核心词汇想周全1lie in/be located in位于；坐落于2tourism city 旅游城市3summer resort 避暑胜地4be famous for 以闻名5tens of thousands of 成千上万的6sightseeing 观光7besides/whats more

6、 而且8play an important part in 在起重要作用第三步：由词扩句雏形现1青岛位于山东省东部，是中国著名的旅游城市和避暑胜地。(and连接两个并列分句)Qingdao is located in the east of Shandong Province and it is a famous tourism city and summer resort in China.2青岛以蓝色的大海和美丽的海滩而闻名。(简单句)Qingdao is famous for its blue sea and beautiful beaches.3产于青岛的青岛啤酒世界闻名。(which

7、引导定语从句)Qingdao Beer which is made in Qingdao is known all over the world.4青岛美味的海鲜也非常吸引人。(主系表结构)Delicious seafood is also a strong attraction in Qingdao.5近年来青岛发展日新月异。(主谓结构；change)Qingdao has changed a lot in recent years.6它对我国的对外贸易发展起着重要作用。(主谓宾结构)It plays an important part in the development of the f

8、oreign trade of our country.第四步：句式升级造亮点1用过去分词短语作状语改写句1Located in the east of Shandong Province, Qingdao is a famous tourism city and summer resort in China.2用过去分词短语作定语改写句3Qingdao Beer made in Qingdao is known all over the world.3用take place改写句5Great changes have taken place in Qingdao in recent year

9、s.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇_参考范文Have you ever been to Qingdao? Its a beautiful and attractive city.Located in the east of Shandong Province, Qingdao is a famous tourism city and summer resort in China. It is famous for its blue sea and beautiful beaches. Tens of thousands of people come to visit Qingdao for sightseeing every summer. Whats more, Qingdao Beer made in Qingdao is known all over the world. And delicious seafood is also a strong attraction in Qingdao.Great changes have taken place in Qingdao in recent years. It plays an important part in the development of the foreign trade of our country.