Unit 2 写作主题：校园生活-2022-2023学年八年级英语上册单元话题写作（牛津译林版）.docx

1、Unit 2 School life写作主题：校园生活一、话题分析本单元的话题是“校园生活”，要求学生能简单介绍自己或他人的校园生活，本单元写作要求同学们能根据相关信息提示简单地介绍自己或他人的校园生活。内容包括学校人员、科目、文体活动、作息时间等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：1. 能用fewer, more, less等进行比较；2. 能用副词的比较级连接句子；3. 能正确使用标点符号；4. 能正确书写英语句子。二、写作步骤步骤一：确定介绍校园生活的内容和顺序。步骤二：列举介绍校园生活的句型，多多益善。步骤三：成段成篇，修改完善。三、词汇积累1 go on a school trip

2、 参加学校旅行2 a mixed school 一所混合学校3 a Reading Week 一个读书周4 bring in books and magazines 带来书和杂志5 near the end of 在快要结束时6 offer me help 给我提供帮助7 read an article by a boy from the USA 读了一个美国男孩的文章8 spend time on/doing sth. 花时间做某事9 have fewer weeks off 有更少星期的休假10 at most 最多11 look through 浏览，快速查看12 at first 起初

3、，首先13 keep (on) doing sth. 继续，重复做某事14 have lots of time for after-school activities 有许多时间进行课外活动15 at lunchtime 在午餐时间四、句型积累My ideal school starts at . and finishes at .We have an hour for .I have . because I think . is very interesting.I love. so I have . every day.There is .We have lots of .Every .

4、we go on a school trip.五、写作训练1校团委正举行“畅想未来”的征文活动, 请根据提示, 以“My ideal school life”为题, 写一篇100词左右的短文。现 在未 来至少写两点现在的情况。1. 多彩的校园生活(课外活动)2. 多样的学习方式(网上学习)3. 和谐的人际交往(交友互助)4. 丰富的校外活动(做志愿者)要求: 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息, 并作适当的发挥;开头及结尾已给出, 不计入总词;不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。My ideal school lifeI am a student in Grade 9, _I hope _

5、This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true some day.2根据下列问题提示写一篇题为My School Life的文章 Is your school life enjoyable? What changes would you like to see in your school? What do you think of these changes?My School Life_3某校英语报举办了主题为Enjoy your junior high school life的征文活动。假如你是九年级学生李军，请给

6、七年级的学弟学妹们提出合理化的建议(见下表)，并向校报投稿。Enjoy Your Junior High School LifeStudyPut your time to good useHobbyTake up a hobby to relaxFriendshipValue your true friend注意：（1）征文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；（2）词数：80-110；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。My dear classmates,How are you going on these days? Are you enjoying your junior high sch

7、ool life? If not, my following advice may be helpful to you. _1 【参考范文】My ideal school lifeEveryone has their own ideal school. I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful. Im very happy to study in the school. We have five classes every day. I like all the lessons, because the lessons ar

8、e very interesting. And we can choose our favorite lessons to learn. At noon, we have an hours rest time. During the rest time, we can chat with each other. I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful. We can play many ball games after school every day. There are many organizations and

9、clubs in our school. I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in. I would like to join many clubs, too. Of course, if you want to live in the school, you can do it. Most of the students like staying in school, because the school is very comfortable. Doing homework is part of t

10、he school life, but the work is not much, and very easy. We often use e-mails to send our homework to the teacher. Our teachers and classmates are very helpful and kind. If you have a problem, you can ask the teacher and classmates, they will help you. During my holidays, I want to be volunteer to h

11、elp others in need. In a word, my ideal school is like this. I hope my dream will come true one day.【范文点评】这是一篇命题作文，所给材料比较简单，因此需要根据提示适当发挥。重点写“未来的学校生活”，围绕“多彩的校园生活”，“ 多样的学习方式”，“和谐的人际交往”以及“丰富的校外活动”这四点进行描述。由于写的是“未来的学校生活”，因此时态方面以一般将来时为主，人称为第一人称。【点评】做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好

12、连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。2 【参考范文】My School LifeMy school life is not so enjoyable. I have to do a lot of homework every day, so I have no time to take part in more activities and have trips to other places. Although I have computer lessons every week, two students have to share a computer. I hope th

13、at everyone in my class can have a computer at school. It would be necessary and convenient for every student to have a computer at school. We can chat with each other online and write to each other by e-mail and we will become good friends.【范文点评】本文是命题作文和提示作文。要求以 My School Life 为题，根据提示介绍一下学校生活，要求包括提

14、示中所有内容，并可适当增加内容，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系，符合英语表达习惯。本文主要使用第一人称，一般现在时。【点评】考查命题作文和提示作文。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整，时态运用灵活准确，一些固定短语，如 a lot of 很多， take part in 参加， chat with each other 互相聊天，及句型结构 Although I have computer lessons every week, two students have to share a computer. I hope that everyone in

15、my class can have a computer at school. 运用较为恰当，使得文章更加流畅，自然。3 【参考范文】My dear classmates, How are you going on these days? Are you enjoying your junior high school life? If not, my following advice may be helpful to you.The first piece is for your study. Remember to put your time to good use so that yo

16、u can study efficiently and get good results. Second, you can spare some time for hobbies. Taking up a hobby like collecting something or exercising is a way to help you relax in your busy life. Third, nobody can be happy without friends. So find your true friends and value your friendship which may

17、 last your lifetime. Last but not least, always be positive. Hope for a bright future and work hard for it. The junior high is the time you will never experience again, so just enjoy it.【范文点评】这是一篇提纲类作文。按照所提示的内容给七年级的学弟学妹提出合理的建议。写作要包括学习方面，爱好方面和友谊方面的内容，根据内容可知文章要用一般现在时态，人称用第二人称。注意连词和提建议句型的运用，注意上下文衔接，符合逻辑以及英文的表达方式。【点评】写作时注意文章的内容需要包括提示的所有要点。注意单词拼写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文衔接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。本文中可能用到的短语：first/second/last but not least，take up a hobby，value your friendship等。