Unit 8 Pets-2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作(牛津译林版）.docx

1、2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Unit 8：Pets单元话题：宠物范文11你是不是很想拥有自己的宠物呢？假如你想养一只兔子，请根据提示写一篇60词左右的英语作文。What pet do you want to keep?A rabbitWhy do you like it?Clean, lovely and easy to look afterWhat should it be like?White, smallHow will you look after it?Feed her well every dayMany of my friends keep pets

2、at home. I want one too. _My parents also love small animals. I am sure the rabbit will be happy with us in my family.【答案】One possible version:Many of my friends keep pets at home. I want one too. Id like to keep a rabbit, because it is lovely and clean. As we all know, rabbits are usually easy to l

3、ook after. My rabbit should be a white one. She cant be too big in size. If I have a rabbit, I will feed her well every day. Of course, I will keep her clean and make her healthy.My parents also love small animals. I am sure the rabbit will be happy with us in my family.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据

4、提示信息介绍自己喜欢的宠物。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己想养的宠物是什么，为什么喜欢，它长什么样子以及你将如何照顾它；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。范文22动物是人类的朋友，为了唤起居民对动物的热爱，社区的宠物中心举办了主题为“My pet”的养宠物交流会。请根据下面的材料，以“My pet dog”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一下自己的宠物狗。Name: PaulAge: 18 monthsWeight: 10 kgLooks: brown, strong

5、, big eyes and earsFavourite food: bonesFavourite activities: playing with the basketball, taking a walk 要求：1. 包含所给的要点，可以合理补充；2. 不少于70词。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。My pet dogI keep a dog at home. He is my best friend. _【答案】例文My pet dogI keep a dog at home. He is my best friend. I call him Paul. Paul is a brown do

6、g. He is 18 months old. He weighs 10 kg. Paul is healthy and strong. His big eyes and ears make him look lovely. Paul is clever. He can do many tricks. And he likes playing with my basketball best. He also enjoys taking a walk with me after supper. He likes bones best.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My

7、 pet dog”为题，根据提示内容，写一篇英文短文，介绍一下自己的宠物狗。2.写作指导：本文应以第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时。按照提示内容进行写作，内容要写全。注意保证语言通顺，行文连贯；语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。范文33你们班这周正在讨论在家应该养什么宠物。下表中是你及你们班部分同学最喜欢养的宠物，请你根据所给内容，用英语写一篇短文，对此进行简单描述。人物喜欢的宠物原因Kitty兔子长长的耳朵很可爱Simon金鱼不惹麻烦，不需要喂太多食物Tom猫安静、友好，不用担心伤到别人我要求：1. 短文须包括上表中的所有要点，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、流畅；2. “我”一栏请自由发挥12句；3.

8、 词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Were talking about what pet we can keep at home. Different people have different ideas. _【答案】例文Were talking about what pet we can keep at home. Different people have different ideas.Kitty likes rabbits best, because she thinks rabbits long ears are really lovely. She likes th

9、em very much. Simon likes to keep goldfish at home, because they dont make any trouble and he doesnt need to feed them too much. Tom loves cats, because cats are very quiet and friendly, and he doesnt need to worry that his pet cat will hurt others. I love parrots, so I have a parrot at home. My par

10、rot can sing and I have fun teaching him to speak.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是一篇记叙文写作。开头已给出。在写作时，要承接开头；按要求根据表格内容来叙述每一人最喜欢养的宠物及其喜欢的原因。2.写作指导：本文应用第三人称来描述同学们最喜欢养的宠物，第一人称来描述自己喜欢养的宠物；时态采用一般现在时态；在写作时，描述要一一对应，包含表中的所有要点，把其最喜欢养的宠物及原因要清晰完整地写出，保证文章通顺，条理清晰。范文44当下，越来越多的人饲养宠物，由此也造成了很多问题。上周，你班召开了班会，就 “Should people keep a

11、pet?” 进行了讨论，请你根据下列表格提示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的想法并表达你自己的观点。Should people keep a pet?赞成1.让生活变得更有乐趣2.培养责任感反对1.噪音扰人2.粪便污染环境自己的观点要求：1.必须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；2.条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁；3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：责任感a sense of responsibility；打扰disturb；粪便excrement and urineShould people keep a pet?Last week we

12、discussed if we should keep a pet in our class meeting. Different students have different opinions. _【答案】例文Should people keep a pet?Last week we discussed whether we should keep a pet in our class meeting. Different students have different opinions.Some students think we can keep a pet at home. On t

13、he one hand, keeping a pet can make our lives more interesting and colorful. On the other hand, it can help us develop a sense of responsibility.However, others dont agree. They think it is not a good idea to have a pet at home. First of all, most of the pets are often noisy. They always bring peopl

14、e a lot of trouble. Whats worse, pets are dirty. They leave their hair everywhere and their excrement and urine are seriously bad for our environment.From my point of view, I hope to raise a pet because a pet can help people feel happier and less lonely.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Should people kee

15、p a pet?”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要针对“人们是否应该养宠物”，介绍不同的人的不同看法，以及自己的观点。保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。范文55My Favorite Animal近期从西双版纳一路“象”北的亚洲野生象群引起了全世界的关注。你一定也见过很多种动物，你了解他们的习性和特长吗？请以“My Favorite Animal”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的动物以及保护（protect）它们的方法。要求：1. 紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2. 文中

16、不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。_【答案】My Favorite AnimalMy favorite animal is a dog. I like it very much. Because it is not only very lovely, but also very helpful. It is white and small. It lives in my brothers home. Sometimes I take it to a park for a walk. And I give it some foo

17、d. At the weekend, Ill help it take a bath. This is my favorite animala beautiful and lovely dog.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“My Favorite Animal”为题，写一篇作文关于自己最喜欢的动物。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。介绍自己最喜欢的动物时，还需要介绍保护它们的方法。注意语句要通顺，无标点和语法错误。范文66如今，很多家庭都养着一只宠物狗。你也想养一只，但你妈妈不同意，说养狗不卫生，而且还会耽误你学习。请根据下面的要点写一

18、封信，尝试说服你妈妈同意让你养狗。要求 ：80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，可适当扩展。内容提示：1 . 自拟养狗的两个好处。2 . 你会每天给狗狗洗澡，保持清洁。3 . 不会让狗狗影响你学习，保证完成作业后才会和狗狗玩耍。Dear Mum,I really want to keep a dog. _Yours, Jack【答案】例文Dear Mum,I really want to keep a dog. If I have a dog, I will give my dog a bath and keep it very clean every day. Im sure I w

19、ont let it do anything harmful to my study. I wont play with it before I finish my homework. I think I can learn how to take care of others by keeping a dog. I can also exercise more by walking the dog every day. Please allow me to have a dog at home.YoursJack【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据要点提示写一封信让妈妈同意

20、养狗。2.写作指导：本文是一般现在时。本文要介绍养狗的好处，并承诺养狗之后自己会如何做。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。范文77假定你是李华，参加学校组织的英语辩论赛活动，请以“Dogs make the best pet”为论点写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.提出观点；2.阐明原因；3.你的结论。注意：1.词数80100。开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数；2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Ladies and gentlemen, I am so happy to stand here to express my ideas to you. _【答案】例文：L

21、adies and gentlemen,I am so happy to stand here to express my ideas to you. I think that dogs make the best pets. Firstly, dogs are lovely because it has a long and soft hair, and a gentle temper. Secondly, dogs are loyal. There are a lot of news about the story of the dog rescue. No matter how poor

22、 the owner is, his dog will never abandon them. Thirdly, dogs can do a lot of work for man. They play with us. They hunt with us. They keep door for us. For these reasons, I believe that dogs make the best pets.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作。要求学生以“狗是最好的宠物”为论点写一篇发言稿，注意短文需包括所有内容信息。2.写作指导：本文应以一般现在时来陈述观点。此发言稿主要分为三部分，首先提出观点狗是最好的宠物。第二部分阐述狗是最好的宠物的原因，如狗很可爱、很忠诚以及能够帮助到人类等，最后一部分再次强调结论。写作中可以使用表示顺序的副词来使论点更加清楚，行文连贯。