Unit 8单元话题写作“过生日” 五年级下册译林版三起.docx

1、Unit 8单元话题写作“过生日”第一篇同学们，本单元我们学习了询问别人生日在什么时候的句型及其答语以及询问别人在生日那天做什么的句型及其答语。请用本单元所学内容写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下自己的生日。【思路点拨】作文结构展示可能用到的词汇和句子开头：简单介绍一下自己的生日在什么时候以及自己的年龄。句子：My birthday is on.Im .years old now.中间：详细介绍自己生日这天所进行的活动或发生的事情。词汇：have a party,eat noodles,eat a birthday cake句子：My father buys me a,I have a big din

2、ner with.结尾：总结自己生日这天过得怎么样。句子：What a nice day！I have a good time today.【小试身手】 【参考范文】Today is the fifth of August.Its my birthday. Im twelve years old now.My father buys me a new bike as my birthday present. Its blue. I like it very much. I can go to school by bike now. My English teacher knows today

3、is my birthday. She says Happy Birthday!to me. And my classmates sing Happy Birthday to You to me in class. Im really happy. When I come home from school, dinner is ready. I have a big dinner with my parents.What a nice day！今天是8月5日，是我的生日。我现在十二岁了。我的爸爸给我买了一辆新自行车作为我的生日礼物。它是蓝色的。我非常喜欢它。现在我可以骑自行车上学了。我的英语老

4、师知道今天是我的生日。她对我说“生日快乐！”。我的同学们在课堂上为我唱祝你生日快乐。我真的很开心。当我从学校回到家时，晚饭准备好了。我和我的父母一起吃了一顿丰盛的晚饭。多么美好的一天啊！第二篇【话题分析】同学们，本单元我们学习了关于过生日情景的表达，重点是日期的表述和序数词的运用，也了解了过生日时通常会做的事情。你是怎样庆祝你的生日的呢？请你写一写。【写作指导】开头：介绍生日的时间。主体：介绍生日那天做些什么，包括地点、人物、活动等方面。结尾：总结一天过得怎么样，表达心情。参考词句：Today is my birthday.My birthday is on.have a party/eat

5、noodlesmake a wish/play gamesMy parents buy a birthday cake for me.My friends come to my home and give me some nice presents.We sing the birthday song together.What a happy day！I have a good time with my friends.We have a lot of fun.【参考范文】My birthdayMy birthday is on the eighth of April. Its a sunny

6、 day. I have a big birthday party at home. Many friends come to my home. They give me a lot of birthday presents. We sing and dance. I make a wish and share the birthday cake with my friends. We also play games together. We have a good time.【小试身手】一、句型热身。1.我的生日在九月二十一日。 2.我们在聚会上唱歌、跳舞。 3.我通常在我生日那天盛装打扮并

7、且举办一场聚会。 二、写作练习。请根据下面的图片提示，并结合实际，写一写你是怎样为你的妈妈庆祝生日的。不少于50词。 第三篇请根据图片提示，并结合实际，发挥想象，写一篇短文向大家介绍一下你是怎样为你的妈妈庆祝生日的。要求：语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。不少于5句话。【小试身手】 【参考范文】My mothers birthday is on February 14th. She always cooks for us, but on that day, I cook meals for her. I want to thank her and let her have a good rest. I also make a birthday cake for my mother. And I give her some nice flowers. My mother is very happy. At last, my father and I sing a birthday song to her. We all have a great time.