专题07 书面表达热点话题10篇-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（深圳专用）-4.docx

1、2023深圳市中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递第四期专题07 书面表达热点话题10篇一、通知1（2023广东深圳统考一模）为丰富校园生活，学校的英语俱乐部决定举办以“最美深圳”(Amazing Shenzhen) 为主题的英文绘本大赛。请你根据以下提示，写一则活动通知。要点：1. 参赛对象：全校学生2. 提交时间：下周五上午12:00前3. 绘本内容：选择深圳这座城市的任一方面，如发展历程、景点、文化、志愿服务等。4. 参赛要求：绘本必须原创；（至少补充一点）参考词汇：内容content；原创的original要求：1. 词数80左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；

2、3. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。NoticeIn order to enrich students campus life, the school English club decides to hold an English picture book competition with the theme “Amazing Shenzhen”. _English Club【答案】One possible version:NoticeIn order to enrich students campus life, the school Englis

3、h club decides to hold an English picture book competition with the theme “Amazing Shenzhen”. The following is something you should pay attention to.All the students can take part in the competition. Your works should be handed in before 12:00 am next Friday. You can finish your English picture book

4、s from any aspect of Shenzhen, such as its development history, scenic spots, culture, volunteer services and so on. Remember that your works must be original and the contents should be positive.We hope all of you can take part in the competition.English Club【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇通知，介绍英文绘本大赛。时态：时态为“一般现在时”

5、。提示：题目要求根据提示写一则通知，内容为举办以“最美深圳”(Amazing Shenzhen) 为主题的英文绘本大赛。写作时注意适当增加细节，补充要点，同时不要遗漏所给要点。写作步聚第一步，先简单介绍活动内容。（开头已给出）第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍活动的具体内容以及要求。第三步，最后号召大家积极参加。亮点词汇pay attention to注意take part in参加hand in上交高分句型Your works should be handed in before 12:00 am next Friday.（含情态动词的被动语态）Remember that your works

6、must be original and the contents should be positive.（肯定祈使句）二、材料作文2（2023广东深圳校联考二模）目前我国生态环境保护任务依然艰巨，生态环境部表示：2023年将积极推进美丽中国建设实践，扎实推动绿色低碳高质量发展，深入打好污染防治攻坚战，扎实推进蓝天保卫战、碧水保卫战、净土保卫战，加强固体废物和新污染物治理，深入推进“无废城市”高质量建设，切实维护生态环境安全，加快健全现代环境治理体系。假设你校的英语校报正在征集有关“环保周”的文章，请你根据以下提示写一篇关于环保的英语短文。生态环境现状河水变脏、天空变成灰色、一些地区没有干净的

7、饮用水环保措施1.不往河里乱扔垃圾；2.节约用水3.（补充12点措施）呼吁携手共建美丽中国要求：1. 内容完整，条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确；2. 词数不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和校名；4. 标点正确，卷面整洁。参考词汇：rubbish 垃圾environmental protection 环保As is known to all, the environment around us is getting worse and worse._【答案】例文As is known to all, the environment around us

8、is getting worse and worse. Now the river has become dirty, the sky has turned gray, and some areas do not have clean drinking water. So lets do something to protect the environment. Dont litter the river. At the same time, we also need to save water. It is necessary for us to go to school by bus or

9、 on foot, because it can cut down on the waste air. We had better plant more trees. Recycling is good for our planet because it changes litter into something that we can use again. Environmental protection is closely related to our daily life. So it is everyones responsibility to protect our environ

10、ment. Lets build a beautiful China together.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：根据题干中的要求介绍如何保护环境，可适当增加细节。写作步骤第一步，引出话题，并介绍生态环境现状；第二步，详细介绍环保措施；第三步，发出呼吁。亮点词汇at the same time同时had better最好be related to和有关高分句型It is necessary for us to go to school by bus or on foot, because it can cut down on the

11、waste air.(because引导的原因状语从句)Recycling is good for our planet because it changes litter into something that we can use again.(that引导的定语从句)3（2023广东深圳统考二模）为了发展学生兴趣爱好、丰富职业体验，你校成功举办了题为 “Experiencing Future Job” 的职业体验游园活动。学校英文报就此活动展开征文比赛。请你根据以下内容投稿。 1. 场景描写： 多种职业 2. 体验描述： 你的选择 3. 体验感悟： 注意： 1. 词数80词左右（开头已经

12、给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 参考词汇：career职业；game tester游戏测试师；astronaut宇航员；fitness instructor健身教练 Last week, the activity “Experiencing Future Job” was held in our school._【答案】例文：Last week, the activity “Experiencing Future Job” was held in our school. There wer

13、e many jobs for us to choose in the activity, such as teachers, doctors, astronauts, fitness instructors and so on. We could choose the job we liked. I chose to be a teacher as my job. Because I wanted to be a teacher like my mother. I taught our students a lot of knowledge. I also talked with them

14、about their dreams and future lives. When I was with many students, I felt realized teaching is a great profession.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：写作要点已给出，注意要点齐全，不要遗漏，语句通顺，表述完整。写作步骤第一步，开门见山，直接引出职业体验游园活动；第二步，具体介绍活动场景和内容；第三步，介绍自己的体验感悟。亮点词汇a lot of大量的talk with交流高分句型There were many jobs for us to

15、choose in the activity, such as teachers, doctors, astronauts, fitness instructors and so on.（there be句型）When I was with many students, I felt realized teaching is a great profession.（when引导的时间状语从句）4（2023广东深圳校考一模）深圳是座现代化的花园城市，致力于率先实现碳中和。为了实现这个目标，我们每个人都应该为此尽一份力。假如你是李华，请你写一篇英语短文向学校英文报投稿，写一封倡议信，介绍你的想法和

16、做法并号召大家都积极行动起来，为保护环境而贡献自己的力量。要点：1）保护环境的意义。2）我们能够做些什么：比如做环保型消费者；节约水电3）号召大家参加此活动。要求：1）词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；2）要点齐全，可适当发挥；3）条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；4）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Dear follow students, We have only one Earth, _Li Hua【答案】例文：Dear follow students, We have only one Earth. Earth is our only home. As we all

17、know, our earth faces many challenges, such as global warming, environmental pollution, natural disasters and so on. These things are making our earth worse and worse. Protecting the environment is protecting ourselves. So we must do something to protect it.First, be environmentally friendly consume

18、rs. We should try to go to work by bike or on foot instead of by cars. Secondly, save water and electricity in our daily. In addition, we can work as volunteers to tell people the importance of protecting the environment. Lets take active action to contribute our efforts to protecting the environmen

19、t. I am sure our city will become better and better.Li hua【详解】总体分析题材：这是一篇材料作文，为应用文；时态：一般现在时；提示：3个写作要点已经给出，需要具体化；这是一篇倡议信，所以“能够做些什么”部分可以用祈使句和情态动词来表达。写作步骤第一步，描写保护环境的意义；第二步，描写为了保护环境我们能够做的事情；第三步，号召大家积极行动起来保护环境。亮点词汇be environmentally friendly consumers 成为环保型消费者in addition 另外tell people the importance of p

20、rotecting the environment 告诉人们保护环境的重要性contribute our efforts to 为做出贡献高分句型I am sure our city will become better and better. （宾语从句）5（2023广东深圳南山实验教育集团南海中学校考二模）传统的长途旅行常常让人疲惫不堪，越来越多的人选择在自家周边方便轻松地度过周末。假如你是深圳市南山区的一名九年级学生李华，请在班上给同学们介绍一些南山区的好去处以及可开展的活动，并呼吁大家多出门走走。要点：1. 大沙河公园（Dashahe Park）：野餐、放风筝，2. 华侨城湿地公园（O

21、CT Wetland Park）：观鸟、骑自行车，3. 其他地点：，（自行补充至少2项活动）要求：1. 词数80100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范整洁；4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Nowadays more and more people choose to do “staycation”. Let me introduce some of the attractions in Nanshan District to you._【答案】例文Nowadays more and more people choose

22、to do “staycation”. Let me introduce some of the attractions in Nanshan District to you.First, you can go to the Dashahe Park. It is beautiful for its natural scenery. You can have picnics with your family or friends there. When the weather is fine, you can fly kites and play games with your childre

23、n. There are lots of other activities that you are interested in.Second, OCT Wetland Park is also a good place to relax. There are all kinds of birds. You can go bird-watching with your classmates. When you go cycling along the river, you can see fascinating clouds in the sky and enjoy the sunset. I

24、t is great.You can visit some places of interest and take beautiful photos in Nanshan District. It will help you relax yourselves as well as have fun.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；时态：本文为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中大沙河公园中野餐、放风筝；华侨城湿地公园中观鸟、骑自行车等要点介绍，并自行补充至少2项活动，注意保证选词准确，条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范整洁。写作步骤第一步，表

25、明写作意图。以“介绍深圳市南山区的景点来度过轻松的周末，”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。大沙河公园中野餐、放风筝；华侨城湿地公园中观鸟、骑自行车等要点介绍，和其他一些活动；第三步，书写结语。南山区还有更多其他景点可供放松和玩乐。亮点词汇staycation居家度假attraction有吸引力的（事物）scenery风景fascinating极有吸引力的；迷人的高分句型There are lots of other activities that you are interested in.(that 引导定语从句)It will help you relax yourselv

26、es as well as have fun.(as well as和一样；除以外还）6（2023广东深圳校考二模）近期，深圳市电视台对中学生闲暇活动的安排进行了采访及调查，假如你是学生代表李华，请用英语写一篇短文介绍你和同学们的闲暇活动开展情况。要点提示：1. 内容：体育，如跑步；艺术，如唱歌绘画；劳动，如做家务、参加志愿者活动；其它，如阅读2. 好处：休息放松，学习新知识，学会新技能，结交新朋友等。3. 个人观点：要求：1. 词数80词左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；3. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。参考词语：volunteer, relax, kn

27、owledge, skillFree-time ActivitiesFree-time activities are good for us teenagers _【答案】例文Free-time ActivitiesFree-time activities are good for us teenagers. Different people have different free-time activities, and Id like to share our activities with you.Firstly, both my friends and I pay much atten

28、tion to physical health, so we often do sports together, such as running, playing basketball and so on. These activities can also help to relax ourselves. Secondly, we are fond of singing and drawing, which help us make more friends. Thirdly, labour is the source of happiness. I usually help my moth

29、er do some housework and join in some volunteer activities in order to help people in need. At the same time, I can learn some new skills. Finally, reading is one of my hobbies, and I can always learn some knowledge by reading.In a word, free-time activities can not only enrich our life, but also he

30、lp us learn something new.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文，所需要点已经给出；时态：一般现在时为主；提示：写作要点提示已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当补充发挥，注意语句的通顺，使用正确的词汇和句型，使得行文连贯有逻辑。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图，以“想和你分享我们的活动”引出下文；第二步，按照要点提示，从体育，艺术，劳动等方面阐述自己的闲暇活动，并注意补充内容，可使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly等词语使得文章连贯，并注意说明这些活动的好处；第三步，结尾表达自己的看法，表示自己对闲暇活动的赞同。亮点词汇share sth with sb

31、和某人分享某物pay much attention to很注意be fond of喜爱enrich our life丰富我们的生活高分句型We are fond of singing and drawing, which help us make more friends.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）三、电子邮件7（2022广东深圳统考二模）为落实国家教育部提出的加强中小学劳动教育的实施意见，你们学校安排了丰富多彩的劳动教育课。假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Linda 对你参加的课程很感兴趣，她发来邮件想了解有关情况。请你根据以下提示，给 Linda 回一封邮件。要点:1.劳动教育的目的

32、：树立劳动光荣的观念、培养良好的劳动习惯等；2.具体活动：学习传统手工制作、学做家务等；3.你对学校开展的劳动教育课的看法。(至少给出两点)要求:1.80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校;3.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯;4.条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：劳动教育 the labor education 劳动课the labor lesson/course手工课 the manual training lesson/courseDear Linda,Im glad to hear from you. _Yours,Li

33、 Hua【答案】例文: Dear Linda,Im glad to hear from you. You say you are interested in our labor course. I would like to share something about it with you. As we know, the labor course is set to educate students to respect and honor hard work, and form good working habits. In our school, we are offered vari

34、ous Chinese traditional manual training courses, such as paper-cutting. We learn to do housework as well. Some teachers teach us to cook several kinds of simple dishes.In my view, through the labor education, we students can acquire some life skills. Meanwhile, our school life will become more color

35、ful and meaningful. Yours, Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，注意补充两点对劳动教育课的看法。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图，和笔友分享关于劳动教育课的情况；第二步，详细介绍开展劳动教育的目的以及具体的活动内容有哪些；第三步，表达自己的看法。亮点词汇be interested in对感兴趣share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物form good working habits养成良好的工作习惯teach sb. to do sth.教某人做某事高分句型You say you ar

36、e interested in our labor course.（省略that的宾语从句）8（2023广东深圳统考二模）2023年春节期间，深圳宝安区举办了首届“民族美食嘉年华”活动，将民族美食融入新春文化。假如你是李华，你在春节期间参加了这次美食嘉年华。请根据以下提示，给你的外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件，介绍此次活动。要点：1. 时间地点：2023年1月15日，宝安万达广场2. 内容：品尝不同民族的美食；欣赏少数民族舞蹈表演；（请自行补充两点内容）3. 你的感受：（请自行补充两点感受）要求：1. 80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3. 可

37、适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4. 标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：美食嘉年华Food Carnival少数民族ethnic minority万达广场Wanda PlazaDear Mr. Smith,During the Spring Festival, we held a Food Carnival in Shenzhen._Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文：Dear Mr. Smith,During the Spring Festival, we held a Food Carnival in Shenzhen. It was wonderful and I would lik

38、e to tell you some details about it.The Food Carnival was held at Wanda Plaza in Baoan, on January 15, 2023. People celebrated the Spring Festival by enjoying delicious food. Firstly, we tasted different ethnic food from all over the country, such as Tibetan food and drinks and Miao food. Then, we e

39、njoyed a dance show from Ethnic minorities. The dancers wore beautiful clothes. The performance was so fantastic that it attracts many audiences. Also, there was a DIY activity which we could join in and make handicrafts by ourselves. Whats more, there were many lanterns and people could try to solv

40、e the puzzles on the lanterns.The carnival was really interesting and unforgettable. We can experience colorful Chinese culture in a different way. I hope you can attend the Food Carnival next year.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，属于电子邮件写作；时态：时态为“一般过去时”；提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。写

41、作步骤第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；第二步，根据要点提示介绍活动的时间、地点，以及活动的具体内容，需要自行补充至少两个活动内容，可列举具体的事例；第三步，抒发此活动带来的感受并书写结语。亮点词汇from all over the country来自全国各地solve the puzzles on the lanterns猜灯谜高分句型The performance was so fantastic that it attracts many audiences.（sothat引导结果状语从句）Also, there was a DIY activity which we could join

42、 in and make handicrafts by ourselves.（which引导限制性定语从句）9（2023广东深圳统考二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony即将在暑假来深圳研学旅行。请你根据以下提示给他写一封邮件，帮助他适应在深圳的生活。内容提示：（1）欢迎他来深研学旅行；（2）你的建议：学习一些中国习俗，如使用筷子等；购物时可以使用移动支付；（3）你对他的祝福。 要求：（1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；（4）标点正确，书面整洁。参考词汇：研学旅行 study trip移动支付 mobi

43、le paymentDear Tony, I am so glad that _Yours, Li Hua【答案】(One possible version)Dear Tony,I am so glad that you are going to have a study trip in Shenzhen this summer holiday. To help you live a happy and safe life here, I have some advice for you.First, you can learn some Chinese customs, such as ho

44、w to use chopsticks, how to greet people and so on. Second, when you shop, you can pay with mobile payment. Besides, the traffic rules are different from those in the UK. The drivers drive on the right side of the road, so when you cross the road, you should look left.I hope that you can have a good

45、 time in Shenzhen. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并结合要点进行适当的发挥。写作步骤第一步，开篇点题，欢迎他来深圳进行研学旅行；第二步，具体介绍给他的一些建议；第三步，表达对他的祝福。亮点词汇 and so on 等等 be different from 与不同 have a good time 玩得开心 look forward to 期盼高分句型 To help you live a ha

46、ppy and safe life here, I have some advice for you.（不定式作目的状语） First, you can learn some Chinese customs, such as how to use chopsticks, how to greet people and so on.（疑问词+不定式）四、书信作文10（2023广东深圳统考二模）深圳是一座“爱阅之城”。假如你是李华，你的外教Sam 发来一封邮件，说他对光明区随处可见的24小时书香亭 (self-service library) 很感兴趣，请你给他写一封回信，向他介绍书香亭并邀请他参

47、加书香亭推广活动。1. 介绍书香亭：1) 光明区有71台书香亭，每台可放置约200本书；2) 可以从书香亭拿到 网上预借的图书；3) 2. 你对书香亭的看法；3. 活动安排：1) 时间：本周六下午3点；2) 地点：光明区图书馆。要求： 1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；4. 标点正确，书面整洁。提示词： 预借reserve; 推广promotionDear Sam,I am so happy to receive your email._I am looking forward to your repl

48、y.Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文：Dear Sam,I am so happy to receive your email. Knowing that you are interested in the self-service libraries in Guangming District, I am writing to tell you something about it. There are 71 self-service libraries in Guangming and each of them can hold about 200 books. One of the

49、greatest things about these libraries is that you can borrow books you have reserved online directly from them. Whats more, with the self-service libraries, you can borrow and return books anytime, anywhere.Personally, the self-service libraries are fantastic. They not only provide convenient access

50、 to a wide range of books, but also they create a culture of reading in our community.A promotion activity about the self-service libraries will be held at 3 p.m. on Saturday in Guangming Library. If you are interested in it, let me know and we can meet up at the library entrance.I am looking forwar

51、d to your reply.Yours, Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇书信作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点以及开头，注意要点齐全，语句通顺，表述完整。写作步骤第一步，承接开头，开门见山，交代写作目的，介绍光明区图书馆；第二步，具体介绍书香亭以及对书香亭的看法；第三步，介绍书亭推广活动的具体情况。亮点词汇be interested in对感兴趣whats more其次not only.but also.不仅而且高分句型One of the greatest things about these libraries is that you can borrow books you have reserved online directly from them.（表语从句）If you are interested in it, let me know and we can meet up at the library entrance.（if引导的条件状语从句）