六年级英语下册Unit 8单元话题写作“梦想” 译林版三起.docx

1、Unit 8单元话题写作“梦想”第一篇【话题分析】教室里，同学们正在谈论他们的不同梦想。请你以“Our dreams”为题，写一篇英语短文。作文结构展示可能用到的词汇和句子开头：引出主题“dreams”。句子：The students are talking about their dreams.中间：分别介绍每个人的梦想。可以补充拥有该梦想的原因、为了实现梦想应该做什么。句子：want to be./be good at.policeman/writer/doctor/dentist/nursefarmer/driver/teacher/scientist/astronaut/dancer/

2、player/pianist/artist.结尾：总结并给予美好的期望。句子：We want to see our dreams come true!We should work hard to make our dreams come true.【句型热身】1.我的梦想是未来当一名老师。 2.为了实现我的梦想，我应该努力学习。 3.我将去上音乐学校，因为我想成为一名钢琴家。 4.我喜欢绘画，所以我将上一些绘画课。 【参考范文】Our dreamsThe students are talking about their dreams in class.Joe is good at writin

3、g.He wants to be a writer. He wants to write stories for children. Amy wants to be a dentist. Because many children dont care about their teeth. She wants to help them. Lucy wants to be a dancer. Because dancing makes people healthy and beautiful. Jane likes playing the piano. She wants to be a pian

4、ist. She thinks music makes people happy. Ben likes sport. He wants to be a football player and play in the World Cup one day.We want to see our dreams come true!【写作练习】博比想成为一名科学家。为了实现他的愿望，他将要做些什么呢？请你写一篇短文说一说你的观点和建议。 【参考答案】一、 句型热身1. My dream is to be a teacher in the future.2. To make my dream come t

5、rue, I should study hard.3. Ill go to music school, because I want to be a pianist.4. I like painting, so Ill have some painting lessons.二、 写作练习Bobby is interested in science. He wants to be a scientist in the future. This is his dream. He should study hard. He should read more books. He should keep

6、 healthy too. Then he can make his dream come true.第二篇假如你是王兵，请以“My dream”为题，告诉同学们你喜欢旅游，梦想长大后能成为一名旅行家，词数50左右。【思路点拨】1. 写法：这一写作训练要求同学们根据本单元所学的内容介绍自己的喜好、梦想等情况，可以先总说，然后分说，把自己的喜好、梦想及为之努力的行动等一一表达出来，最后再用一句话进行概括，起到，点题的作用。2. 时态：这篇习作可以使用一般现在时及一般将来时。3. 词汇：like travelling, travel around the world, healthy and ha

7、ppy, come true4. 句型：I like.I want to. I will.注意：叙事要有条理性，运用“总一分一总”结构，并注意一般现在时与一般将来时的交替运用。【参考范文】My dreamHello, Im Wang Bing. I like travelling. So my dream is to be a traveller in the future. I want to travel around the world. Travelling makes people healthy and happy. A traveller should be brave and

8、strong. So I will do more sport. I hope my dream will come true some day.【写作练习】每个人都有一个梦想，你的梦想是什么呢？你将为实现梦想做哪些努力呢？跟大家一起分享一下吧！ 要求：语句通顺，语法规范，书写认真，词数40左右。 【范文欣赏】My dream is to be an artist in the future because I like painting very much. I think artists are great. To make my dream come true, I should study hard. I will read more books. I will paint pictures every day. I will go to painting school. And I will have painting lessons. I hope my dream will come true some day.