2013届高三英语复习写作专题讲座：第8讲 句子间、段落间的衔接、过渡的写作与训练（新人教版）.ppt

1、写法指导针对训练专题讲座写作连接(过渡)性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。中学阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语可以归纳如下：1表示起始关系的过渡性词语first of all,above all,according to,so far,as far as,to begin with,in my opinion等。例 迄今为止，诸事顺利。(1)Everything is in order up to now.(2)Everything is in order up to this time.(3)Ever

2、ything is in order so far.2表示时间顺序的过渡性词语first,then,later,in the end,finally,at last,after that,since then,immediately,suddenly,soon等。例 努力学习，最终你会成功的。(1)Work hard,and you will succeed in the end.(2)Work hard,and you will succeed in time.(3)Work hard,and you will succeed someday.3表示空间顺序的过渡性词语on the righ

3、t/left,on one side of,on the other side of,at the top/foot/end of,in the middle of,in front of,at the back of等。例 房子中央有一张书桌。(1)There is a desk in the middle of the room.(2)There is a desk in the centre of the room.4表示并列关系的过渡性词语and,or,as well as,neither.nor.,not only.but also.,either.or.,not.but.等。例 他

4、不但给我建议，还给我钱。(1)He gave me money as well as advice.(2)He gave me advice,and money as well.(3)He gave me not only advice but also money.5表示转折关系的过渡性词语but,yet,however,while,on the contrary,at the same time(不过，然而)等。例 他原以为自己理解了那道题，但是他错了。(1)He thought he understood the problem,but he was mistaken.(2)He tho

5、ught he understood the problem,however,he was mistaken.6表示因果关系的过渡性词语because,as,since,for,thanks to,thus,therefore,as a result of,one reason is that.,another reason is that.等。例 由于天在下雨，你最好乘出租车。(1)As its raining,youd better take a taxi.(2)Because its raining,youd better take a taxi.(3)Its raining so yo

6、ud better take a taxi.7表示条件关系的过渡性词语if,unless,as/so long as,on condition that等。例 如果你不努力工作，你就会被解雇。(1)You will get fired unless you work hard.(2)If you dont work hard,you will get fired.8表示递进关系的过渡性词语whats more,furthermore,moreover,besides,whats worse,to make matters worse,worse still,on the one hand.,o

7、n the other(hand).等。例 我不喜欢那件衣服，而且它太贵了。(1)I dont like the dress;besides,its too expensive.(2)I dont like the dress;moreover,its too expensive.(3)I dont like the dress;whats more,its too expensive.9表示让步关系的过渡性词语as,though,even if/though,who(what,when,where)ever/no matter who(what,when,where)等。例 不管谁违法都要受

8、到惩罚。(1)No matter who breaks the law,he will be punished.(2)Whoever breaks the law will be punished.10表示列举事实的过渡性词语for example/instance,such as,take.for example,that is to say,as follows,in other words等。例 许多伟人从贫困中崛起，例如林肯和爱迪生。(1)Many great men have risen from poverty Lincoln and Edison,for example.(2)M

9、any great men have risen from poverty,for example,Lincoln and Edison.(3)Many great men have risen from poverty,for instance,Lincoln and Edison.11表示总结的过渡性词语in short,in brief,in a word,on the whole,in general,generally speaking等。例 一般而言，语言是用来交际的。(1)In general,language is for communication.(2)Generally

10、speaking,language is for communication.在下面空格中填入正确的连接词，使句子的衔接更加紧密1English is a useful language._，it is an official language in the UN._，it is widely used in business,science and technology.答案：For one thing;For another(thing)2The boss asked him to leave._，he was fired.答案：In other words/That is to say3

11、He is a great scientist._，he is good at playing the violin.答案：Whats more/Besides/In addition4He thought about going to Greece or Spain,but _ decided on Canada.答案：finally5Some people are overambitious._，they are usually unhappy.答案：Therefore6_，I need your name and address._，whens your birthday?答案：To b

12、egin with;Then7The young man didnt enjoy his previous job._，he finds the new job very interesting.答案：On the contrary8Its true that some ads can be very useful._，they can help you to compare two different products.答案：For instance/For example9I didnt go to the party with them._，I went to help an old l

13、ady with her housework.答案：Instead10The young man got on well with the Smiths and he was spending his holiday when the case happened._，it wasnt the young man who killed Mr.Smith.答案：In conclusion.在横线处填入适当的词语，使上下文流畅(一空一词)1正如表中所看到的情况，2004年有570000起交通事故，造成109000人死亡。_ can be seen from the graph,there were

14、570,000 traffic accidents,and 109,000 people were killed in 2004.答案：As2为了减少交通事故，首先，政府应该采取相应措施，、比如发展公共交通。其次，人们应该遵守交通规则，尤其是司机。In order to reduce the traffic accidents,_，the government should take some proper measures,_ _ developing public traffic._，people should obey traffic rules,especially the drive

15、rs.答案：first;such as;Second3我们的网校在很多方面是有益的。首先，它使教与学更加便捷和有趣。我们在课堂上可以获得更多的信息和知识。其次，无论在什么地方，我们都可以通过发送和接收邮件与国内外的其他学生进行交流。Our Net school is helpful in many ways._ _ _，it will make teaching and learning easier and more interesting.We can get more information and knowledge._，we can communicate with other st

16、udents at home and abroad by sending and receiving messages where wed like to.答案：First of all;Besides4你认为这个地方合适吗？如果不合适的话，我可以设法为你再找其他的地方。Do you think you like the place?_ _，I can try and find another place for you.答案：If not5然而，在城市生活的费用通常是很高的。你必须找到一份报酬丰厚的工作。否则，你将负担不起你所需要的东西。_，living in the city is often very expensive.You must find a wellpaid job,_，you will not afford the things you need.答案：However;otherwise