2014-2015学年《英语测试报》配套光盘 人教新课标必修1课件 写作技巧讲解 U3.ppt

1、Skills in Compositions-complex structures andadvanced expressions 1写作的评分标准：第五档（2530分）：很好地完成了试题规定的任务。*对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述,清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。*语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。*语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂语法结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。*有效地使用了语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。2How to write a good composition技巧 1.学会使用丰富的句式2.学会使用较高级词汇实战演练3.学会使用适当的

2、连词3一、学会使用丰富的句式 “既求达，也求雅”已成为高考高分评判的依据，所以要讲究句式结构的变化，避免单调、呆板和千篇一律的句子，尽量多使用各种句式，使句子丰富、灵活。4使用分词 Once it is held,it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing and make it more prosperous and modern.Once held,it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing,making it more prosperous and modern.Faced with the environm

3、ental problems to be solved,some people dont approve of it.Weighing the advantages and disadvantages,we should welcome the Olympic Games.5使用定语从句Many pollution problems can be more serious,and it can eventually do damage to our surroundings.Many pollution problems can be more serious,which can eventu

4、ally do damage to our surroundings.More visitors from all over the world will flood into China,which financially benefit Beijing.Whats more,more people will be attracted to Beijing,which will contribute to the development of tourism to a great extent.6使用 with 结构When the number of tourists is increas

5、ing,traffic will become more crowded.With the number of tourists increasing,traffic will become more crowded.With more and more visitors going to Beijing,tourism will be flourishing.With everyone doing his bit,the game will be a great success.7使用被动句Measures should be taken to avoid the bad effect me

6、ntioned above.Only in this way can we hold a successful Olympic Games.使用倒装结构8二、学会使用较高级词汇用词准确、得体是写作的前提，在此基础上使用高级词汇和短语，既可以体现出作者的语言驾驭能力，又有助于获得高分。9How to use advanced expressionsIn my opinion,it is difficult to hold the Olympics.In my opinion,it is challenging to hold the Olympics.It will have a great e

7、ffect on the development of Beijing.far-reaching profound significant10 In a word,the Olympic Games will make Beijing more beautiful.fascinating In the long run,hosting the Olympics will play a necessary part in prospering economy as well as booming tourism.an indispensableThe advantages of the Game

8、 is over heavier than its disadvantages.outweigh11 Tourism is becoming a booming industrywith the development of the city.China will enjoy a boom in economy.促进 繁荣经济旅游发展Some students see it as a good opportunity to boost economy and accelerate the pace of the construction of our modern society.Holdin

9、g the Olympic Games will promote the development of economy,making the city more booming and modern.12China,which lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean,is rich in natural resources.It is a great country with a long history,coveringan area of 9.6 million square kilometers.China,a large country with a

10、 long history,lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean.It is abundant in natural resources,coveringan area of 9.6 million square kilometers.14Replace the underlined expressions1.Among all the people going to work,car 2.drivers make up 18%.3.2.The Internet can help us finish many tasks.4.3.The library i

11、s important to us.5.4.One can only become a skilled one after many failures.6.5.Last year saw a more and more fierce competition in the job market.7.6.He tried to pass the exam,but plete accomplish fulfillvital essentialendless countless numerous witnessedattempted toamount to account forget through

12、157.Some students dont value their money at all.8.It is also essential that you get some skills for taking exams.treasurecherishacquire obtain gain9.It would take me a great deal of time,which would surely invite numerous inconveniences to me.undoubtedly unquestionably10.More and more people come to

13、 big cities,which causes serious housing problems.flood into crowd intopour intodefinitely16A Campaign Speech Im sure I well satisfy the conditions for working as chairman.Since senior middle school,Ive been serving as monitor of my class,which has offered me invaluableexperience.More importantly,my

14、 job has always been sung high praise of by both my classmates and teachers,which has fully proved my strong capability of being a student leader.As far as my character is concerned,Im optimistic,enthusiastic,17easygoing and always ready to offer help.In addition,I enjoy a variety of hobbies,ranging

15、 from literature to sports.All of the above demonstrates that I can be a qualified and competent chairman.If I were elected,I would try every means to cope with whatever problem we might encounter.Moreover,taking all our interests into consideration,I would organize diverse activities so as to enric

16、h our university life as well as improve18 our ability in a comprehensive way.To sum up,I would devote myself to serving you as well as possible and trying to develop everyones potential.If you believe in me,please cast your vote for me.Thank you for your support.19advanced synonym(the answer is not

17、 unique)invaluablecapabilitya variety ofcope withencounterdemonstratecompetentpreciousvariousdiverserevealindicatecome acrosspricelessabilitydifferentdeal withmeet withshowablevalublerun intotalent20Assignment假如你是一名大学生，对近年来大学毕业生就业情况颇有己见，请根据下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的看法。词数120-150。学生心态向往城市，不愿下乡就业现状城市人才过剩，农村渴望人才就

18、业前景农村天地广阔，可施展才华21Dear editor,Im writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates.Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities,not willing to work in the countryside.As a matter of fact,there are not enoug22 opportunities to satisfy most of

19、 the hunters in big cities while in the countryside,talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us.Rural areas are a vast world,you can put your abilities to good use and youll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.Therefore,I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.23