2022版高考英语 Unit 1 Great scientists Part 4 Writing练习（含解析）新人教版必修5.docx

1、Part 4Writing写作题目假如你是高二学生李华,你的一个在外地读书的同学张力给你写信,向你诉说他最近因为身体不好而影响学习的情况,并且坦言自己平时学习忙,很少锻炼。请根据这一情况给张力写一封劝说信,劝他积极锻炼身体,为更好地学习打下基础。注意:1.词数100左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.尽可能运用本单元所学的词汇、句型和语法。Dear Zhang Li, I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. Sincerely yours,Li Hua思路

2、点拨体裁应用文时态以一般现在时为主人称以第一人称和第二人称为主主题为了更好地学习,需积极锻炼身体结构第一段:引入,点明对方最近身体不好的原因,说明自己的观点;第二段:阐述,说明错误观点及锻炼的好处,并提供具体做法;第三段:总结,重申自己的观点。遣词造句.用本单元所学单词或短语填空1.全神贯注于2.adj.积极的3.有助于4.提出5.n.挑战6.最后,总之答案1.be absorbed in2.positive3.contribute to4.put forward5.challenge6.in conclusion.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子(1)你一直全神贯注于学习。You have

3、study.(2)结果,你没有时间锻炼身体。As a result, you exercise.(3)你应该对锻炼有一个积极的态度。You should towards exercise.(4)你可能会认为你花费的时间被浪费了。You may think that the time is wasted.(5)实际上,锻炼对你的身体健康和学习有好处。Actually, taking exercise your health and study.(6)当你有了强壮的身体后,你才能继续学习和面对更多的挑战。When you have a strong body, you can keep on st

4、udying and .(7)我建议你从现在开始每天至少锻炼一个小时。I suggest you at least one hours exercise every day from now on.(8)总之,只要你多锻炼,你就会有一个更强壮的身体。 , as long as you exercise more, you will have a stronger body.答案(1)been absorbed in(2)have no time for(3)have a positive attitude(4)that you spend(5)is good for(6)face more c

5、hallenges(7)should take(8)In conclusion2.句式升级(9)用so.that.合并句子(1)和(2)You have been exercise.(10)用过去分词短语作后置定语改写句子(4)You may think that is wasted.(11)用contribute to升级句子(5),并在句中增加状语regularlyActually, taking exercise your health and study.(12)用“only+状语从句”置于句首改写句子(6)when you have a strong body keep on stu

6、dying and face more challenges.(13)用put forward改写句子(7)I that you take at least one hours exercise every day from now on.(14)用“the more.,the more.”句式升级句子(8)In conclusion, you exercise, you will have.答案(9)so absorbed in study that you have no time for(10)the time spent(11)regularly can contribute to(1

7、2)Only;can you(13)put forward a suggestion(14)the more;the stronger body连句成篇参考范文Dear Zhang Li,I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have been so absorbed in study that you have no time for exercise, which is really harmful to your health. I feel it

8、would be more beneficial to your health if you have a positive attitude towards exercise in the future.You may think that the time spent is wasted. Actually, taking exercise regularly can contribute to your health and study. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying and face more cha

9、llenges. So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hours exercise every day from now on.In conclusion, the more you exercise, the stronger body you will have.Sincerely yours,Li Hua写作积累(一) 引入1.Im sorry to hear/learn that you are so crazy about.that.2.In my opinion,it is wrong to.3.I do

10、nt think it is a very good way to.4.Thank you for your letter asking me about.5.Im writing to persuade you to quit/give up.(二) 阐述1.Here are my reasons. First of all, I think it would be better if.2.The reasons for.are as follows. First, .Second, .Last but not least, .3.On the one hand, .; on the oth

11、er hand, .4.The reason for.is that.5.No one can ignore the fact that.6.If I were you, I would.(三) 总结1.In short./In conclusion.2.All things considered.3.As far as Im concerned, .4.From what has been discussed above, .5.Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.实战演练(2021安徽高二开学

12、考试,)假定你叫李华,是某国际学校的一名学生。你发现你们学校的图书馆里藏书比较陈旧、种类不多,且外语类书籍较少。请你给外籍校长Mr. White写一封信,劝说学校购买一批新图书并说明理由。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. White,I am Li Hua, a student from Class Six, Grade One. _ Yours, Li HuaPart 4Writing实战演练One possible version:Dear Mr. White,I am Li Hua, a student fr

13、om Class Six, Grade One. Im writing to suggest that our school library buy some new books.Reading is a good way for us to improve our studies and learn about the world. However, the books in the school library only deal with a small number of topics, and many of the books are out of date. Besides, t

14、here are only a few books written in foreign languages in the school library. As a result, its difficult for us to find the books we want to read. In conclusion, I advise our school library to buy some new books on different topics and in different languages.I would appreciate it if you take my suggestion into consideration.Yours,Li Hua