专题19 短文改错-2017年高考英语母题题源系列（解析版） .doc

1、母题十九 短文改错【母题来源】 【2017全国新课标III】【母题原题】【2017全国新课标III】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fa

2、st time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at tha

3、t time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案When I look at this picture of myself, I realize how fast

4、time flies. I had grown not only havephysically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, Ibut taken entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. became Around me in picture are the things they were very important

5、in my life at that time: carthis/the that/whichmagazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，differentplaying pop music，and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me latest many happy memories of your high school days. my解析1删去o

6、f考查介词。realize是及物动词，后接宾语不需要介词，故删去介词of。2. hadhave考查动词的时态。根据本句中的时间状语in the past few years可知这个句子用现在完成时。3. andbut考查并列连词。not onlybut (also)是固定搭配，意为“不仅而且”。4. tooktaken考查过去分词。根据逻辑关系可知照片是被拍，故用被动语态，被动语态的构成是“be过去分词”，故把took改为taken。5. becomebecame考查动词的时态。因为become和前面的entered是并列谓语，故也用一般过去时。6. picture前加this/the考查限定

7、词。根据语境可知这张照片是上文提到的照片，是特指，故需要用限定词this/the修饰。7. theythat/which考查定语从句。分析句子可知，前面的倒装句“Around me in the picture are the things”是一个单句，而后面的“they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.”也是一个单句，在这种情况下，要么在两个单句之间用并列连词连接，要么把后面这个单句变为从句。从句意上看，这里变为定语从句更为合理，故把they改为that/wh

8、ich。【命题意图】 本类题通常主要考查学生对英语基本语言的准确掌握程度，为以后的校对和准确表达做准备。【考试方向】 这类试题主要考查学生的基本的语法知识，主要是时态、非谓语动词、从句等的用法。还有句子间的的连接成分，有时涉及篇章和逻辑关系。【得分要点】熟练掌握中学阶段重要的语法项目，注意文章语句间的的逻辑关系。对每个句子进行逐一诊断，对常见的错误类型成竹在胸。【母题1】【2017四川广元市二模】Now I want to tell you something what happened last weekend. On my way to the cinema, I noticed a fo

9、reigner talk to a policemen who seemed able to understand what the foreigner was saying. They two looked very worriedly. So I went up to see what I could do help them. I told the policeman the foreigner had lost his wallet or camera. Finally the foreigner got back his belonging with the help of the

10、policeman. All of them thanked me. By the time I arrived at the cinema, the film have been over. Although Id missed the film, but I was very happy because I had helped others with my efforts.【答案】1. what 改为that 2. talk 改为talking 3. able 改为unable 4. worriedly改为worried 5. do后面加to 6. or 改为and 7. belongi

11、ng改为belongings8. all改为both 9. have 改为has 10. 去掉but【母题2】【2017石家庄质检一】 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Recently, a famous basketball play

12、er has caused public angry by writing on the Great wall. In the fact, this happens in many place of interest. I had some suggestions to solve this problem. First, make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦). Besides, punishments, such as a fine, is necessary to tourists with so

13、 bad behaviors. Also, I think its helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages. Im sure with our efforts, more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.【答案】1. angryanger；2. 去掉fact前面的the；3. placeplaces；4. hadhave；5. 在pub

14、lic后面加of；6. isare；7. sosuch；8. helpfullyhelpful；9. thatwhere；10. concerningconcerned第四处：hadhave；考查时态。本文用一般现在时描述，故此句也用一般现在时，主语是第一人称，故用have。第五处：在public后面加of；考查介词。此处为固定短语：inform sb of sth“通知某人某事”。第六处：isare；考查主谓一致。此句的主语是punishments，是复数，故谓语也要用复数。第七处：sosuch；考查副词。so修饰形容词或者副词，such修饰名词，虽然此处有bad这个形容词，但是bad也是来

15、修饰后面这个名词behaviors的，也就是说此处的中心词是behaviors，故用such来修饰。第八处：helpfullyhelpful；考查形容词。此处为系表结构，形容词作表语，故用helpful。第九处：thatwhere；考查关系词。此处为定语从句，先行词是boards，从句缺少状语，而且根据意思可理解为表地点的状语。故用关系副词where。第十处：concerningconcerned考查形容词。此处为固定短语：be concerned about“关心”。【名师点睛】so和such的用法区别。俩词的意思差不多，但用法不同。so通常修饰形容词或副词，such修饰名词，此处的名词可指

16、任意名词，不管可数不可数，单数复数都可以。但是so后也可接名词，但对名词有一个要求就是单数可数名词才可以；such后也可接形容词，但是这个形容词必须是来修饰名词的。当so和such修饰可数名词单数的时候，句子意思一样。so+adj+a(n)+n=such+a(n)+adj+n.如 so good a boy=such a good boy比如，第七处错误，经过句子的分析，虽然此处有bad这个形容词，但是bad是来修饰后面这个名词behaviors的，中心词还是名词，所以此处还是用such来修饰名词的。【母题3】【2017辽宁省抚顺市模拟】 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同

17、桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。.Com 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起)不计分。Id like to introduce Sarah to you. She is a good friend of me. Actually she is an exchange student from Ireland, which has been

18、 studying in my school for two month. Wanting to take an advantage of her short time here, Sarah works hardly. She had not studied Chinese before arriving here, but she has some difficulty communicating with people she woke up early morning to study a bit before class. I admire her independence for

19、doing all of this while live so far away from her family. Besides, Sarah is in great help. Busy as she is, she often takes time help classmates with their English homework. A lovely girl, isnt she?【答案】 me- mine； which -who； month.- months ；去掉 take an advantage of 中的an； hardly-hard； but-so； woke -wak

20、es；live -living； in -of；在time help 之间加to第三处：month改为months ；考查名词单复数。根据数词two可知，此处应使用month的复数形式。故month改为months。第四处：去掉 take an advantage of 中的an；考查固定词组搭配。take advantage of“利用”，为固定短语。故去掉 take an advantage of 中的an。第五处：hardly改为hard；考查副词。hardly“几乎不”；hard可以作副词“努力地”。句意：Sarah努力学习。故hardly改为hard。 第六处：but改为so；考查并

21、列连词。根据句意可知，前后存在因果关系，而不是转折关系。故but改为so。第七处：woke改为wakes；考查动词时态。根据语境可知，此处描述的是目前Sarah的生活状态，应使用一般现在时。故woke改为wakes。第八处：live改为living；考查时间状语从句中的省略。分析句子结构可知，此处完整句子为I admire her independence for doing all of this while she is living so far away from her family.；当时间、条件状语从句中的主语与主句主语一致，且有be动词时，可以省略掉从句中的主语及be动词。故live改为living。第九处：in 改为of；考查介词搭配。根据下文中，Sarah在英语方面，时常帮助同学可知，她很乐于助人。be+of+抽象名词=be +相应的形容词。故in改为of。第十处：在time help 之间加to；考查动词搭配。take time to do sth.“花费时间做某事”，为固定搭配。故在time help 之间加to。版权所有：高考资源网()