2021届通用版高考英语一轮复习学案：写作思维指导：如何概括 WORD版含解析.doc

1、高中英语新高考-英语作文：写作思维指导：如何概括,破题,思维发散,推敲？有一个问题一直让我们老师困惑：为什么学生积累了那么多写作词块还是写不好作文？上次李俊和说了他们北京四中的做法，让我有些共鸣。他说，为了让学生学会在写作中能用上not only.but also，就用三周的时间，反复灌输。到最后，学生都恶心了。此时，这个句型不只是停留在你的大脑的皮层，而是在你的大脑的深层扎下了根，估计这辈子都忘不了。这个策略虽然有待商榷，但是我深感到，学生知道了和会用了之间有一段很长的距离，唯一的解决方法是，反复有意操练。这个公式应该是没错的：成功=简单事重复做,并做到极致在这篇文章里我还是要反复强调那些相

2、关词块和思维，包括：1.如何概括2.如何破题3.如何进行思维发散4.如何推敲作文指导请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。During a period of global economic depression, financial disturbance and trade protectionism, a country would face a battle to solve these issues alone. There is no denying that in the current situation, competition between count

3、ries is emphasized more than cooperation in that neither country would like to lose out to the other countries.The Hangzhou G20 summit, in which heads of state and government and central bankers get together to exchange views with each other, aims to create an “open innovation” environment, which me

4、ans to promote innovation not only within a single country, but by virtue of cooperation with other countries, to deal with common problems facing all of humanity.“China has already become a big player in the international arena(竞技场). However, China alone cannot wrestle with all the problems,” said

5、Atsushi Sunami, vice president at the National Graduate Institute for Policy Studies. “Being the second largest economy in the world, China needs to join forces with other nations to solve these existing problems, in relation to the environment, education, energy, clean water and climate change.”【写作

6、内容】1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；2. 用约120个单词谈谈你对合作的看法，内容包括： 合作的重要性及理由（至少两点）； 结合亲身经历或见闻举例说明。（以下指导可以说是快写法，写出的结果能基本达到20分，如果想更高，还要推敲，从逻辑和用词简洁上，请看后附的我的参考范文）一、如何概括：（1）提取关键词：financial disturbance and trade protectionismface a battle competitionHangzhou G20 summit aims to create an “open innovation” environment cooperat

7、ion 提示：最后一段是说话内容，几乎都是为了证明上面的论点，可以忽略。（2）联句Many countries face financial disturbance and trade protectionism and focus on competition. However, the Hangzhou G20 summit aims to create an “open innovation” environment and give priority to cooperation with each other.提示：一般新闻类的概括：每一段关键词为名词；把名词联合不过就是中间用动词或

8、介词短语。二、谈重要性和理由。1. 先把重要性的短语列出来：Be crucial/vital to (do) sthBe fundamental to (doing) sthCount for much/anythingPlay a big/vital role/part inLay a solid foundation forPave the way forBe of high necessity toBe of great importanceContribute to2. 如何进行思维发散思维发散的方向：物质层次（金钱、时间、成本、身体）-time, efficiency 精神层次（心理

9、、情感、技术）-potential/strength, feel motivated, it is fun社会层次（社会、文化、道德）-shared goalharmony主题句: Undoubtedly, cooperation plays an important role in our daily life and work.支撑句：First, it contributes to promoting work efficiency, because it will save us a lot of time.Second, it will lay a solid foundation

10、for developing our potential since our partners will give a helping hand to us.Last, it will pave the way for a harmonious society where each individual greet each other with smiles.提示：你可能看到了，不过就是在上面的短语前后加上主语或宾语。三、如何谈经历举例子一般最好以自己为例，名人的例子或热点的例子如果平时没有积累就不要去麻烦了，因为你想到的名人例子都是汉语思维的，再转成英语翻译不是一件容易的事情。举例要有三层

11、：开始、转机、结局、总结（大多为感叹）主题句：It reminds me of what happened last year. 开始：I had great trouble in learning English, but I was good at Chinese. However, my friend Jack was good at English but did bad in Chinese. （这个句子是琐碎的，但考场时间很紧张，先这样快写吧）转机：Therefore, we decided to cooperate.结局：Our efforts paid off at last

12、and both of us made great progress.总结：I realized with cooperation all of us can reap the harvest and work wonders.如何进一步推敲上面我归类为快写法，也就是最短时间内构思一篇文字，但时间久了，也有自己的缺点，就是形成了不怎么明显的模板文。所以，我们写完了，还要仔细思考，能否将其中的细节给去掉，或者用更准确的词来润色，还有如何让文章更有逻辑性。下面请记住更多的一些佳句吧，还有范文里的转换手段。1. Strengths are maximized while weaknesses are

13、 reduced. 2. We are motivated to be professional in special areas.3. Work becomes a fun thing when you are part of a team. 4. You cant applaud with one hand.5. With the joint efforts people are more likely to accomplish great deeds. Quite the opposite, the conceited always ends in futile(无用的) effort

14、s of achieving improvement. 6. If we want to complete our work effectively and efficiently in this busy, modern world, we must all learn to cooperate with each other. 7. In a win-win situation, we must learn to be supportive and cooperative. 8. It is hard for a person who is isolated from the societ

15、y to have deep understanding of the world he lives in and to accomplish a feat in his career. Therefore, cooperation is becoming increasingly important for a person to earn a full life in a modern society.9. The famous Chinese saying goes “One boy is boy, two boys half boy, and three boys no boy.” T

16、he same can be said to our life.（一个和尚挑水吃，两个和尚抬水吃，三个和尚没水吃）10. No one can whistle a symphony. It takes an orchestra to play it. 我的参考范文（在上面的基础上进行了润色）：Many countries nowadays face financial difficulties and focus on competition. However, the Hangzhou G20 summit aims to create an “open innovation” enviro

17、nment and give priority to cooperation with each other.Undoubtedly, cooperation plays an important role in our daily life and work. First, it will contribute to promoting work efficiency because we can make full use of / maximize our strengths / potential. Second, cooperation is the source of inspir

18、ation, since we are surrounded with talents who can broaden our horizons in different areas. Third, a shared goal serve as the constant motivation until we fulfil our goals. It reminds me of my experience last year. At first, I had great trouble in learning maths but excelled in English. It was just

19、 the opposite way around for my friend Tom. Therefore, we decided to cooperate with each other and minimize our weaknesses. Our efforts paid off eventually and we not only achieved our goals but also strengthened our friendship. I realized with cooperation all of us can reap the harvest and work won

20、ders.试题原配范文（很精彩）：The Hangzhou G20 summit places much emphasis on global cooperation rather than competition. It seeks to cope with the current issues in various fields, which cant be resolved by a single country. (32words)It is apparent that cooperation is a necessity for success in such a competiti

21、ve society. First and foremost, teamwork can help us achieve shared targets in a more efficient way. Furthermore, cooperation provides people with opportunities, learning to show respect for others. Those who lack such essential skills are certain to be wiped out of the team in modern society. (60wo

22、rds)The success our Chinese womens volleyball players achieved in the 2016 Rio Olympics is a striking example of the point. While we werent on the winning side at first, we strived as a team to the last minute of the match. Without team spirit, we wouldnt have won the championship. It is cooperation that really counts in addressing problems we face. (61words)积累：.is a striking example of the point.(用来替换It reminds me of.是不错的）It is.that really counts in addressing .(用来最后总结，代替传统的倒装句）