高中英语复习北师大版《How to do the proof》(共22张PPT).ppt

1、高考全国卷题型训练专题提升课Coherence in Proof-reading改错题中的一致性How to do proof reading well?skills固定搭配完整性一致性Coherence一致性Task 1Coherence in the sentences1.The understanding between two friends means both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other.2.When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I wo

2、uld be happy there.3.Bill was standing at the side of the car,talking to two men who was helping him to repair it.4.I found I had so much in common with her and I decided to go back together next year.trustthoughtwewere5.Today,it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past.6.Finally,there we

3、re a sudden pull at the pole and a fish was caught.7.Yesterday afternoon,I paid a visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.8.Katia,like many other Russian girls,are nice and lively.9.Dont panic or get out of line,and trying to remain quiet and calmly.(2 mistakes)10.H

4、e as well as his parents are fond of football.washiscalmwasistryis11.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.12.Thank you for all you have done for me.Mom,though I may often say it,I do love you.13.To deal with the problem,I think,we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will

5、 help save water.14.I am good at all the subjects,and always ready to help othersAt school I get along well with my classmatesTherefore,I have a problem that troubles me all the timeHoweverbecausenotandGroup Learning Discuss，match the mistakes with types of coherence and find the tipsTypes of cohere

6、nce 指代一致 词性一致 时态一致 主谓一致 逻辑一致 Sentence 1 Sentence 2 Sentence 3 Sentence 4 Sentence 5 Sentence 6 Sentence 7 Sentence 8 Sentence 9 Sentence 10 Sentence 11 Sentence 12 Sentence 13 Sentence 14SentencesTips 1:文中出现的每个代词要注意与其所指代的名词在_、_、_上保持一致。指代一致：Sentence人称数量性别4.I found I had so much in common with her and

7、 I decided to go back together next year.we7.Yesterday afternoon,I paid a visit to Mr.Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped.his4,7词性一致Tips 2:1.关注词语与其在句中的功能、修饰语是否相一致。尤其是名词的_2.由并列连接词连接的前后两部分在词性和功能作用上保持一致(_、_、_、_前后一致)。Sentence数（单复数、可不可数）形容词副词谓语非谓语1.The understanding between two

8、friends means both 2.of them have similar ideas and trusting each other.3.trust9.Dont panic or get out of line,and trying to remain quiet and calmly.(2 mistakes)try calm1,9Tips 3:要有目的地去检查文中每一个谓语动词的时态与_、_以及该句的_是否一致时态一致Sentence上下文语境2.When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be ha

9、ppy there.thought5.Today,it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past.was时间状语2,5Tips 4:谓语要与主语在_、_和_上保持一致；注意较为复杂的主语（有插入语，从句、非谓语作主语）；定语从句，there be句式主谓一致 Sentence人称数语态3.Bill was standing at the side of the car,talking to two men who was helping him to repair it.were6.Finally,there were a sudd

10、en pull at the pole and a fish was caught.was8.Katia,like many other Russian girls,are nice and lively is10.He as well as his parents are fond of football.is3,6,8,10逻辑一致Tips 5 上下文逻辑关系的一致。but，and，or等的使用。冠词（an/a 与the）的混用 重点在连词，肯定与否定等。sentence11.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.and12.T

11、hank you for all you have done for me.Mom,though I may often say it,I do love you.not13.To deal with the problem,I think,we should first go all out to plant trees though trees will help save water.because14.I am good at all the subjects,and always ready to help othersAt school I get along well with

12、my classmatesTherefore,I have a problem that troubles me all the timeHowever11,12,13,14Lets practice in the passageCoherence in the passage My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m.There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didnt need to do so much homework.How

13、ever,we have more time for after-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hours and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.They can lie on the grass for a rest,or sit

14、by the lake listening to music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(5mistakes)dontThereforelooksWehelpful时态一致逻辑一致主谓一致指代一致词性一致Practice makes perfectWhat to make sure?The steps(skimming略读-scanning浏览-checking检查)The skill(coherence)The right signs

15、 Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes in our back garden.Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and tas

16、te.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!yearshaveeverywheretastymanyagoofawonderfulConclusionSteps of doing proof readingOne of the skills for doing proof reading Coherence指代一致词性一致时态一致主谓一致逻辑一致The more we practise,the easier it will be!