高中英语复习北师大版《英语书面表达》 课件 (共34张PPT).ppt

1、How to write a good composition?英语书面表达写作指导By 陈少杰书面表达基本步骤三个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点、字数2、罗列提纲，提笔写作：3、检查修改，规范抄写HeadingBodyEnding以点及词，连词成句，联句成篇高分作文的标准（分）：完全完成了规定任务；覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误但为尽力使用较复杂或较高级词汇所致，具备了较强的语言运用能力；有效的使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的 1.Heading2.Body 3.Ending要点齐全,表述准确高级词

2、汇短语句子结构多样化连词点题，概括性的句子，引出话题总结，呼应主题(12届福建省质检书面表达)每个学生都是独特的，都有自己的才能。某英语报为了给学生提供一个展示和交流特长的平台,以My Advantage为题向高中学生征文。请你按所给内容要点写一篇英语短文应征。内容要点：1.你所擅长的某一个方面（如唱歌、绘画、某项运动）;2.你的特长产生的原因,你平时的做法以及收获；3.你的看法、体会。注意：1 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；2 词数：120左右。My AdvantageIm good at _*Explain your ideas correctly:2.I am good at jump

3、ing long which makes me pround.1.I am good at3.Therefore，not only can I do well in study，but also I can exercise me and make my body become more strongly.4.I than liking to music.5.As far as Im concerned，singing bring me a different life.6.To my surprise，I had made great progress in studying within

4、a month.As a consequence,I fell in love with running.sing songplay basketballreading bookListening to music？Explain your ideas correctly:1.I am good atsing songplay basketballreading booklistening to music？reading booksplaying basketballsinging songs 2.I am good at jumping long which makes me pround

5、.the long jumpproud3.Therefore，not only can I do well in study，but also I can exercise me and make my body become more strongly.As a matter of fact，stronger4.I than liking to music.I prefer music rather than anything else.5.As far as Im concerned，singing bring me a different life.scompletely/thoroug

6、hly6.To my surprise,running had made a great contribution to my study within a month.As a consequence,I fell in love with running.From then on，1、单词选用，拼写要准确2、句子要避免汉式英语。3、词性要分清。4、句子成分要摸清。5、注意前后时态。6、名词及动词的数要保持一致。Explain your ideas correctly:vocabulary（高级词汇）1.Therefore，not only can I do well in study，bu

7、t also I can exercise me and make my body become stronger.As a matter of fact，not only can running build me up and make my body increasingly strong，but also it can bring me a more positive effect on my study in return.2.I prefer music rather than anything else.To music,my preference is beyond descri

8、ption.Vocabulary:丰富的高级词汇My preference to music is beyond anything else/description.Nothing is more into me than singing songs.句子结构多样化1.感叹句2.并列句（and/but/so/for)3.复合句4.倒装句5.主动句与被动句6.强调句7.with复合结构8.分词9.虚拟语气利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。Express the same meaning in as many ways as you can.1.I argue:“Singing s

9、ongs makes us relaxed and broad-minded.”2.We are confident enough to live a happy life with more than an own advantage.3.I could not sing until 13.One day，I was asked to sing in front of my classmates.How nervous I was then!When I heard the clap from classmates and the appreciate from my teacher，I b

10、ecame confident.From then on，singing became my favorite.(多考虑一下语法结构或复合从句哟)4.Singing gives me a complete confidence and makes me well-received and happy5.I couldnt play basketball until I was 17.1.I argue，“Singing songs makes us relaxed and broad-minded.”How relaxed and broad-minded it is to sing song

11、s.What singing gives us is a relaxed mood and a broad mind.It is singing that makes us relaxed and broad-minded.Express the same meaning in as many ways as you can.2.We are confident enough to live a happy life with more than an own advantage.A happier life will belong to whoever makes full use of h

12、is advantages.To live a more splendid life,what we call for is to make best of our advantages.Express the same meaning in as many ways as you can.3.I could not sing until 13.One day，I was asked to sing in front of my classmates.When I heard the clap from classmates and the appreciate from my teacher

13、，I became confident.From then on，singing became my favorite.Believe it or not，I dare not sing in public until askedto sing.Hearing encouraging words from dear class-mates，singing gradually strengthened my confidence and eventually became my favorite.4.Singing gives me a complete confidence and makes

14、 me well-received and happyNot only does singing give me a complete confidence，but also it makes me well-received and happyThere is no denying that,as well as being well-received and happy,singing gives me a complete confidence,which is of the greatest importance.There is no denying that singing giv

15、es me a complete confidence，as well as being well-received and happy.5.I couldnt play basketball until I was seventeen.Not until I was seventeen could I play basketball.It was not until the age of seventeen that I could play basketball.Until seventeen，as I was ever dreaming of,if only I had had a gi

16、ft for playing basketball.Linking words排序过渡性插入语对称转折因果条件让步递进排序过渡性插入语对称转折因果条件让步递进firstly,secondly,then,finally/at last,last but not leastI think,Im afraid,you know,As we all know,As is known to us allfor one thing,for the other thing,on one hand,on the other handbut,however,while,though,otherwise,yet,

17、on the other hand,on the contrarybecause,since,as,thanks to,as a result(of),owing to,on account of;so,thus,thereforeso/as long as,on condition that,if,unlessprovided thatthough,as,even if/though,whether,who(what,when,where)everwhats more,besides,to make the matter worse,whats worse,moreover,in addit

18、ion,furthermoreFill in the blanks with the following linking words.there is no denying thatbelieve it or not,surprisingly,as far as I am concerned,not onlybut(also),thanks to ever since then；as to me Im good at singing.,singing is to me what water is to fish.Dating back to my childhood，I wouldnt hav

19、e fallen into sound sleep without my mothers sweet childrens songs at the bedtime.Hardly can you imagine the magic influence songs and mum had on me at that time.,_，I could not sing in public until asked to sing.Hearing encouraging words from my dear classmates,_,I opened my mouth and fell in love w

20、ith singing as well as a confident mood_._the help from teachers and constant practice,it was last term that I took part in the campus cultural festival and won the second prize._，everybody is unique and has his advantages in some respects._that _does singing give me a complete confidence,_ it makes

21、 me well received and happy.With my advantages，I am confident to enjoy a more splendid future.As to meButbelieve it or notsurprisinglyThanks toAs far as I am concernednot onlybutever since thenThere is no denyingEnding总结主要观点、重复开头或题目、提出结论、引言In short/in brief/in a word/in conclusion，To sum up,All in a

22、ll,On the whole,Act as a teacher and underline the good points of the following composition.书写工整，卷面整洁的模 范 卷书写是否工整清晰也会影响答卷得分。卷面不整洁，涂改多；大小写;标点符号;书写不清，得分会很低！顶线、平行、斜45Homework 1.improve your own composition.2.假如你是福建省某中学高三学生李华，拟参加某英语报社组织的“畅想未来，规划人生”的征文活动。请根据以下内容要点及要求写一篇征文稿。注意：1.征文应包含以上内容，可适当拓展；2、开头已给出，不计入总词数；3、征文中不能出现考生的具体信息；4、词数：120左右。*My Plan for the Future Senior year is coming to an end.It is high time for me to think about my future plan._ 内容要点：1、规划内容；2、规划理由；3、实现途径；