高考英语写作的分技巧.ppt

1、Welcome to Mr.Gaos ClassWelcome to Mr.GaosClass!2005.4.24书面表达系列讲练之赢取高分策略NMET对书面表达的要求要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。本部分满分25/30分，所需时间约为30分钟。NMET书面表达评分原则1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。第五档.2125分第四档.1620分第三档.1115分第二档.610分第一档.15分0分语言地道，规范覆盖所有内容要点2、主要内容：内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；语言的得

2、体性应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分3、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？书面表达如何写？五个步骤1、审题文字信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。4 联句成文

3、：注意：主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系开头与结尾语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending小结；呼应主题技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式1.Because the weather

4、 was good,our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books.5.As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇We a

5、ll think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me./A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.6.When she heard he had died,she went pale with sorrow.7.She went to Austria in order to study music.8.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.9.In our school,there are twenty-

6、six classrooms.10.You can find my house easily.She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.At the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Youll have no trouble finding my house.丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同

7、的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。1.感叹句 e.g.How happy I was when I received your letter!What a kind boy he is!How disappointed he was!2.强调句 e.g.It was this young boy that helped the old granny.I do hope you can come if possible.3、倒装句 e.g.Only in this way can you solve this problem.There comes the police car.Hard

8、ly had they got to the stationwhen they met the young man.4、省略句 e.g.They read while walking orriding on a bus.Come to me if necessary.5、with短语 e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.6、定语从句 e.g.In my opinion,cyber cafes should be a place where we canfind much u

9、seful information.Lets come to the main teachingbuilding,at the back of which standsthe school library.7、各种名词性从句 e.g.Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.8、各种状语从句 e.g.Time passed quickly before we knew it.The moment we reached the farm,we got down to harvesti

10、ng.So long as we work harder at our lessons,well catch up sooner or later.Do call me before hand so that I can meetyou at the airport.They had to wait because the rain wasgetting more and more heavily.1 When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so m

11、any things.（使用名词性从句）3.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句)4.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)5.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）On his arriving,please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so

12、 many things.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.6.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词)7.They sang and laughed as

13、 they went back to school.(使用V-ing形式)8.I wont believe what he says.（使用状语从句）9.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（用并列句）10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students,she wal

14、ked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.高考大纲中常用的连接词1.表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容另外，还有：what is more;besides;also;moreover;in addition2.表示转折关系但是，然而，相反：but;however;yet;instead;on the other hand;on the contrary.3

15、.表示因果关系因为，因此，所以:since;as;because (of);so;thus;therefore;as a result;4.表示条件关系如果，只要:if;on condition(that);as long as除非:unless 否则:or else5.表示时间关系当 的时候:when;while在之后:after在之前:before 直到:until一就:as soon as后来，然后:later;afterwards不久:soon近来:lately;recently自从:since 从那时起:from then on6.表示特定的顺序关系首先，最主要的:above all

16、其次:secondly 然后:then;next最后:finally;in the end7.换一种方法表述换句话说:in other words;that is to say;8.进行举例说明例如，比如:for instance;for example;like;such as9.用于陈述事实实际上:in fact;actually;as a matter of fact跟你说实话:to tell you the truth10.对一个话题进行总结总而言之，总的来说:on the whole;in short;all in all;in general;in a word11.其它常用到的副

17、词Therefore;otherwise;finally;furthermore;Thus;namely;although;afterwards;personally;On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library.(NMET1999 范文)As far as I know,everyone is happy about this new ar

18、rangement of things.(NMET2001 范文)Whats more,I can go to bed earlier.(NMET2001 范文)三、怎样使用恰当的连接词Practice 1 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1.Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ he heard someone cry for help.2.He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in the west.3.It was not long _ the police

19、came.4._he heard the cry for help,he jumped into the water to save the girl.whenin order thatbeforeAs soon as5.Do you agree with my arrangement?_,do write to me soon.6.We can go downtown and do some shopping._,we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7.I shared the cost of the gas with my frien

20、ds._,I saved$80.8.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth._,it may make us fat.If not/soIn additionAs a resultWhats worse联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。

21、2）词数：100-120之间。Practice 书面表达：Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school.This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.The school here was very small.

22、Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This vil

23、lage is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.How

24、ever,it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast.People here live a much better life than before.书面表达：Now it is taking on a new look.In the past,the school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful build

25、ing in the village.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.In the past,the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school.But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.All the sch

26、ool-age children can study here.Whats more,they enjoy free education.May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/May you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This village is a small onewith/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people

27、.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast.People here live a much better life than before.Now it is taking on a new look.In the past,the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school.But now it has been rebuilt an

28、d the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.All the school-age children can study here.Whats more,they enjoy free education.May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.2001年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。I will

29、tell you the changes of my life.Before,we had many classes every day.I had to do a lot of homework after school.I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening.I had no time to play.I was very tired.Now I can visit museums.I can learn computer and drawing.In the evening,I can read books and newspapers and wat

30、ch TV.I go to bed at 10:00 now.17分高考满分作文Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced.Before that,learning during the day was very simple.Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do.In the evening,we also had a lot of homework to do.We could no

31、t go to bed until 11:30.Nevertheless,since reducing the learning load,my life has become much moreinteresting.I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time.In the evening,Ialso have time to watch TV and read newspapers.I no longer stay up late;on the contrary,I go to be

32、d at about 10 pm.In short,I am quite satisfied with my life now.书面表达常用语句1.书信2.Thanks for your last letter.3.I am writing just to inform you 4.In reply to your last letter,I am writing5.to explain the two questions as follows:6.开头 Looking forward to your reply/hearing from you!Thanks for your conside

33、ration.Do remember me to your parents!结尾2.叙事It is quite obvious/clear that(很显然)There is no doubt that(毫无疑问)Take as an example.(以为例）On one hand,on the other hand(一方面，另一方面)Only in this way shall we(只有这样我们才能)As far asis concerned,I prefer(就而言，我更)Measures/Action should be taken to(必须采取措施去)For the reason

34、s given above,I feel that(鉴于以上原因，我觉得What these people fail to consider is that(这些人没有想到的是.)Undoubtedly there is a long way to go before(毫无疑问要还有很长的路要走）Therefore,I strongly recommend that(因此，我强烈建议All the facts show that（所有的事实显示)I like not only because but also because(我喜欢不仅因为而且因为)I am writing to you to

35、 inquire about(我写信给你想询问)I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at(我给你写信表示我对的不满）I apologize to you for(我为向你道歉）I am grateful to you for(我为向你表示感谢）Mr.Green,my best friend,is teaching Mr.Green,a favorite teacher from the USA,is teachingLetter writingA LetterNov 5,2001Wuzheng Middle SchoolZhejian

36、g P.R.C.JackTongxiang High SchoolDear Mary,BodyYours,Jack 亲人、家属：Yours lovingly ;Yours affectionately 朋友、平辈：Sincerely yours Yours sincerely 上级、长者：Yours respectfully Respectfully yours 单位、部门：Yours sincerely Yours faithfully 结束语Closing信封正面StampAirmail信封背面June 5th,2000 Dear Mr.Zhao,I am sorry that I am

37、unable to attend school during the following week because of the Sports Meet.The school expects me to play an important part in it.And I will be back to class in a week.I hope you will excuse my absence.(in fact,I take a French leave)Yours respectfullyCharlesCharles Encl:the PE Teachers certificate(

38、Encl:the PE Teachers certificate(证明）证明）便 条（病/事假条）（NOTICE/ANNOUNCEMENT)口头通知：Ladies and Gentlemen,May I have you attention please?正文 书面通知：NOTICE In celebration of May Day,there will be-正文School Office April 25th,2000 通知、通告 Wednesday May 5th Cloudy It is nearly a month since I began keeping diaries.I f

39、ind it a very good exercise in English composition.I got back my essay on A Visit to the Park.It was marked with A.There were only three mistakes in it:one in grammar and two in idiom.Im happy to see that I can now express myself in English more usually than ever before.,日记 DiaryHomeworkRewriting us

40、ing conjunctive wordsPractice 2请你给中国日报写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。原因：1、家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣，不愿上学。看法：1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。Now in the country areas,there are many children out of school.Most families are poor and cant afford their edu

41、cation.They have to stay at home and make money.Some parents think daughters neednt go to school.They dont let them go to school.Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldnt like to go to school.All the children including girls should be educated.The whole society should pay attention to it.Theyll play an important part in the future of our country.欢 迎 你 的 光 临请留下宝贵建议谢谢你的光临请留下宝贵建议