2020届高考英语一轮复习短文改错专题集训（6） WORD版含解析.doc

1、1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。Jack was walking in the forest near his village while he smelled smoke and saw a fire that was out of the control. Many t

2、rees have already been burned. He looked at the black ground and saw a green snake, that was under a large tree. He knew the snake was in danger. He lifted up the falling tree, put the snake into a bag and ran back to his village. He showed his mother the beautiful snake and begged her to let him ke

3、eping it. His mother agreed. He then fed the snake on mice and gave them a large area in their yard to live. The snake lived a very comfortably life. He also invited one of his best friend to feed it. Both of them liked the snake very much.2、假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单

4、词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Dear Jim,I will tell you some informations about our school sports meet last Sunday. It was held in September 15.More than 4,000 students and teachers take part in it. Wang F

5、ang, a student from our class won the 100 meter race. She finished the race in 12.6 seconds broke the school record. The sports meet was really satisfied, because we were trying my best. Although I was not one of the winner, but I was happy with what we had done.Looking forward to receive your reply

6、.3、请你修改以下短文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。I have a good friend her name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clev

7、er, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homework one Sunday morning while she smelt something burning. She stopped to look out window and find a cloud of smoke comin

8、g out of her neighbors house. She called 119 immediately. Ten minutes after, the firemen came and put out the fire.Her neighbor was very thankful for his help.4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修

9、改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Dear Joy, How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in our school in the 20th of October. However, there is a rule the participants shall be in a group. But Id like to invite you to be my partners.I kn

10、ow that you have been longed to design a tiny cooler that people can wear around the wrist. I think it will be a wonderfully idea for the competition. We can make a small air conditioner to controlling the temperature of the wearer. How do you think of my suggestion? Looking forward to you reply.5、假

11、定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Daniel was born with a brain disorder. Because of it, he was differently from other children. As a child, h

12、e likes to play alone and acted strangely. To many of his classmate, Daniel seemed unusual and we laughed at him. This hurt Daniel deeply, but he became very shy. As a teenager, things were changed. Daniel found he could solve difficult maths problems almost instantly. He also showed other talent:he

13、 could learn to speak a language very quickly. Today, he is fluent in twelfth languages. As adult, Daniel has overcome his shyness. He has written two books and now he travels constantly to talk to people with his life.6、文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线

14、（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。People enjoy take trips. But what are the reasons why they leave home willingly? One reason is for education. People travel because we are curious about other different custom and cultures. When people are tourists, they get

15、 a quickly look at various ways of living. Even a short look at another kind of lifestyle is important lesson. On a trip, a person can learn directly by visiting to museums and historic spots. What does a tourist whom travels in Paris learn? He got a picture in his mind and a real life of one of the

16、 French people. He learns about their attitudes towards life, and what they feel about business, beautiful and history.7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。1. 注意:2. 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;3. 2.

17、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。4. Mao Zhaomu drop out of high school several years ago. Now the self-taught English learner has been admitted to one of Chinas top foreign language university, Sichuan International Studies University, that he used to deliver food to students. Mao once worked a delivery man f

18、or a restaurant. And he chatted happy with English learners online during her spare time. There were much grammatical mistakes, but that didnt prevent him from chatting. To seize every chance to study English, he would memorize words while wait for customers. Mao said that how he hoped very8、假定英语课上老

19、师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living a city, but I miss my

20、 home in the countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluting. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting

21、dirtier and dirtier. Many rare animal are dying out. We must find ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.答案1、答案：Jack was walking in the forest near his village he smelled smoke and saw a fire that was out of the control. Many trees already been burned. He looke

22、d at the black ground and saw a green snake, was under a large tree. He knew the snake was in danger. He lifted up the tree, put the snake into a bag and ran back to his village. He showed his mother the beautiful snake and begged her to let him it. His mother agreed. He then fed the snake on mice a

23、nd gave a large area in their yard to live . The snake lived a very life. He also invited one of his best to feed it. Both of them liked the snake very much.解析：略 2、答案：Dear Jim,I will tell you some about our school sports meet last Sunday. It was held September 15.More than 4,000 students and teacher

24、s part in it. Wang Fang, a student from our class won the 100 race. She finished the race in 12.6 seconds broke the school record. The sports meet was really , because we were trying best. Although I was not one of the , but I was happy with what we had done.Looking forward to your reply.解析：略3、答案：I

25、have a good friend name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents out. She was doing her homework one Sunda

26、y morning she smelt something burning. She stopped to look out window and a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbors house. She called 119 immediately. Ten minutes, the firemen came and put out the fire.Her neighbor was very thankful for help.解析：略 4、答案：Dear Joy, How are you doing? Here is an excit

27、ing news for you. There will be an invention competition our school in the 20th of October. However, there is a rule the participants shall be in a group. Id like to invite you to be my .I know that you have been to design a tiny cooler that people can wear around the wrist. I think it will be a ide

28、a for the competition. We can make a small air conditioner to the temperature of the wearer. do you think of my suggestion? Looking forward to reply.解析：1.第二句:删除an news是不可数名词，前面不能用不定冠词a/an来修饰。2.第三句:第二个in改为on在具体的某一天要用介词on而不能用inn3.第四句:在rule后面加that此处that引导的是同位语从句。4.第五句：But改为So此句与上句之间为因果关系。句意:所以我想邀请你成为我的

29、搭档。5.第五句.partners改为partner此处是指Joy,所以要用单数。6.第六句：longed改为longing have been longing是现在完成进行时态。7.第七句:wonderfully改为wonderful此处修饰名词，应用形容词而不用副词，副词修饰动词、形容词等，作状语。8.第八句：controlling改为control此处用不定式作目的状语。9.第九句:How 改为What What do you think of.? = How do you think.?你认为怎么样？10.第十句:you改为your此处应用形容词性物主代词your修饰名词reply。5

30、、答案：Daniel was born with a brain disorder. Because of it, he was from other children. As a child, he to play alone and acted strangely. To many of his , Daniel seemed unusual and laughed at him. This hurt Daniel deeply, he became very shy. As a teenager, things were changed. Daniel found he could so

31、lve difficult maths problems almost instantly. He also showed talent:he could learn to speak a language very quickly. Today, he is fluent in languages. As adult, Daniel has overcome his shyness. He has written two books and now he travels constantly to talk to people his life.解析： 1.第二句differentlydif

32、ferent考查形容词。结合前面的系动词was可知，此处是固定搭配be different from,意为“与不同”，故将differently 改为different。2. 第三句:likesliked考查时态。根据语境可知，此处讲述的是过去的事情，因此应用一般过去时，故将likes改为liked。3. 第四句：classmateclassmates考査名词单复数 classmate 为可数名词，结合前面的many可知，后面的名词应该用复数形式，故将 classmate 改为 classmates。4.第四句:wethey考查代词。结合语境可知，此处指代他的很多同学，表示“他们”，应用the

33、y,故将we改为they。5.第五句：butso考査连词。根据语境可知，此处表示由于这深深地伤害了他，因此他变得非常害羞。“同学们嘲笑 Daniel让Daniel很受伤”和“Daniel变得很害羞”这两件事并不是转折关系，而是因果关系，因此将but改为so。6.第八句：去掉were 考査语态。根据语境可知，此处表示事情发生了变化，things和changed之间是主动关系，故将were 去掉。7. 第八句:otheranother考査代词。根掘语境及本句中的also可知，此处表示“另一种天赋”，other意为“其余的”， another 意为“另一”，故将other 改为 another。8.

34、 第九句:twelfthtwelve考查数词,结合语境可知，此处表示他能流利地说12种语言，此处表示数量，而不是第十二种语言，因此将twelfth改为twelve。9.第十句:在adult前加an 考査冠词。adult是单数可数名词，其前应有冠词修饰，根据语境可知，此处表示“一个成年人”，表泛指，用不定冠词，且 adult以元音音素开头，因此在adult 前加 an。10.第十一句：withabout考查介词c talk to sb. About sth.和某人谈论某事，因此将with改为about。6、答案：People enjoy trips. But what are the reaso

35、ns why they leave home willingly? One reason is for education. People travel because are curious about other different and cultures. When people are tourists, they get a look at various ways of living. Even a short look at another kind of lifestyle is important lesson. On a trip, a person can learn

36、directly by visiting to museums and historic spots. What does a tourist travels in Paris learn? He a picture in his mind and a real life of one of the French people. He learns about their attitudes towards life, and they feel about business, and history.7、答案： Mao Zhaomu out of high school several ye

37、ars ago. Now the self-taught English learner has been admitted to one of Chinas top foreign language , Sichuan International Studies University, he used to deliver food to students. Mao once worked a delivery man for a restaurant. And he chatted with English learners online during spare time. There

38、were grammatical mistakes, but that didnt prevent him from chatting. To seize every chance to study English, he would memorize words while for customers. Mao said that how he hoped very much to become an interpreter. Whoever a dream and dares to seek it is the loveliest person.解析：考査动词的时态:根据时间状语sever

39、al years ago可知,谓语动词应用一般过去时考查名词one of后接复数名词。 考査定语从句:定语从句中缺少地点状语,应由关系副词引导定语从句,补充说明先行词 Sichuan International Studies University。考查介词。表示“担任,以身份工作”要用work as。考查副词。副词修饰动词,考査代词。短文的主人公是男性,应将her改为his。考査形容词。mistakes是复数名词,应用形容词many修饰。考查省略句.在while引导的时间状语从句中,若主句和从句的主语相同,且从句中含有be动词时,可将从句主语和be动词一起省略,即 .he would mem

40、orize words while (he was) waiting for customers.考查宾语从句。宾语从句中不缺少句子成分和词义,应删除how。考査主谓一致。whoever作主语,谓语动词用单数.8、答案： When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I I would be happy there. Now I am living a city, but I miss my home in the countryside. There the air is clean the mountains are green. Unf

41、ortunately, the development of industrialization, the environment has been . Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very problem. The we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Many rare are dying out. We must find ways to protect environment. If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.解析：略