2023年新教材高考英语一轮复习 写作专项——要规范1（含解析）外研版必修第一册.docx

1、写作专项要规范.应用文写作上周日你班组织了以“亲近大自然”为主题的“秋游红叶谷”活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.活动过程;3.个人感受。注意:词数80左右。AnAutumnOutingtotheRedLeafValley_.读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。The rain came down steady and hard.Jason Storie heard it but was not worried as he prepared for a day of caving with five friends in

2、a remote spot 80 miles northwest of his home in Duncan,on Canadas Vancouver Island.It was 6 a.m.on December 5.As a newcomer to the sport,Jason had gone caving only four times.This would be his toughest outing yet:a cave called Cascade.It was dangerous enough that the entrance was blocked by a locked

3、 metal door to keep the casual cavers out.About a mile long and 338 feet deep,Cascade was full of turns and barely passable.Jason was new among the group,with the least experience and,at 43,older by a decade or more.It was his friend Andrew Munoz,33,who introduced him to the sport.Unlike Jason,Andre

4、w was an expert cavera former caving guide,actually.They hiked a bit before coming to the door,which sat in the groundyoud miss it if you werent looking for it.It was 10 a.m.With their way lighted by headlamps,they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks.The silence was broken by a dri

5、p,drip,drip from above.Soon the drip turned into a light but steady flow,and they were wading in water up to their ankles,and then to their shins.Two hours later,they approached one of the features that made the cave unique:a narrow passage not big enough to stand up in that led into a short,tight d

6、ownhill.This had a name:Bastards Crawl.Four streams met here,and indeed,the water was flowing more quickly.The sound of the water had turned into a roar.When they finally neared the top of Bastards Crawl,there were barely four inches of air left between the water and the ceiling,not enough for them

7、to keep their heads up to breathe.They came to the terrifying realization that they were in danger!注意:续写词数应为150左右。The water kept rising,and there was no hope of rescue._Slowly but steadily,the group made their way forward._答案：.AnAutumnOutingtotheRedLeafValleyLast Sunday,we,all the students of our cl

8、ass,participated in a one-day trip to the Red Leaf Valley organized by our class,which intended us to get close to nature.At 6 am,we started on foot and it took an hour before we reached our destination.During the walk,we not only breathed fresh air but appreciated fantastic surrounding views.In the

9、 valley,so attractive were the red leaves that all our stress was relieved.We had some beautiful pictures taken and enjoyed a wonderful picnic.This activity rewarded us with an unforgettable memory.Thewaterkeptrising,andtherewasnohopeofrescue.The hours passed.Jason and Andrew didnt dare to move for

10、fear of slipping.They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake.Every once in a while,one of them turned on the headlamp to check the water level.An hour later,the water level went down enough so that they could try an escape.Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours,they slowly unfolded thei

11、r bodies.Jason screamed in pain,but he was determined not to let it stop him.Slowlybutsteadily,thegroupmadetheirwayforward.Still,each time Jason moved a leg,he cried out.Over the next 90 minutes,they made their way toward the entrance,at times in chest-high water.Now,in a passage that was high enough for them to walk upright,Jason saw something flicker in the distance.“Light!I see light!”Jason shouted out.For the first time since entering the cave,over 20 hours earlier,Jasons emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.3