2020版高考一轮复习英语新课改外研版学案：选修7 MODULE 2 HIGHLIGHTS OF MY SENIOR YEAR WORD版含解析.doc

1、(一)课前自主学习.阅读单词知其意1highlight n最重要的部分；最精彩的部分2enormous adj. 巨大的，庞大的3slogan n. 口号；标语4nursery n. 托儿所5alphabet n. 字母表6pillow n. 枕头7quilt n. 被子8shabby adj. 破旧的，破烂的9cushion n. 垫子10curtain n. 窗帘；门帘；帘子11fortnight n纵联1 两星期，14天12arithmetic n. 算术13institution n. 机构，团体14dynamic adj. 精力充沛的，有创新思想的15botanical adj. 植

2、物(学)的16woolen adj. 羊毛制的，毛料的17sob v纵联2 啜泣，呜咽，抽噎18certificate n. _(毕业)文凭，成绩合格证书19scholarship n. 奖学金20multiply v纵联3 乘，使相乘.重点单词写其形 1chart_ n. 图；图表2peer_ n. 同龄人3rent v. (短期)租用4keen_ adj. 渴望的；热切的；热心的5issue n纵联4 问题6outdoor adj. 户外的；用于户外的7concept n. 概念8recite_ v. 背诵，朗诵9suitcase n. (旅行用)手提箱10luggage n. 行李11p

3、unctual adj. 准时的，守时的12upset v. 使(某人)心烦意乱，使心情不好13button n. 纽扣，扣子14mailbox n. 邮箱，邮筒15course_ n. 课程16photography n. 摄影(术).拓展单词通其变1settle v解决；定居settlement n和解；协议；安顿；定居点settler n移民；殖民者2competitive adj.好强的；好竞争的compete v竞争；竞赛competition n竞争；竞赛；比赛competitor_n竞争者；对手3elect v选举；推选election n选举elector n选举人4suit

4、v合适；适合suitable adj.合适的；适当的 纵联55attract v吸引attractive adj.吸引人的；有吸引力的attraction n吸引(力)；吸引人的事物 纵联66consider v认为consideration n考虑；关心considerate adj.体贴7develop v发展；培养developing adj.发展中的developed adj.发达的development n发展；开发8activity n活动；行动act v行动；动作active adj.积极的9ability n能力；本领；技能disability n残疾；无能10traditio

5、n n传统traditional adj.传统的11innocent adj.天真无邪的；阅世不深的innocence n清白；天真无邪12worn adj.(物品)陈旧的，损坏的wear_v穿；戴13decoration n装饰物decorate vt.装饰decorative adj.装饰的14regulation n规章，规则，条例regular adj.有规律的；经常的15cheer v欢呼；喝彩；加油cheerful adj.快乐的；愉快的纵联1.“时间”都去哪儿了？fortnight n两星期quarter n季度decade n十年 century n百年纵联2.“哭泣”表情包s

6、ob v呜咽，啜泣 cry v&n.哭泣weep v哭泣；流泪 howl v嚎啕大哭burst into tears突然哭起来burst out crying突然哭起来纵联3.数学运算常用到multiply v乘，使相乘divide v除；除以plus prep.加；加上n.加号；正号minus prep.减n.减号；负号纵联4.不一样的“问题”issue n问题 problem n问题；难题；麻烦matter n问题；事情 trouble n问题；麻烦question n问题；疑问纵联5.“适合的”都很好suitable adj. 适合的；相配的right adj. 正好的；恰当的fit a

7、dj. 适合的；恰当的appropriate adj. 合适的；适当的adaptive adj. 适应的；适合的纵联6.形容词“tive”聚会attractive有吸引力的 competitive有竞争力的effective起作用的 imaginative可想象的talkative爱说话的 decorative装饰性的单元话题精彩高中生活子话题1校园设施locker n储物柜lecture theatre阅览室lawn n草地 cafeteria n自助食堂auditorium n大礼堂 gymnasium n体育馆stadium n运动场 bulletin/notice board布告栏子话

8、题2学校人员headmistress n女校长 headteacher n班主任schoolmate n校友 personnel n人员；人事school board学校董事会 staff n全体员工tutor n导师；助教 professor n教授子话题3学生学业assignment n作业 assessment n评估，评价mark/score/grade n分数 discipline n纪律revision n复习；复查 acquisition n习得；获得学考对接活学活用高考采撷(一)阅读中的词汇应用1(2018全国卷阅读B) Cities usually have a good r

9、eason for being where they are, like a nearby port or river. People settle in these places because they are easy to get to and naturally suited to communications and trade.选择settle在句中的含义：_B_A解决 B定居C安排D放松suited在本单元中的动词原形是：suit；其含义为：合适；适合2(2015陕西高考阅读第二节) Being punctual， we can avoid anxiety.Imagine th

10、e anxiety if you do not want to be considered unpunctual. You will be anxious if you set out for a dinner late.写出punctual在句中的含义：准时的，守时的；其反义词为：unpunctual选择considered在句中的含义：_A_A认为B考虑高考采撷(二)写作中的词汇应用(根据汉语及提示词翻译句子)1(2018全国卷书面表达)首先，你最好准时到达，因为准时在中国被认为是礼貌的。(punctual, consider)First_of_all_youd_better_arrive

11、_on_time_because_being_punctual_is_considered_polite_in_China.2(2016天津高考书面表达)按照预定时间，我们参与了几个有意义的活动。我们去餐馆品尝中国传统美食。(activity, traditional)As_scheduled,_we_participated_in_several_instructive/beneficial_activities._We_went_to_the_restaurant_to_taste_the_Chinese_traditional_food.(二)课堂重点释疑1settle v解决；处理；定

12、居；停留；平静；放松辨清写出下列句中settle的含义She settled in Vienna after her fathers death.定居It was a rainy morning and the children, mainly boys with various learning difficulties, refused to settle for the start of the lesson.平静It is only by listening to and understanding each other that problems between parents an

13、d children can be settled. 解决记牢(1)settle down(使)平静下来；(使)稳定；定居下来settle down to (doing) sth.专心(做)某事settle in/into . 迁入(新居)；适应(新工作)(2)settlement n. 安顿；定居点；解决；协议settler n. 移民；殖民者练通单句语法填空Its high time that he settled down in the country and started a new life.(2016全国卷)They settled in at a comfortable Eas

14、t Side cafe and within minutes, another customer was approaching their table.Then, in 1565, a Spanish conqueror established a settlement (settle) there, and named it St. Augustine.Lets settle down to our studies. Its a waste of time surfing the Internet all day.用准表示“在定居”，settle in settle down in。写美翻

15、译句子得知你和家人即将来中国定居，我十分高兴。Im_so_glad_to_learn_that_you_and_your_family_are_coming_to_settle_down_in_China.2suit v合适；适合；相配；合心意n.套装；一套外衣记牢(1)suit sb./sth.适合某人或某物be suited to/for 适合于(2)a swimming suit 一件泳衣(3)suitable adj. 适当的；相配的；恰当的be suitable for . 适合于be suitable to do sth. 适合做某事练通单句语法填空(2018天津高考)Some e

16、xperts are skeptical about 3D food printers, believing they are better suited/suitable(suit) for fast food restaurants than homes and highend restaurants.Many of the fish caught for sport are not suitable for eating, so they are thrown away.These colorful crayons are not suitable to_use (use) in ver

17、y hot weather.用准表示“适合于”时，suited 后可接介词to或for；而suitable 后只能接介词for。写美翻译句子(2018天津高考书面表达)因此，你是最合适的人选。Therefore,_you_are_the_most_suitable_person.3attract v吸引；引起(兴趣、注意等)记牢(1)attract sb. to .把某人吸引到attract ones attention 吸引某人的注意力(2)attraction n. 吸引力；吸引人的事物tourist attraction 旅游胜地/景点(3)attractive adj. 吸引人的；迷人

18、的，有魅力的be attractive to 对有吸引力练通单句语法填空(2016全国卷)But for tourists like me, pandas are its top_attraction (attract)(2017北京高考)Mount Tai is attractive (attract) to tourists for its beautiful scenery and historical sites.补全句子(2015重庆高考)In ancient Egypt, a shopkeeper discovered that he could attract_customers

19、_to_his_shop simply by making changes to its environment.在古埃及，一个店老板发现他能通过改变商店的环境把顾客吸引到他的店里来。用准attraction作“吸引人的事物或景点”时，是可数名词。写美翻译句子(2017北京高考书面表达)作为亚洲最长的河流，长江有众多的旅游景点。As the longest river in Asia, the Yangtze River has so many tourist attractions. 4keen adj.渴望的；热切的；热心的记牢be keen on sb./sth.喜欢某人/某物be ke

20、en on doing sth. 喜欢做某事be keen to do . 渴望做练通单句语法填空If you like astronomy, you may be keen on collecting(collect) stamps describing the stars, planets, spacecraft, spacemen, etc.补全句子The leader of the party is_keen_on_hearing/to_hear the disagreements from the different walks of life. 该党领袖渴望听到来自各行各业的不同的

21、声音。写美翻译句子使我惊讶的是你对中国诗歌的热爱。What_surprised_me_is_that_you_are_keen_on_Chinese_poetry.5consider v认为；考虑记牢(1)consider sth./doing sth.考虑(做)某事(2)consider .(as/to be) . 认为是(3)consideration n. 考虑，体谅take .into consideration 考虑/顾及到under consideration 在考虑之中(4)considering prep. 考虑到；鉴于considerate adj. 考虑周到的；体贴的(5)

22、considerable adj. 相当的；值得考虑的considerably adv. 相当地；非常地练通单句语法填空(2017全国卷)As early as 1966, biologists asked the government to consider reintroducing (reintroduce) wolves to Yellowstone Park.It was considerate (consider) of Michael to inform us of his delay in case we got worried.Considering (consider) t

23、his, you might expect the book to be translated into Chinese.补全句子As a great singer，she considers_music_(as/to_be)an_important_part_of_her_life.作为一名伟大的歌唱家，她将音乐看作是她生活的一个重要部分。写美补全句子(2018浙江高考写作)承蒙考虑，我会不胜感激！I will be grateful if_you_could_give_me_a_kind_consideration/if_you_take_my_suggestion_into_consid

24、eration.6develop v(使)发展；培养；形成，产生；研制；冲洗；患(病)；增强辨清写出下列句中develop的含义I left some photos to be developed. Are they ready yet?Yes. Here you are.冲洗But not all cities develop slowly over a long period of time.发展Carducci believes developing such a sense of belonging starts with small talk.培养For one thing, I h

25、ave developed fluency in spoken English.形成；产生She retrained after her 12yearold daughter Michelle developed the disease.患Hopefully, we will have developed more convenient electronic communication tools by 2025.研制记牢(1)develop the habit of养成的习惯develop into 发展成为(2)with the development of 随着的发展 under dev

26、elopment 在发展中练通单句语法填空With the_development_(develop) of society, more and more teenagers have suffered from stress.补全句子Keeping a diary in English can_help_us_develop_the_habit_of_thinking_in_English.用英语记日记有助于我们养成用英语思考的习惯。写美补全句子(2018全国卷书面表达)欢迎大家都来看这部英文短片，它讲述的是我们学校的发展。Everyone is welcome to watch the E

27、nglish short film, which_tells_about_the_development_of_our_school.7upset v使(某人)心烦意乱，使心情不好；打翻 adj.心烦意乱的；不安的；不适的记牢(1)be upset about/over/at sth. 为某事心烦/难过be upset to do sth. 对做某事感到不安/难过be upset that . 让人不安/心烦(2)upset oneself about sth. 为某事而烦恼It upsets sb. to do sth./that . 让某人心烦的是练通单句语法填空She was upset

28、 to_know (know) that her application for the position was refused.The wind has_upset (upset) the birds nest since you left.Upsetting_(upset) people with unsigned messages is cruel and disgusting.句型转换She was upset that he had left without saying goodbye.It upset_her_that he had left without saying go

29、odbye.他的不辞而别让她感到不安。用准(1)upset作形容词时常用作表语，不能作定语。(2)upset作动词时，过去式和过去分词形式都是upset；其现在分词形式为upsetting。写美翻译句子我感到不安，因为我与同学们在交流上有困难。I_feel_very_upset_because_I_have_difficulty_in_communicating_with_my_classmates.联想表示“不安；担心”的词还有：worried; concerned; unhappy; nervous; anxious等。词汇过关综合训练.单词拼写1Bathed in the sunshin

30、e, we jumped and cheered (欢呼) with joy.2Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected (选举) as assistant to my English teacher.3Students should read the list with their parents, and select two activities (活动) they would like to do.4Unless you can sleep well, you will lose the abili

31、ty (能力) to focus, plan and stay motivated after one or two nights. 5It was a tradition (传统) for the schools old team to play against the new team at the end of spring practice.6There are many ways to express thoughts and ideas music, acting, drawing, building, photography (摄影)7Almost every Chinese p

32、erson can_recite (背诵) the two lines of the famous poem.8It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such competitive_ (好竞争的) and stressful society.9The decorations (装饰物) were so lovely that they were sold out in a short time.10In the picture, we can see a boy in worn (破旧的) clothes, sitt

33、ing at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.单句语法填空1Most foreigners are keen to_have (have) a look at the Great wall.2It is said that the first settlers_(settle) of this country are prisoners.3Walking towards the scene, Tenyson became very upset about what had happened to the couple.4Afte

34、r reading the book Beautiful Yangzhou, Im attracted(attract) by the beauty of the old city.5In modern day consumer society everyone is considered to_be(be) middle class.6The manager was satisfied to see many new products developed_(develop) after great effort.7After the company reformed its rules an

35、d regulations (regular), we find the business is really taking off.8In the case of Hawking, it was for overcoming_disability (ability) to push the boundaries of science.9Traditionally_(tradition), college students hold a graduation ceremony to encourage themselves before they set off on their life j

36、ourney.10She looked_cheerful_(cheer), so she must have passed the driving test.根据提示补全句子1当你安顿好后，记得邀请他们去北京。(settle)Remember to invite them to Beijing when_you_have_already_settled_down.2如果不这样的话，就另找个适合我们俩的时间。(suit)If not, try to find another time_that_is_suitable_for_both_of_us.3在星期一，一张宣传比赛的海报吸引了我的注意。(

37、attract)On Monday, a poster which announced the competition_attracted_my_attention.4我们正考虑到加拿大去度假。(consider)We_are_considering_going_to Canada to spend our holidays. 5随着社会的发展，人们越来越重视教育。(develop)With_the_development_of_the_society,_people pay much more attention to education than before.(一)课前自主学习1look

38、_back_at 回顾，回忆 2have_fun 玩得开心 3as_far_as_Im_concerned 就我而言4in_my_view 串记1 我认为；在我看来5be_considered_as 串记2 被看作，被认为是6be_likely_to_do 有可能7play_an_important_part_in_._ 在中起重要的作用8get_on_with_sb. 与某人相处 9in_other_words 换句话说 10take_part_in_ 串记3 参加(活动)同根短语串记串记1.“在我看来”这样表达in my view/opinion as far as I can seeas

39、 far as Im concerned from my point of view串记2.“被认为是”短语小结be considered as be regarded asbe looked on as be thought of asbe recognized as be identified as串记3.表示“参加” 的短语集合take part in活动 join 人/组织 join in 活动 attend会议等participate in活动 be present at会议等1take a long vacation过一个长假期2decide to write them down

40、决定把它们记下来3get good grades 取得好成绩4be elected to the student council 被选进学生会5compare .with . 把与比较6have my hair specially done 专门做了头发7watch the sunrise over the sea 看海上的日出8the pleasure of running 跑步的乐趣9afterschool activities 课外活动10go camping 去野营1Meanwhile, I find_myself_looking_back_at my senior year, and

41、 thinking about all the wonderful things that have happened.同时，我发觉自己在回顾自己高中最后一年的时光，追忆所有发生过的美好往事。2Its_a_great_pity_that its probably the last time this will happen.真遗憾，这样美妙的夜晚很可能不会再有了。3What_these_camps_offer_is an opportunity to take part in many different kinds of outdoor activities.这些露营提供的是参加各种不同的户

42、外活动的机会。4It_was_not_until_the_1920s_that pompoms began to play an important part in cheerleading.直到20世纪20年代，彩线球才在拉拉队队员的表演中发挥重要作用。学考对接活学活用高考采撷(一)阅读中的短语(补全句子)1(2014湖南高考阅读A)Practise under the guidance of some experienced writers and teachers who can help you with basic writing skills. Most importantly,

43、build confidence and have_fun (玩得开心) while writing!2(2013安徽高考完形填空)Well, relax and laugh about your mistakes and you are much less likely_to (有可能) make them again.高考采撷(二)写作中的短语和句式(补全句子/句式升级)1(2016四川高考书面表达)就我而言，每年夏天我都会在我叔叔的家里待上三个星期，在那里享受美好的生活。As_far_as_Im_concerned,_every summer I stay at my uncles ho

44、use in the country for three weeks and enjoy a wonderful life there.2(201811月浙江高考写作)我一下飞机就发现我的钱包不见了。它一定被落在航班上了。(find宾语宾语补足语)The moment I stepped off the plane I found_my_purse_gone. It must have been left on the flight.3(2012湖南高考写作)Five years ago when I was in a junior middle school, Xiaohei and I w

45、ent out by bus. (改为强调句)It_was_five_years_ago_when_I_was_in_a_junior_middle_school_that_Xiaohei_and_I_went_out_by_bus._(二)课堂重点释疑短语集释1look back at回顾；回忆记牢look back回头看；回顾；回忆look around 环视；环顾look back on/to . 回忆起；记起look down on/upon 蔑视；瞧不起look up to 尊敬；敬佩；仰视look forward to 盼望；期望；期待练通用适当的介、副词填空As I look b

46、ack on/to/at that day now, it surely lacks any sense of reality.Therefore, there is no reason to look down upon ordinary jobs for us.He was always taught to look up to older people.And I do look forward to receiving your reply letter as soon as possible.用准look back at/on/to短语中的back是副词，后接宾语时，必须另外加介词。

47、写美翻译句子回顾过去，我觉得如果我失去信心的话，我就不会骑自行车了。Looking_back,_I_feel_I_wouldnt_be_able_to_ride_a_bike_if_I_had_lost_heart.2have fun玩得开心记牢have fun with .和玩得开心have fun doing sth. 做某事很开心make fun of 取笑；嘲弄；开的玩笑for fun 为了好玩What fun! 多有趣啊！练通单句语法填空The children always have fun playing (play) building blocks. 补全句子Whats mor

48、e, it is better for you to join in more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help_you_relax_and_have_fun.而且，你最好和你的朋友加入更多的户外运动，这会帮助你放松和享受乐趣。People make_fun_of_her_because she is wearing such a strange hat.人们取笑她是因为她戴着一顶奇怪的帽子。用准fun表示“乐趣，玩笑”是不可数名词，前面不能用冠词a，但可用great, much, a lot of等对其进行修饰。写美翻译

49、句子(2018北京高考书面表达)我们一起练习、品茶，玩得很开心。We_had_a_lot_of_fun,_practicing,_and_enjoying_the_tea.句式集释find宾语宾语补足语教材原句Meanwhile, I find_myself_looking_back_at my senior year, and thinking about all the wonderful things that have happened.悟拓展例句(1)A cook will be immediately fired if he is found smoking (smoke) in

50、the kitchen.(2)But when the police arrived, they found the door locked (lock) and all windows closed.(3)Thats why she often finds herself helpless (help) when she meets with some challenges.(4)With the world becoming a global village, I find it necessary to_have (have) a good command of English.析用法规

51、则用法归纳(1)find宾语现在分词(表示主动或正在进行)(2)find宾语过去分词(表示被动或完成)(3)find宾语形容词/介词短语(4)findit形容词/名词to do(it是形式宾语，to do是真正的宾语)注意事项(1)与find用法相同的动词还有：see, hear, watch, notice, have, make, keep等。(2)记住句式结构，分清宾语与宾语补足语之间的逻辑关系是关键。背写作佳句(1)After I arrived in America, I found myself living in a completely foreign culture.(要点句

52、)(2)When preparing for the English speech contest, I found it very challenging to collect information and use language correctly.(要点句)词块、句式过关综合训练.选词填空look back at， have fun， as far as Im concerned， be considered as， be likely to， get on with， take part in， in other words1She asked how we were gettin

53、g_on_with our work.2When I looked_back_at my decision I never regret.3I plan to take_part_in different kinds of afterclass activities.4As_far_as_Im_concerned,_we should keep it in mind that quality comes first.5Mei Lanfang is_considered_as one of the greatest artists in the history of Beijing opera.

54、6One windy spring day, I noticed young people having_fun using the wind to fly their kites.7Each of us is_likely_to develop a personal preference for certain types of entertainment.8As the saying goes, “Two heads are better than one.” In_other_words,_teamwork has greater power.根据提示补全句子1这两个女孩长得很像以至于陌

55、生人觉得很难区分她们。(find宾语宾语补足语)The two girls are so alike that strangers find_it_difficult_to_tell_one_from_the_other.2我没有通过考试，真丢人！(Itsn.that .从句)Its_a_great_shame_that I didnt pass the examination.3直到他干完所有的活之后，他才疲惫地返回家中。(It is/was not until . that .)It_was_not_until_he_had_finished_all_his_work_that he re

56、turned home tired.4学生们平时做的事情很重要。(what引导的主语从句)What_the_students_do_in_their_spare_time_is of great importance.5吃药时，请仔细阅读瓶子上的说明。(状语从句的省略)When_taking_medicine，follow the directions on the bottle carefully.读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Zigfried,_a little mouse, once lived happily in a farmhouse with

57、 his parents. They got a lot of food from the kitchen easily, because the owner of the farmhouse was very rich. For Zigfried and his parents, Christmas was their favorite. On that day, they could get lots of delicious food than ever like chicken, chocolate and cheese. Every time his father would bri

58、ng a big chicken leg back for Zigfried. To Zigfried, wonderful food was his Christmas miracle.Unfortunately, Zigfrieds father was caught by a cat when he was hanging around. Years later, his mother died because of illness and the owner of the farmhouse moved to the city. Happy days were away from Zi

59、gfried from then on. All the things had already been changed, there was no food anymore in the farmhouse and no family,_and all the rooms were empty.New year was coming again, Zigfried blew his breath on the frosty window of the farmhouse and rubbed it to see the outside. Still nobody came. Maybe to

60、day, he thought hopefully. It was only a few days before Christmas and he was waiting for a miracle. A miracle liked the old times, which he has been waiting for a long time.This farmhouse had been empty for too long. It needed a family. Zigfrieds stomach made a noise. He realized that he hadnt eate

61、n anything since yesterday. He jumped from the windowsill (窗沿), grabbed a bag from his home, and went next door to Farmer Mikes.Farmer Mikes house had been a great place for the little mouse until the farmer married a wife who had a cat. Zigfried trembled when he thought of it. He looked around caut

62、iously as he stole into the room where grain was stored and was quite nervous as he filled his bag with wheat. He was turning to leave when suddenly he felt a hot breath about his ear. His heart beat wildly, and without thinking he started to run but the cat kept chasing him. Zigfried was very famil

63、iar with the house and luckily escaped the cats paws (爪子)注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：The next afternoon Zigfried heard some good news： Paragraph 2：The house came alive the next few days. 写作步骤第一步：速读全文文本大意：本篇讲述了一只小老鼠在农舍里过着富足的生活，不幸

64、的是他的爸爸被猫捉住了，几年后他的妈妈也去世了，农舍的主人也搬走了，他的生活从此改变了。他盼望着圣诞节出现奇迹，希望有人能搬进农舍里住，并讲述了他到邻居家找食物的惊险过程。叙述意图：通过对动物栩栩如生的描写，让我们了解一只小老鼠的故事。第二步：细读全文1所给短文情景模式分析。whoparents, Zigfried, cat, familywhatZigfried wanted to find some delicious food himself for his Christmas. whena few days before ChristmaswherefarmhousewhyZigfri

65、eds father was caught by a cat, his mother died years later and the owner of the farmhouse moved to the city. This farmhouse had been empty for too long.2对原文所提供的下划线词语进行分类。时间：Christmas地点：farmhouse, city人物/动物：parents, Zigfried, cat, family事件：chocolate, miracle, wheat第三步：精心谋篇1Paragraph 1：The next after

66、noon Zigfried heard some good news：第二天下午Zigfried听到一些好消息：情节分析文章最后讲述了小老鼠到邻居家找食物的惊险过程；再注意续写段首句关键词some good news，故事要围绕好消息写，续写时要注意文中“To Zigfried, wonderful food was his Christmas miracle.”也就是说好消息就是能得到美食，那小老鼠怎样才能得到美食呢？邻居家是不可能的，因为有猫。据此可判断，有一家人就要搬进农舍，会带来许多美食；此外，可添加细节，小老鼠的家人来陪他过圣诞节。2Paragraph 2：The house cam

67、e alive the next few days.在接下来的几天里这所房子热闹起来。情节分析房子里面有人住了，和先前没有人住相比肯定是变得有生气了，结合文章可知小老鼠非常盼望有人来这农舍里住，现在它的愿望得以满足，所以一定非常享受这热闹时光。如果情节就这样发展，显得平淡，后续情节一般为故事的高潮或延续，要让读者回味无穷，再结合所给关键词cat，可以描写正当小老鼠期盼美食的时候，听到这家人会带来猫的消息。第四步：初写成文Paragraph 1：1一个新的家庭将很快搬进农舍。A new family would be_moving_into the farmhouse soon.2Zigfrie

68、d的奶奶会在圣诞前夕来和他一起庆祝。Zigfrieds granny would arrive on Christmas Eve to_celebrate_with_him.3他希望这家人能在奶奶来之前来。He hoped that the family would come before_his_granny_came.4一辆车沿着通向房子的路到来，车上有黄油三明治、奶酪和巧克力。A car came_up_the_road which led to the house, with butter sandwiches, cheese and chocolate.5Zigfried的圣诞奇迹到

69、来了！Zigfrieds Christmas_miracle arrived!Paragraph 2：6Zigfried非常享受那几天的每一个小时。Zigfried enjoyed every_single_hour of them.7在圣诞节的前一天，他在家门口喝着热巧克力，脸上带着满意的微笑。The day before Christmas he was drinking hot chocolate with_a_satisfied_smile at the door of his home.8他听到那个家庭的孩子们在讨论圣诞节可以得到什么。He heard the discussion

70、of the children of the family about what_they_might_get for Christmas.9什么？一只猫？他脸上的笑容僵住了。What? A cat？The smile froze_on_his_face.10他的嘴张得大大的。His mouth fell wide_open.11过了很久，他终于听到自己的声音：“嘿！这是谁的圣诞奇迹？”After_a_long_while,_he at last found his voice：“Hey! Whose Christmas miracle is this？”第五步：润色升级1用分词作定语改写要点

71、4。A_car_came_up_the_road_leading_to_the_house,_with_butter_sandwiches,_cheese_and_chocolate.2把要点5改为强调句。Zigfrieds_Christmas_miracle_did_arrive!3把要点7和要点8合并成复合句。The_day_before_Christmas_when_he_was_drinking_hot_chocolate_with_a_satisfied_smile_at_the_door_of_his_home,_he_heard_the_discussion_of_the_chi

72、ldren_of_the_family_about_what_they_might_get_for_Christmas.第六步：复查定稿Paragraph 1：The next afternoon Zigfried heard some good news：a new family would be moving into the farmhouse soon. Zigfrieds granny would arrive on Christmas Eve to celebrate with him. He hoped that the family would come before his

73、granny came. Before long, a car came up the road leading to the house, with butter sandwiches, cheese and chocolate. Zigfrieds Christmas miracle did arrive!Paragraph 2：The house came alive the next few days. Zigfried enjoyed every single hour of them. However, the day before Christmas when he was dr

74、inking hot chocolate with a satisfied smile at the door of his home, he heard the discussion of the children of the family about what they might get for Christmas. What? A cat？The smile froze on his face; his mouth fell wide open. After a long while, he at last found his voice：“Hey! Whose Christmas miracle is this？”