2020-2021学年高一英语寒假提升天天练之短文改错 Day 9（含解析）.doc

1、Day9A假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Last summer holiday, I went to visit my cousin in Dalian by bus. The journey was not so comfortably as

2、a journey by train. After getting on the bus, I choose a seat near the window so that I could look out or enjoy the scenes from the running bus. The trees, houses and lakes on both side of the road was beautiful. The old man was sitting near me. She told me about the various places in which I should

3、 visit. I enjoyed talk with him. After seven hours I arrived at Dalian bus station and my cousin was already there waiting me.B假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10出语言错误，每句最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：吧多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改

4、10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。The train left lately that night and arrived in Montreal at dawn the next morning. At the station, people everywhere was speaking French. There were signs and ads in the French, but some of them had English words in smaller letter. “We dont leave until this evening,” said Liu Qian.

5、 “Lets going downtown. Old Montreal is close the water.” They spend the afternoon in lovely shops but visiting artists in their workplaces beside the water. As they sat in a buffet restaurant looked over the broad St Lawrence River, a young man sat down with us.答案A【答案解析】 fortably comfortable2. choos

6、e chose3.or and4.side sides5.was were6.The An7.She He8.去掉in9.talk talking10.在waiting后加for【分析】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了去年暑假乘公共汽车去大连看望表弟在路上的经历。【详解】1.考查形容词。句意：这次旅行不如乘火车舒服。根据was not so可知此处要用形容词作表语。故将comfortably改为comfortable。2.考查动词的时态。根据上文Last summer holiday可知时态是一般过去时，因此要用动词的过去式。故将choose改为chose。3.考查连词。句意：上车后，我选择了一个靠

7、窗的座位，这样我就可以看看窗外，欣赏沿途的风景。根据could look out和enjoy the scenes之间是并列关系，因此要使用并列连词and。故将or改为and。4.考查名词的复数。句意：道路两旁的树木、房屋和湖泊都很美。根据both可知此处要用名词的复数形式，side是可数名词。故将side改为sides。5.考查主谓一致。根据The trees, houses and lakes可知此处谓语动词要用复数形式。故将was改为were。6.考查冠词。句意：一位老人坐在我旁边。此处要用冠词修饰名词man，表示“一个”，且形容词old是以元音因素开头，因此要用冠词an。故将The改为

8、An。7.考查代词。句意：他告诉我应该参观的各个地方。根据下文I enjoyed talk with him.可知此处要用代词he。故将She改为He。8.考查定语从句的关系词。分析句子成分可知，此处是一个定语从句，先行词是places，指物，定语从句I should visit缺少宾语，因此要用关系代词which作宾语。故将in去掉。9.考查动名词。句意：我喜欢和他谈话。根据enjoyed可知此处要用动名词作宾语。短语enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事。故将talk改为talking。10.考查介词。句意：7个小时后，我到达了大连汽车站，我的表弟已经在那里等我了。短语wait for

9、 sb.等待某人，是固定搭配。故在waiting后加for。【点睛】第2小题考查了一般过去时的用法。一般过去时表示过去某个时间发生的动作或存在的状态，也可表示过去经常或反复发生的动作。常和表示过去的时间状语连用，如yesterday, last week, last night, in 2003, two days ago等。I got up at 6:30 yesterday. 我昨天6:30起床My father was very busy last week. 我父亲上周很忙。一般过去时肯定句的基本结构：“主语+动词过去式+其他”或者“主语+was/were+其他”。I played t

10、ennis last weekend. 我上周末打网球了。My school trip was great. 我的学校郊游棒极了。B【答案解析】 1.latelylate2.waswere3.去掉the4.letterletters5.goinggo6.close后添加to7.spendspent8.butand9.lookedlooking10.usthem【分析】这是一篇记叙文。记叙了两个人因为火车晚点，去了Old Montreal以及他们的所见所闻。【详解】1.考查固定用法。句意：那天晚上，火车离开得很晚，第二天清晨到达蒙特利尔。late有副词词性，表示“晚；迟”；lately表示“最近

11、地”。根据句意故lately改为late。2.考查主谓一致。句意：在车站，人们都在说法语。people为集合名词，作主语时谓语动词要用复数形式，故was改为were。3.考查冠词。句意：那里有用法语写的标语和广告，但有些用较小的字母写的是英语单词。固定搭配in French“用法语”中间不需要冠词，故去掉the。4.考查名词的数。letter为可数名词，前面没有冠词，故用复数形式letters。5.考查固定用法。let sb do sth.“让某人做某事”后跟原形，故going改为go。6.考查介词。短语be close to“接近于”故close后添加to。7.考查动词时态。根据上文可知故事发生在故去应用一般过去时，故spend改为spent。8.考查连词。句意：他们整个下午都在可爱的商店里度过，在水边的工作室里拜访艺术家。上下文为并列关系，故but改为and。9.考查非谓语动词。句意：他们坐在一家自助餐厅里，眺望着宽阔的圣劳伦斯河。本句已经存在谓语动词且句中没有连词，故look只能做非谓语动词与逻辑主语构成主谓关系用现在分词，故looked改为look。10.考查人称代词。根据上文As they sat可知人称保持一致，应用第三人称单数，且做介词的宾语，故us改为them。