2020高考英语大二轮专题复习冲刺经典版训练：写作部分 专题一 第1讲解题策略 WORD版含解析.doc

1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家专题一解题策略写好高考“书面表达”绝非一日之功，关键在于平时扎扎实实的训练。但是，在夯实语言基本功的前提下，熟悉、掌握一定的应试技巧，也非常重要。根据“书面表达”常见错误及评卷要求，建议使用“一式，两头，三写，四关”的应试抢分技巧。具体为：一式 写对格式要求记住英语常用文体的格式和应用文体的写作方式和特点。二头 写好两头要求灵活运用熟悉的句式和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾结构正确，言简意赅。三写 规范三写在高考英语书面表达的评分标准中，正确拼写和使用标点符号及书写的美观程度也是影响得分的一个重要指标，因此考生要高度重视。许多考生只重视书面表达内容的训练和提高，却忽

2、视了卷面规范书写的训练，导致本不该的失分。四关 突破四关所谓“四关”是指突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关和习惯表达关。要求内容要点准确全面，行文逻辑通顺严密，语言运用正确得当，表达方式符合英语习惯。当然，在备考过程中，有针对性地背诵一些高分句式，套用合适的写作模块，可以帮助大家在短时间内在书面表达上抢得高分！真题导练(2019全国卷)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1时间；2活动安排；3欢迎他表演节目。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【审题谋篇】体裁邀请信人称第一、二人称为主时态一般现在时和一般将来时为主要点

3、1.音乐节举办的时间；2.活动内容安排；3.欢迎他表演节目 【提纲要点】1.第一段点明主题发出邀请，并介绍音乐节的具体内容点明主题A Chinese classical music concert will_be_held in the music hall of our school.发出邀请Id like to invite_you_to_join me.活动安排Many music masterpieces will_be_played by a famous band.欢迎他表演节目You_are_welcome_to_give a performance.2第二、三段表达期盼，期待回

4、复表达期盼我将在音乐厅入口等你Ill meet you at_the_entrance_of the music hall.期待回复Looking forward to your reply！【润色升级】1.将句增加时间细节，并用宾语从句进行表达Im glad to_tell_you_that_a_Chinese_classical_music_concert_ will_be_held_in_the_music_hall_of_our_school_on_November_8th.2将句用非谓语动词作状语表达，并与句合并Knowing_that you are fond of classic

5、al music, Id_like_to_invite_you_to_join_me_and_you_are_welcome_to_give_a_performance.3将句用if条件句表达，并增加细节If_it_is_convenient_for_you,_Ill meet you at_the_entrance_of_the_music_hall_at_7：00_that_evening.【规范誊写】真题导练 (2018全国卷)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括：1短片内容：学校的发展；2放映时间、地点；3欢迎

6、对短片提出意见。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【审题谋篇】体裁通知人称第三人称为主时态一般现在时为主要点1.短片内容；2.放映时间、地点；3.欢迎对短片提出意见【提纲要点】1.第一段点题：你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Rccently, an outstanding short film will_be_shown in our school. Welcome to join_us_and_enjoy_it!2第二段主体段落展开：短片内容；放映时间、地点；欢迎对短片提出意见。短片内容：学校的发展The movie is a

7、 documentary about the_development_of_our_school.放映时间、地点It will_be_shown in the library on June 9th.欢迎参加会后讨论并对短片提出意见Every one of you is be_welcome_to take part in the discussion held afterwards and give your comments.我们期待你的评论和反馈。We are expecting_and_encouraging your comments and feedback.3第三段表达期望I h

8、ave the confidence that you will have_a_great_time then.【润色升级】1.句通过增加定语从句来拓展要点The name of the movie is Growing Together, which_is_a_documentary_about_the_development_of_our_beloved_school.2句通过增加具体时间和地点拓展要点It_will_be_shown_on_the_fourth_floor_of_the_school_library_from_2：00_to_4：00_in_the_afternoon_o

9、n_June_9th.3句和句用非谓语动词作状语合并为一句，实现句式升级Every_one_of_you_is_welcome_to_take_part_in_the_discussion_held_afterwards,_expected_and_encouraged_to_give_your_comments_and_feedback.【规范誊写】真题导练 (2017北京高考)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：视频video 【审题谋篇】体裁图画类周记人称第

10、一人称为主时态一般过去时为主要点1.激烈讨论后决定制作视频；2.准备素材，采访拍摄；3.后期制作；4.毕业典礼放映【提纲要点】1.第一段点明主题毕业在即，激烈讨论后决定制作视频Graduation finally came. After a_heated_discussion,_we agreed on making_a_video.2第二段主体内容准备素材采访老师，拍摄学校生活We interviewed_our_teachers and took pictures of every aspect of school life.后期制作争论保留什么We debated over what_t

11、o_put_into_the_video.典礼放映The video was played on_the_graduation_ceremony.发表感悟很有成就感That surely gave us a_great_sense_of_achievement.【润色升级】1.将句增加“花费时间”细节，并升级为定语从句Material_collecting took us a whole week, during_which_we_interviewed_our_teachers_and_took_pictures_of_every_aspect_of_school_life.2将句增加细节，

12、渲染讨论及效果We_debated_over_what_to_put_into_the_video._Some_compromises_were_unavoidable,_but_the_video_turned_out_perfect.3将句升级用when状语从句表达并增加“效果”细节Several days later, when_the_video_was_played_on_the_graduation_ceremony,_it_was_well_received.【规范誊写】第1讲考场作文常见的错误及防范措施一 考场作文常见的三类错误考场作文常见的错误主要分为三类：词汇类错误、语法类

13、错误和汉语式英语。 (一)词汇类错误考试时，考生很容易出现单词拼写错误和词形变化错误；而词性不清和词汇用法方面的错误主要还是受汉语思维的影响。其应对措施是在备考时要多注意容易拼错或容易出现词形变化错误的单词，真正用心去体会英语词汇的词性和运用，对一些固定习语更不能想当然地改动。1单词拼写错误误：By the way, hes a senior High School student named Lihua from Tian Jin, china.正：By the way, hes a senior high school student named Li Hua from Tianjin,

14、China.2.词形变化错误误：People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.正：People threw cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.3词性不清错误误：Everyone in my family is like the dog.正：Everyone in my family likes the dog.4词汇用法错误误：He opened the light after he entered the room.正：He turned on t

15、he light after he entered the room.5擅自改动习语误：Nowadays most parents attach much importance with education.正：Nowadays most parents attach much importance to education.即时练1改正下列句子中的错误Doing a parttime job always effects study._There is no doubt that keeping an English diary helps you a lot with writen Eng

16、lish._In my surprise, he has got the first prize._We must pay attention our pronunciation when we speak English._We are all entire responsible for our actions and for our reactions._答案：effectsaffectswritenwrittenInToattention后加toentireentirely (二)语法类错误一个正确的句子除了用词得当外，语法也应该准确无误。如果语法不正确，再好的构思也难以正确地表达，语

17、法类错误的多少会直接影响作文的档次。英语书面表达中语法类错误主要表现在：1时态错误误：When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to hed.正：When he came back, he found that his wife had gone to bed.2语态错误误：Children who raise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.正：Children who are raised

18、 in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.3主谓一致错误误：Some students like books that is written by Lu Xun.正：Some students like books that are written by Lu Xun. 4.比较级使用错误误：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting more and more s

19、maller.正：With the development of transportation, the world seems to be getting smaller and smaller.5非谓语动词使用错误误：The teacher came into the lab, following by some students.正：The teacher came into the lab, followed by some students.即时练2改正下列句子中的错误If it wont rain tomorrow, well go camping._Not only Tom bu

20、t also I are tired of one examination after another._They think students should have their own time to study and it is more quieter at home._There are a lot of students stand in a queue to welcome the old soldier._She said she would pay a visit to Suzhou in the next month._答案：wontdoesntareammoremuch

21、或去掉morestandstanding去掉in (三)汉语式英语一般来说，英汉两种语言既有许多相似之处，又有许多不同之处。在写作时如果想当然地去写，会出现许多汉语式英语，其中主要包括：1纯汉语式思维和汉语式语序误：At this school studying, I really very happy.正：Studying at this school, I am really very happy.2句子成分残缺误：There are many students dont support the project.正：There are many students who dont supp

22、ort the project.误：He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.正：He told me that all my classmates were sitting in the classroom.3句子粘连误：The old man has two sons, both of them work in the same company.正：The old man has two sons, and both of them work in the same company.正：The old man ha

23、s two sons, both of whom work in the same company.4主谓搭配不当误：He happened an accident yesterday.正：An accident happened to him yesterday.5动宾搭配不当误：They are trying their best to improve their production.正：They are trying their best to increase their production.6形容词和名词搭配不当误：We walked a far way before plant

24、ing trees.正：We walked a long way before planting trees.7动词和副词搭配不当误：My grandfather very likes black tea and has it every day.正：My grandfather likes black tea very much and has it every day.8.介词和宾语搭配不当误：They will build a monument on memory of the national hero.正：They will build a monument in memory of

25、 the national hero.即时练3改正下列句子中的错误We are impossible to finish the work in such a short time._Its known that the cost in big cities is very expensive._He came here to attend the meeting in car._I havent heard from your letter for a long time and I miss you very much._I have many collections of stamps,

26、 some of them are my favorite._答案：We are impossibleIt is impossible for usexpensivehighinbyyour letteryousome前加and或themwhich二 防范出现错误的两个措施句子正确是作文得高分的关键和保证，考场上要避免上述低级错误，可采取以下两个措施。 (一)确定主语英语句子无论多长都有自己的主语(祈使句省略了主语you)。写句子前首先要确定主语，其次要特别注意汉语与英语的区别。例如：1北京八月多雨。误：Beijing rains much in August.正：It rains much

27、in Beijing in August.2写得很匆忙，我们发现书中满是错误。误：Written in a hurry, we found the book full of mistakes.正：Written in a hurry, the book was found full of mistakes (by us) (二)确定谓语动词英语中没有动词就构不成句子，但动词千变万化，稍不注意就会写错句子。在写句子时应特别注意以下几个方面。1注意及物与不及物动词的正确运用误：The living standard of the people has raised in the past twen

28、ty years.正：The living standard of the people has risen/has been raised in the past twenty years.2注意延续性与非延续性动词的正确运用误：His grandmother has died for fifteen years.正：His grandmother has been dead for fifteen years.3注意一些不可用于被动语态的动词或动词短语误：That dictionary is belonged to the library.正：That dictionary belongs

29、 to the library.过关检测(限时：20分钟).以下句子含有考生常犯的错误，请改正1It is high time that we do something to reduce traffic accidents._答案：dodid或在do前加should2While having our dinner, the doorbell rang._答案：having前加we were或the doorbell rangwe heard the doorbell ringing3Recently our village has taken place great changes._答案：

30、Recently great changes have taken place in our village.4Dr Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight._答案：areis5Eating at school is very convenient for students._答案：It is very convenient for students to eat at school.6Would you please meet my uncle at the airport because this

31、 is his first time visit to the US?_答案：去掉time7The car hitted the old man and drived away._答案：hittedhit; driveddrove8I have two friends, their names are Tom and Jim._答案：theirwhose或their前加and9There are many students are planting trees on the hill._答案：去掉第二个are或在students后加who10At weekends, we would play

32、 basketball, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic._答案：swimmingswim.下面的考生作文中共有10处语言错误，请改正假定你是李华，最近与好朋友Lucy吵架了，现在给外教Melinda写一封邮件请求帮助。邮件内容包含：1吵架的原因；2吵架后的心情；3请求Melinda给出解决办法。注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Melinda，The reason why I am writting to you is because I quarreled with my friend Lucy and I

33、 need your help now.The quarrel was occurred when we were discussing whether we should go shopping at last weekend. Because the coming examination, she insisted on studying at school while I opposed strongly. After the incident, we have not chatted any more, caused me great depression. I am sincere

34、sorry to see things going like this and I have been felt frustrated ever since.I really dont want to lose this friend. Could you please offer me some effective and practical advices? Looking forward to you reply.Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua第一句：_第二句：_第三句：_第四句：_第五句：_第七句：_第八句：_答案：第一句：writtingwriting; becau

35、sethat第二句：去掉was; 去掉at第三句：Because后加of第四句：causedcausing第五句：sinceresincerely; feltfeeling第七句：advicesadvice第八句：youyour强化特训11书面表达(一)(限时：45分钟).按分类提示，改正下列句子中的唯一一处错误题组1连词类错误1In addition, the climate here is very similar to that in the USA, thus there is no need for you to worry about it._答案：In addition, the

36、 climate here is very similar to that in the USA, thu there is no need for you to worry about it.2.Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, but my dad made every effort to earn the money._答案：Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, / my dad made every effort to

37、earn the money.3.The reason is often because the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities._答案：The reason is often the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.4.Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use that weve learn

38、ed in order to have a better grasp of it._答案：Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use weve learned in order to have a better grasp of it.5.Around 540 million people are affected by secondhand smoke, that causes 100,000 deaths per year._答案：Around 540 million people are affected by second

39、hand smoke, causes 100,000 deaths per year.6.Our class is made up of 52 students, all of them are friendly and hardworking._答案：Our class is made up of 52 students, all of them are friendly and hardworking.或Our class is made up of 52 students, all of are friendly and hardworking.题组2动词类错误7.Learning th

40、at you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confusing about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details._答案：Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.8.Sec

41、ondly, if I were you, I will bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country._答案：Secondly, if I were you, I bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country.9.Whats more, in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture, it of importance for you to be aware of the co

42、ntent, Tang poetry._答案：Whats more, in order to have much knowledge of Chinese culture, it of importance for you to be aware of the content, Tang poetry.10.If you want to have a DNA detection, you have to pay for 125 pounds._答案：If you want to have a DNA detection, you have to pay 125 pounds.11.Only i

43、n this way they grow up to be independent and become truly successful._答案：Only in this way they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.12.Last of all, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries, I hope you can do something, such as help us pr

44、actice our spoken English._答案：Last of all, to promote the understanding and friendship between the students of the two countries, I hope you can do something, such as us practice our spoken English.13.Known that our library is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions._答案： that our librar

45、y is going to buy books, Id like to give some suggestions.14.Weather permits, we will have a picnic tomorrow._答案：Weather ， we will have a picnic tomorrow.15.We offer a wide range of holidays to choose._答案：We offer a wide range of holidays to choose .题组3介词、冠词、代词类错误16.By doing so, I can not only share

46、 good ideas with others but also learn to express me clearly._答案：By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express clearly.17.Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all._答案：Good opinions are worth sticking because they can benefit us all.18.When

47、 I have different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority._答案：When I have different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.19.Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer for a difficult math problem in class._答案：Two years a

48、go, our teacher offered us an answer a difficult math problem in class.20.The blackboard is in front of the classroom._答案：The blackboard is in front of the classroom.21.Nowadays there are still many poor students. They cannot afford to go to the school._答案：Nowadays there are still many poor students

49、. They cannot afford to go to school.22.She met and eventually married with a man considerably younger than herself._答案：She met and eventually married a man considerably younger than herself.23.Several years later, a word came that he had succeeded in solving the difficult problem._答案：Several years

50、later, word came that he had succeeded in solving the difficult problem.24.Bicycles are environmentally friendly because it wont give off waste gas._答案：Bicycles are environmentally friendly because wont give off waste gas.25.As is known to we all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, ca

51、rs have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life._答案：As is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life.26.Contrary with peoples expectations, most of the Chine

52、se mothers are not in favor of the authors way she educated children._答案：Contrary peoples expectations, most of the Chinese mothers are not in favor of the authors way she educated children.题组4形容词和副词类错误27.That sure gave us a great sense of achievement._答案：That gave us a great sense of achievement.28

53、.We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cellphones and the Web are wide used._答案：We are now living in an information age, in which TV, cellphones and the Web are used.29.I think its a more perfect opportunity for me to further develop my abilities._答案：I think its a perfect opportunity

54、 for me to further develop my abilities.30.He is a bored boy and we all dislike him._答案：He is a boy and we all dislike him.31.Only brave ones can watch sharks in the deeply ocean._答案：Only brave ones can watch sharks in the ocean.32.As soon as she saw the results, she got an exciting look in her face

55、._答案：As soon as she saw the results, she got an look in her face.修改下面学生高考书面表达中的六处错误(2019天津高考)假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件：(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一)；(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；(3)希望从中有何收获。Dear Chris，Im Li Jin, a student at Chen

56、guang High School. My classmates and I are overjoyed to hear because youll stay in our school for one week in this summer vacation, during that time youll give us a presentation about art in western countries. Now that youre asking our opinion about what we want to listen to most, I feel much honore

57、d to take the chance to make my voice hear.Personally, Id want to learn about western painting. Several reason may account for my preference. For one thing, Im interested to learn how western painting has developed into what it is today through history, and the most influential artists in each period of its development. Additional, Im crazy to learn how to appreciate western paintings, and it cant be better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint.Thank you for your time.Yours，Li Jin- 22 - 版权所有高考资源网