专题05 历险故事-直击2022高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”.doc

1、专题05直击2022高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”历险故事历险，让心脏跌宕起伏01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was a fine summer morning, perfect to be outdoors. Two sisters had been out mushroom picking, and were on their way home with heavy baskets full of mushrooms. They sang songs on the way, and played with each other.Soon

2、they reached a point where they had to cross a railway track. They did not think twice about crossing it since there was no train coming, and they could not hear any whistle. They slowly climbed the steep railway embankment, taking care not to drop the baskets. They were very near the track and the

3、little sister Mary was about to cross it first when a train whistled in the distance.Hearing the train coming, Rose the elder sister quickly ran down. She thought that the young one was following her. But as she turned back, she was shocked to see her little sister still up there crossing the track.

4、 “Come back here! Run back fast!” she shouted.Mary seemed not to hear the whistle nor her sisters cry as she was concentrating on stepping over the track with her little feet, and holding on to the basket. Then she tripped and fell on the track, scattering her mushrooms around.The engine driver pani

5、cked on seeing a girl between the tracks who was on her hands and knees and he blew the horn with all his strength. Poor Mary, who was frightened by the coming danger, froze and didnt know what to do. When Rose saw the scene, she screamed at the top of her voice for Marys attention. Mary noticed tha

6、t her sister was not around and cried for help.With the train drawing near, the engine driver grew extremely anxious. As hard as he could, he kept blowing the whistle and started reducing speed. Yet it was not possible for him to stop the heavy train within such a short distance.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2.

7、 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Rose wouldnt watch the tragedy happen before her eyes._The train rolled over and finally stopped._【答案】Para 1:Rose wouldnt watch the tragedy happen before her eyes. She rushed up the embankment staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!” Mary, at the sight o

8、f Roses coming to her rescue, burst into tears of joy. Though reducing speed as hard as it could, the train was still approaching fast. Seeing there was little time to drag her sister out of danger, Rose jumped over without a second thought and covered Marys body under hers.Para 2:The train rolled o

9、ver and finally stopped. Frightened and worried, the engine driver quickened his pace to see what happened to the little girl. To his great relief, the sisters lied between the rails safe and sound. What a narrow escape! He helped them sit up and comforted them. The two sisters hugged and kissed eac

10、h other, tears of joy flowing down their cheeks. Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. They then collected all the remaining mushrooms and, hand in hand more tightly than before, walked back home.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了两姐妹出去采蘑菇，带着沉重的蘑菇篮子回家，在穿过铁轨的时候小妹妹Mary在铁轨上摔倒了，姐姐Rose在危急时刻冲过去护住妹妹，最后

11、火车停了下来，两人死里逃生。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“Rose不愿看到悲剧发生在她眼前。”可知，第一段可描写Rose是如何帮助妹妹的。由第二段首句内容“火车翻倒了，终于停了下来。”可知，第二段可描写火车停下，两姐妹获救。2.续写线索：Rose冲上铁轨Rose护住妹妹火车停下获救3.词汇激活行为类靠近：approach/get close捡起：collect/pick up回家：walk back home/get back home情绪类快乐：joy/happiness害怕：frightened/scared【点睛】高分句型1 She rushed up the embankme

12、nt staircase, repeating at the top of her voice “Stay off the tracks!”(运用了现在分词作状语)高分句型2 Never were the two souls so happily united at that moment. (运用了全部倒装)02It was last February. Noel, a 28-year-old marketing manager was heading from Icelands Keflavik International Airport to the capital city Reykj

13、avik with the modern travelers two essentials: a dream and a GPSunit. What could go wrong?The dream had been with him since April 14, 2010 when he watched TV news report of the volcano eruption in Iceland. Dark-haired, with a youthful face and thick eyebrows, he had never travelled beyond the United

14、 States and his native Mexico. “I want to see this through my own eyes,” he thought as he watched the news on his couch.Four months later, on a cold winter morning, he was driving from Keflavik Airport in a rented car towards a hotel in Reykjavik, excited that his one-week journey was beginning. As

15、the pink sun rose over the ocean and shone light on the snow-covered lava rocks along the shore, he dutifully followed the commands of the GPS that came with the car, a calm female voice directing him to an addressa left here, a right there.But after stopping on a deserted road, he got a feeling tha

16、t the voice might be steering (引导) him wrong. He had been driving for nearly an hour, yet the GPS put his arrival time at around eight hours later. He entered his destination again and got the same result. Though he sensed that something was off, he made a choice to trust the machine.The farther he

17、drove, the fewer cars he saw. The roads became icier. He was sleepy, cold and hungry. He hadnt set up his phone for international use, so that was no help. Another three hours passed. As his tires skidded (打滑) along a narrow mountain road that skirted a steep cliff.he knew that the device had failed

18、 him.He was lost. He didnt know where else to go. There was no one else on the road, and there was nothing else to do but follow the line on the screen to its mysterious end.Paragraph 1The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. _Paragraph 2:Knowing what had happened, the woman offere

19、d to help him. _【答案】Paragraph 1:The directions ended at a small blue house in a tiny town. Noel parked his car and headed towards the door. An old blue-eyed woman answered after the second ring. She smiled as he stammered about his hotel and handed her his reservation. “No. this isnt the hotel you h

20、ave booked. Your hotel is 380 kilometres south.” She told him in accented English with a laugh. Noel quickly figured out what happened the address was wrong with an extra “r” in it.Paragraph 2:Knowing what had happened, the woman offered to help him. She provided Noel a free meal and a bed so that h

21、e could get a good nights sleep. The next day, Noel decided to drive to Reykjavik. In light of his previous experience, the woman gave him a map with the main roads and landmarks carefully marked on it in case the device went wrong again. With the help of the womans directions, Noel finally reached

22、his destination. “Without her help, I wouldnt have made it.” He was so thankful to the woman, who was just a total stranger to him.【解析】这是一篇读后续写。故事以人物为线索展开，讲述了28岁的Noel从冰岛凯夫拉维克国际机场前往首都雷克雅未克，但不知怎么回事导航系统把他带到了一个偏远的地方。他迷路了，但又只能跟着导航继续前进。【详解】1.段落续写根据第一段首句“导航的尽头是一个小镇上的一座蓝色的小房子”可知，下文可描写Noel到达房子后发生的事情，并且知道了自己为

23、什么会来到这么远的地方。根据第二段首句“那个女人知道发生了什么事后，主动提出帮助他”可知，下文可描写女士是如何帮助Noel的。2.续写线索来到小房子发现女士知道为什么女士提供帮助安全到达目的地感激3.词类激活行为类回答：answer/reply/respond递：hand/deliver弄清楚，明白：figure out/understand决定做某事：decide to do/be determined to do/make up ones mind to do情绪类感激的：grateful/thankful【点睛】高分句型1She smiled as he stammered about

24、his hotel and handed her his reservation. （运用了as引导的时间状语从句）高分句型2 Noel quickly figured out what happened: the address was wrong with an extra “r” in it.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）高分句型3He was so thankful to the woman, who was just a total stranger to him.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）03I was finally going to see Giant Rock

25、with my brothers and Dad. Id been snowshoeing before, and I liked the adventure of hiking through deep snow alongside wild-animal tracks. After putting on our snowshoes, we studied the map. Dad said, “We start here on the red trail, and then we turn left onto the purple one. Thats where Giant Rock i

26、s. Remember to stick together, guys!”The trail ran uphill alongside a stone wall. It was easy to follow because red markers were nailed to the trees and the snow had been packed down by other hikers. Half way up the hill, we turned onto the winding purple trail. We settled into a rhythm, with Dad an

27、d everyone else in front and me in the back, crunch-crunching through the snow. The late afternoon sun felt warm, although it was already sinking lower. I saw lots of animal tracks-mostly deer, squirrel, and rabbit prints, which I recognized from my field guide.An hour later, we topped the hill and

28、saw the massive rock sitting alone in the forest. “It is really huge, as big as a house!” my brother Josh said, gazing up. Breathlessly standing in the rocks giant shadow, I noticed the sun had dipped even lower.“Lets head back,” Dad said.I was a little behind the group when I noticed a set of anima

29、l tracks I didnt recognize. They were hard to see among the snowshoe prints, so I followed them off the trail for a closer look. There were no claw marks, which meant they didnt belong to a dog or a fox. Instead, they looked like tiny handprints and footprints. “Must be a raccoon (浣熊),” I thought, m

30、atching them to prints in my guide.I looked up when I suddenly realized how quiet it had gotten. I was totally alone. “Hey!” I shouted. “Where is everyone?” nothing. Just the sound of my own breathing. “They couldnt have gone far. Ill catch up to them if I hurry,” I thought, stepping back onto the t

31、rail. The light had grown darker by the second. Without flashlight and phone, I began running.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。I came to where I could turn right or go straight. _ “Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again. _【答案】Paragraph 1:I came to where I could turn right o

32、r go straight. The path to the front looked familiar. But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. So I reversed direction. My mind started to race. Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. And I couldnt just follow my own footsteps because there were so

33、 many tracks from other hikers. What if I couldnt find my way back? I started tearing through the woods in a panic.Paragraph 2:“Stop and think,” I told myself, picturing the map again. To get to Giant Rock we had turned left onto the purple trail. To get back, I needed to do the opposite and turn ri

34、ght onto the red one. I struggled forward in the faint light. Then I noticed the stone wall. This had to be right. I went downhill in giant steps, and then I saw my family! I shouted as I ran toward them. “Honey? Are you OK?” Dads voice was urgent. It seemed I had been lost for ages, and all I wante

35、d now was a bear hug from Dad.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者与兄弟和爸爸去看巨人岩，天色逐渐晚了，作者跟着一组不认识的动物脚印和亲人走散了，十分慌张。幸好最后和父亲团聚了。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我来到了可以右转或直走的地方。”可知，第一段可描写作者走散后的心理活动以及反应。由第二段首句内容“停下来想一想，我对自己说，一边又想象着地图。”可知，第二段可描写作者如何和家人团聚的。2.续写线索：继续前行改变方向慌张想象地图看到家人3.词汇激活行为类继续前进：walk on/move on辨别：tell/distinguish大叫：shout/

36、yell情绪类慌乱地：in a panic/flurriedly焦急的：urgent/anxious【点睛】高分句型1 But when I walked on, some scenes told me I was going the wrong way. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和省略that的宾语从句)高分句型2 Soon it might be too dark to tell what color the markers were. (运用了what引导宾语从句)04One day, my brother and I were coming back from the isla

37、nds where we often risked going and got more fish than others. All at once, the sky was covered with dark clouds and in less than a minute we were in a terrible storm. A huge wave covered our boat and we nearly fell into the sea. My brother put his mouth close to my ear and cried out “Moskoe-strom!”

38、 The moment I heard the word I became very frightened. I knew what he meant by that one word well enough.With the wind and waves, we were going in the direction of the whirlpool (漩涡). We were hopeless. Nothing could save us. I felt sick, as if I was falling from a mountain top in a dream. We went ro

39、und and round, nearer and nearer to the horrible edge of the whirlpool. It may appear strange, but at that moment, when we were on the edge of the whirlpool, I felt calmer than when we were moving towards it. I began to think how amazing a thing it was to die in such a way, and how wonderful it was

40、to see the power of nature. Suddenly, we went over the edge. I thought my life was over. But moment after moment passed, and I was still safe.The boat was on the inside of the huge whirlpool and we were going round in circles at great speed. I saw clearly that there were other objects in the whirlpo

41、oltrees and barrels (水桶). After a while, I became curious about the whirlpool itself. I then made three important observations. The first, the larger the bodies were, the more rapidly they fell; the second, between two objects of equal extent, round objects fell down less rapidly; and the third, bet

42、ween two objects of the same size, objects shaped like a tube fell down more slowly. So I tied myself to a barrel to help me float. I tried to make my brother understand, but he was too frightened and stayed in the boat. Without waiting, I jumped into the sea to try and escape.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2

43、.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea._Paragraph 2:Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear._【答案】Some time after I left the boat, I saw my brother struggling in the sea. I tried my best to approach to

44、him but I failed again and again. I waved and called him to tie himself to another barrel to help him float. I struggled to run away from the whirlpool and prayed the storm could stop as soon as possible.Soon after that, the whirlpool became less wild and then the sky was clear. The wind became calm

45、er, and the moon was shining. I was still tied to the barrel and the waves soon carried me to an area where the other fishermen were. Fortunately, a boat picked me up when I was tired out. The fishermen were very old friends, but they were unable to recognize me at first because I was in a so diffic

46、ult position. To my great excitement, minutes later, another boat arrived with my brother in it. How lucky we were!【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和弟弟从我们经常冒险去的岛屿回来，遇到了可怕的暴风雨，离漩涡越来越近了，作者清楚地看到漩涡里还有别的东西，作者做了三个重要的观察。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我下船后不久，看见弟弟在海里挣扎。”可知，第一段可描写作者试图救弟弟。由第二段首句内容“不久之后，漩涡变得不那么猛烈了，天空也变得晴朗了。”可知，第二段可描写作

47、者和弟弟都获救。2.续写线索：想办法救弟弟风停得救3.词汇激活行为类尽力做：try ones best to do/struggle to do救起：pick up/pluck到达：arrive/reach情绪类非常疲倦：be tired out/be exhausted兴奋：excitement/thrill【点睛】高分句型1I was still tied to the barrel and the waves soon carried me to an area where the other fishermen were.(由关系副词where引导的定语从句)高分句型2Fortunat

48、ely, a boat picked me up when I was tired out.(由when引导的时间状语从句)05It was an unusually hot day. Exhausted after football practice, I headed for the bus stop to wait for Bus 112 which would take me home. I was beginning to drift off to sleep when I saw the bus arriving. The sun was in my eyes and that w

49、as probably the reason why I got onto Bus 113I was glad to get a seat. Within minutes, I was sting against the window, fast asleep. When I opened my eyes, it was dark outside. I was the only passenger left on the bus. I could not recognize the part of town we were passing through. I pressed the bell

50、 and the bus stopped. I planned to hop across the road and catch a bus going the opposite direction. However, I found myself on a quiet street with a row of shops that were all closed. I kicked myself for not asking the driver for directions.As I was wondering what to do, a motorcycle came down the

51、road. The rider looked at me as he passed and then stopped a short distance away. I went to him and asked him how to get back to the City Square. He smiled and nodded. He patted the back seat and said that he would send me home. Without a second thought, I climbed up behind the rider. He turned the

52、motorcycle around and headed in the direction I wanted. We travelled for about 15 minutes and the surroundings still looked unfamiliar to me. The rider made a few turns and I knew I was hopelessly lost. I asked him where we were going, He did not answer but increased his speed. Alarm bells started t

53、o ring in my head.I tapped the man, shoulder and told him to stop. He leaned forward and went at high speed now. Then he slowed down to turn into a dark and narrow road that led into an oil palm plantation. I had had enough.注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下超式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I jumped off the vehicle and fell onto

54、 the ground.I got off the taxi and rushed into my house.【答案】I jumped of vehicle and fell onto the ground. The man turned around and rode towards me. I swung my schoolbag at him and he lost his balance and fell off his motorcycle. Without looking back, I just ran and ran. When I dared to stop, I foun

55、d that I was on a main road. Cars were passing by, I was relieved to see a taxi and waved desperately, praying that it would stop. It did. I got in and gave the driver my house address, shaking uncontrollably.I got off the taxi and rushed into my house. I threw myself into my mums arms and broke int

56、o tears. When my family learned what had happened, they were horrified. My parents told me that I should have just looked for a public phone and called home when I was lost. I knew I had been foolish to believe a stranger. It was a frightening experience which I hoped would never happen to me again.

57、 Its better to be safe than sorry.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了足球训练结束后，我筋疲力尽，我走向公共汽车站，错上了反方向的车。下车后，外面一片漆黑，正当我不知所措时，一辆摩托车从路上开了过来，骑手主动要求搭载我。一路上，他走的路很陌生，我要求他停下来，他却全速前进。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我从车上跳下来，摔在了地上”可知，第一段可描写我是如何跳下摩托车，逃离这个陌生人的。由第二段首句内容“我下了出租车，冲进屋去”可知，第二段可描写我把这件事情告诉父母，父母告诉我今后遇到类似的事情，该怎么办。2.续写线索：筋疲力尽上错车搭载摩托车遇险逃跑

58、诉说感悟3.词汇激活行为类转身：turn around /turn back冲进：rush into /dash into情绪类绝望地：desperately / hopelessly大哭：break into tears / burst out crying【点睛】高分句型1 When I dared to stop, I found that I was on a main road. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)高分句型2 It was a frightening experience which I hoped would never happen to me again. (运

59、用了which引导定语从句)06Its a beautiful sunny day. The Bonds boarded their boat for a carefree day trip to Dove Island for some fishing as a family custom. Thomas Bond, a 30-year-old construction worker, loved the sport, especially catching bass (鲈鱼) and had impressed on his oldest daughter, Lizzy, a love o

60、f the outdoors, teaching her how to bait (下诱饵) a hook and cast a line and brave the waves.The family spent the day fishing in the vast ocean, and then left the island in the early evening. Upon setting off from the shore, they found thick fog rolling in. Lizzy fell into a light sleep beside her five

61、-year-old sister, Molly, at a table on the boats lower deck (甲板). Their fathers sharp orders woke her up: “Get out of the boat. The boats sinking!” Lizzy pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets. The adults did not. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Bond

62、, who was expecting a baby at that time. Within seconds, the boat was damaged and was left just the tip of its bow in the air. Looking into the faces of her father, mother, and sister, Lizzy wasnt frightened. After some time, her father told them he would swim for help. “Ill be back,” he said before

63、 disappearing into the darkness. “Dad is like the superhero to me. I believe he will get help to rescue us,” Lizzy said to herself. After some time, her mother became quiet and stopped swimming. Lizzy wrapped a rope around her mothers chest and tied her to the boat so she wouldnt float away. Then he

64、r sister fell quiet too and she stayed beside her. To keep herself awake, Lizzy daydreamed about what they would do after they were rescued. They would stay in a hotel, order room service, and lie comfortably under the blankets in bed, cozy and warm. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。After seve

65、ral hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance._On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them._【答案】After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance. “Its dad.” Lizzy called out and began to shake her sleepy mother and sister. Mother opened her eyes and squeezed out a faint

66、smile and fell asleep again. Through the thick fog, a white small boat sliding close. Lizzy cried out, “Dad, here”, with tears rolling down her face. Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved. She knew they were rescued.On the coast, an

67、ambulance was waiting for them. With the help of the nurses, they all got in. Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed. Suddenly, Lizzy turned to her father and said, “I knew you would be back, Dad.” “I knew you would keep mother and sister safe”, her fat

68、her hugged her. Tearsrolled down their faces.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Lizzy和妹妹跟随爸爸妈妈出海钓鱼，遭遇沉船落水，爸爸留下Lizzy照顾妈妈和妹妹，自己游去寻求救援，妈妈的妹妹体力不支快失去意识，只有Lizzy坚持着保护着她们，等待爸爸归来。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几个小时后，利奇听到远处有人叫她的名字。”可知，第一段可描写爸爸归来，三人获救。由第二段首句内容“在海岸上，一辆救护车正等着他们”可知，第二段可描写获救后利齐与爸爸的对话。2.续写线索：爸爸归来三人获救得到救助父女对话3.词汇激活行为类大喊：cry ou

69、t/yell/scream营救：rescue/save在的帮助下：with the help of/with the aid of情绪类疲倦的：exhausted/tired【点睛】高分句型1 Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved.(运用了where引导定语从句和形容词作状语)高分句型2 She knew they were rescued.(运用了省略连词的宾语从句)高分句型3 Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed.(运用了过去分词和现在分词作状语)14原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！学科网（北京）股份有限公司