2021高考人教版英语二轮专题复习《统考版》35分写作规范抢分练（四） WORD版含解析.doc

1、35分写作规范抢分练(四)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)2020广州高三调研Last week, I quarrel with my parents about spending too much time in my cellphone. I felt exhausting that day, and became very angry even though they talked to me in a friend way. I now feel ashamed and am writing with this article to apo

2、logize. There are people in the world I value, such as teacher and friends. Moreover, the most important people to me is my parents. It is them who raise me and give me a happy life. I want them to know that Im deeply sorry and will try to be good person and make them proud.第二节书面表达(满分25分)2020贵阳市高三适应

3、性考试(一)据世界卫生组织(World Health Organization)统计，全球81%的青少年缺乏锻炼。假定你是李华，请根据以下要点用英语准备一篇发言稿，在一次国际学生交流活动中发言。1青少年缺乏运动的原因；2.运动的好处；3.如何制定运动计划。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear fellow students， According to the World Health Organization, 81% of teenagers have a lack of exercising. _Thats all. Th

4、ank you!35分写作规范抢分练(四)第一节答案与解析：Last week, I with my parents about spending too much time my cellphone. I felt that day, and became very angry even though they talked to me in a way.I now feel ashamed and am writing this article to apologize. There are people in the world I value, such as and friends.

5、 ， the most important people to me my parents. It is who raise me and give me a happy life. I want them to know that Im deeply sorry and will try to be good person and make them proud.quarrel改为quarreled。动词时态误用。根据该句的时间状语“last week”可知，该句陈述的动作发生在过去，故用一般过去时。in改为on。介词误用。spend time on sth.为固定搭配，意为“在上花费时间”

6、。exhausting改为exhausted。形容词误用。根据该句主语I可知，该处应用形容词exhausted，表示“筋疲力尽的”，形容人；exhausting表示“令人筋疲力尽的”，通常修饰物。friend改为friendly。名词和形容词混用。形容词修饰名词，故该处应用形容词修饰名词way，表示“友好的方式”，故可知答案。删除with。介词多用。write为及物动词，后面直接接宾语，故删除介词with。teacher改为teachers。名词的单复数误用。根据该句中的“There are”和“friends”并结合语境可知，作者珍视的老师和朋友都不止一人，故用复数形式。Moreover改为

7、However。副词误用。前一句是说，在这个世界上有我珍视的人，比如老师和朋友。该句是说，对我来说最重要的人是我的父母。根据前后句句意可知，前后句之间为逻辑上的转折关系，故应用副词However。is改为are。主谓不一致。该句主语为“the most important people”，为复数形式，故谓语动词也应用复数形式。them改为they。人称代词误用。分析该句结构可知，该句使用了强调句结构，被强调的部分是主语，应用代词的主格，故用they。good前加a。冠词漏用。该处泛指“一个好人”，故用不定冠词，且good的发音以辅音音素开头，故用a。第二节参考范文：Dear fellow st

8、udents，According to the World Health Organization, 81% of teenagers have a lack of exercising. And it will lead to the health problems. In my opinion, we should exercise every day.As we all know, most of us think exercising is a waste of time, for we are having much homework in high school. We prefe

9、r smart phones to sports. However, sports can strengthen our body and make us energetic, which is beneficial to our study. So, I want all of you to make a plan for daily exercise after hearing my speech. You can choose a sport you like and make a reasonable time for doing it. Make sure you can insist, otherwise you cannot gain the effect. Anyhow, I hope all of you can change your mind and spend some time exercising.Thats all. Thank you!