2022-2023学年新教材高中英语 Unit 6 At one with nature Section Ⅳ Writing a summary学案 外研版必修第一册.doc

1、Section Writing a summaryStep 文本研读.Read for Writing StyleWhat is the writing style of the passage?AArgumentation. BNarration.CExposition.Read for StructureParagraph 1：British peoples love for 1._Paragraph 2：Various 2._Paragraph 3：Health 3._.Read for Key PointsParagraph 1：British people _.Paragraph 2

2、：However, recent years have seen _.Paragraph 3：Herbal tea has various health benefits.Rewrite the key pointsParagraph 1：_，British people even plant some herbs in their own gardens.Paragraph 2：However, people _some unusual flavours in recent years.Paragraph 3：The herbal tea can not only make people f

3、eel relaxed, but also improve the immune system and digestion system.Polish the summary with the linking wordsAddicted to making tea with fruit and herbs, British people even plant herbs that are easy to grow in their own gardens. _ the common flavours, people are in search of some unusual flavours,

4、 such as mango, strawberry, apple, and so on. _ the variety of flavours, herbal tea also has various health benefits. Some can help people relax, and some are good for the immune system and digestion system.识记下列短语a variety of 各种各样come onto the market 投放市场have a positive effect on 对有积极的影响give sb. a h

5、elping hand 帮某人一把be good for digestion 对消化有益Step Writing探究技法1写作步骤(1)弄清要求。搞清楚是写全文概要，还是写某一部分的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点；(2)细读原文。此类文章多以说明文为主。首先要仔细阅读全文，然后对文章进行整体分析，掌握文章大意和结构，明确全文的主题(the main theme)和各段的段落大意(the main idea)；(3)列出原文要点。分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分，遵循原文的逻辑顺序，对重要部分的主题、细节进行概括，全面清晰地概括原

6、文信息；(4)如需拟标题，可以采用文中的主题句。2写作要点(1)尽量使用自己的话完成，不要引用原文的句子，词数控制在60左右；(2)必须涵盖文章中的所有观点以及少量事例，可以筛选12个例子；(3)避免重复，删除细节，只保留主要观点。3写作技巧(1)把长段描述压缩变成短小精悍的句子。如“His courage in battle might without exaggeration be called lionlike.”可以概括为“He was very brave in battle.”(2)使用词组代替整句或者从句。(3)使用概括性的名词代替具体的词，如“She brought home

7、several Chinese and English novels, a few copies of Time and Newsweek and some textbooks. She intended to read all of them during the winter vocation.”可以概括为“She brought home a lot of books to read during the vocation.”(4)使用最短的连接词。比如可以使用but，then，thus，yet，though；尽量不使用at the same time，in the first plac

8、e，because of，on the other hand等较长的连接词。(5)把文章中的第一人称转换成第三人称，把对白简化。(6)最后，最好用一句话进行总结。实践应用阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Herbal medicine (草药), which has been used for medicinal purposes, is the use of plants to treat diseases. Many herbalists use the entire plant, from the flowers, stems, leaves, and roots,

9、in the form of everything from teas to pills. These plants contain natural, chemical things that can treat the body for a variety of diseasessuch as allergies, asthma, rheumatoid arthritis, migraine, chronic fatigue, and cancer, among others. Nowadays an increasing number of people prefer to adopt t

10、hese plants to treat their diseases because compared with chemical medicine, herbal medicine has its own advantages. Herbal medicine and remedies (治疗) are more effective than chemical medicine for certain diseases. The chemical medicine given by a chemist could have certain negative side effects. Ho

11、wever, many of the herbal medicine and remedies do not have negative side effects. If any, they are softer than chemical medicine. Obesity is the cause of many of the health problems. Herbal medicine can help weightloss more effectively and improve overall health.However, the cure using herbal medic

12、ine and supplements (营养品) would take some time, and therefore people are supposed to possess enough patience. Worse still, herbal medicine contains a variety of ingredients (成分) and people have to be sure that their body agrees with the ingredients and that it is not allergic (过敏的). When used correc

13、tly and directed by doctors, herbs can help treat a variety of diseases. But keep in mind that the herbal medicine industry is not regulated, so herbal products are often misleading and may contain additives (添加剂) and that are not listed on the label (标签). Some herbs may cause allergic reactions or

14、interact with other drugs, and some are poisonous if used improperly or at high doses (剂量). Taking herbs on your own increases your risk.第一步谋篇布局IntroductionParagraph 1: DefinitionBody Conclusion Paragraph 4: Advice第二步要点提炼Paragraph 1：Herbal medicine is the use of the entire plants to treat a variety

15、of diseases.Paragraph 2：Unlike chemical medicine, herbal medicine is more effective and has no or fewer negative side effects.Paragraph 3：However, herbal medicine also has disadvantages, such as timeconsuming and possible allergy.Paragraph 4：People should use herbal medicine cautiously.第三步要点升级Paragr

16、aph 1: Herbal medicine is a way of treating some diseases _ containing powerful things in various forms.Paragraph 2: _ chemical medicine, herbal medicine is better in several ways such as its more effectiveness and fewer negative side effects.Paragraph 3: Herbal medicine requires _ for recovery and

17、tends to _ as well.Paragraph 4: People should use herb medicine _第四步完美成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。_Section Writing a summary写作精析技能提升Step 文本研读.C.1.tea2.flavours3.benefits.Paragraph 1. love to make tea with fruit and herbsParagraph 2. more and more unusual flavours come onto the market.Paragr

18、aph 1. Addicted to making tea with fruit and herbsParagraph 2. have fallen in love with.Apart from; Aside fromStep Writing第三步Paragraph 1. which uses entire plantsParagraph 2. Different fromParagraph 3. more time; cause allergyParagraph 4. with caution第四步Herbal medicine is a way of treating some dise

19、ases which uses entire plants containing powerful things in various forms (要点1). Different from chemical medicine, herbal medicine is better in several ways such as its more effectiveness and fewer negative side effects (要点2). However, herbal medicine requires more time for recovery and tends to cause allergy as well (要点3). Therefore, people should use herb medicine with caution (要点4).