2023届新教材高考英语全程一轮复习 写作手册 第一部分 应用文写作 层级十二 吸引眼球的亮点词汇.docx

1、层级十二吸引眼球的亮点词汇2021年高考阅卷老师说：“我们通常在1分钟内阅完一篇作文并给分，由于长时间阅卷带来的疲劳，普通的词汇只会让我们产生视觉疲劳，但如果一篇作文中有几个不落俗套的高频词汇，会让我们眼前一亮。”【美句输入】一、“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。2021全国甲卷，书面表达I sincerely hope you can help meI sincerely hope you can do me a favour/give me a hand2020天津卷，满分作文As a young man, Im sure

2、 that the future is bright in front of me.As a young man, Im confident that the future is bright in front of me.2021北京卷I hope you can forgive me and consider my suggestion.I hope you can forgive me and take my application into consideration2020全国卷，书面表达The farm lies at the foot of a mountain, where t

3、he sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were deeply impressed by the beautiful scenery.The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, where the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were deeply impressed by the attractive scenery.2020江苏卷，书面表达China has always been an attraction for those who love Chi

4、nese culture.China has always been an attraction for those who are keen on Chinese culture.2021全国甲卷，书面表达Furthermore, guzheng is very important to Chinese folk music leading you to a fantastic world of music.Furthermore，guzheng is of great significance to Chinese folk music leading you to a fantastic

5、 world of music.2020全国卷，书面表达However, the adaption is quite difficultHowever, the adaption is quite challenging. 二、更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异也是增分之处。On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to join in the competition. I know you once took part in a

6、robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition. I know you once participated in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much expe

7、rience in it.三、词汇运用，短语优先当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。全国卷，书面表达Besides, I know English and I can express myself fluently and clearly, which helps me communicate with our distinguished guests efficiently.Moreover, I have a good command of English and I can express myself

8、fluently and clearly, which helps me communicate with our distinguished guests efficiently.【佳句输出】用高级词汇替换黑体词汇12020新高考卷，写作The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise, but also made us more cohesive. _22020全国卷，书面表达This fruitpicking experience is helpfu

9、l to us and teaches us the importance of working. _32020江苏卷，书面表达Documentaries about China, made either in China or in other countries, are becoming more and more popular among foreigners. _4全国卷，书面表达I should be free any time after school next week. _5全国卷，书面表达The team will hold many activities，some of

10、 which will appeal to you, including many matches. _6全国卷，书面表达I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon._72020全国卷，书面表达We sincerely hope you can help us. _82020新高考卷，写作The race was of great benefit to the participants, physically and mentally. As a result,

11、we all think highly of it, and expect more activities like this in the future. _92020全国卷，书面表达Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials. _10Im writing to tell you that we will have a volleyball match next month. _11Besides, youd better bring some meaningful gifts, such as a b

12、unch of flowers or some fresh fruits. _12Remember that you should avoid getting hurt during the training and keep a balanced diet. _132020全国卷，书面表达Finally, all of us not only got many fresh and tasty fruits, but also knew green food._ 2020全国卷，书面表达Therefore, we should treasure the food planted by the

13、farmers and try to make the world better.Therefore, we are supposed to treasure the food planted by the farmers and make efforts to make the world better. 四、用高级词汇取代简单词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量使用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。2021全国甲卷，书面表达I am writing to ask for your valuable advice on the aspects o

14、f Chinese traditional culture which are extremely attracting foreign friends.I am writing to ask for your valuable advice on the aspects of Chinese traditional culture which are extremely appealing to foreign friends.Second, I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concernin

15、g my position.Second, I am sparing no effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerning my position.,14.2020新高考卷，书面表达Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt happy to help this family._15全国卷，书面表达In my opinion, youd better bring proper gift to your C

16、hinese friend._16全国卷，书面表达My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them. _17全国卷，书面表达It is of importance for you to understand the content, Tang Poetry. _完美文章用高级词汇升级下面考生作文中的加黑词汇，并背诵。Dear Robert，How time flies! My College Entrance Exami

17、nation is coming soon. Therefore, I want to have a colorful and meaningful summer vacation.First，I will learn how to drive to get a driving license, because I like driving very much. Second, I will take some English courses to improve my spoken English. After that, I will visit some tourist attracti

18、ons throughout China. Surely, I will take some photos to send to you via the Internet. Finally, I will have a good rest.This is the plan for my vacation. I am eagerly looking forward to it.Yours，Li Hua层级十二吸引眼球的亮点词汇佳句输出1opportunity2.beneficial3.increasingly4.available5.a range of；numbers of6.make an

19、apology for7.do us a favor8.As a consequence9.came up with10.inform11.Additionally/Moreover/Furthermore/In addition12.Bear in mind/Keep in mind13.In the end; gained various; had a good knowledge of14.extremely; delighted15.appropriate16.polish17.make sense of/be aware of完美文章1coming soonapproaching/around the corner2wantintend3FirstTo begin with/To start with4likeam fond of5SecondIn addition/Whats more6visitpay a visit to7FinallyAt last/Eventually