新教材2021-2022学年高中人教版英语必修第一册学案：UNIT 4　NATURAL DISASTERS SECTION Ⅳ　写作指导 WORD版含解析.doc

1、Section 写作指导写作方法指导概要写作写作储备阅读教材P55 Summary，提炼概要写作的写作方法。文体特点概要写作具备说明重点和简短这两个特点。要求考生能够抓住原文的关键信息，抓住文章的主旨大意，并用简短凝练的语言将其概括表达出来。写作四部曲1确定体裁，明确主题及结构体裁结构记叙文人物时间地点事件(起因发展结果)说明文事物的性质功能：对象性质功能利好问题的解决方法或措施：问题解决方法现象类：现象原因结果议论文主题补充论据(结论)2确定主题句，找关键信息划出每一段的主题句，抓住关键信息，忽略次要信息。3改写关键信息，得出要点使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式，或使用不同的句子结构表达

2、同一意思，如改变语态、肯定变否定等，避免抄袭原文句子。4添加连接词，使行文连贯要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。常用的关联词有：however，besides，in addition，therefore，instead等。典例剖析阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Its a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give y

3、ou the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus (校园) like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be

4、 pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one. Theres no excuse not to visit the schools in your loca

5、l area. In fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country that wont be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out!If campus visits arent going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find

6、some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools youd like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you dont like about certain campuses, things that you wouldnt know unless you actually visit. Now, if time and money are mak

7、ing it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. Its a chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college counselors (顾问)，and it wont cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at CollegeWeekLive. com. While visiting an online coll

8、ege fair cant take the place of an actual campus visit，it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities youd like to attend. 审题谋篇定框架好的开始，成功的一半体裁议论文主题探访申请大学框架主题补充论据1、2、3划主题句，找关键信息打造一篇要点全面、用词准确的极优作文Para 1主

9、题句：_Its a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same. _关键信息：_a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply_Para 2主题句：_Theres no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. _关键信息：_visit the schools in your local

10、area. _Para 3主题句：_If campus visits arent going to happen before you apply，at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools youd like to attend. _关键信息：_at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your ac

11、ceptance letters to visit the schools youd like to attend. _Para 4主题句：_Now，if time and money are making it impossible，then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. _关键信息：_check out the online college fairs_词汇、句式升级创造极优作文的倩词靓句Para 11写出下列词语的同义词good idea_worthwhile_visit_pay a visit to_2改写

12、关键信息：_Its really worthwhile to pay a visit to your desired colleges personally before applying. _Para 21将后置定语改为前置定语the schools in your local area_your local_colleges2改写关键信息：_Undoubtedly，you should visit your local colleges. _Para 31写出下列词语的同义表达at the very least_at least_would like to attend_want to g

13、o_2改写关键信息：_At least，you should visit the school you want to go to. _Para 41同义转换if time and money are making it impossibleif you _are short of_ time and moneycheck out the online college fairs_visit_ the online college fairs2改写关键信息：_If you are short of time and money，visiting the online college fairs

14、 is a good alternative to help you better understand schools. _添加连接词，组建极优作文水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉_参考范文：Its really worthwhile to pay a visit to your desired colleges personally before applying. Undoubtedly, you should visit your local colleges. At least, you should visit the school you want to go to and know

15、 its real conditions in advance. If you are short of time and money, visiting the online college fairs is a good alternative to help you better understand schools. 即学即练阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。We shouldnt judge a person by his appearance but we do. In fact, the experts say that when we meet someone

16、 for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds. But what do we look at? One of the most important things is clothes, but it isnt the brand of clothes that people wear that is important. The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion. Schools

17、 have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform. Why? A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways to

18、o. If all the students wear uniforms, they cant judge each other because of their clothes. It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable. However, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession shou

19、ld wear. If we visit a doctor, we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctors white coat. When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses. Police officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol, to make themselves easily identifiab

20、le to non-police officers or their colleagues who require assistance, and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination. In fact, a lot of companies have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes.

21、 But can our clothes really tell people what we are like? Maybe not, but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment. When people see us in the right clothes, they think we are serious about what we are doing. Furthermore, if we are clean, smart and polite, people will have confide

22、nce in us. _参考范文：Wearing proper clothes is important for first impressions. (要点1) For example, schools ask students to wear a uniform because it benefits them in various ways, such as being serious about their study. (要点2) Besides schools, other places, like hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies also want their staff to dress in uniforms because of convenience. (要点3) In conclusion, our clothes can show our attitude and win trust from others. (要点4)(67 words)