2023版高考英语一轮总复习 专题检测八 短文改错.docx

1、专题八短文改错Proofreading 1My hometown, Wanning, Hainan, which is a lively city within a 90-minute drive from Sanya.It enjoys a warm climate with an annual average temperatures of 20. It is the better surfing spot with many international competitions hold there each year. Riyue Bay, located 25km south of

2、Wanning, is my favourite place. With its strong waves, Riyue Bay is a ideal beach for surfing, what always offers an incredible surfing experience. Taxis at Wanning Station are plentiful.Ignore others vehicles and head directly to the taxi line. Your totally travel time to Riyue Bay should be 40 min

3、utes or so. It is a long but slightly expensive road, but it worth a visit!答案My hometown, Wanning, Hainan, which is a lively city within a 90-minute drive from Sanya.It enjoys a warm climate with an annual average temperaturestemperature of 20. It is the betterbest surfing spot with many internation

4、al competitions holdheld there each year. Riyue Bay, located 25km south of Wanning, is my favourite place. With its strong waves, Riyue Bay is aan ideal beach for surfing, whatwhich always offers an incredible surfing experience. Taxis at Wanning Station are plentiful.Ignore othersother vehicles and

5、 head directly to the taxi line. Your totallytotal travel time to Riyue Bay should be 40 minutes or so. It is a long butand slightly expensive road, but it is worth a visit!解析1.考查简单句。句意:我的家乡,海南万宁,是一个生机勃勃的城市,离三亚不到90分钟的车程。本句为简单句,而不含有非限制性定语从句,故将which删除。2.考查名词的“数”。句意:这里气候温暖,年平均气温20。根据错误处前的冠词“an”及句意可知错误处

6、应为名词单数形式,故将temperatures改为temperature。3.考查形容词比较等级。句意:它是最好的冲浪地点,每年都有许多国际比赛在那里举行。结合句意及定冠词the可知此处要表达的意思是“最好的冲浪地点”,故使用best。4.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。文中“with many international competitions hold”为“with的复合结构”。with后的宾语many international competitions与作宾补的hold为逻辑上的被动关系,需用过去分词而非动词原形作宾补,故将hold改为held。5.考查冠词。句意:日月湾的海浪很大,是理

7、想的冲浪海滩,它总能给人们令人难以置信的冲浪体验。错误处后的ideal以元音音素开头,需与an连用,故将a改为an。6.考查非限制性定语从句。先行词为Riyue Bay,将先行词代入定语从句后可知先行词在定语从句中作主语;先行词指“物”,故用which而非what引导非限制性定语从句。7.考查形容词。句意:不乘坐其他车辆,直接乘坐出租车。错误处后有名词复数形式vehicles,错误处应改为other。other+名词复数形式=others。8.考查形容词。句意:到日月湾的总行程时间应该是40分钟左右。错误处作travel time的定语,需用形容词,故将totally改为total。9.考查并

8、列连词。句意:这条路很长且打车费用稍微贵一点,但那里值得一游! 错误处前后的 long和slightly expensive为递进关系而非转折关系,故将but改为and。10.考查谓语动词。本句缺少谓语动词,worth为形容词,因此在前面加系动词is,构成be worth a visit结构,意为:值得一游。Proofreading 2I was riding my bike down to the corner shop in a Saturday morning when I attracted by a cute boy who was walking his dog. Suddenly

9、 my neighbour drives past and honked(按喇叭)at me. I was so surprising that I crashed into an old lady walk down the street! Lucky, the old lady wasn􀆳t hurt, but I fell off my bike and landed in the hole. My neighbour saw me to fall so she stopped her car and rushed out to help her. The worst

10、part was that the cute boy stopped to watch all happen. What an embarrassing but dangerous day! 答案I was riding my bike down to the corner shop inon a Saturday morning when I was attracted by a cute boy who was walking his dog. Suddenly my neighbour drivesdrove past and honked(按喇叭)at me. I was so sur

11、prisingsurprised that I crashed into an old lady walkwalking down the street! LuckyLuckily, the old lady wasn􀆳t hurt, but I fell off my bike and landed in thea hole. My neighbour saw me to fall so she stopped her car and rushed out to help herme. The worst part was that the cute boy stopped

12、 to watch all happen. What an embarrassing butand dangerous day! 解析1.考查介词。句意:一个星期六的早晨,我正骑着自行车去街角的商店,就在这时我被一个正在遛狗的可爱男孩吸引住了。错误处表示“在具体某天的上午”,需用on而非in,故将in改为on。2.考查被动语态。主语“I”与attract为被动关系,故该句应该用被动语态;再根据上下文可知需用一般过去时的被动语态形式,故在attracted前加was。3.考查时态。句意:突然,我的邻居开车经过,对着我按喇叭。根据上下文可知本句讲的是过去的事情,应该用一般过去时,故将drives改

13、为drove。4.考查形容词。句意:我太惊讶了结果撞上了一个正在街上行走的老太太!错误处表示“感到惊讶的”而非“令人感到惊讶的”,故将surprising改为surprised。5.考查动词的非谓语形式作定语。被修饰词an old lady与walk为逻辑上的主动关系,且walk表示“正在进行”,需用现在分词作定语,故将walk改为walking。6.考查副词。句意:幸运的是,老太太没有受伤,但我从自行车上摔了下来,倒在了一个坑里。错误处位于句首,修饰后面一句话,需用副词作状语,故将Lucky改为Luckily。7.考查冠词。错误处后的hole表示泛指,意为“一个坑”,需与不定冠词连用,故将t

14、he改为a。8.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。句意:我的邻居看到我摔倒了,所以她停下了车,冲出来帮我。动词see接宾语时,后面用不带“to”的不定式作宾补,故将to删除。9.考查代词。根据上下文情节可推知邻居匆匆下车是为了帮助“我”,故将her改为me。10.考查并列连词。句意:最糟糕的是那个可爱的男孩停下来看着这一切发生。多么尴尬和危险的一天呀! 根据上下文可知错误处前后的embarrassing和dangerous为递进关系而非转折关系,故将but改为and。Proofreading 3Among so much proverbs, I like “The early bird catche

15、s the worm.”best.This proverb means that to being successful, one needs to start early or before anyone else. It advises us seize the day and take every opportunity. That is why I liked it so much.Looking back, I have come to realize that success is never goes to those who are lazy! Often the mostly

16、 successful people are those who do something before anyone else do. Success takes hard work and time. The early one wakes up, the more work time you will have and the more one will get.Are you a early bird?答案Among so muchmany proverbs, I like “The early bird catches the worm.”best.This proverb mean

17、s that to beingbe successful, one needs to start early or before anyone else. It advises ustoseize the day and take every opportunity. That is why I likedlike it so much.Looking back, I have come to realize that success is never goes to those who are lazy! Often the mostlymost successful people are

18、those who do something before anyone else dodoes . Success takes hard work and time. The earlyearlier one wakes up, the more work time youone will have and the more one will get. Are you aan early bird?解析1.考查形容词。句意:在这么多谚语中,我最喜欢“早起的鸟儿有虫吃”。错误处后的proverbs为名词复数形式,需用many而非much修饰,故将much改为many。2.考查动词的非谓语形式作

19、状语。句意:这句谚语的意思是:一个人要想成功,需要早早地或在其他人之前就开始。错误处作目的状语,意为“为了成功”,因此需用“to be”,故将being改为be。3.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。句意:它建议我们要抓住每一天,抓住每一个机会。advise后需用不定式作宾补,构成advise sb. to do sth.结构,故在seize前加不定式符号to。4.考查时态。句意:那就是我这么喜欢这则谚语的原因。本句介绍的是现在的情况,错误处需用一般现在时,故将liked改为like。5.考查谓语动词。句意:回顾过去,我意识到成功从来不属于那些懒惰的人!错误处后的goes为谓语动词,因此错误处的“i

20、s”是多余的,故被删除。6.考查副词。句意:最成功的人往往是那些比其他任何人都先做事的人。错误处应该用most,与successful连用构成最高级,表示“最成功的”,故将mostly改为most。7.考查主谓一致。错误处前的主语anyone else属于单数第三人称概念,因此错误处应为does,故将do改为does。8.考查固定句式。句意:一个人醒得越早,他拥有的工作时间就越多,他得到的也就越多。根据本句中的“the more work time”可知本句考查“the+比较级+主语+谓语,the+比较级+主语+谓语”句型,故将early改为earlier。9.考查代词。根据错误处前后的“on

21、e”可知错误处应为one,故将you改为one。10.考查冠词。句意:你是捷足先登者吗?错误处后的early以元音音素开头,故将a改为an。Proofreading 4I grew up in a small town about a hour outside of Chicago. There were only a handful of local shops and cafes, and everyone know their neighbors as there were only twenty thousands people in the whole town! My parent

22、s used to let my brother and me walking to and from the kindergarten every day, and we were allowed to do whichever we liked before dark. The only thing we had to worry about was getting bite by insects or getting sunburned from staying outdoor for too long! After high school, I went to college in t

23、he city. Taking the subway was much faster than riding my bike. People from all over the world spoke languages I never heard before. There were huge department stores, where sold everything. The entertainment at all hours was my most favorite thing about the city.答案I grew up in a small town about aa

24、n hour outside of Chicago. There were only a handful of local shops and cafes, and everyone knowknew their neighbors as there were only twenty thousandsthousand people in the whole town! My parents used to let my brother and me walkingwalk to and from the kindergarten every day, and we were allowed

25、to do whicheverwhatever we liked before dark. The only thing we had to worry about was getting bitebitten by insects or getting sunburned from staying outdooroutdoors for too long! After high school, I went to college in the city. Taking the subway was much faster than riding my bike. People from al

26、l over the world spoke languages Ihadnever heard before. There were huge department stores,wherewhich sold everything. The entertainment at all hours was my most favorite thing about the city.解析1.考查冠词。句意:我在离芝加哥约1小时路程的一个小镇上长大。错误处后的hour以元音音素开头,需与an而非a连用。2.考查时态。句意:当地只有几家商店和咖啡馆,而且每个人都认识他们的邻居,因为整个镇只有两万人!

27、根据上下文可推知错误处也应该用一般过去时,故将know改为knew。3.考查数词。thousand前加具体数字时,thousand用单数形式,故将thousands改为thousand。4.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。句意:我父母过去每天都让我和弟弟步行上下幼儿园,天黑前我们可以做任何我们想做的事。let后需用不带“to”的不定式作宾补,即let sb. do sth.。5.考查名词性从句。错误处前面没有给出范围作为铺垫,因此需用whatever。6.考查动词的非谓语形式。句意:我们唯一需要担心的就是被昆虫咬伤或者因为在户外待的时间太长而被晒伤!根据错误处前的“getting”及后面的介词“b

28、y”可知错误处需用过去分词形式,故将bite改为bitten。7.考查副词。outdoor是形容词,不能作staying的状语。作staying的状语应该用副词形式,故将outdoor改为outdoors。8.考查时态。句意:来自世界各地的人们说的语言我以前从未听过。根据错误处后的时间状语“before”可推知错误处应该用过去完成时,故在“never heard”前加助动词had。9.考查定语从句。句意:那里有很大的百货商店,出售各种商品。根据错误处前的标点符号(逗号),可推知错误处引导非限制性定语从句。先行词为department stores,将先行词代入定语从句后可知先行词在定语从句中作

29、主语,先行词指“物”,故用which而非where引导该非限制性定语从句。10.考查形容词的用法。句意:关于这座城市我最喜欢的是它有全天候的娱乐活动。形容词favorite没有最高级形式,不与most连用,故删除most。Proofreading 5Today I went out with my friend Ann for lunch at a restaurant. It is a pretty specially one, what is called“Signs Restaurant”. In order to make the order for food, you have to

30、 use sign language. All the waiters and waitresses are without hearing. The waitress who served us was amazed. She taught we a bunch of signs while we had waited for our food. She was patient for me as I tried. My friends helped me out a little, either. The waitress said I did a good job. I feel ins

31、pired now take an ASL course and will do so next year.I will do some learning online before the course starts. I just can􀆳t wait.答案Today I went out with my friend Ann for lunch at a restaurant. It is a pretty speciallyspecial one, whatwhich is called“Signs Restaurant”. In order to make thea

32、n order for food, you have to use sign language. All the waiters and waitresses are without hearing. The waitress who served us was amazedamazing. She taught weus a bunch of signs while we had waited for our food. She was patient forwith me as I tried. My friendsfriend helped me out a little, either

33、too. The waitress said I did a good job. I feel inspired now to take an ASL course and will do so next year.I will do some learning online before the course starts. I just can􀆳t wait.解析1.考查形容词。句意:今天我和我的朋友安一起到饭馆吃午饭。这是一家很特殊的餐厅,被称为“手语餐厅”。错误处作one的定语,需用形容词而非副词,故将specially改为special。2.考查定语从句。根据错误处

34、前的标点符号(逗号),可知本题考查非限制性定语从句。先行词为one,将先行词代入定语从句后可知先行词在定语从句中作主语;先行词指“物”,需用which引导,故将what改为which。3.考查冠词。句意:为了点餐,你必须使用手语。错误处后的名词order在本句中表示泛指,需与不定冠词连用,故将the改为an。此外,make an order for sth.也是固定短语。4.考查形容词。句意:为我们服务的女服务员很令人惊喜。amazing令人惊喜的,amazed感到惊喜的。错误处表示“令人惊喜的”,故将amazed改为amazing。5.考查代词。句意:当我们等餐的时候,她教了我们一些手语。错

35、误处作taught的宾语,需用人称代词宾格形式,故将we改为us。6.考查时态。本句中waited与前面的taught同时发生,而不是先于taught发生,因此需将had waited(过去完成时)改为waited(一般过去时)。7.考查介词。句意:当我努力学习手语时,她对我很有耐心。be patient with sb.为固定短语,意为:对某人有耐心。8.考查名词的“数”。句意:我的朋友也帮了我一把。错误处指的是第一句中的“Ann”,需用单数名词,故将friends改为friend。9.考查副词。too表示“也”,常用于肯定句;either表示“也”,常用于否定句。本句为肯定句,故将eith

36、er改为too。10.考查动词的非谓语形式作状语。feel inspired后需用不定式作状语,故在take前加不定式符号“to”。Proofreading 6My friends made a plan go to the seaside last week. I was very excited and asked for my parents􀆳 permission. To my delight, they agree. We gathered at 6:30 but set off at once. Honest speaking, it took us more t

37、han an hour to arrive there by bike. When we arrived, there was plenty of visitors. Some were playing in the sand, playing the volleyball happily while others were walking along the seaside. On addition, some even sat on their chair, enjoying the beautiful sight. What made us happy was whether we co

38、uld swim safely. We enjoyed us that day and returned home at about three o􀆳clock.答案My friends made a planto go to the seaside last week. I was very excited and asked for my parents􀆳 permission. To my delight, they agreeagreed. We gathered at 6:30 butand set off at once. HonestHones

39、tly speaking, it took us more than an hour to arrive there by bike. When we arrived, there waswere plenty of visitors. Some were playing in the sand, playing the volleyball happily while others were walking along the seaside. OnIn addition, some even sat on their chairchairs, enjoying the beautiful

40、sight. What made us happy was whetherthat we could swim safely. We enjoyed usourselves that day and returned home at about three o􀆳clock.解析1.考查动词的非谓语形式作定语。句意:我的朋友上周计划去海边。名词plan后需用不定式形式作定语,故在go前加不定式符号“to”。2.考查时态。句意:令我高兴的是,他们同意了。本句讲的是过去的事情,其谓语动词需用一般过去时,故将agree改为agreed。3.考查并列连词。句意:我们六点半集合完毕便立即

41、出发了。错误处前后的gathered和set off不是转折关系而是顺承关系,故将but改为and。4.考查副词。句意:老实说,我们骑自行车花了一个多小时才到那里。错误处作speaking的状语,需用副词形式,故将Honest改为Honestly。5.考查主谓一致。句意:我们到达时,游客很多。根据错误处后的visitors可知错误处应该用were。6.考查冠词。句意:一些人在沙滩上高兴地打排球,另一些人在海边散步。本句中的volleyball为球类运动,与零冠词连用,故将the删除。7.考查介词短语。句意:此外,一些人甚至坐在椅子上,享受这美丽的景色。in addition为固定短语,意为:此

42、外。故将On改为In。8.考查名词的“数”。错误处表示“他们各自的椅子”,需用名词复数形式,故将chair改为chairs。9.考查名词性从句。句意:使我们高兴的是我们可以安全地游泳。从句意思完整,故用that而非whether(是否)引导。10.考查代词。句意:那天我们玩得很开心,大约3点钟就回家了。enjoy oneself为固定短语,意为:玩得高兴;根据主语“We”可知需将us改为ourselves。Proofreading 7I􀆳ll never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown. On the way to

43、my grandpa, my father drove very carefully or slowly all the way, for it was snowing heavily.When we arrived, my cousin Maomao grabbed my arm at once, inviting me collect snow with our grandpa.We felt not a little excitedly. After a while, in the yard was some snowmen, all look funny. “Look, here

44、049011;s another snowman,”shouted Maomao, joyfully clapping his hand. It was our grandpa who grey hair was blowing in the wind. We laughed, which made our grandpa a kind of awkward. How I wish I can go back there next year!答案I􀆳ll never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown. On the w

45、ay to my grandpagrandpas, my father drove very carefully orand slowly all the way, for it was snowing heavily.When we arrived, my cousin Maomao grabbed my arm at once, inviting meto collect snow with our grandpa.We felt not a little excitedlyexcited. After a while, in the yard waswere some snowmen,

46、all looklooking funny.“Look, here􀆳s another snowman,”shouted Maomao, joyfully clapping his handhands. It was our grandpa whowhose grey hair was blowing in the wind. We laughed, which made our grandpa a kind of awkward. How I wish I cancould go back there next year!解析1.考查名词所有格。句意:在去爷爷家的路上,我爸

47、爸一路开车很小心、很慢,因为雪下得很大。错误处表示“爷爷的家”,需用grandpa的所有格形式,故将grandpa改为grandpa􀆳s。2.考查并列连词。错误处前后的carefully和slowly表示顺承关系而非选择关系,故将or改为and。3.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。句意:我们一到达,我的堂弟毛毛马上抓住我的胳膊,邀请我和我们的爷爷一起堆雪人。invite加宾语后需用不定式作宾补,故在collect前加不定式符号“to”。4.考查形容词。句意:我们感到非常兴奋。错误处作系动词felt的表语,需用形容词而非副词,故将excitedly改为excited。5.考查主谓一

48、致。句意:过了一会儿,院子里就堆出了几个雪人,它们看起来都很滑稽。本句为倒装句,谓语动词需与主语“snowmen”(名词复数形式)保持一致,故将was改为were。6.考查动词的非谓语形式作状语。本句既无并列连词又无从属连词,由此可判断“all look funny”为独立主格结构。该结构中的all与look(系动词)为逻辑上的主动关系,需用现在分词作状语,故将look改为looking。7.考查名词的“数”。句意:“看,又堆了一个雪人。”毛毛一边喊一边高兴地拍着手。根据常识,“拍手”应该是“拍双手”,因此错误处应该用hand的复数形式,故将hand改为hands。8.考查定语从句。爷爷的白发

49、在风中飘扬。先行词为our grandpa,将先行词代入定语从句后为:Our grandpa􀆳s grey hair was blowing in the wind. 由此可知先行词在定语从句中作定语,因此错误处应该用whose而非who。9.考查固定短语。句意:我们笑了,这让爷爷有点尴尬。kind of为固定短语,意为:稍微(slightly),用来修饰形容词、副词。“a kind of+名词”(一种)不符合本句逻辑和要求,故将kind前的a删除。10.考查虚拟语气。句意:我多么希望明年能再去那里呀! wish后宾语从句谓语动词需用“could+动词原形”,表示将来的主观愿

50、望。故将can改为could。Proofreading 8I still remember my first presentation in front of my entire class. When it comes to my turn, I was very much nervous! My head went blank and I had no idea that to say. Then I took deep breath and slowly breathed out. I kept do so for some times. That helped me feel less

51、 terribly. After a while, I calmed down but began my speech. I did a good job in the end. It was deep breathing that helped me out of anxious. So remember to breathe deeply when you feel nervous in a presentation. Focus on your speech and don􀆳t worry with not making my presentation perfect.

52、 The world won􀆳t end even if you mess up.答案I still remember my first presentation in front of my entire class. When it comescame to my turn, I was very much nervous! My head went blank and I had no idea thatwhat to say. Then I tooka deep breath and slowly breathed out. I kept dodoing so for

53、 some times. That helped me feel less terriblyterrible. After a while,I calmed down butand began my speech. I did a good job in the end. It was deep breathing that helped me out of anxiousanxiety. So remember to breathe deeply when you feel nervous in a presentation. Focus on your speech and don

54、49011;t worry withabout not making myyour presentation perfect. The world won􀆳t end even if you mess up.解析1.考查时态。句意:轮到我(演讲)时,我非常紧张!本句讲的是过去的事情,其谓语动词应该用一般过去时,故将comes改为came。2.考查副词。much不能修饰形容词原级,故将much删除。3.考查疑问代词。句意:我的脑子一片空白,不知道说什么。错误处表示“说话内容”,需用what而非that,故将that改为what。4.考查动词短语。句意:然后我深深地吸了一口气,慢

55、慢地呼了出来。take a deep breath为固定短语,意为:深深地吸了一口气,故在deep前加不定冠词a。5.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾语。句意:我一直这样做了好几次。keep后需用动名词形式作宾语,故将do改为doing。6.考查形容词。句意:那让我感觉不那么糟糕了。错误处作系动词feel的表语,需用形容词形式,故将terribly改为terrible。7.考查并列连词。句意:过了一会儿,我冷静了下来,开始演讲。错误处前后的calmed down和began my speech表示递进关系而非转折关系,故将but改为and。8.考查名词。句意:是深呼吸帮助我摆脱了焦虑。错误处作out

56、of的宾语,需用名词形式,故将anxious改为anxiety。9.考查动词短语。句意:专注于你的演讲,不要担心你的展示不完美。worry about为固定短语,意为:担心。故将with改为about。10.考查代词。根据上下文逻辑可知错误处应该表示“你的”而非“我的”,故将my改为your。Proofreading 9I had a very special winter vacation this year. A terrible disease calling COVID-19 struck Wuhan on January 2020.The whole nation is under

57、the shadow of the outbreak in a short time. Tens of thousand of people were infected with the virus. Thankful, the government took timely measures and called on ourselves to stay at home to avoid close personal contact. In the meantime, a plenty of medical experts and nursing professionals went to W

58、uhan voluntarily, who showed that Chinese could unite firmly in the face of difficulties. The disaster did bring huge pain to China and it pushed the country overcome difficulties and come out much stronger.答案I had a very special winter vacation this year. A terrible disease callingcalled COVID-19 s

59、truck Wuhan onin January 2020.The whole nation iswas under the shadow of the outbreak in a short time. Tens of thousandthousands of people were infected with the virus. ThankfulThankfully, the government took timely measures and called on ourselvesus to stay at home to avoid close personal contact.

60、In the meantime, a plenty of medical experts and nursing professionals went to Wuhan voluntarily, whowhich showed that Chinese could unite firmly in the face of difficulties. The disaster did bring huge pain to China andbut it pushed the countryto overcome difficulties and come out much stronger.解析1

61、.考查动词的非谓语形式作定语。句意:2020年1月,一种名为COVID-19的可怕疾病袭击了武汉。被修饰词disease与call为逻辑上的被动关系,需用过去分词作定语,故将calling改为called。2.考查介词。错误处后面的时间为月份,需与in连用,故将on改为in。3.考查时态。句意:很快全国都笼罩在疫情的阴影之下。本句讲的是过去的事情,需用一般过去时,故将is改为was。4.考查数词。句意:成千上万的人感染了这种病毒。tens of thousands of意为:成千上万的。故将thousand改为thousands。5.考查副词。句意:值得庆幸的是,政府及时采取了措施,要求我们待

62、在家里以避免密切的个人接触。错误处应该用副词作状语,修饰后面整句话,故将Thankful改为Thankfully。6.考查代词。错误处的ourselves与主语the government不表示“同一些人”,故错误处不能用反身代词,故将ourselves改为us。7.考查固定短语。句意:同时,大批医学专家和护理人员自愿前往武汉,这表明中国人民在困难面前能够坚定地团结在一起。plenty of为固定短语,意为:许多。故删除plenty前的a。8.考查定语从句。根据错误处前的逗号可知错误处引导非限制性定语从句。先行词为前面一句话,指“事”,关系词在从句中作主语,需用which引导非限制性定语从句,

63、故将who改为which。9.考查并列连词。句意:这次灾难的确给中国带来了巨大的苦难,但它也鼓舞了国家克服困难并变得更加强大。根据逻辑可知错误处前后两个分句表示转折关系,故将and改为but。10.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。push加宾语后需用不定式形式作宾补,故在overcome前加不定式符号“to”。push.to do sth.意为:敦促、鼓励做某事。Proofreading 10I􀆳m a Senior Three student. I like making friends with like-minded fellow and usually they get

64、on well with each other. However, I overheard one of my friends speaking ill me yesterday, say she didn􀆳t want to play with me. As the matter of fact, she plays tricks on me occasional because I􀆳m fat. I am just can􀆳t understand how she can􀆳t be friendly to me whi

65、le I􀆳m kind to her. It was hard for me to pretend to know nothing but even hard to let go of our friendship.答案I􀆳m a Senior Three student. I like making friends with like-minded fellowfellows and usually theywe get on well with each other. However, I overheard one of my friends spea

66、king illofme yesterday, saysaying she didn􀆳t want to play with me. As thea matter of fact, she plays tricks on me occasionaloccasionally because I􀆳m fat. I am just can􀆳t understand howwhy she can􀆳t be friendly to me while I􀆳m kind to her. It wasis hard fo

67、r me to pretend to know nothing but even hardharder to let go of our friendship.解析1.考查名词的“数”。句意:我喜欢和志趣相投的同学交朋友,通常我们相处得很好。根据常识可知错误处的名词fellow在本句中表示泛指,需用其复数形式,故将fellow改为fellows。2.考查代词。根据逻辑可知错误处应该表示“我们”,故将they改为we。3.考查动词短语。句意:然而,我昨天无意中听到我的一个朋友说我的坏话,说她不想和我玩。speak ill of sb.为固定短语,意为:说某人的坏话。4.考查动词的非谓语形式作状语

68、。错误处前没有连词,由此可知错误处应该作状语。say与逻辑主语one of my friends为逻辑上的主动关系,需用现在分词作状语,故将say改为saying。5.考查介词短语。句意:事实上,她偶尔也会捉弄我,因为我很胖。as a matter of fact为固定短语,意为:事实上。故将the改为a。6.考查副词。错误处需用副词而非形容词作状语,故将occasional改为occasionally。7.考查谓语动词。句意:我就是不明白为什么我对她友好,她却对我不友好。谓语“can􀆳t understand”不可以与am连用,故删除am。8.考查名词性从句。根据逻辑可知错

69、误处表示“为什么”,而不是“如何”,故将how改为why。9.考查时态。句意:对我来说,假装什么都不知道很难,但放弃我们的友谊更难。本句讲的是作者现在的情况,需用一般现在时,故将was改为is。10.考查形容词比较等级。根据错误处前的even可知错误处需用形容词比较级形式,故将hard改为harder。Proofreading 11With the development of the Internet, shopping online is more and more popular. People spend lots of money online, especially on Sing

70、les Day when the sales volume reaches an unexpected level, that astonishes everyone. Some people are in favor of it. Shopping online never failed to fascinate people because its great convenience. However, it offers the wide range of goods to people and they can get almost whatever they want online.

71、 On the contrary, some think it makes people to waste more money with the increasingly eagerness to buy more. They often find what theyve bought can rarely be used in his daily life. As far as Im concerned, its amazed to shop on the Internet. After all, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Wha

72、t really counts for people is to buy better goods with low prices.答案With the development of the Internet, shopping online is more and more popular. People spend lots of money online, especially on Singles Day when the sales volume reaches an unexpected level, thatwhich astonishes everyone. Some peop

73、le are in favor of it. Shopping online never failedfails to fascinate people because of its great convenience. HoweverBesides/Furthermore/Moreover, it offers thea wide range of goods to people and they can get almost whatever they want online. On the contrary, some think it makes people to waste mor

74、e money with the increasinglyincreasing eagerness to buy more. They often find what theyve bought can rarely be used in histheir daily life. As far as Im concerned, its amazedamazing to shop on the Internet. After all, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. What really counts for people is to bu

75、y better goods with lowlower prices.解析考查定语从句。句意:人们花了很多钱在网上购物,尤其是在光棍节那天,销售量达到了出人意料的水平,这让每个人都大吃一惊。错误处前没有并列连词,由此可判断本题考查非限制性定语从句。错误处前的句子为先行词,指“事物”,关系词在定语从句中作主语,需用which引导,故将that改为which。考查时态。句意:由于其便捷性,网上购物总会让人们着迷。本句介绍的是网上购物的优势,应该用一般现在时,故将failed改为fails。考查介词。because为连词,后面加句子,构成原因状语从句;because of为介词短语,后加名词、代词

76、或动名词。本句错误处后为名词而非句子,故在because后加of。考查副词。句意:此外,网上购物可给人们提供各种商品,他们几乎可以得到他们想要的任何东西。上句介绍网上购物的优点,本句也在介绍网上购物的优点,由此可知这两句为递进关系并非转折关系,故将However改为Besides/Furthermore/Moreover。考查冠词。a wide range of为固定短语,意为:各种各样的,故将the改为a。考查make的用法。与之相反,一些人认为由于人们购买欲的增加,这会使他们浪费更多的钱。使役动词make后需用不带“to”的不定式作宾补,故删除不定式符号“to”。考查形容词。错误处修饰名词

77、eagerness,需用形容词形式,故将increasingly改为increasing。考查代词。句意:他们经常发现他们买的东西很少能在他们的日常生活中使用。根据逻辑可知错误处应与本句中的“they”一致,故将his改为their。考查形容词。句意:就我而言,网上购物令人惊喜。毕竟,利大于弊。amazed感到惊喜的;amazing令人惊喜的。错误处表示“令人惊喜的”,故将amazed改为amazing。考查形容词比较等级。句意:对人们来说,真正重要的是以更低的价格买到更好的商品。根据本句中的better可知错误处也需用比较级形式,故将low改为lower。Proofreading 12It

78、was the Mid-Autumn Day yesterday, and I invite my foreign friend Harry to spend the traditionally festival with my family.At dinner table, my father was warmly welcomed Harry. He said, “This is a family reunion dinner for a Chinese family on the Mid-Autumn Day, so today you are certainly one of our

79、family.” Harry was so happy but, of course, enjoyed the delicious Chinese dishes preparing by my mother.In the evening, we sat in the yard, listening to some beautiful story about the moon and sharing moon cakes while admire the moon. “How an amazing day Ive had today! I will never forget them,” Har

80、ry said.答案It was the Mid-Autumn Day yesterday, and I inviteinvited my foreign friend Harry to spend the traditionallytraditional festival with my family.At the dinner table, my father was warmly welcomed Harry. He said, “This is a family reunion dinner for a Chinese family on the Mid-Autumn Day, so

81、today you are certainly one of our family.” Harry was so happy butand, of course, enjoyed the delicious Chinese dishes preparingprepared by my mother.In the evening, we sat in the yard, listening to some beautiful storystories about the moon and sharing moon cakes while admireadmiring the moon. “How

82、What an amazing day Ive had today! I will never forget themit,” Harry said.解析考查时态。句意:昨天是中秋节,我邀请了我的外国朋友哈里和我的家人一起过这个传统节日。根据and前面的句子可知错误处应该用一般过去时,故将 invite改为invited。考查形容词。错误处作festival的定语,需用形容词形式,故将traditionally改为traditional。考查冠词。句意:在餐桌上,我父亲对哈里表示热烈欢迎。错误处后的table在本句中表示特指,需与定冠词连用,故在dinner table前加the。考查语态。主

83、语my father与welcome为主动关系,不用被动语态,故将was删除。考查并列连词。句意:哈里高兴极了,当然也喜欢妈妈准备的美味的中国菜。错误处前后的was so happy和enjoyed the delicious Chinese dishes并非转折关系,而是并列关系,故将but改为and。考查非谓语动词作定语。根据错误处后的“by my mother”可知错误处需用过去分词而非现在分词作定语,修饰名词dishes,故将preparing改为prepared。考查名词的“数”。句意:晚上,我们坐在院子里,一边听一些关于月亮的美丽故事并分享月饼,一边赏月。根据错误处前的some(一

84、些)可知错误处需用名词复数形式,故将story改为stories。考查非谓语动词作状语。while后没有主语,由此可判断错误处应为非谓语动词作状语。主语we和admire为逻辑上的主动关系,需用现在分词形式作状语,故将admire改为admiring。考查感叹句。句意:“我今天过得太棒了!我永远不会忘记它。”哈里说。根据错误处后的an amazing day可知将How改为What,构成“What+a/an+形容词+名词+主语+谓语!”句型。考查代词。错误处指代前面的an amazing day,为单数概念,需用it而非them替代,故将them改为it。Proofreading 13Its

85、been two years when I joined the campus radio station. During this time, I had done several interviews. Every time I finish to writing an article, I am proud of myself for able to introduce my schoolmates to the things Ive seen. It was difficult at times, but when I saw my stories publish in our sch

86、ool newspaper, you knew that it was something worth doing. My parents, teachers and schoolmates congratulated me on that I did. I felt happily when I shared a new story with them. The greatest thing about being the reporter is exchanging idea with others.答案Its been two years whensince I joined the c

87、ampus radio station. During this time, I hadhave done several interviews. Every time I finish to writing an article, I am proud of myself for being able to introduce my schoolmates to the things Ive seen. It was difficult at times, but when I saw my stories publishpublished in our school newspaper,

88、youI knew that it was something worth doing. My parents, teachers and schoolmates congratulated me on thatwhat I did. I felt happilyhappy when I shared a new story with them. The greatest thing about being thea reporter is exchanging ideaideas with others.解析考查连词。句意:自从我加入校园广播站以来已经两年了。 考查句式:It has bee

89、n/is + 一段时间 + since +主语+谓语(谓语动词用一般过去时态)。考查时态。句意:在这期间,我做了若干采访。During this time作时间状语时,谓语动词多使用现在完成时态,也可使用延续性动词的一般过去时态,但是此处只能把had改成have。考查非谓语动词。句意:每次我写完一篇文章。finish doing sth.完成做某事,finish 后用动名词作宾语。考查非谓语动词。句意:我为自己自豪,因为我能将我的所见都介绍给同学。此处介词for 后应该用动名词作介词的宾语。be able to是一个固定搭配,表能力,故添加being。考查非谓语动词。句意:但是当我看到我的故事

90、在校报上被发表时。see sth. done看到某事被做, 此处过去分词表示被动和完成。考查代词。句意:但是当我看到我的故事在校报上被发表时,我知道这是一件值得做的事。从行文逻辑判断,应该是我知道而非你知道。考查连接词。句意:我的父母、老师和同学们对我所做的事表示祝贺。 介词on 后面接的是介词的宾语从句,从句中谓语动词did缺少宾语,故用what引导宾语从句,说明做的具体内容。that在宾语从句中不能充当成分,只能起连接作用。考查形容词。句意:当我将新故事与他们分享时,我感觉开心。此处felt是系动词,后面接形容词作表语。考查冠词。句意:做记者最棒的事就是和别人交流思想。reporter是可

91、数名词,此处表示泛指,又因为reporter以辅音音素开头,故将the改成a。考查名词。句意:做记者最棒的事就是和别人交流思想。idea 是可数名词,表示“意见,看法,信念”。exchange ideas 交流思想。Proofreading 14Today my parents and I decided to go to the field to pick some wild vegetable. We started out early in the morning. Followed my parents, I walked behind happily. Soon we arrived

92、 at a small river. Though it was not wide, we had no way of to cross it. Dad watched for a while or then he had an idea. Soon they three set up a simple bridge with some stones together. And then we crossed a river easily. Finally, we reached the top of the hill, when there were many wild plants fit

93、 eat. At dusk, we were so exhausted to walk further. Luckily, our neighbor drive by and picked us up.答案Today my parents and I decided to go to the field to pick some wild vegetablevegetables. We started out early in the morning. FollowedFollowing my parents, I walked behind happily. Soon we arrived

94、at a small river. Though it was not wide, we had no way of to cross it. Dad watched for a while orand then he had an idea. Soon theywe three set up a simple bridge with some stones together. And then we crossed athe river easily. Finally, we reached the top of the hill, whenwhere there were many wil

95、d plants fit toeat. At dusk, we were sotoo exhausted to walk further. Luckily, our neighbor drivedrove by and picked us up.解析考查名词的“数”。句意:今天我和我的父母决定去野外摘一些野菜。vegetable为可数名词,在本句中表泛指,需用复数形式,故将vegetable改为vegetables。考查非谓语动词作状语。句意:我跟在父母后面,高兴地走着。主语I与follow为逻辑上的主动关系,需用现在分词而非过去分词作状语,故将Followed改为Following。考查介词

96、。句意:虽然它并不宽,但是我们没有办法穿过它。本句中to cross it作way的定语,不必再加介词of,故删除of。考查并列连词。句意:爸爸看了一会儿,然后他有了一个主意。错误处前后两个分句不是选择关系而是递进关系,故将or改为and。考查代词。句意:不久,我们三个人用一些石头一起搭起了一座简易的桥。根据上下文可知错误处表示“我们”,在句中作主语,故将they改为we。考查冠词。错误处后的river特指上文提到的那条小河,需与定冠词连用,故将a改为the。考查定语从句。句意:最后,我们到达了山顶,那里有许多野生植物可以吃。先行词为the top of the hill,将先行词代入定语从句

97、后为:There were many wild plants on the top of the hill.由此可知先行词在定语从句中作地点状语,需用where而非when引导,故将when改为where。考查非谓语动词作状语。错误处需用不定式符号与eat构成不定式形式作状语,故在eat前加不定式符号to。考查副词。句意:黄昏时,我们太累了,再也走不动了。too.to.表示:太以至于不能。考查时态。错误处表示过去的行为,需用一般过去时,故将drive改为drove。Proofreading 15Yesterday was Monday. My friend Li Hua went to sch

98、ool without his homework finishing. He played online games all over the weekend. It was too late when he founded he had homework to do. To avoid punished, he told his teacher that a dog eats his homework. Obviously, it was just an excuse he made to cover the fact which he hadnt done his homework. Th

99、e teacher certainly knew about that and made them stay after school. Sometimes we think we can avoid trouble by making excuse when we do something wrongly. However, we are really making problems worse instead of.答案Yesterday was Monday. My friend Li Hua went to school without his homework finishingfi

100、nished. He played online games all overthrough the weekend. It was too late when he foundedfound he had homework to do. To avoid being punished, he told his teacher that a dog eatsate his homework. Obviously, it was just an excuse he made to cover the fact whichthat he hadnt done his homework. The t

101、eacher certainly knew about that and made themhim stay after school. Sometimes we think we can avoid trouble by making excuseexcuses when we do something wronglywrong. However, we are really making problems worse instead of .解析考查非谓语动词作宾补。句意:我的朋友李华没有完成作业就去上学了。宾语homework与finish之间为逻辑上的被动关系且错误处表示“完成”,需用

102、过去分词而非现在分词作宾补,故将finishing改为finished。考查介词。句意:他整个周末都在玩网络游戏。all through the weekend=throughout the weekend,意为:整个周末。考查谓语动词。句意:当他发现有作业要做时已经太晚了。find(找到,发现)的过去式为found,found(建立)的过去式是founded。错误处表示“发现”而非“建立”,故将founded改为found。考查非谓语动词作宾语。句意:为了避免被惩罚,他告诉老师他的作业被狗吃掉了。avoid后需接动名词作宾语,且he与punish为逻辑上的被动关系,故avoid后需用动名词的

103、被动形式(being+过去分词)。由此可知需在punished前加being。考查时态。根据上下文可知错误处应该用一般过去时,故将eats改为ate。考查同位语从句。句意:显然,这只是他为了掩盖没做作业的事实而找的借口。“he hadnt done his homework”为同位语从句,解释fact的内容,该从句中不缺任何成分,需用that而非which引导。故将which改为that。考查代词。句意:老师当然知道是怎么回事,让他放学后留下来。错误处代替上文中的Li Hua(单数第三人称概念),故将them改为him。考查名词。句意:有时当我们做错事的时候,我们总认为我们可以通过找借口来避免

104、麻烦。本句中名词excuse表示泛指,需用复数形式,故将excuse改为excuses。考查形容词。错误处作不定代词something的定语,意为“错误的”,需用形容词而非副词,故将wrongly改为wrong。考查副词。句意:但是我们反而使问题变得更糟。副词instead放在句尾,意为:代替,反而。instead of后需加名词、代词或动名词,意为:作为的替换。本句中instead of后没有名词、代词或动名词,故将of删除。Proofreading 16Our class joined in a meaningful activity during the winter vacation.

105、 First, we went to visit the old lady who lived all alone. Some chatted with her but others helped do a thorough cleaning for us. When the work was done, the house looked real neat and tidy. Then we went to the sport center, where all equipment needed polished. We set out to work at once. Everything

106、 was dust-free at no time. Having done all this, we saw a pleasant community than before. Tiring as we were, we felt happy as all of our work was paid off.答案Our class joined in a meaningful activity during the winter vacation. First, we went to visit thean old lady who lived all alone. Some chatted

107、with her butand/while others helped do a thorough cleaning for usher. When the work was done, the house looked realreally neat and tidy. Then we went to the sportsports center, where all equipment needed polishedpolishing. We set out to work at once. Everything was dust-free atin no time. Having don

108、e all this, we saw a more pleasant community than before. TiringTired as we were, we felt happy as all of our work was paid off.解析考查冠词。句意:首先,我们去看望了一位独自生活的老太太。由于文章第一次提及这位老人,lady为可数名词,故用不定冠词表示泛指,old以元音音素开头,故把the改为an。考查连词。分析句子可知,大家都在忙,一些人在和老太太聊天,另外一些人做清洁,故把but改为and或者while。考查代词。根据文章可知,同学们去帮助老太太,为老太太打扫房间

109、,故把us改为her。考查副词。句意:打扫完了之后,房子看起来确实干净、整洁。此处修饰形容词,用副词,故把real改为really。考查名词。句意:之后我们去了体育中心,那里的设备都需要擦拭了。sport为名词“运动”,修饰另一个名词时,常用复数形式。考查非谓语动词。need需要,某物作主语时,后面接doing或to be done,意为“某物需要”,故改过去分词polished为polishing。考查介词。句意:顷刻间,所有的东西都变得一尘不染。at no time 从不;in no time立刻;马上。考查形容词比较级。句意:做完这一切之后,我们看到了一个比以前更舒适的社区。根据than

110、 before可知,本句用比较级形式,pleasant为多音节词,故在pleasant前加more。考查形容词。句意:尽管我们很累,但是我们都很高兴,因为我们做的事情都取得了回报。第一个as引导让步状语从句,前面描述我们的感受,故把Tiring改为Tired。考查动词语态。pay off 取得成功,为不及物动词短语,没有被动语态。Proofreading 17Early rising has many advantage. First, it helps us to keep health. We all need fresh air, and the air is freshest in t

111、he morning. Beside, we can improve our health by exercise regularly in the morning. Second, it can also benefits our study because in the morning we can learn more quickly. Third, it can make us to plan our work for the day. Only without a proper plan can we work well. Early rising can allow us enou

112、gh time to get ready for your work. So we say that those who always gets up late should make an effort to get up early.答案Early rising has many advantageadvantages. First, it helps us to keep healthhealthy. We all need fresh air, and the air is the freshest in the morning. BesideBesides, we can impro

113、ve our health by exerciseexercising regularly in the morning. Second, it can also benefitsbenefit our study because in the morning we can learn more quickly. Third, it can make us to plan our work for the day. Only withoutwith a proper plan can we work well. Early rising can allow us enough time to

114、get ready for yourour work. So we say that those who always getsget up late should make an effort to get up early.解析考查名词。根据many可知后面用名词复数,表示“许多优势”,故把advantage改成advantages。考查形容词。keep healthy保持健康,keep为系动词,用形容词作表语,故把health改成healthy。考查冠词。形容词最高级前面加定冠词the,故在freshest前面加the。考查副词。句意:此外,我们可以通过经常在早上锻炼来改善我们的健康。b

115、eside 在旁边,为介词;besides此外,为副词。考查非谓语动词。介词by后用动名词作宾语,表示方式,故把exercise改成exercising。考查情态动词。情态动词后面跟动词原形,can为情态动词,故把benefits改成benefit。考查非谓语动词。make sb. do sth.使某人做某事,故把plan前的to去掉。考查介词。句意:只有有了适当的计划,我们才能把工作做好。根据句意可知此处表示肯定的意思,故把without改成with。考查形容词性物主代词。句意:早起可以让我们有足够的时间为工作做好准备。根据us可知,用形容词性物主代词our与其保持一致。考查主谓一致。句意:

116、所以我们说,那些总是起床晚的人应该努力早起。此处those作先行词,为复数形式,关系代词指代those,在后面的定语从句中作主语,故从句的谓语动词用原形。Proofreading 18With time go by, Chris is now a senior three student that devotes himself in his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as a usual, he attended several classes. In the evening, he studied at home until deep into t

117、he night. He was too sleepy and tired on Sunday that he couldnt work effective. His father came up and advises him to have a break. Soon they came up with a good ideas. They bought a kite which they liked very much and then the family went to the suburbs Chris enjoyed himself fly the kite. The famil

118、y had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Chris was energetic and active in class.答案With time gogoing by, Chris is now a senior three student that devotes himself into his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as a usual, he attended several classes. In the evening, he st

119、udied at home until deep into the night. He was tooso sleepy and tired on Sunday that he couldnt work effectiveeffectively. His father came up and advisesadvised him to have a break. Soon they came up with a good ideasidea. They bought a kite which they liked very much and then the family went to th

120、e suburbs where Chris enjoyed himself flyflying the kite. The family had a picnic together butand felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Chris was energetic and active in class. 解析在with的复合结构中,宾语time与go by “(时间等)流逝”为逻辑上的主动关系,故将go改为going。devote oneself to为固定结构,意为“致力于”,故将in改为to。as usual为固定短语,意为“

121、像往常一样”,故删除a。根据that从句可知此句使用so.that.句型,意为“星期天他太困太累,不能有效地学习”,故将too改为so。修饰动词work用副词,故将effective改为effectively。and连接了两个并列的谓语动词,根据上文及本句中的came可知此处需用一般过去时态,故将advises改为advised。句意:很快他们就想出了一个好主意。根据冠词a并结合语境可知idea用单数形式。suburbs后为定语从句,先行词为the suburbs(郊区),关系词在定语从句中作地点状语,故用关系副词where引导从句。在定语从句中,谓语动词为enjoyed。主语Chris与fly为主动关系,故用现在分词作伴随状语。句意:全家在一起野餐,在户外都感到非常放松。根据语境可知此处不存在转折关系,而为顺承关系,故用连词and。