2023届高三第一次质量监测 英语参考答案及评分标准新.pdf

1、2023 届高三期初质量监测英语参考答案参考答案：1-5 BCCBA6-10 CAACA11-15 CBCBA16-20 BAABC21-25 DABAC26-30 BDABD31-35 CCDBC36-40 GBAFD41-45 BDBAC46-50 DCBAD51-55 BCAAD56.is aimed57.assuming58.to go59.held60.Accompanied61.motivational62.that/which63.gently64.about/against65.a应用文Labor is the most gloriousTo stimulate the stu

2、dents enthusiasm for labour,our class held a class meeting with thethemeLabor is the most glorious last Wednesday afternoon.The class meeting,consisting of three parts,began with a touching video about a studentbeing a volunteer in his community.After that,we talked about the topic freely in groups.

3、Finally,some students shared their stories of doing housework at home.Through the class meeting,not only do I better understand the value of labour,but we try tobuild a beautiful society with our hands.读后续写With hope,I started to train myself.For the first few days,I nearly gave up.Pushing mywheelcha

4、ir made me feel great pain in my back and shoulders,but my love for Marshall kept megoing.Instead of listening to my body,I focused on the voice in my heart.When I was training,Ithought to myself.“One more lap.You can do this.Dont stop.Marshall needs you.”After weeksof daily training,I could finish

5、all fifteen miles.The big day finally came and I went out at 6:30 a.m.The first few laps were long and lonely.Slowly the donors and neighbors came to watch.Some even cheered as I passed them.With everymile,more people came and donated money.There was hope after all.Donations from theneighbors contin

6、ued.Many hours passed,and I finished all fifteen miles.I succeeded in raisingenough money for Marshalls operation.I could never have made it without these kind peoplessupport.写作评分说明语法填空：完全按照参考答案给分；第一节：应用文写作（满分 15 分）一、评分原则1.本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于60

7、或多于100的，酌情扣分。4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(13-15 分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全达到了预期的写作目的。1.覆盖所有内容要点。2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。3.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第四档(10-1

8、2 分)完成了试题规定的任务。达到了预期的写作目的。1.虽漏掉一、二个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。2.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。3.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。4.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。第三档(7-9 分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。1.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。2.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。3.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。4.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。第二档(4-6 分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。信息未能清楚地传达给读

9、者。1.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。2.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。3.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。4.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。第一档(1-3 分)未完成试题规定的任务。信息未能传达给读者。1.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。2.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。3.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。4.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。不得分：（0 分）未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。第二节 读后续写（满分 25 分）一、评分说

10、明1.评分原则：本题总分为 25 分，按 5 个档次给分。给分公平、公正；宽严并济，不能过严或过松；得分有理，扣分有据。2.评分标准：立意积极、情节合理、语言水平、书写美观。三个逻辑一致原则：续写部分与所给短文之间的逻辑；续写两段内容之间的逻辑；续写部分与所给开头语之间的逻辑。3.评分程序:阅读第 1 遍：根据续写总体情节及重点内容描写，初步确定所属档次。阅读第 2 遍：根据写作语言（修辞、句式、词汇等），确定或调整档次。阅读第 3 遍：看词数（少于 130 个，从总分中扣 2 分）；看书写（书写及卷面较差的建议降为三档或三档以下）。二、各档次的给分范围和要求档次描述第五档（2125）1.与所

11、给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。2.内容丰富。3.所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有少数错误，但完全不影响意义表达。4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。第四档（1620）1.与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。2.内容比较丰富。3.所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。4.比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写的短文结构紧凑。第三档（1115）1.与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。2.写出了若干有关内容。3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义表

12、达。4.应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。第二档（610）1.与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。2.写出了一些有关内容。3.语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。4.较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。第一档（15）1.与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差。2.产出内容较少。3.语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达。4.缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。0白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。录音原文：Text 1M:Should we bring a s

13、alad or some meat to the barbecue tonight?I dont want to arriveempty-handed.W:I talked to my mother,and she said they will take care of everything.We just have to pick upsome drinks.(1)Text 2W:May I help you,sir?M:Yes,I seem to have lost my room key.W:In that case,you need to go to the front desk to

14、 get another one.(2)Text 3M:I cant find my pen.I need it to write a letter.W:Oh,just look for it later.Right now,I need you to help me fix this bookshelf before I paintit.(3)Text 4W:Excuse me?Do you have any extra mustard at your table?We dont have any.M:Sorry,my friend just used the last of it.You

15、should ask the waitress for some the nexttime she comes by.(4)Text 5W:I want to make hats and sell them online.What do you think?M:You should make something else,too like scarves.W:Good idea.Ill have this whole summer to make them,(5)and I can sell them through thewinter.Text 6W:Do you have a driver

16、s license,Roy?M:Yes,but I am not a good driver yet.I dont like driving,especially during rush hour.(6)W:I can give you a lift for a few days until you improve.(6)M:Thank you.We can share the cost of gas.W:You are so considerate.Ill think about it.Gas prices are rising every day.M:Thats true.And our

17、quality of life is going down.W:When and where should we meet before and after work?M:Lets meet at the gate of Central Park at 7:30 in the morning,and again at 5:40 in theevening in the parking lot of my company.(7)W:Is your company near Renmin University?M:Yes.Here is the address of my company.Text

18、 7M:Thanks for coming on our show,Dr.Lee.Dr.Lee is here to tell us about“mans bestfriend”dogs.W:Thanks for having me.Dogs are wonderful animals.(8)Theres a reason why theyre called“mans best friend”theyre very loyal.This is because they used to live in packs in the wild.They feel strong commitment t

19、o anyone in their“pack”or family.Thats why theyll learn toobey commands from the“top dog”or leader in their home.Theyre very smart animals.(8)M:That makes sense.Now I have a question for you Are dogs really colorblind?Ive heardpeople say that,but I dont know if its true.W:A lot of people ask me that

20、.No,dogs arent completely colorblind.They dont see only black,white,and gray.They mostly see shades of yellow,blue,and purple.(9)M:Interesting!Thanks for clearing up that mystery.Text 8M:Mom,the new neighbors have just arrived.Look,the moving truck is backing up theirdriveway.Sarah and I should go t

21、o say hello.I think they have children our age.W:They do.I met the Jones when they first came to look at the house one month ago.M:Do you know the kids names?W:The girls name is Lisa and the boys name is Peter.There are four people in their family.M:What are we waiting for?Lets go!W:Not so fast!They

22、re probably very tired from their trip.Give them time to relax a little and getorganized.M:But we could help them carry their things in.(10)W:Thats very kind of you.(10)All right,but be careful not to get in the way,OK?And to startwith,we can bring them something cool to drink.(11)They must be thirs

23、ty after their trip.M:Thats a fine idea.We should do all we can to make them feel welcome.W:Everyone was very kind when we moved here two years ago.(12)Its good to feel welcomein a new neighborhood.Text 9W:So Ron,the teacher has asked us to write down what we would do if we won a million dollars.M:W

24、hat did our other partners say?W:Spencer said he would spend it on the people he cared about.(13)(14)He would buy hisparents a house and pay for his sisters university education.M:I could have guessed hed say that.I already know what I would do,too.I would buy a car,aboat and a house.What would you

25、do,Alicia?(13)W:I would put half of it in the bank,donate a quarter to charity,and use the other quarter forschool and an apartment.Our other partner was away,so were still waiting on heranswers.(13)M:OK.Then what?W:Second,we need to write what we would do if we only had a hundred dollars.Then we ha

26、ve towrite about the differences between our two answers.M:When do we have to hand it in?W:We can take the next two days to think about our answers.But when we come back onMonday,we have one final task:we have to pretend our group is a family and answer thequestions again.(15)(16)Well be presenting

27、everything to the class the next day.(16)M:Interesting.I guess I should change my answers,then!Text 10(第 17 题为总结题)These days,most people in Britain and the U.S.do not wear formal clothes.(20)Butsometimes it is important to wear the right thing.Many British people dont think aboutclothes very much.Wh

28、en they go out to have fun,they can wear almost anything.(18)Attheaters,cinemas,and concerts you can put on anything you like:from beautiful suits anddresses to jeans and sweaters.Anything goes,as long as you look clean and tidy.But inBritain,as well as in the U.S.,men in offices usually wear suits

29、and ties,and women weardresses or skirts.Doctors and business people always wear formal clothes.(19)And insome hotels and restaurants,men have to wear ties and women have to wear tidy dresses.In many ways,Americans are less formal than British people,but they are more carefulwith their clothes.At ho

30、me or on holiday,most Americans wear informal sports clothes.Butwhen they go out in the evening,they like to look nice.In good hotels and restaurants,menhave to wear jackets and ties,and women have to wear pretty clothes.It is difficult to say exactly what people wear in Britain and the U.S.,because everyone isdifferent.If you are not sure what to wear,watch what other people do and then do the same.Youll feel fine if you dont look too different from everyone else.公众号：一枚试卷君