Module 2 What can you do-2021-2022学年七年级英语下学期模块话题满分写作（外研版）.docx

1、2021-2022七年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作 Module 2：What can you do?单元话题：爱好和能力范文1友谊是人生不可缺少的一部分，请以My Good Friend为题写篇短文来描述你的好朋友Dave，信息如下：职业：学生； 年龄：13岁；能力和喜好：喜欢音乐；会弹吉他撞长说英语，喜欢熊猫，因为它们有几分可爱，并且是中国的标志之一；日常生活：早上6:30起床；花大约半个小时骑自行车上学；下午有时放学后打半个小时的篮球。瞧，他正在跟他的语文老师交谈。要求:1、要点齐全，并适当发挥；2、文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；3、语言流畅、通顺、逻辑合理；卷面整洁、书写美观可适当加2

2、-3分；4、词数: 70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。My Good friendI have a good friend. His name is Dave._ _This is my good friend. We are good friends.【答案】One possible versionMy Good friendI have a good friend. His name is Dave. He is 13 years old. He likes music and he can play the guitar! Dave is good at speaking En

3、glish. He likes pandas because they are kind of cute and they are one of the symbols of China. Dave gets up at 6: 30 in the morning and it takes him around half an hour to go to school by bike. In the afternoon, he sometimes plays basketball for half an hour after school. Look, he is talking with hi

4、s Chinese teacher.This is my good friend. We are good friends.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己的朋友Dave的情况，包括外貌、爱好以及日常生活等，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。范文2今天班会上你想竞选你们班的文艺委员(art monitor)。请你写一篇70词左右的短文介绍一下自己。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示：擅长唱歌、跳舞，

5、会弹钢琴，喜欢运动，会打乒乓球，加入了乒乓球俱乐部；善良、乐于助人；承诺会成为大家的好朋友；能使班级变得更好。 Hello, everybody. Id like to be the art monitor. _ Thanks a lot.【答案】例文：Hello, everybody. Id like to be the art monitor. I can play the piano. Im good at singing and dancing. I like sports. I can play table tennis and Im in the Table Tennis Club

6、. Im kind and Im always ready to help others. So I get on well with others. Please choose me as the art monitor and I promise I can be your best friend and I can make our class better.Thanks a lot.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇有关人物介绍的英语短文，开头和结尾已给出。要求根据汉语内容提示来介绍一下自己，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍自己；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍自己时，

7、应突出自己的优势和性格特征，描述优势时，应尽量贴近文艺委员的职位要求；短文需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。范文3假设你想参加你班班委的竞选，请用英文写一篇介绍你自己的文章。注意：条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写规范。 【答案】例文Hello, everyone! I d like to be the class monitor. I get on well with everyone and our teachers. I am very kind and always ready to help others. I can play basketball well. I like s

8、inging and I can play the violin very well. I like English. Because I think I can learn a lot from it. I think I can do well at school. Choose me as your class monitor and I promise to help you. Our class will be the best class.【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍自己，为自己的竞选拉票。主要用到第一人称和一般现在时。用简单的语言表达出自己的优点和长处，更好地展示自己，让

9、同学们更好地认识自己。语言的表述符合语法结构，造句符合英语表达习惯，可以使用大量的固定句式和短语，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】这篇短文不仅介绍自己时注意避免句式重复，而且使用了大量的的短语，说明英语功底扎实。比如Id like to、get on well with、be ready to、promise to do等，使文章的表达更丰富。【高分案例一】I am very kind and always ready to help others. （我很善良，总是乐于助人。）and并列两个简单句，使得句子更加易懂并且意思更加明了。【高分案例二】Choose me a

10、s your class monitor and I promise to help you. （选我做你的班长，我保证帮助你。）祈使句开头，句意明确，摆脱了普通的主谓宾结构，使句子更加有新意，给整个文章提升文笔。范文4今天的英语作业是作自我介绍。假如你是王梅，请根据下面表格中的提示内容，写一篇英语短文介绍自己。70词左右，可适当发挥。姓名：王梅年龄：13岁爱好：唱歌、跳舞、弹钢琴、打乒乓球性格：乐于助人，与同学相处融洽愿望：当班长_【答案】Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Mei. Im 13 years old. I can sing, dance and

11、play the piano. Now Im in our school Music Club. And I am also good at playing table tennis, a popular sport inChina. I am kind and always ready to help others. I get on well with my classmates. So Id like to be the class monitor some day. Im sure I can.【详解】该篇文章属于材料形文章，时态应该以一般现在时为主，人称为第一人称。首先这是介绍自己，

12、所以要明确要写的几个方面，材料中已给出。介绍名字的句型：ones name is；介绍年龄：Sb + be + 基数词+years old；表达会.：Sb can +v.原形；擅长于做某事：be good at doing sth.；对某人友好：be kind to sb；准备好做某事：be ready to do sth；与某人相处得好：get on well with sb.范文5假如你是Tony,学校正在评选优秀学生干部（Excellent Student Cadre），请你根据下面表格中的信息，写一封推荐信给你们的班主任王老师。姓名约翰（John）学习情况在7年级1班是最好的学生；擅长

13、所有的科目个人品质友好；热于助人特长及爱好钢琴弹得好；爱读书；爱唱歌；喜欢体育运动要求：1.推荐信必须包含表格中所给信息，并适当发挥。2.语法正确，行文连贯，书写规范。3.字数60左右。推荐信的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr Wang,I would like to recommend John for Excellent Student Cadre.9 _Yours Tony【答案】Dear Mr WangI would like to recommend John for this years Best Student Award. He is the best stude

14、nt in Class 1, Grade 7. He is good at all his subjects and likes reading, singing and doing sports. He can also play the piano well. He is friendly and often helps the other students with their lessons. If John can win the award, we will be happy. YoursTony【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如would like t

15、o，in Class 1, Grade 7；like doing，play the piano，help sb. with sth.，win the award等。而并列句He is good at all his subjects and likes reading, singing and doing sports./ He is good at all his subjects and likes reading, singing and doing sports.和条件状语从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可

16、以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。范文6假如你是李明，想竞选班长，请你根据下面的提示要点写一份竞选发言稿。提示：1.学习努力、成绩优秀；2为人友善、乐于助人、有时帮助老师打扫办公室；3和同学及老师相处融洽。4要求：1.语句连贯，语法正确；2必须包含所有提示要点，可以适当发挥；360词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Hello,

17、everyone. Id like to be the class monitor this term. _【答案】Hello, everyone. Id like to be the class monitor this term.I work hard at school and do well in most subjects. I am kind and friendly and always ready to help others. I am good at English and often help others with their English after school.

18、Sometimes I help teachers do some cleaning in their office. I get on well with my classmates and teachers. Please choose me as the class monitor.【详解】试题分析：本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作亮点：这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者准确表达了每一个要点，没有遗漏任何的知识点。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如I am kind and friendly and alwa ys ready to help others. I am good at English and often help others with their English after school.等，运用了大量的固定短语，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理.考点：提纲作文。