专题06  写作-2023-2024学年六年级英语寒假专项提升（外研版三起）.docx

1、2023-2024学年六年级英语寒假专项提升（外研版三起）专题六 写作复习指引高分技巧一用介词短语替代从句例：原句：While they were playing tennis,she started an argument that lasted all morning.修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.原句：When you come to the second traffic light,turn right.修改后：At the second traffic light turn left

2、.高分技巧二删除诸如“who is”或”that is“之类的关系代词，变从句为短语例句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.注：把句中的”three parts“改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词”which is written in“。我们经常可以将关系代词如”that“去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。高分技巧三剔除你不

3、需要的单词例：Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词“joint”和 “telephone”，注意删去不必要的词。日常积累1）晨读“一年之计在于春，一日之计在于晨”。早上醒来啦，精神焕发，阳光鸟鸣，一切都显得那么富有诗意那么美好。这个时候我们不妨抒发一下对生活的热爱，对父母的感激，和对未来的期待。如何抒发呢?打开精彩美文朗读300篇大声朗读。如果感觉哪一段或者哪一句特别有共鸣，不妨背下来。2）看英文电影电视剧它们涉及到了生活的方方面

4、面。嘴边话看看人家是怎么说的。无论你喜欢的题材是青春成长系列，还是幽默风情的，又或是惊悚悬疑的，都能在电影中找到此类题材最常用的表达法。3）听听音乐Mp3随身带，下载几十首自己喜欢的英文歌。如果你喜欢唱歌并想在同学面前露一手，那么就多学几首英文歌曲吧。有些歌曲不仅旋律优美，歌词也很有诗意，记住了可以很自然的套用到作文中去呢。4）出去逛街关注身边的英文你完全可以上超市逛一圈，那些水果蔬菜，肉食品，日用品的英文名字你能脱口而出吗?街上的各种车子，你能说出它们的英文名字吗?注意观察生活，乐于思考，并自主把不知道的生词写到本子上，记到脑子里。5）读一本小说选择难度适宜的读物。一页中有3至4个生词的那种

5、。不要查字典，试试猜出它们的意思。快速阅读。这样可以培养语感。把其中好的句子划下来。一定要选自己喜欢的读物哦，要不然可能读着读着就没兴趣了。好的小说非常引人入胜，恐怕会让你茶饭不思呢。真题回顾一、（22-23上河南平顶山六年级统考期末）书面表达。寒假快到了，你有什么计划或安排？请以“My Holiday”为题写一篇小短文， 谈谈你的寒假计划和安排。温馨提示：1. 主题明确，条理清楚，语法正确。语句通顺。2. 标点正确，书写规范，占格准确。选择正确的人称和时态。不少于五句话。_二、（22-23上河南周口六年级统考期末）写作。用你学过的句型向大家介绍一下你最喜欢的动物，不少于5句话。_三、（22-

6、23上河南洛阳六年级统考期末）Think and write. 春节，又称中国新年，是中国人民最重要的传统节日，象征团结、兴旺。假如你是Daming，你会如何欢度春节？请根据下面图片信息，写一篇短文。要求：1. 条理清晰，语言准确，意思连贯，标点正确，书写规范。2. 不少于40词。可以参考下列图片。 _四、（22-23上新疆乌鲁木齐六年级统考期末）请以My pen friend为题写一篇短文。要求：(1) 语句通顺，条理清晰；(2) 不少于五句话。姓名：Daming年龄：13国家：China能力：讲英语，会用英语写故事，下象棋及玩电脑游戏. _五、（22-23上海南省直辖县级单位六年级统考期末

7、）书面表达。 根据表格内容，写一篇小短文介绍自己。要求：(1) 文中人名统一用 Li Hua；(2) 不少于 5 句话。NameLi HuaAge11Live inDongfang, Hainan, ChinaCan speakEnglishHobbyRead books, Fly kites, Go swimming_六、（22-23上山西临汾六年级统考期末）写作。请你根据下面提示内容写一篇短文，向大家介绍你的新笔友吧。要求：1. 语句通顺；2. 不少于6句话。提示：Linda，13岁，来自英国，爱好唱歌、跳舞，喜欢中国邮票，能用汉语写电子邮件。_七、（22-23上山西临汾六年级统考期末）丽

8、景公园对游客免费开放了。为了保证公园里的花草树木、游玩设施不被破坏，公园的工作人员打算制定一份“入园须知”，告诉人们一些进园游玩的相关规定。请你用英文帮工作人员拟写一份入园规定, 以方便外国游客阅读。八、（22-23上山东德州六年级统考期末）明天是星期六。Ann不去上学。她现在正和她的朋友Tina在电话上谈论明天将要做的事情。在上午Ann和Tina将要一起去超市买一些学习用具。在下午Ann想要在电脑上学习中国历史。但是Tina想要和她的爸爸下棋。Tina喜欢做晚饭。并且明天她将要为她的家人做晚饭。参考词汇：school things, study Chinese history, play c

9、hess, cook dinner 要求：1. 要包含所有提示内容，开头已给出。不少于五句话。 2. 条理清晰，意思明确、连贯，语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整、规范。Tomorrow is Saturday. Ann doesnt go to school. She is talking about tomorrows things with her friend Tina on the phone now. _九、（22-23上河南平顶山六年级统考期末）假如你是Lingling，你的笔友是Sally.请根据表格内容，写一写你和Sally的不同之处。要求：语句通顺，书写规范，不少于50词。Lin

10、glingSally1211ChinaAmericaChineseEnglishthe Spring FestivalChristmascollecting stampscollecting dollschopsticksa knife and fork_十、（21-22上福建三明六年级统考期末）寒假就要到了，Lily一家人打算去旅行，请你根据下列思维导图的提示，写一写他们的想法。开头已给出，注意大小写及标点符号，至少写6句。Winter Holiday PlanWho my father my mother my sister IWhere Hong Kong Kunming Guangzh

11、ou ShanghaiWhat go shopping there visit the Dianchi Lake see the animals visit the DisneylandMy name is Lily. The winter holiday is coming. My family are going to have a trip. My father wants to go to Hong Kong. He wants to go shopping there. _提升训练一、书面表达。请参考下面思维图提供的信息,描写一下自己最喜欢的节日，用“My Favourite Fes

12、tival”为题，不少于50个词。_二、书面表达。假如你叫John，通过互联网认识了一位美国笔友Jack。用不少于五句话的篇幅向你的笔友介绍一下自己，开头与结尾已写好。Dear Jack,_John三、小练笔。假如你是 Tim, 你新交了一位来自深圳的笔友 Lin Tao。请你根据提示, 向 Lin Tao介绍一下自己。提示: Name: TimAge: 12City: Dezhou, ShandongHobbies: playing football, collecting caps, reading, paintingLanguage: Chinese, English_四、书面表达。根据

13、下面的提示，介绍一下你的朋友Amy。要求：50个单词左右，语句通顺，书写认真，表达完整。Name: AmyAge: 12Nationality: EnglandLikes: playing football, swimming, climbing mountainsCan: speak English and Chinese. Cant: write in Chinese. plan: will visit Beijing with his mother._五、Read and write. Daming想参加校报Home for Pen Friends（笔友之家）专栏的征稿活动。他运用思维导

14、图列出了一些想法，请认真阅读思维导图和写作要求。帮他撰写一篇自我介绍：1. “基本信息”和“人际交往”为必写内容，“活动”和“节日文化”二选一：2. 语句通顺，书写规范。_六、书面表达。今年“淄博烧烤”火遍了大江南北。来自美国的游人 Mark 想去这座美丽的城市淄博打卡。请你作为小导游为他介绍一下淄博这座暖人的城市吧！要求：1. 条理清晰，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范；2. 请接着第一句话往下写；3. 不少于50词。参考词汇：in the middle of(在的中部)，4.7 million people；Zibo ceramic glass Museum (淄博陶瓷琉璃博物馆)，

15、Zibo Science and Technology Museum (淄博科技馆)，Zhongshu Pavilion (钟书阁)，Eight major innings (八大局)，Zibo barbecue (淄博烧烤)，purple rice cake (淄博紫米饼)，the ancient capital of Qi Kingdom (齐国故都)，hometown of football (足球发源地) Hello, Mark! Welcome to Zibo. _七、Read and write. Mike是一个热爱生活的小朋友，他想找一位笔友，请你根据Mike的信息替Mike 自

16、我介绍一下，要求：参考提示词，至少写出五句规范正确的句子，注意字母的大小写和标点符号。Name: MikeAge: 11City: LondonSkill(技能): speak EnglishHobbies: play football, sing songs, read, go swimming.My name is Mike. _八、你也很想有一个快乐的寒假吧！假如你是Lanlan，请给你的好友Lily写一封信，告诉她你和你的家人寒假里想要做些什么吧。要求：1. 注意书信的格式；2. 语句通顺，不少于5句话。_九、假如Mike是你的笔友，请根据所给信息写一篇短文来介绍他。要求：1. 文中须

17、包含提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 书写规范，语句通顺连贯；3. 词数50左右。Name: MikeAge: 12Appearance(长相): tall and thin, short brown hair, big eyesCity: London, UKLanguages(语言): English, ChineseHobbies: reading, painting, playing football_十、以Our daily life为题写写你一家的日常生活。参考词汇：always/often/sometimes/never, go swimming/read books/ play

18、 football/write stories, like/dont like, happy_参考答案：真题回顾一、范文：My HolidayThe winter holiday is coming. Ill go to Beijing with my parents. My grandparents live there. We are going there by plane. We will eat a lot of delicious food. We will visit many famous places. I will take many photos. I will buy

19、some gifts for my friends. 【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My Holiday”为题写一篇小短文。然后再阐述计划与安排。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：winter holiday暑假，Beijing北京，grandparents祖父母，by plane乘飞机，delicious美味的，take photos拍照，gift礼物参考句型：Ill ； We will 二、范文：My favourite animal is pandas. They are black and white. They love bambo

20、o. They eat for twelve hours a day. They are very cute. Most of people love them.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用学过的句型向大家介绍一下自己最喜欢的动物。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：favourite最喜欢，panda熊猫，bamboo竹子，twelve12，cute可爱的参考句型：My favourite animal is ； They are ；They ；三、范文：Im Daming. The Spring Festival is the most im

21、portant traditional festival for the Chinese people. Before the Spring Festival, I clean our house and go shopping with my parents. In the evening before the Spring Festival, the family get together and have a good dinner. We watch the Spring Festival Gala. I get lucky money from my parents. On the

22、first day of the Spring Festival, I wear new clothes and visit my friends.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍一下我是怎么过春节的。可以描述春节前的准备工作，饮食、衣着，春节时做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态，条理清晰，语言准确，意思连贯，标点正确，书写规范，不少于40词。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：traditional传统的，the Spring Festival春节，go shopping购物，have a good dinner吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，the Spring Festival Gala春节联欢晚会，

23、lucky money红包参考句型：Im.；The Spring Festival is.；I wear.；We .；四、范文：My pen friendI have a pen friend. He is Daming. He is 13 years old. He is friendly. He is from China. He can speak English. He can also write stories in English. He likes playing chess and playing computer games.【详解】1.题干解读：该题要求以My pen f

24、riend为题写一篇短文。句子时态为一般现在时，注意语句通顺，条理清晰，不少于5句话。2.参考词汇和参考句型：参考词汇：pen friend笔友，friendly友善的，write stories写故事，playing chess下棋，playing computer games玩电脑游戏参考句型：I have.；He is.；He can.；He likes.；五、范文：My name is Li Hua. I am eleven years old. I live in Dongfang, Hainan of China. I can speak English. I like readi

25、ng books, flying kites and going swimming.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求以第一人称向大家介绍自己的信息。包括姓名，年龄，居住城市，语言能力和爱好等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型参考词汇：Hainan海南；English英语；reading阅读；flying kites放风筝；swimming 游泳参考句型：My name is.； I live in.； I can speak.； I like.六、例文I have a new pen friend. She is Linda. She is thirteen ye

26、ars old. She comes from the UK. She likes singing and dancing. And she likes Chinese stamps. She can write emails in Chinese. She always sends emails to me.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目是根据所给提示写一篇短文介绍你的新笔友，从个人信息、爱好及会用汉语写电子邮件几方面去写，时态是一般现在时。要求：语句通顺；不少于6句话。2. 参考词汇及参考句型：参考词汇：pen friend笔友，thirteen years old十三岁，the UK英国

27、，sing唱歌，dance跳舞，Chinese stamps中国邮票，in Chinese用汉语，write emails写邮件参考句型：She is；She likes；She can七、范文Welcome to the park. There are some rules in the park. Dont walk on the grass. Dont pick flowers. Dont feed animals too much food. You can take photos of flowers and trees.【详解】1. 题干分析：要求为丽景公园制作一份英文入园须知，要

28、写出在公园里哪些可以做，哪些不可以做。主要用一般现在时和祈使句。2. 参考词汇和参考句型：参考词汇：rules守则，on the grass在草地上，pick flowers摘花，take photos拍照。参考句型：Welcome to；There are；Dont walk；You can。八、范文：Tomorrow is Saturday. Ann doesnt go to school. She is talking about tomorrows things with her friend Tina on the phone now. In the morning, Ann and

29、 Tina will go to the supermarket to buy some school things together. In the afternoon, Ann is going to study Chinese history on the computer. But Tina wants to play chess with her father. Tina likes cooking dinner. And she will cook dinner for her family tomorrow.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求短文内容包含所有提示内容。可以按照上午

30、、下午、晚上三个时间段，分别阐述Ann和Tina所做的事情。条理清晰，意思明确、连贯，语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整、规范。注意文章用一般将来时态，句子数量符合要求。2. 参考词汇和句型：参考单词：school things学习用品，study Chinese history学习中国历史，play chess下棋，cook dinner做晚餐参考句型： In the morning.；In the afternoon.；Tina likes.；And she.；九、范文：My name is Lingling. I am 12 years old. I am from China. I like

31、 Chinese. I like the Spring Festival. My hobby is collecting stamps. I can use chopsticks. I have a pen friend. Her name is Sally. She is 11 years old. She is from America. She likes English. She likes Christmas. Her hobby is collecting dolls. She can use a knife and fork.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称和第三人称

32、介绍自己和玲玲的朋友。然后再阐述她俩的不同之处，包括年龄，爱好，来自哪里等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：China中国，America美国，the Spring Festival春节，Christmas圣诞节，chopsticks筷子，a knife and fork刀叉参考句型：My name is.；I am.；I like.；I can.；Her name is.；She is.；She likes.；She can.；十、参考答案：My mother wants to go to Kunming. She wants to visit t

33、he Dianchi Lake. My sister wants to go to Guangzhou. She wants to see the animals. I want to go to Shanghai. I want to visit the Disneyland.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据给出的思维导图写Lily一家人的寒假计划。具体写什么人，要去哪里，打算做什么。注意人称变化，做到主谓语一致。并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇和句型：参考单词：wants to想要，visit参观，go to Guangzhou去广州，see the animals看动物参考句型：M

34、y mother wants to go to .；She wants to；I want to.提升训练一、范文：My Favourite FestivalThere are many festivals in China. I like the Spring Festival best. It is usually in January or February. The weather is cold. My parents buy new clothes for me. On Chinese New Years Eve, I watch TV and eat dumplings with

35、 my family. On that day, we have a big family dinner. Kids can get lucky money. We are very happy.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求参考思维图提供的信息以“My Favourite Festival”为题描写自己最喜欢的节日，可以写春节，写一写春节的活动，自己的感受等。注意文章时态是一般现在时，并满足字数要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：the Spring Festival春节，weather天气，buy new clothes买新衣服，On Chinese New Years Eve在除夕

36、，watch TV看电视，eat dumplings吃饺子，have a big family dinner吃一顿丰盛的家庭晚餐，get lucky money得到压岁钱参考句型：There are； I likebest；It is；The weather is；My parents buy；On Chinese New Years Eve, I；On that day, we have；Kids can get；We are二、例文Dear Jack,My name is John. Im from China. Im eleven years old. I can speak Engli

37、sh and Chinese. I like playing football and swimming. And I can play the piano well. I have a pet dog. Its very cute. My favourite colour is blue. Can you be my pen friend?John【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目是假如你叫John，通过互联网认识了一位美国笔友Jack，向你的笔友介绍一下自己，如：具体信息、喜好、能力等。时态是一般现在时。开头与结尾已写好。要求：不少于五句话。2. 参考词汇及参考句型：参考词汇：English英

38、语，Chinese中文，play football踢足球，swimming游泳，play the piano弹钢琴，pet宠物，blue蓝色参考句型：I am；I like；I can；My favourite三、范文：My name is Tim. I am 12. I live in Dezhou, Shandong. I like playing football and collecting caps. I also like reading and painting. I can speak Chinese and English.【详解】该题目要求根据提示，向 Lin Tao介绍一

39、下自己。时态是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称。参考词汇和句型：参考词汇：Dezhou, Shandong山东德州,playing football踢足球，collecting caps收集帽子，reading阅读，painting画画，Chinese汉语，English英语参考句型：I am.；I like.；I can speak.；I live in.四、范文：I have a pen friend. Her name is Amy. She is 12 years old. She is from England. She is very pretty. She has got long

40、yellow hair. She likes playing football, swimming and climbing mountains. She often climbs mountains on the weekend. She can speak English and Chinese. But she cant write in Chinese. She will visit Beijing with his mother next year. Because she wants to visit the Great Wall and Tiananmen Square.【详解】

41、1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据提示介绍你的朋友Amy，包括基本信息，爱好、能力和计划等。注意文章时态是一般现在时和一般将来时，并满足词数要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：England英国，playing football踢足球，swimming游泳，climbing mountains爬山，speak English and Chinese说英语和汉语，visit Beijing参观北京参考句型：I have；Her name；She is；She is from；She has got；She likes；She often；She can；But she cant；She will五

42、、参考例文：Im Daming from China. I can speak Chinese. I like skating and playing basketball. Dragon Boat Festival is very important in China. During this festival, we can eat zong zi. I want a pen friend from the UK. We can write in English.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以Daming的名义写一篇自我介绍，根据思维导图可知要写基本信息、人际交往、活动及节日文化。其

43、中要求“基本信息”和“人际交往”为必写内容，“活动”和“节日文化”二选一。注意语句通顺，书写规范。2参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：speak Chinese说中文，skating滑冰，playing basketball打篮球，Dragon Boat Festival端午节，eat zong zi吃粽子参考句型：Im；I can；I like；Dragon Boat Festival is；During this festival, we can； I want；We can六、范文：Hello, Mark! Welcome to Zibo. It is in the middle of Shan

44、dong Province. There are 4.7 million people here. It is the ancient capital of Qi Kingdom and the hometown of football. There are many places of interest in Zibo, such as Zibo ceramic glass Museum, Zibo Science and Technology Museum, Zhongshu Pavilion, Eight major innings and so on. They are amazing

45、. You can come and visit these places and know more about the city and its culture. The Zibo barbecue is popular these days. You can come and have a try. Meanwhile the purple rice cake is delicious. I hope you will enjoy yourself here.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求你作为小导游向迈克介绍淄博这座城市，可以根据参考词汇内容介绍淄博的地理位置，名胜古迹，美食等，时态

46、用一般现在时，注意短文条理清晰，标点准确，字数要符合题干要求。2.参考词汇和句型：参考单词和短语：in the middle of在的中部，million百万，culture文化，Zibo ceramic glass Museum淄博陶瓷琉璃博物馆，Zibo Science and Technology Museum淄博科技馆，Zhongshu Pavilion钟书阁，Eight major innings八大局，Zibo barbecue淄博烧烤，purple rice cake淄博紫米饼，the ancient capital of Qi Kingdom齐国故都，hometown of f

47、ootball 足球发源地参考句型：There arepeople here; There areplaces of interest in Zibo; You can come and visit; I hopewill enjoy oneself七、范文：My name is Mike. I am eleven years old. I am from London. I can speak English. I like playing football, reading, swimming and singing songs.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以第一人称向大家介绍自己的

48、信息。包括姓名，年龄，居住城市，语言能力和爱好等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型参考词汇：London伦敦；English英语；reading阅读；playing football踢足球；swimming 游泳；singing songs唱歌参考句型： My name is.；I am from.； I can speak.； I like.八、范文：Dear Lily,The winter holiday is coming. Do you have some plans for the holiday? My parents and I are lookin

49、g at the map of England. We want to visit the famous places in London. Mother wants to see the Hyde Park because it is very beautiful. Father wants to see the Buckingham Palace. He says it is the Queens home so it is fantastic. But I want to see Big Ben and Tower Bridge. My teacher tells me they are

50、 very old and famous. I cant wait to see them. Tell me something about your holiday.Best wishes!Yours,Lanlan【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求假如自己是Lanlan，给Lily写一封信，告诉她你和你的家人寒假里想要做些什么。然后再阐述想去哪，想做的事情。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2. 参考词汇与句型：参考单词：winter holiday寒假，Hyde Park海德公园，Buckingham Palace白金汉宫，Big Ben大本钟，Tower Bridge塔桥参考句

51、型：Do you have some plans for ； We want to ；Mother/Father wants to ；He says it is ；But I want to .；My teacher tells me .；九、参考例文：I have a pen friend. His name is Mike. He is twelve years old. He is tall and thin. He has short brown hair and big eyes. Mike is from London, the UK. He can speak English a

52、nd Chinese. He likes reading, painting and playing football. Can you tell me something about your pen friend?【详解】1.题干分析：本文要求写一篇短文介绍你的笔友Mike。根据提示，需要从姓名，年龄，外貌特征，居住城市，语言能力和爱好几方面进行介绍。文中须包含提示的所有信息，文章为一般现在时态，单词数量要符合要求。2.参考词汇与句型参考词汇：pen friend笔友；tall and thin又高又瘦；short brown hair棕色短发；big eyes大眼睛；London伦敦；t

53、he UK英国；English英语；Chinese汉语；reading阅读；painting画画；playing football踢足球参考句型：His name is.；He is.and.；He has.；He is from.；He can speak.；He likes.十、例文Our daily lifeI always read books in the morning. I like reading. I often go swimming. Sometimes I play football with my friends. I always ride my bike to s

54、chool. I never go by bus. My mother often goes to the supermarket. She likes shopping very much. My father never plays football. He doesnt like it. He always writes stories. He likes writing. My sister loves English. She often reads English books. I have a happy family.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目是以Our daily life为题目，写一写你一家的日常生活，你及你的家人总是/经常/有时/从不做的事情，时态是一般现在时。要求：语句通顺，时态正确。2. 参考词汇及参考句型：参考词汇：always总是，often经常，sometimes有时，never从不，go swimming去游泳，read books读书，play football踢足球，write stories写故事，like喜欢，dont like不喜欢，happy幸福的参考句型：I always/often/sometimes/never；I like/ dont like；She / He likes / doesnt like