专题07 书面表达（名校模拟 地区真题)-冲刺2024年中考英语必考题型终极预测（杭州专用）.docx

1、冲刺2024年中考英语必考题型终极预测（浙江专用）专题07 书面表达（杭州专用）1（2023浙江杭州统考二模）美国朋友Sam发来的邮件，请阅读后以电子邮件的形式回复。要求：可适当添加内容让行文通顺、连贯。 字数不少于80词。 To: Li Ping From: Sam Subject: What should I do? Dear Li Ping, How is everything going with you? Im stressed out these days. My last exam results dropped once again and I really dont know

2、 how to improve my grades. Whats worse, my parents always compare me with others and expect too much from me. Its difficult to get on well with them. I am so upset. What should I do? Please give me some advice. Looking forward to your quick reply! Yours,Sam_2（2023浙江杭州统考二模）假定你是李华，最近收到外国好友Jordan的电子邮件。

3、请你阅读后回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Li Hua,How is everything going? I am planning a two-week holiday as my graduation trip in China! You cant imagine how excited I am! You know China is such a large country, and I really want to make full use of my holiday to see and experience something different. B

4、y the way, are you available in July? If possible, would you like to travel with me or suggest some great cities for me to go to?Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Jordan注意：文中不能出现真实的人名和校名等个人信息。Dear Jordan,_Li Hua3（2023浙江杭州校考二模）假定你是李华，最近收到外国好友Tracy的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复。词数80左右。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Hi, Li Hua,I need y

5、our help! The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022 is in September. Im coming to Hangzhou to pay a visit and watch some of the events for a week. I know there are some differences at the dinner table in China from the West. Could you show me one of them? Besides, what else am I supposed to pay attention t

6、o if Im invited to a friends home? Is there any way to make myself behave better?I really need your advice. Hope to hear from you soon.Yours,TracyHi Tracy,_Yours,Li Hua4（2023浙江杭州杭州市公益中学校考二模）假定你是李华，最近收到外国好友Mike的电子邮件，请你阅读后回复，词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使全文连贯。Dear Li Hua,How is everything? So excited that Im comi

7、ng to Hangzhou and living at your home! Thank you for hosting me! We havent seen each other for 6 years! Im wondering if you have changed a lot. Do you still love burgers and play computer games every day? Have you lost some weight? Also, since I dont know your family members well, can you introduce

8、 them to me?All the best,Mike_5（2023浙江杭州校考二模）假设你是李平，亚运会即将在你所在的城市举办。你在亚运组委会网站上看到一则邮件，请阅读后进行回复。 From: Asian Games Organizing Committee（亚运会组委会）Dear students, We are now in great need of help for the coming Asian Games. Would you like to be a volunteer to offer some help? Which job do you want to do and

9、 why? Also, many foreigners and athletes（运动员）are interested in Chinese culture, what can they do to learn more about it? How can they enjoy themselves during their stay? We welcome your reply and looking forward to you becoming part of our members!Best Wishes!Asian Games Organizing Committee要求：1. 回复

10、邮件必须包含邀请函中的要点问题，并可适当增加，使行文通顺、连贯； 2. 回复邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名； 3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。 To: Asian Games Organizing CommitteeSubject: Application for a volunteerDear Sir/Madam, _Yours, Li Ping6（2023浙江杭州统考二模）假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复，词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。To: LiPingSubject: Your hobbyDear Li Ping,How is everything? T

11、hank you for the stamps you sent me. I really like them. You know my hobby is collecting stamps and they have brought me a lot of fun. What do you like doing in your free time? When did you take up the hobby? How often do you do it? And what do you learn from it?Hope to hear from you soon!JackDear J

12、ack,_Li Ping7（2023浙江杭州校联考二模）假定你是李平，你的笔友Rose发来一封邮件，她计划九月份来杭州观看第19届亚运会。请根据Rose在电子邮件中的提问，给她写回信。词数80左右。TolipingFromroseHi, Li PingHow are you doing recently?Im really excited to tell you that I will go to your city Hangzhou for the Asian Games in September. I think it will be a good chance for me to lea

13、rn more about your city and your country. Im planning to learn Chinese. Can you give me some suggestions about how I can learn it well? And I know Hangzhou is famous for something like tea, umbrellas, scissors and so on. I want to buy some of them for my friends as gifts. Could you give me some sugg

14、estions about it? Hope I could get some good ideas from you. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours,RoseTo roseFromlipingDear Rose,Yours, Li Ping8（2023浙江杭州统考二模）假设你叫李华，请根据下面的邮件提示，给你在美国的堂哥李峰回复一封邮件。要求：1. 内容可根据所给的提示适当发挥；2. 80词左右（邮件称呼及落款已经给出，不计入总词数）。From: Li FengDear Li Hua,Hows everything going? You

15、r junior high school life is coming to an end. Soon you will be a senior high school student. What might your senior high school life be like? Do you have any plans for your study and life in senior high school?Looking forward to your early reply.Your cousin,Li FengDear Li Feng,_Yours,Li Hua9（2023浙江

16、杭州杭州市十三中教育集团（总校）校考二模）假定你是李华，最近收到了即将搬来杭州居住的新邻居Tracy的电子邮件，请根据邮件内容进行回复。To: Li HuaFrom: Tracy Hi, Li Hua!Im moving to Hangzhou next week and I really need your help. My little cousins birthday is coming soon and I want to buy him a present. He is a big fan of Chinese culture. What can I buy for him? And

17、 could you please tell me if there is a good place to buy something nice in Hangzhou? By the way, Im afraid I cant communicate with the local people well, so would you mind going there with me next Saturday? Waiting for your reply.Your new neighbor, Tracy注意：1词数80-120个词左右；2回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；3文

18、中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。To: Tracy From: Li Hua Hi Tracy!_Yours,Li Hua10（2023浙江杭州杭州春蕾中学校考二模）假定你是李华，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Hi there, Li Hua!How is everything going with you? Im so excited to go to Hangzhou to watch the Asian Games in September! And I really want to know more about the city. Could

19、 you please tell me something about Hangzhou? What do you think of Hangzhou? Is there anywhere interesting or anything delicious? By the way, what can I bring back as gifts when Im leaving?Looking forward to your reply. Yours,TonyDear Tony,_Li Hua参考答案：1例文：Dear Sam, Im sorry to hear about your proble

20、ms. First of all, one test doesnt mean anything. As long as we continue to study hard, Im sure your grades will improve. If you have any problems, be sure to ask your teachers and classmates for help in time. Secondly, you can find some time to have a good talk with your parents. And they will surel

21、y understand you. Finally, you should learn to relax yourself. You can relax yourself by listening to music, doing running, etc., and doing something you like. I hope you find these suggestions helpful. Looking forward to your good news. Yours, Li Ping【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：根据邮件中

22、的提到的问题给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。写作步骤第一步，引出话题；第二步，根据提到的问题具体给出相应的建议；第三步，表达希望。亮点词汇as long as只要in time及时listen to music听音乐高分句型If you have any problems, be sure to ask your teachers and classmates for help in time.(if引导条件状语从句)I hope you find these suggestions helpful.(宾语从句)2例文Dear Jordan,I am very happy to hear tha

23、t you are coming to China for a two-week trip. However, I am pretty sorry that I am not available to join you in July because I have to attend a swimming course. Therefore, I am recommending some great cities for you to visit during your stay in China.Firstly, as the capital city of China, Beijing i

24、s really worth visiting. There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Great Wall, Forbidden City, Tiananmen Square and so on. Secondly, Guangzhou is also a must-visit city for those who want to experience a variety of Chinese cultures. You can enjoy delicious Canton food while shopping

25、on Beijing Road and take a ship to travel along the Pearl River at night, watching the ancient and modern buildings alongside the river. In fact, there are numerous wonderful cities for you to explore in China. If it is possible for you, try to visit as more cities in China as you can and enjoy the

26、unique Chinese cultures during your trip.I hope you can have a wonderful trip in China.Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一封回信，属于电子邮件写作；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：文章的写作要点已在信件中给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，回复邮件中的问题，引出话题；第二步，简要介绍推荐给Jordan去游览的若干个中国城市，可列举具体的事例；第三步，祝愿Jordan在中国玩得愉快并书写结语。亮点词汇attend a swimming course上游泳课，

27、参加游泳课程recommend sth for sb向某人推荐某物be worth visiting值得一游a variety of各种各样的高分句型I am very happy to hear that you are coming to China for a two-week trip.（that引导的宾语从句）However, I am pretty sorry that I am not available to join you in July because I have to attend a swimming course.（that引导的宾语从句，because引导的原因

28、状语从句）Secondly, Guangzhou is also a must-visit city for those who want to experience a variety of Chinese cultures.（who引导的限制性定语从句）You can enjoy delicious Canton food while shopping on Beijing Road and take a ship to travel along the Pearl River at night, watching the ancient and modern buildings alon

29、gside the river.（现在分词作伴随状语）3例文Hi Tracy,Im glad to hear that you will come to Hangzhou to pay a visit. There are some differences at the dinner table in China. We cant eat until the elderly sit around the table. Its not polite to use the chopsticks to point at others. We cant stick our chopsticks int

30、o the bowl. If you are invited to a friends home, you had better arrive there on time. You can take some gifts, but avoid the number “4”. Chinese people are friendly and hospitable. So dont worry, and just make yourself feel at home.I think these suggestions are useful.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用

31、文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤第一步，表达自己听到对方要来杭州的喜悦之情；第二步，介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。亮点词汇not until直到才point at指着had better最好高分句型Im glad to hear that you will come to Hangzhou to pay a visit.（that引导宾语从句）There are some differences at the dinner table in China.（there be句型）4例文Dear Mike,Everyth

32、ing is well with me and you cant imagine how Ive missed you since I saw you last time.Because I stick to exercising every day, I am taller and stronger than before now. I also lose some weight because doctors say being too fat is not healthy. But I still love burgers and play computer games every da

33、y. There are three people in my family. They are my parents and me. My parents are teachers and they are very friendly. They are looking forward to seeing you.Looking forward to your early coming.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”提示：根据邮件中的内容进行回复，介绍自己现在的变化以及自己的家人，适当增加细节。写作步骤第一步，引出话题；

34、第二步，介绍自己的变化；第三步，介绍自己的家人；第四步，表达希望。亮点词汇stick to坚持look forward to期待高分句型Because I stick to exercising every day, I am taller and stronger than before now.(because引导的原因状语从句)I also lose some weight because doctors say being too fat is not healthy.(动名词作主语)5例文Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Ping. I would like

35、to work as a volunteer for the Asian Games in Hangzhou. Hope you can choose me! Im a girl of 16. As a middle student, I am interested in sports and can speak English fluently. So I suppose Im qualified to be a volunteer for the Games. Besides, I have a good communicative skill and Im considered to b

36、e an outgoing and helpful person at school. Whats more, Im familiar with the traffic transportation, the local food and so on. I can take athletes to visit museums and help them learn about Chinese culture. At the same time, I will take them to visit our local famous scenic spots. Im sure I can also

37、 offer the best service to the athletes in the Games in Hangzhou. If you are interested in me, please email me at liping2002. Yours,Li Ping【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。写作步骤第一步，表示你愿意成为一名亚运会的志愿者并说明原因；第二步，介绍自己能为外国人、运动员做的事情；第三步，介绍自己的联系方式。亮点词汇wou

38、ld like to do sth想做某事be interested in sth对某事感兴趣be qualified to do sth有资格做某事be considered to be被认为是be familiar with熟悉高分句型If you are interested in me, please email me at liping2002.（条件状语从句）6Dear Jack,Im very glad to hear you like the stamps I sent you. For me, my hobby is reading. I love reading in my

39、 spare time.When I was in primary school, I always felt bored on weekends. One day, my father took me to the library. That was my first experience with many books and soon I fell in love with them. Since then, books have been my good friends forever. I spend my most time reading in the library. I ha

40、ve learned a lot from books. I also get many great ideas from books which help me solve many problems I faced in life.Now I read every day. Reading is really helpful and it makes me better.Li Ping【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； 提示：题干中没有给出明确的写作要点，考生要根据邮件的内容，谈谈自己的爱好，具体包括爱好是什么、如何培养起来

41、的以及从中学到了什么。写作步骤第一步，对对方喜欢自己送的邮票表示高兴，并介绍自己的爱好是什么；第二步，介绍自己是什么时候以及如何培养的这个爱好；第三步，介绍自己从中学到了什么；第四步，介绍自己做这个爱好的频率，并总结全文。亮点词汇 fall in love with 爱上 since then 自从那时起 spend time doing sth. 花时间做某事高分句型 Im very glad to hear you like the stamps I sent you.（省略that的定语从句） When I was in primary school, I always felt bor

42、ed on weekends.（when引导的时间状语从句） I also get many great ideas from books which help me solve many problems I faced in life.（which引导的定语从句）7One possible version:Dear Rose,I am doing great! How are you?Im glad to receive your email. You asked me how to learn Chinese well. Heres some advice for you. I thin

43、k its important to take Chinese classes. Youll find it helpful.Whats more, you could improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies. It is also a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs. Youll learn more Chinese words by doing that. If possible, you can even make some Chinese friends. They will b

44、e pleased to help you and its a good chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new. As for gifts, I suggest you buy tea. It is a symbol of Chinese civilization. Your friends will love it.Im looking forw

45、ard to your coming! Wish you all the best.Yours, Li Ping【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己将提供一些建议；第二步，具体阐述这些建议；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。亮点词汇be glad to高兴做某事Whats more另外a symbol of的象征高分句型its a good chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture

46、.(it固定句型)Learning is a lifelong journey.(动名词作主语)8例文Dear Li Feng, How time flies! Ill start my senior high school life soon. Its exciting to guess what my senior high school life might be like. My senior high school life will be busy. However, just because of this, it will make me have a sense of ach

47、ievement. Ill also make more new friends in senior high school and they will make my senior high school life colorful. Ill learn more things that are useful, too. Whats more, I will work harder to enter the key university. All in all, the senior high school life wont be so easy for me, but Im ready

48、now. I wish you all the best in America. Your cousin,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般将来时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。写作步骤第一步，以“我将很快开始我的高中生活”为开头，引出本文主题；第二步，介绍自己的学习计划以及高中的生活。亮点词汇because of因为a sense of achievement成就感make friends交朋友whats more并且高分句型Ill learn more things that are useful, t

49、oo.（that引导定语从句）Whats more, I will work harder to enter the key university.（动词不定式作目的状语）9例文To: TracyFrom: Li HuaHi Tracy!Its a great honor to give you some advice.I think a Chinese knot is a good birthday gift for your little cousin. It is red and pretty. As you know, red is a symbol of good luck in C

50、hina. I believe your cousin will like it very much. Whats more, it is made of cotton, so it doesnt cost much. You can buy it directly from the shops on Hefang Street near the West Lake which have the most kinds of Chinese knots. So you can choose one you like. By the way, you can pay it by Alipay or

51、 Wechat. Online payment is popular in Hangzhou.I can also go there with you. It will be an excellent shopping experience for us.Yours,Li Hua【详解】总体分析 题材：本文是一封电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己很荣幸为对方提供一些建议；第二步，具体阐述这些建议；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。亮点词汇a symbol of的象征Whats more另

52、外be made of由制成By the way顺便说一下高分句型You can buy it directly from the shops on Hefang Street near the West Lake which have the most kinds of Chinese knots. (which引导定语从句)It will be an excellent shopping experience for us. (一般将来时will do结构)10例文Dear Tony,Thanks for your mail. How are you? Im glad to hear th

53、at you will come to my hometown. Id like to introduce my hometown to you. My hometown is a beautiful city. My hometown is in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province. It is located in the southeast of China. Youd better take a camera so that you can take some photos. Hangzhou is very beautiful. West Lake is the

54、most famous place. It attracts many visitors every year. When you come, Ill show you around it. And I will take you to taste the specials in Hangzhou, such as West Lake Fish, Dongpo Pork and so on. Hangzhou is famous for silk. You can buy it for your parents when you go back home. The people here ar

55、e also very friendly. If you encounter any difficulties, they will certainly help you in time. I think you will have a good time here. Im looking forward to your coming. Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；提示：要求阅读邮件并回复。学生可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。写作步骤第一步，介绍家乡的地理位置；第二步，介绍家乡出名的景点；第三步，介绍家乡的特色菜及可购买的礼物。亮点词汇would like to do sth想要做某事such as例如have a good time玩得开心look forward to盼望高分句型When you come, Ill show you around it.（时间状语从句）If you encounter any difficulties, they will certainly help you in time. （条件状语从句）I think you will have a good time here.（宾语从句）