专题16 书面表达技巧-2023年江苏中考英语一轮复习（牛津译林版) .docx

1、专题16 书面表达技巧中考英语作文构思技巧（一）审：审就是仔细审题。看清要求，确定体裁、人称、时态等。（二）列：列就是抓要点。根据要点列出英文短语形式提纲，避免遗漏。（三）扩：扩就是扩展成句。将所列提纲形成“主+谓+宾。”和“主+系+表。”基本句子结构，注意定语和状语修饰成分位置的使用以及避免中国式英语出现。（四）连：连就是连句成篇。使用适当的连词和过渡语将表达要点的句子连接成文。（五）改：改主要从以下几个方面进行自我修改：1.内容是否完整。 2.时态是否正确。 3.拼写和标点是否正确。4.主谓是否一致。 5.格式和字数是否符合要求。 6.层次是否清楚。中考英语书面表达的写作技巧1.表文章结构

2、顺序：Firstofall=atfirstSecond=Andthen/nextFinally=Intheend=Atlast2.表并列补充关系的：First of allWhatismore, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, Above all, 3.表转折对比关系的：However/butAlthough (从句) + 主句OntheonehandOntheotherhand4.表因果关系的：Because + 句子So + 句子/Asaresult, + 句子5.表目的关系：主句 + in order that / so that + 目的状语从句6.表条

3、件关系：主句 + if / unless / as long as + 条件状语从句7.表换一种方式表达：Inotherwords, +句子That means + 句子This is to say+ 句子8.表进行举例说明：Forexample，句子;suchas+n/doing9.表陈述事实：Infact10.表达自己观点：AsfarasIknow / Inmyopinion，+句子11.表总结：Inshort，Inaword，General speaking, + 句子中考英语作文常见错误分析1.审题不清：依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被严重

4、减分。2.拼写错误：拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。3.名词单复数问题：名词单复数会造成主谓不一致错误，名词前面缺少限定词造成泛指现象。4.缺少动词：在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成。5.中国式英语的排列：按照汉语表述顺寻罗列单词组句。6.代词的误用：英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉

5、语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中要体现人与物的关系必须用物主代词。7.句子不完整：因为对句子结构认识模糊，出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。尤其体现在（及物动词 / 不及物动词运用）8.时态、人称和数的搭配错误：汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。9.综合性错误：综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点”结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，“观点要点总结”让人一目了然。要点：要点要齐全（隐藏要点和明面列出的要点）逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑关系连词，体现文章的连贯性和行文的流畅

6、性。语法：指句型、句子结构、时态、词汇短语错误。亮点：短文要有体现突出色彩的句型并与从句、状语从句、固定句型 中考英语阅卷老师看写作主要有三个标准：1）结构2）内容要点 3）语言（词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词）看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。中考英语作文常用句型1. Its important (necessary) for sb. +to do sth.做某事对某人来说2. Its no use/no good doing sth .做某事没有用处/没有好处。3. There is no need to do sth.没必要做某事。4. There is

7、 no point in doing sth.做某事毫无意义5. What about + doing sth？How about + doing sth？怎么样？6. The reason why +(表示结果句子) is that + (表示原因句子)。的原因是7. That is why + (表示结果句子)。那就是的原因。8. That is because + (表示原因句子)。那是因为9. It is said/reported that +(事件陈述句子)。据说/据报道10. There is no doubt that +(事件陈述句子)。毫无疑问11. It goes wit

8、hout saying that + (事件陈述句子)。不言而喻，/毫无疑问12. As is known to all，+(事件陈述句子)。众所周知，13. It is generally/publicly known/considered that众所周知14. As we all know, +(事件陈述句子)。据我们所知，15. Its time to do sth./Its time for sth.是该做某事的时候了。16. Its better/best to do sth.最好做某事。17. It takes sb. some time to do sth. 某人话多少时间做某

9、事。18. sth. costs. some mony.某物花了某人多少钱。19. sb. spends some time/mony(in)doing sth.某人花多少时间/金钱。20. sb. pays some money for sth.某人为某物付了多少钱。21. Among various kinds of ， +(陈述句子)。 /= Of all the ， +(陈述句子)。在各种之中，22. In my opinion, +(观点陈述句子)。= As far as I am concerned, +(观点陈述句子)。 就我的看法；我认为 In my opinion, play

10、ing video games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。23.With the increase/growth of the population, +(问题陈述句子)。随着人口的增加 With the development of science and technology, +(问题陈述句子)。随着科技的进步24. 状语从句A）如果你不，你就会 If you dont ， youll 例If you dont keep working hard, youll l

11、ose the chance.如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。B）如此 ，以至于 so that 例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up.当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。C）每当就每当我听到我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear ， I cannot but feel excited.每当我做我就忍不住感到悲伤。 Whenever I do ， I cannot but feel sad.每当我想到我就忍不住感到紧张。Whenever I think of ， I cannot but feel

12、 nervous.每当我遭遇我就忍不住感到害怕。Whenever I meet with ， I cannot but feel frightened.每当我看到我就忍不住感到惊讶。Whenever I see ， I cannot but feel surprised.25. 宾语从句我认为， / 我认为不 I think / I dont think that +(事件陈述句)。我想知道是否 I wonder whether +(事件陈述句)。中考英语作文常用功能句型1. 提建议had better (not) do 最好(不)做how about / what about doing 怎

13、么样?I think you should do 我认为你应该I suggest that you should do 我建议你做If I were you, I would do我要是你的话，我会做Its best to do 最好做Why not do / why dont you do? 为什么不2. 表示喜欢和感兴趣like / love doing / enjoy doingbe fond of doing 喜欢做 / be keen on doing 喜欢做prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做Bbe interested in doing

14、 = show/ take a great interest in doing 感兴趣3. .努力做try to do努力做try ones best to do= do ones best to do 竭尽全力做make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做 spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做4. 打算做 / 计划做intend / plan to do 打算做 be going to do 打算/计划做decide to do 决定做determine to

15、do决定做 be determined to do决定做make up ones mind to do下定决心做5. 表示想/希望want to do = would like to do 想做hope to do 希望做 expect to do 期待着做wish to do 希望做 consider doing 考虑做6. 只加doing 作宾语的动词finish 完成practice 练习 suggest建议 consider 考虑 mind 介意 enjoy 喜欢doing固定搭配look forward to doing 盼望做 keep on doing 坚持做dream of d

16、oing 梦想做 cant help doing 情不自禁地做keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名词 忙于做spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名词 花费时间做have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心have trouble / have problem / have difficulty (in) doing 做有困难话题1：传统文化传

17、统文化是近几年中考的热点，相信今年考它的可能性会很大。中国传统节日是传统文化的一部分。假设你是李华，你的美国朋友MIKE 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike 写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。内容提示：1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前准备、除夕夜、节日期间活动)写作要求：1.文中必须包括所给提示中内容要点，可展开思路，适当发挥；2.不少于80词。_Dear Mike,How are you? Im really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festiv

18、als. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on. Id like to introduce the Spring Festival to you. Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China. It usually lasts for 15 days.Days before the festival, people clean their houses

19、. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids ge

20、t lucky money from old people. People visit their relatives and friends. They wish one another a happy year and good luck. How happy we are. Yours,Li Hua话题2：垃圾分类垃圾分类，人人有责。假如你是李华，你受学生会的委托，向在校交换生发出参与垃圾分类的倡议。请你以Waste Sorting-A Must for Everyone为题，用英文写一封倡议书，谈谈垃圾分类的意义，以及我们能做什么。提示词语:waste sorting(垃圾分类), l

21、itter, recycle, protect, environment提示问题:Why is waste sorting important?What can we do to help with waste sorting?Waste Sorting-A Must for EveryoneDear students,Waste sorting is becoming increasingly common around our country._Student CouncilDear fellow students,Waste sorting is becoming increasingl

22、y common around our country. I hope all of us can get involved in this meaningful activity. It is important because it can not only reduce the land pollution but also raise our awareness to protect the environment. As students, we can do a lot for waste sorting. First of all, we should learn how to

23、sort the waste online. Secondly, we can sort the waste by preparing some bins in different colors at home. Last but not least, its also a good choice to put up posters to call on more people to join us. In a word, even a small action can make a big difference to our environment.Lets pull together to

24、 start sorting the waste right now! Thank you!Student Council高分亮点：短语：at the beginning of；warn sb not to do；keep doing；not only but also；encourage sb to do；make efforts to；句型：who引导的定语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；that引导的定语从句；and引导的并列句。话题3：减压生活节奏加快，竞争日益激烈，让大多数中学生在生活和学习上或多或少产生了压力，如何应对压力是大家不可回避的问题。 为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的

25、心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你对于缓解压力的看法和建议。内容要点:1.同学们普遍存在的压力是什么; 2.我的压力是什么;3.我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。写作要求:1.文中必须包括所给提示中内容要点，可展开思路，适当发挥；2.不少于80词。_Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls：Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under to

26、o much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams. Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my moth

27、er. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Thats all. Thank you!【练一练】【1】.第二届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2019年在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。假设你是新华中学学生李华，请按上面的要求给组委会写一封应聘信。 要求：1.热情、有礼；

28、2.熟悉中国传统文化； 3.英语口语流利。生词：“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛the Belt and Road Forum for international Cooperation注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。_【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,Thank you for reading my letter. As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, Id like very much to be a volunteer.Al

29、l our citizens are looking forward to this special event. First of all, I promise I will, with great passion, try my best to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history and especially traditional culture, which enables me to sp

30、read our splendid culture. Whats more, Im good at English and Chinese, which will play an important role in communication during the forum.To sum up, I believe I can be a excellent volunteer. I will try my best if Im accepted.【2】同学们,三年的英语学习就要结束了,你进展如何呢?现在学校男神女神墙上榜人物评选活动正在火热进行中,请你推荐(recommend)一个心目中的人

31、选(可以是同学、老师或自己),用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍一下他/她或你自己的情况。内容要求:1.介绍他/她或你自己的个人信息:姓名、年龄、生日等;2.介绍他/她或你自己的兴趣爱好(至少3个方面)并简要说明理由;3.你推荐他/她或你自己的原因,或者他/她对你产生什么好的影响。注意:短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。_【答案】Hello, everyone, I have a right person for this wall. His name is Tom.He is 14 years old this year.His birthday is on May 1s

32、t. He has short hair and wears a pair of glasses.He is tall and a little bit stronger than I am.In my eyes, he is a clever and cool boy. Tom is a basketball star in my class.He plays basketball very well.He often plays it with us after school.His favorite day is Monday and Friday because we have P.E

33、.on Monday and Friday.Its his favorite subject.And we can play basketball.Tom has good eating habits.He loves fruit and vegetables very much.He thinks theyre healthy food.He also likes ice-cream, but he doesnt eat it because he doesnt want to be fat. I recommend him because he is cool and fun; he is

34、 good at playing sports.And he is my best friend. 【3】在过去的日子里,我们有过欢笑,也有过泪水照片,或将这些精彩定格,或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请,请你按要求用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,分享你照片背后的故事。 内容要求:(1)描述你的照片(时间,地点,人物);(2)分享你的故事(起因,经过,结果);(3)谈谈你的感受(感动,怀念,影响)。 注意:故事必须原创;短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。_【答案】This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,I was

35、10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we were playing ping-pong happily. I used to be a ping-pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a days work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My dad said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning,

36、I found a piece of paper. It said, Never give up, dear. I am proud of you! Now, I spend less time playing ping-pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter! 【4】发明改变了世界,同时也改变了我们的生活。例如,电视给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以Inventio

37、ns为话题,根据提示写一份值日生报告。先介绍电视的用途,再发挥想象,说说你想发明的东西,并说明其用途和理由。注意:1.报告须包括以上所有提示的信息,但不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;2.发明的东西可大可小,有用即可;3.词数80个左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Good morning, everyone! Today Im going to talk about inventions. Inventions are created every day because people would like to make life easier.There are many f

38、amous inventions, such as TV, smart phones, computers and so on._【答案】 I think TV is the most important and useful invention in the world.TV provides us with different kinds of information and colorful programs so that we can know more about the world.We watch entertainment programs to relax.Besides,

39、 some learning programs help us with our study. Though there have been many great inventions, I wish to invent a kind of pen which can help us write more quickly and neatly.When we meet problems in doing our homework or taking exams, it will tell us what to do. Thats all.Thank you very much.【5】假设下周是

40、校园环保活动周,你班为响应学校号召,打算出一期以低碳环保为主题的英语黑板报。请你根据下面的内容提示用英语写一份环保倡议书,作为黑板报的一部分。 内容提示:节约用水 节约用电 尽量选择公共交通(public transportation)出行 爱护花草树木 少看电视、少玩电脑游戏,多进行户外活动 注意:(1)内容可适当发挥;(2)80词左右;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 _【答案】Do you want to make our city a more beautiful place and then be a green person? If so, here are some ideas.

41、 First, dont waste water.We can save water by taking shorter showers or turning off the water when we brush our teeth.Second, we should always turn off the lights when we leave a room to save electricity.Third, we had better take public transportation as much as possible, like taking a bus.Fourth, w

42、e should take good care of trees and flowers.They are good for our environment.Last, we should spend more time doing outdoor activities rather than staying at home watching TV or playing computer games.This not only helps save energy, but also helps us to keep fit. These are small things, but they c

43、an make a difference to our environment.Lets take action now! 【6】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack想学习汉语，你推荐他去孔子学院，请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.推荐理由； 2.相关课程，如中国历史，传统文化等。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：孔子学院Confucius Institute_【答案】Dear Jack,Im more than pleased to know that you are eager to learn Chinese. Confucius Institute

44、may be a good choice, which is intended for the Chinese learners who are not native.Confucius Institute provides various interesting subjects. You will learn Chinese history and traditional culture as well as Chinese writing. Also, you have more chances to talk with classmates in Chinese. Besides, t

45、eachers will introduce some Chinese traditional festivals, such as the Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Day and Mid-Autumn Day. Some relevant activities will be held during different festivals, such as making dumplings or eating zongzi, where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but also have a good knowledge of Chinese life.I am looking forward to hearing from Yours, Li Hua