亮点专题（四）如何写劝说信-备战2023年高考英语书面表达之书信类.docx

1、亮点专题（四）如何写劝说信劝说信是指以信件的形式表达自己的观点或立场，并期待对方认同或接受。一 基本结构第一部分：引入。写信人首先需要简要说明写信的主要目的。如果需要的话，也可以大致做一下自我介绍。第二部分：阐述。这是说服性信函的主题和核心部分。写信人需要在这个部分有条理的列出自己的理由。理由要客观、真实、有说服力，要重点突出、层次分明。同时，要注意提高语言的力度，发挥语言的功力，以便更好的展现自己的立场。第三部分：总结。可以用生动的语言重申自己的核心观点，或以情动人，引起共鸣，或升华延伸、画龙点睛。这部分应该注意语言的简练和冲击力，切忌冗杂拖拉的表达。二、增分佳句（一）劝说信开头常用句式引入

2、观点1Now it is commonly held thatBut I doubt whether2 . These days we are often told thatBut is this really the case.3. Faced withquite a few people argue that.but I conceive it differently.4. Currently there is a widespread concern that5. Now people in growing numbers are coming to realize that (二)劝说

3、信结尾常用句式-阐述理由1The reason foris that2. On the one handon the other hand.3.We may take a common example to show.4.A recent study suggests/show that (三)劝说信结尾常用句式-总结1.In short 2.In conclusion3.As far as Im concerned写作规范题目要求 假设你叫李华，请给尼古拉.哥白尼写一封信劝说他出版自己的理论著作，这样可以让每个人都了解他的理论，从而推动科学发展。 注意：1，词数100左右 2，可以适当增减细

4、节以使行文连贯。第一步：审题构思很关键一 审题1 确定体裁：本文为劝说信;2 确定人称：本文的主要人称为第二人称；3 确定时态：一般将来和一般现在；二构思第一部分，引入：说明写信的目的是劝说哥白尼出版他的新理论。第二部分，阐述：1当前理论盛行的原因。2发表新理论的压力及原因。第三部分，总结：重申自己让哥白尼发表新理论的观点。第二步：核心词汇想周全1. theory 2. publish3. make sense 4. observe5. the center of universe6. brightness7. carry out 8. face a great challenge9. adv

5、ance10. put forward第三步：由词扩句雏现形1.目前的理论讲不通。（主谓结构）The present theory doesnt make sense.2.如果地球是宇宙的中心，行星的运动方式就不是你所观察的那样。The way the planets move is not what you have observed if the earth is the center of the universe.3.某些恒星的亮度似乎在改变，这也很奇怪。It is also strange that the brightness of some stars seems to chan

6、ge.4,太阳是太阳系的中心。The sun is the center of the solar system.5.你的观察很严格的进行了多年。Your observations have been carefully carried out over many years.6.如果发表你的新理论，你将面临巨大的挑战。You will face a great challenge if you publish your new theory.7.如果人们没有勇气提出自己的观点，科学就永远得不到进步。Science will never advance if people dont have

7、the courage to put forward their theory.8.别管人们怎样反对，时间将会证明你的观点是正确的。No matter how people oppose it , time will prove that your ideas are right.第四步：句式升级造亮点1 句式3改写为 Strangely, the brightness of some stars seems to change .2 句式6可以改写为The challenge you will face is great if you publish your new theory.3.用u

8、nless 引导的状语从句改写句7 Science will never advance unless people have the courage to put forward their ideas.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Dear Nicolaus Copernicus, I am a student studying astronomy and I am dying to read your new theory about the solar system. I hope you will publish it for several reasons. The present the

9、ory doesnt make sense. on the one hand, the way the planets move is not what you have observed if the earth is the center of the universe. On the other hand, strangely, the brightness of some stars seems to change. So the sun is the center of the solar system. Though your observations have been very

10、 carefully carried out over many years, the challenge you will face is great if you publish your new theory. However, science will never advance unless people have the courage to put forward their ideas. no matter how people oppose it , I think , time will prove that your ideas are right. So I sincerely hope you can publish your new theory. Yours sincerely, Li Hua